Looking back at your notes containing different ways to start a personal narrative, use one of the strategies to start the following personal narrative:
Topic: Write a personal narrative about something that really excited you.
Don't forget-
1. Use one of the strategies from your notes.
2. Focus in on one specific time... don't start to write a story that took place over weeks or months.
3. Start to hint at a theme (message that you are trying to get across to the reader) by the end of the paragraph.
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Have you ever gone to High school? Well I'm going to go to one next year. Not just any high school ether. I'm going to go to one of the best high schools ever. I can't wait to go. Still I should not lose my foucuse since if my grades go down they won't want me any more. Still I'm so exited!
ReplyDeleteThat it was a really cold evening in october.
ReplyDeleteIt was an halllowen night and it was also a really cold and windy day.
i ws happy it was hallowen and i had to be an vampire .i got candy that night but somebody right at 12am, a little boy was shot .right in his fore head i was really scared and shoked That was a night i will never forget .specialyy every halowen i wil never forget it .
Dont you just hate spiders? ALl those legs and beady eyes. most people say its disgusting but i dont think so. One time my older brother was going on a vacation and he asked me to take of his spider, a trantula. "awesome." i thought i was stoked. He was in his cage and he looked at me. "How cute!" i said and touched it. around 5:00 i fed it come crickets and grasshoppers it was so awsome i loved him.
ReplyDeleteONE DAY ME AND MY FRIENDS WERE RIDING OUR BIKRS AND WE GOT TIER OF RIDING BIKES.AND WE WERE GOING TO PLAY SOCCER.AND THE COURNER YHEY STARED TO SHOOT AND WE RAN INSIDE. AND I FORGOT MY BIKE OUTSIDE AND WHEN I WHEN BACK IT WAS NOT THERER SO I WAS RELLY OPSAID.
ReplyDeletei was talking to my mom and thats when i heard the phone ring,
ReplyDelete"hello" i said.
"hey its me diego".
"oh my god where you at?"i said.
"im at my house"diego said.
"what? they let youout?"i said.
"no im going back but they let us out to come to our house and get new clothes and im going back at 6pm so yea".diego said
"damn.. i yhought you were already going to stay at your house".i said
well we keept on talking.i really got excited cause it had been a week that i didint heard about him. so yea...
Use dialogue at the start to show us a Character is thinking.
ReplyDelete"I Hate to Take Out the Trash" I said While I went Outside.Like I Clutch the Bags in my Hand with Furious Eyes.I was Standing Beside the Trash Can Throwing Away the Bags.As my Brother saw Me with Fear in his Eyes.As He saw Me with such Confusion in Him like he never Understood Me.He Knew Something was Wrong with Me and Knew Something Terrible was Gonna Change Me.
That day i was really excited....We were going to go to Wisconsin. My parents told me that we were spending the day there for 3 days i was sooo excited. My sister and I were full of happines because we have never been to Wisconsin Dells. The night before we kept panting"We're still going,right?" with a grin on our face."Yesss." My parents would say. The next day when we were packing our things in the car we made a pit stop to pick our cousins. On the road it took forever"I'll ask are we there yet?".....Finally we got there and YAY!x)
ReplyDeleteI woked up at 6am.The first thing i saw was the sky it was full of clouds gray clouds. It started raining wich made me happy i love rainy days.The thing that i did not like was that i had to woke up early to go to the hospital.Wich ruined my day :(. Todays weather was soo cool that it had to be ruined to go to the hospital. When i got there there was this big window at the waiting room, i sat next to it and stared up at the sky and started thinking that i will become a storm chaser in the future. I was having soo much fun when a nurse came out saying my name i had to take some x-rays of me. I did not want to leave my big window but i had too if i wanted to get out of there as fast.When i got home the sy had cleared off and made me sad :( and i fell asllep THE END!(this happened yesturday!)
ReplyDeleteHave you ever felt like you were going to explode from excitement? If you have you've probably used words like HOLY COW, WOW, or, yyyyeeeeaaahhh. I can relate. I found out something that that made me want scream out loud and jump for joy. Sonic 4, the new video game from sega was going to be out in stores soon.
ReplyDeleteSomething that excites me is when i get like a present or money. That excites me because if i get a present it could be something cool. And if i get money i could buy myself anything that i want. This excites me because the only time i get money is when it is my birthday or a holiday like christmas.
ReplyDeleteThat morning my day had finally started and i was just awaking from all my brothers and sisters making noise.I wassoexcited to start my new job. It wasnt that i was getting paid but, it was the children who i was dying to see . i forgot my cell fone as i went out the door trying to catch the first bus. I wonder if they were happy to see me but who knows.I was just so excited that i can finnally do something that would help mke be a better woman...........
ReplyDeleteit smell wet grass evry single leaf was falling down alot of people was goin some were we were going to the school and it was so fun that we were going to school we all were laughing because that day we werent gonna go to nightingale school we were gonna go to a church school for the 2nd year....
ReplyDeleteMy mom always takes also to crurch school and real nightingale school but is more fun going to church school because you do not have to take uniform to church school and we got there and it was fun and amazing.
It was a stormy day the wind was making the trees sway from side to side. I was really excited that high school representatives were coming to tell us about the High schools they came from like Kelly and the Noble high schools. I was nervous at first but then really happy about it again. at the end i had many high schools to choose from.
ReplyDeleteOne day in a snowy afternoon i was so happy because i knew that my bithday was comin so i thought that day will be so emocional for me and my family.
ReplyDeleteIt was still snowing and I knew that there will be alot of snow.Then I went to tell my dad if I could go and play outside in the snow.I wanted to go outside because then like in my bithday the snow will take away.I was happy I knew that everything will be a surprise at the day of my birthday.Then my neighbor said to me,'' hey it cold you should come inside because then you are going to get sick'' So then I said to him ''will I liked snow it's that a problem''.
The next day I was so hungry I was just thinking of cake because it will remind me of the day of my birthday.I will just be thinking of that.so then I didn't ate nothing because I will just want cake not food.I knew that will just a few days I will be 13 a teenager.So then I started crossing the days until the day of my birthday comes.I was so excited about what will I get in my bithday.Then I just left to eat because I was really hungry. I wanted to eat.
The last day on december I was so excited because my bithday will come .I just wanted to see all the present I will get for my birthday.the last night I couldn't sleep at all.I was nervous,surprised and happy.I knew that everything will be so cool at the day of my birthday.
The day came and I was so happy.I didn't wake up until my cute family came to my room and wake me up with a piece of cake and the bithday song In spanish.I was emocional so I started crying because my family came and sing my the song .Also they gave me a kissed .Then my brother was siting next to me in the bed when all my family were there and I thought something was going to happend my little brother wanted to eat my cake so then we my started laughing of my litle brother trying to eat my cake . It was so funny and emocitional to me and my mom.
FINALLY,that was what happend in that moment of my bithday .Everyone happy and emocional.It was the best bithday wake they gave me.
One boring morning my dad took my brother Lalo and I to work. Which I thought was cool until I work come. My arms were killing me I had to clean the chair and pick them up. My dad told me to go sleep because all he had to do was mop and that’s it. “Vero” wake up said lalo. “come on were leaving”. He said
ReplyDeleteI ran to the car and went right to sleep. Dreaming nicely my dad yells “look“! That cm punk!! The wrestler in WWE! I was so excited it was really him! Lalo got off and ask him if we can get a picture and he said no. He took off his phone and took pictures of him running! I was so happy I saw someone famous! This was a great day because the day stared off boring then turned fun!
It was a saturday morning when my mother was trying to wake me up.5 more minutes I say in a lazy voice. I get up and it was 11am.It is so late and I had to be in guitar lessons that day. I get my stuff ready and wait for my friend to come and pick me up. Worried that its almose 12Itext he and she finally arived. We enter the room excited and look for a guitar. While wating for the teacher to get here we are runing around and playing with other instruments. When the teacher gets here we all sit and practice. Until it was finally time to leave. That was one of the most exciting days of my life because I got to learn how to use a guitar and learn how it was used.
ReplyDeletethe moment that i got so excidet,when they pass out the application for HIGH SCHOOL. I got happy because it was a moment that i now realize that i am now growing up that i am not a little girl well thats what my mom think. i was all ready for it to apply the high school i want to go but then i got nerves but thoese nerves feelings are now over mine feelings are exciment and reay to apply.thats my excidet moment for me.
ReplyDeleteIt was a very bright sunny day,birds were chirping. It was an awesome day! It was also the first day of school. I was going to my eight grade class. I felt kind of nervouse in the inside but excited it on the outside. I was excited to see my friends again but i was nervouse because i thought eight grade was going to be hard. When i got to school all my friends were there waiting for me we started tslking and the nervouse feeling went away. Me and my friends were happy and we were going to enjoy the first day of school.
ReplyDeleteIt was a hot summer day and it had been the last day of chool. It was so hot I could cook an egg on the sidewalk. I was in my mom`s car when she started talking.
ReplyDelete"We have a surprise for you when we get home."
"What is it?"
"You have to wait. I`ll just tell you that the cat doesn`t like the surprise."
I just sat in my seat I was excited, to get home for once. I didn`t know that my surprise would one day bring me great pain.
The smell of school being over….I just love it. No more school for about one whole month. But then again I really have nothing to do over break, but who cares no more school! What even makes it better was that I had absolutely no homework at all. As soon as I got home I just laid face flat on my pillow, arms and legs extended and slept for a full 2 straight hours.
ReplyDeleteThe thinq tht exited me a lot was when i made the basketball team n the coachtold me tht i we where qoinq to play our first qame on nov 8.I qot exited because i really like basketball n i cant wait to play my first qame.Basketball means a lot to me because itz the one thinq tht i like the most n i love to play tht sport.Every time we have practice i try my best but i always play for fun every once to win but i play for fun win or lose i play for fun.Im still exited till this day about the qame i cant wait to play in the teams first qame n hopefully win.
ReplyDeleteI wanted a computer so bad I already had one but I really wanted my own computer and I knew I deserved it for all the years I’ve gotten good grade my dad took me to see the computers but they were to expensive but he promise me he would find a way to buy it but he would buy it to me . So if you try hard in school but you may just get rewarded with some thing you’ve always desire .
ReplyDeletei went outside and a fresh breeze went through my face i was exited because my mom and the rest of my family and me were going to sixflags for the summer. it was warm outside but the air was fresh so it was good. we got on the car and we were on our way to sixflags! we were so happy! once we got their, we went right away on the rides. i was ready to scream my but off! "hehe".....then once i got on all the rides i wanted then i was starving so we went to a small shop were they sale burgers fries,tacos, and more. i had a really coool day. once i got their in the shop i smelled a nice warm smell of tacos! i was starving!...then i got their and graved the food and sat down and started to eat. then after i finished eating i went back to the rides. but i forgot that i had berly ate! when i got on the giant drop, i threw up!..."eww"...then i felt sick so we went home!
ReplyDeleteTHE END!!(:
!CANDY!
ReplyDeleteThere i was BORED sitting in the cozy living room sofa as i pleeded for some exitememt. When a sweet thought bursted into my mind(candy). A thing that gets me exited before and afretwards would have to be candy. The sweet or sour jucy taste of a sugar or salt candy bar.:D I jumped of the sofa and ran off to my wallet and very happy i walked it to the corner store with my besties: Gisselle and Jessica:D. Jessica and Gisselle rudely inturupted while i stared at the gleeming candy calling my name."THERES A LOT TO CHOOSE FROM! What should we get?". Trying to choose i suggested "Mmm, TWIX!:D". Well it turned out we bought half of the candy and lived happily ever after and exited with our candy:D...
There was a time that I had one of the most exiting moments in my life that has just happened right now. You remember that time when you barely get the report card and you think your going to fail miserably, well, I underestimated my instinct when it comes to grades. I always thought it would come down to this, the moment I would get a piece of paper that gave your fortune to your future and has always gave it it’s meaning. Basically I had a good report that day but I had a good scare that day, by the way.
ReplyDeletethis useful and i would use it when they tell us to make one.all we need next is what not to forget with a persuasive paper.
ReplyDeleteMy mouth dropped wide open;when the unexpected happen.As i was told;people you no longer are a homeroom.The schedule will be changing next week.It will be exactly like a high school schedule.I said with full excitement,'yes this gonna be better than ever I'll be with all my friends'.Men thanks mis principal this is so going to be fun!
ReplyDeleteIt was a cold winter day.It was 20 below 0.When I looked out the window it looked like a blizzard was happening.All this on one of the most special days of my life.It was my birthday.At the time I was turning 6 and my mom and dad promised to get me a pair of new shoes I really wanted.I was excited and was counting down this day for 4months.It was timeto open my presents and i had butterflies in my stomach when i was opening my new shoes up.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever gone to Mexico and didn't want to come back? Well I know I have and it was great. You spent time with your family that you haven't seen over the year. You don't have to work and you also have the time of your life which is awesome! Your just there with your family, talking to them ans you even play games with them.
ReplyDeleteGooooool! Chivas are the champions! Can you imagine what it feels like to be sitting in a stadium watching your favorite team playing a championship game. For everybody that has passion for soccer it would be their dream to experience this but not everybody can. I could and I’ll never forget that day.
ReplyDelete“Alexus you have to get your physical in dear or you cant come back to school.” My teacher said.
ReplyDelete“ Again!”
I came home and gave my mom the paper. She looked at it and said again. I was all like
“Yep”
“This school is so unorganized”
“And you’re telling me”
“I don’t know when I can go to get you an appointment because I have to work and when we are there we are there like 6 hours just waiting”
“Well why are you telling me this again?”
“Never mind lexy?
So I went to my aunt’s house and she said that her daughter had to get her physical so that she would take me. So I slept over and we went and they said that they wouldn’t except any more walk INS, that we had to come in like at 7:00am to get a walk in.
So we left and my aunt said that we were going to go in the morning so she told me to spend the night again. So I did and we woke up late that if we would of went now at that time we would of spent there wouldn’t have been worth it. And so my aunt went the next day and made an appointment for November 23,2010.
Have you ever felt excited for achieving a goal. Well I had one time. It was vacation and I waited to get in 8th grade. I had finished the 7th grade. Yet I had very much terrible grades most the grades were c’s while only little were a’s or b’s. I remembered that my mom had told me to do good and she would buy me something in return I had felt I disappointed her for the fact that those grades were terrible and fell below her expectations. Even so my mom saw how hard I worked and decided to get me a ps3 and along side that a video game.
ReplyDeleteSomething exiting that happened to me was when i had gone to Mexico.The reason why that had exited me was because i liked going with all of my cousins.Every time we go ewe have a lot of fun because we never get bored in the way there and also brecause we always go to diffrent places. :)
ReplyDeleteOne day, I would be in a car when I would get out to this house that looked kind of strange and I would never been to that house. The house would look all old and it would crumble a little. As I would go closer and closer to the door, a piece of something I could not identify would fall on me, but I did not get hurt. Finally I would go inside that felt like the equator and went closer. Then a door almost slammed me and I could not believe my eyes. Something excited would be shown as I would get closer.
ReplyDeleteOne exited time was on my birth day. It was in the morning that my dad got there and he said he had a present for me. I got real exited but he said until later and I said ok. I went and got changed. Once I was done he took me down stairs. I got not wait I just wanted to break down the door. Once I saw it I could not believe it it was a dog. That was the best birth day.
ReplyDeleteSomething that really exited me is when we were going to mexico. Our cousins were over there and were wating for us to go. The thing i was exited for was because we were going to walk in some kind of dessert looking place and use some slingshots to shoot some rabbits or snakes. We found some cool rocks, but no rabbits or snakes.
ReplyDeleteOnce I went to the store and I saw one of my best friends there. I hadn’t seen her for a year almost because she moved from school to Wisconsin. We were both so happy to see each other that we told our parent that we would catch up with them later. After we left the store we went to the mall shopping and for some ice-cream we had so much to talk about. “Omg! I missed you so much you should have called me once in a while to tell me how things were back at school.” my friend Karen said as she was trying to keep her ice-cream from melting. “I know, I tried to call you so many time but the machine said it was the wrong number. After that we decided to go back to my house because our parents were starting to get worried and they were calling us like a thousand times. When we got home after taking like 10 busses we went to my room and watched some movies. My mom and Karen’s mom were in the kitchen talking about how they have been in Wisconsin and how much stuff they miss doing together. After a few hours Karen’s mom said they had to leave. “ahhhh” we both said sadly. Me and my mom walked them to the door and with tears in our eyes Karen and me said good-bye.
ReplyDeleteI ran so fast I almost tripped as ran through the target doors. I been waiting for this for weeks, my favorite series finally had another book out. I been begging my mom for weeks to pre-order it but, she wouldn’t so I had to wait what felt like eternity for the book to come out. I slowed my pace as I approached the book aisle, and scanned every book. I turned the corner and a smile curved up my face. I saw it there in the middle and reached out and grabbed it. Finally was all I thought about as I walked to the cash register.
ReplyDeleteOne time when baked a cake. It was Halloween and my cousin’s birthday. Me and 2 of my other cousins made a cake. First we stared with all the stuff to make it and then we made the frosting etc. the party stared and everyone loved the cake.
ReplyDeleteWell I’m going to tell you about the time that really excited me is when my cousin was going to have her Cathleen and I was in her surprise dance and it was so cool because we had fun. When the day came of her Cathleen I was nervous and scared I saw the people and I said ‘’ oh my god.‘’ Well the man announce that the surprise dance was coming.
ReplyDeleteWe were in line and ready my cousin he was my partner he was all like just chill.
I said ‘’okay ‘’.
The surprise dance finish and the other music started and that was the best part man that really excited.
“MOM, MOM, MOM!!!” yelled as my sister ran down the stairs. “What?” my mom asked finally.
ReplyDeleteTrying to catch her she finally manage to say “the cat …huff… had kittens…huff.” “WHAT!!!,” my mom yelled. I almost fell out of my chair when I heard the news. KITTENS!!! I thought , I had always wanted to raise kittens. “Where?!” I demanded. “In the closet upstairs” my sister said. I bolted out of the kitchen and ran up the stairs almost tripping . I opened the door carefully. As I looked inside there was my mom’s cabinet with one box out on the floor. She probably lied I thought. As I closed the I suddenly heard a high pitched meow. I peered over the box and inside I found 4 kittens stumbling in it along with there mom.
Little that I new that these cats would change my perspective of cats and life.
It was cold, & my mom was yelling at my sister to put on a sweater. It was Halloween & we were all out front of my house. Jose, Ellena, & Rosa had come over, and we were playing a game. I was about to start running, when I saw someone standing on the corner.
ReplyDelete"Hey guys, check that out?" I said, pointing over to the guy. He was dressed in all white, with a cloth over his face. It looked like it was covered in blood. He was standing completely still. I found this odd. It's Halloween, shouldn't he be doing something? Anything? He moved, but only slightly, & we started to hear chains.
"You guys hear that.. right?" Rosa asked, creeped out. We all nodded our heads slowly. He started walking towards us then, and my sister was the first one in the door. She ran inside screaming, & all of us followed. Jose & I climbed the fence to see where he was. We both screamed when we saw he was right in front of my house. We quickly jumped off the fence, scared.
"Let's see how tough he is now," said Jose, grabbing a pick axe that we had. (
Don't ask, I don't even know why, & it's my own house.)
He opened the door, and we all laughed. We walked back out front, but the dude was gone. We looked around, but didn't see him. Jose put the pick axe back, and we started playing again.
Jose yelled that he was hiding behind the bush about 50 times, and we all ran back inside every single time, screaming. I think we all got quite a workout this Halloween, & my throat hurt the next day.
Please?she said with her wattery puppy eyes. We had to give in, it was midnight and my little sister wanted fries from mcdonalds. My sister and I had to get up, and get dressed to take her. As soon as she got what she wanted she was the happiest 3 year old ever. On our way back she fell asleep. I was relieved, hopefully she doesn't wake up again. We have to stop spoiling her i thought.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that really excited me was when it was the first day on Nightingale school. I went to the main office with my oarents and my sister because she was going to enter too. we went to the main office and Ms. Garcia tolded my dad that we needed it to have a transfer to get in the school. so me and my dad went to the car. my dad turned the car on, we went together to Irene C. Hernandez Middle School. i was so nervous because all the students were outside. i walk into the main door. the pricipal said why was i out off uniformed. my dad said the we came to get the transfer so i could go to another school. the principal assistence send tghe transfer throught the computer. we came back from Hernandez and then Ms. Garcia sent us home to put on a white shirt with a collar. when we came Ms. Garcia was surprice because she saw me with the whole uniformed. she gave me and my sister a little paper that had a room number. Mr. Ramirez tooked me to Ms. Merphys room and there was no one . then she gave me a welcome card. " now all your class mates are right now in music." but first i'll introduced you tuo all your teachers.after that we went to music. Ms. Merphy opened the door. evrey body stared it at me. students this ie Esther your new classmate. HELLO! EVREY ONE SHOUTED.
ReplyDeleteIt was a dark cold Halloween night. The dude was staring to walk towards us. We all screamed and ran, he had on all white and had a bloody mask.Jose picked up a pick axe that was in Paola's backyard, dont ask why. He ran towards the dude and screamed. I think the dude got freaked out because he left, and we laughed as we watched the scene. It was quiet the Halloweenl, Jose kept trying to find the guy and we almost peed our pants. Yeah i think im going over to Paola's house for Halloween every year.
ReplyDeleteOne day i came out of school. I was looking for my mom because she always picked me up from school. Instead my aunt came to pick my cousin and me up.
ReplyDeleteI asked my aunt, "where is my mom?"
"She is at the hospital with your dad. Your mom is going to give birth to your new sister!" My aunt said.
I was really excited because I was going to have a new baby sister.
One day it was a cloudy day i felt so energetive and i just wanted to run in the rain. So i decided to wait untill the sun came out. But it never did i felt so angry but then when i came out i just smelled the air it felt sooo awsome it was just such a beautiful smell. So later it was still rainign so i decided to run in the rain and i did it was an awsome couldy day. At night just hearing the thunder was the best sleep ever. The thunder was smoothing to my sleep.
ReplyDeleteMovies!!! I love to watch them. Some are funny, some are scary, the ones i like are fiction/fantasy. They take you to other worlds and u can be whatever u want to be. Plus u get to eat the buttery popcorn and the hotdogs. What isnt good about going to the movies.
ReplyDeleteOne time I was going to go to the store one were you have all diffrent kind of stores but in one place so I was so excited and all I could think of was at what time I was going to go to the stores when I whent to the stores I was so ecsited I wanted to go to all the stores and get everithing but my dad said to get only 5 things and I was like WHAT? but I was still excited.
ReplyDeleteSomething that really excited me was when my first baby nephew was born ‘’Issaiah’’. I was really excited, I couldn’t wait until he was born.
ReplyDeleteI was waiting for 9months. Until that one day came. I was in school, my mom had let me know my sister was in the hospital. After school, I went over my friends house. My mom called me, the first thing she said was..
‘’Issaiah was born’’. She sounded as happy as never before!
I replied with a smile on my face. Oh my god, is he healthy is my sister okay? She told me all the details. At the time she was telling me, a lot of emotions were running through my body. Excited, nervous, happy. I didn’t know what to say. But the first thing that cross into my mind was, tell my sister I love her! And give the baby a kiss for me. And that am very happy everything came out well. That was one big day full of excitement. That I’ll never forget!
one day i made a cake. It was a my cusions birthday. i was happy. the cake looked so coll it had a doll on top. It was a wicth because it was hallwoon. her bday wasnt on halwoon but it was close to it.
ReplyDeleteOne of the craziest things happened yesterday. My teacher mrs.Crestiensen told me she wanted a parent teacher conference because I was faling more than two classes.So me and my aunt came.We were waiting in the office for her.Then when she walked in she said "you know what miguel I showed you the wrong report card." I slamed my head with my palm. After a good laugh we looked at my B,C report card."Thank god I have these grades" I said.
ReplyDeleteone day i was out side in the winter i was playing football and we were outside my house and then we just hear shooting and we ran in to my house and my mom just asking me if we were okay and we said yes and my mom told us that instedgo and play in ar back yard beacuse are backyerd is big but then after that were heard the abulens coming and we when to check and when tocheck they were pooting some one inseide and my mom said that is was a good thing we ran inside the house and we all feel sorry for that guy that got shot
ReplyDeleteEver been there for a friend? I did, and I was very happy to help her out. She was having some trouble with her boyfriend. He wasn’t calling her,Texting her , Or going to visit her. I told her not to worry and that maybe he was just busy working and was tired and dint have time to text or w.e . I was right one day she came to the house and we called him &. Confronted him. He said he was too busy and hardly had time to text her! But know everything is Amazing between them. She knows Ill always be there for her &. Shes there for me.
ReplyDeleteOne day i remembered that i wanted a dog but my parents kept on excisting and saying No! I got mad and dint wanna talk to them my sister saw how i acted and decided to convince my parents to buy it for me. My parents always take my sisters side so my parents decided to talk to me and explain how i should be honest and be responsible. So that day i went to the store and bougth my dog so now i finnally have my dog.
ReplyDeleteOn November 9 it was the day I have waited for along time because Call of Duty Black Ops would come out. I have heard so many cool things about it especialy zombies. The zombies are so cool but you start with a pistol and next you buy a shot gun and keep going. Other cool things is that you cant rank up fast online and is so fast. I went to gamestop with a friend and we were so excited to get it. When we got there I felt like I was getting hyper. I got it and Iwent home and I couldnt stop playing for hours.
ReplyDeleteDon't You Like Halloween?
ReplyDeleteI do, I love getting all the candy & not sharing it with m brother. The only sad part is when you run out of candy.
one day i came out of school it was a stormyy evening i was walking to my house.i open the door of me house then i saw my little couzin he was annoying me telling me haaa youre mom left now you got to take care of him i didn't want to take of he was being a meanie. i had think to leave him but thats to bogus so i left him with my aunt and i went me friend .poor kenny he did n't want to stay with my aunt .then when i came back and took him with me so he wont tell my mom. but i got introuble dow. :3
ReplyDeleteOne day in Mexico it was a beautiful day. No wind was going thru. When out of a sudden the wind came down hard.A dirt storm came and hit my eyes. My eyes were watery and the hurted. I was walking down hill and I would kick rocks down and I would hear them rolling down. I heard the animals. A cow tipped over and fell. The farmer came and picked it up and I heard the cow crying.
ReplyDeleteone day it was a saturday day it was sunny outside we had a soccer game to finish but it was over because it was raining outside so the game was over i really wanted to play soccer
ReplyDeleteIT WAS A TUESDAY MORNING WHEN I SUDDENLY SEEN MY MOM COOKING SANDWICHES AND I ASKED HER WHY ARE U DOING SANDWICHES.
ReplyDeleteITS A SURPRISE HONEY
UUUUUUU WHAT IS IT!!!??
I TOLD U ITS A SURPRISE FOR YOU AND YOUR SISTER.
WHAT TIME ARE WE GOING TO HAVE OUR SURPRISE?
SOON..
WHEN?
FINE !LIKE AT 11:30
THANKS MOM...I WENT TO MY ROOM AND STARED AT THE CLOCK FOR A LONG TIME UNTIL IT WAS 11;30
YULI HONEY DANI HONEY ITS TIME FOR YOUR SURPRISE.
WHAT!!?WHAT!?WHAT IS IT? WE ALL ASKES ACTIOUSLY
WE ARE ALL GOING TO SIX FLAGS...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YEEEEEEEEEEE.!MY SISTER AND I SCREAMED WE ALWAYS WANTED TO GO TO SIX FLAGS>>!WE PACKED AND AS SOON AS WE WERE DONE WE HEADED OF TO SIXXXXX FLAGGSSSS!.
the time i almost failed 7th grade. my parents told me if want to past 7th i need to focus and do all my work. so the days flew by and report card day came we went to pick them up and my mother told " i better not be upset" she said. report crads ended and we went home. My mom and dad were furious." f's and d's again christian" they said."BLAH"i said.
ReplyDeleteOne beutifull morning i was walking to school a house that was kind of wear in the back yard there was a big huge pitbull I got scared because the door was about to break. The door was going to brake because the dog kept on pushing the door.Than I rane to the school quikly.When I came out of school I saw the dog on front of my house i feel bad about him he was all dirty i gave him dog food and I save his live because i heard he live in that house for years. I saved his live because I gave him a good home....
ReplyDeleteOne time my mom woke us up.
ReplyDelete"Get ready, because we are going out." she said.
"Okay!" we said.
We hurried to get ready.When we dressed,we began to clean. After that,when my dad finally came home we left. After, a couple minutes we arrived at the theathers.We were excited and couldn't wait to see the movie. The movie was very exciting and funny to watch.
“Hey I go an idea” It was a sunny day, and I was bored their was nothing to do. I told my brother about what I was thinking about .“WHAT??!!” are you crazy , shhh mom doesn’t have to know about this. “Fine lets go” me and my brother where going to Kmart to buy a game and its like 8 blocks away. I guess it did not go well we were on our 3rd block running fast and I heard I big noise “Ahhhhhhhh” I saw my brother in the floor. He was bleeding really bad I was so scared I didn’t know what to do I knew this was bad. I took my brother to the house and my mom spotted the blood on him and I told her the whole story. When ever im bored now I just read a book.
ReplyDeleteIt was finally the weekend. "Yes! Today I can find my dress!" I said excited to leave my house. "Lets see if we can find one that fits you" My mother said. Theres always a dress that doesn't fit me at all its ethier to small or to big.I love the colors red and black but I can never find a dress with those 2 colors so I hate most of the dresses in stores because there to girly. We went to Burlington and there it was the dress in front of the store windows. I left with the dress of my dreams. I was excited to wear it to my cousins birthday party.
ReplyDeleteOne day me and my cousin where watching tv in her room. Her room is pink from bottom to top. Her bed is on one side of the room.Even though she's only 10 her bed doesn't look like a 10 year old girl's bed. On the other side of the room is her computer. Her room has 2 windows with pink curtains. Her room is clean and nice. Then we heard a knock on the door and we went to go open the door.
ReplyDeleteOne windy day at the park my friends and i were playing soccer,when sudenlly it started raining omg! i said we were having so much fun and now it was all done just beacuse of the rain i got mad and 2 minutes later it was still raining one of my friends came up to me "calm down " he said "we whould still play in the rain if u want" "ok i said. We had so much fun playing in the rain until i sliped but i really didnt care because i was so happy=)
ReplyDeleteA time that i was excited was a hot summer day so hot that you could fry nan egg on the ground, my grandmother told me that i was going to flordia to six flags with my cousins i was so excited i couldnt wait until the day came.
ReplyDeletemy mom and family were very excited when we were going to have a baby sis .i was very happy because i like how they look and they are soft. my mom like the name ,i forgot what it was and her srcond choice was katie.she like it because it sounds like a spanish and english name.she likes to have a combination.my mom was in the hospital.after a few days my mom came and said look at her .i was very excited
ReplyDeleteone day i woke up, i had a soccer game at ten. when i was at the game playing some retard came who didn't know how to play soccer came and tripped me tru the back and injuryed me. i had to come out of the rest of the game. and i stayed to watch the game and after i came out of the game they score 3 goals and we lost. that was a really bad soccer game. THE END.
ReplyDeleteOne day that I finally got to sleep at my mom’s house I heard the most wonderful news my step dad David was going to buy me a really expensive phone and that it was going to have internet and unlimited txt messaging and I was really happy but then he said he was going to buy it for me but the my real dad had to pay for the bill then he said I had to get A/b on my report card next time and I said yea I will I promise. So that was the day I got really excited.
ReplyDeleteOne very borinqq friday, I was in my house &' my cousin calls me. I had nothinq to do for the weekend & 'wow' i thouqhtt. ''This is going to be the most borinq weekend ever.'' About 20 minutes later my cousin calls me , & we were talkinq. ''Ey, where qoinq to six flaqs tomorrow! Wanna come.?'' she said with excitement. ''Really.? Yeaah! Ill Tell my mom to drop me off later.'' i said excitedly. I have never been to sic flaqs so i was really excitedd. I had never been so excited ever!.
ReplyDeleteSo, i went to my cousins house like around 8 that eveninq, & i went inside.
My aunt was really mad for some reason. The day came but my aunt was still very mad. Inn t end her mom never let us go with her older sister to six flags, &' i was really disapointed, but i have never been as excited as i was that weekend.
It was about Midnight on a cold November night when we sat around the campfire.My brother began to talk about food.Everyone began getting hungry.My cousin suggested taking us to go eat.We all agreed.We ran to the car and headed to McDonald's.Everyone pigged out.More my boyfriend because he was stoned.When we got home Itzel threw up Orange vomit.I stepped on it.Ewww.! Well that's what we get for eating at night.
ReplyDeletethe best year in school was in 7 grade we were all goofing around. getting to much in trouble but it was the funnist year.For playing to much in 7 grade we were getting bad grades and were almost going to fail.But luckly we pass to 8 grade.
ReplyDeleteOne day that really excited me was when my little sister was born.I was really excited when we went to go see her at the hospital.but then we culd not take her home yet because she still neede to be checked if she was sick or had a problem.But then we took her home the following week.Iwas really excited that she was born.
ReplyDeleteI was out side with uncle in his house.He ask me if I wanted to go to the gloria to buy some chips.I told him ok we had to go walking because he had a cople of drink mabey the level of drunkeness will go down.we were about to go out the and my uncle fell down iran to the phone and called 911.I was worried so i called my dad and my mom to tell them what happen. after every thing was over it tru nd out to be he had achogal posing.after that day my uncle stop drinking.
ReplyDeleteWhat really excited me once was that Mrs.Novick had so much candy in her closet and that was suppose to be her lame and nasty candy and then she had so much other kinds of candy for the teachers and then she still wanted to get rid of it quick so she could add the new candy she had in her car. Her husband brings her a big bag of candy and of all sorts of kinds. She tell me about how she has more in her house like she actually has 2 big box's of candy in her closet more in her car and more in her house. And i almost foe got she still has like 2 or 3 more little cups well their not cups their actually a bit bigger then regular cups full of sour candy and then still some cookies or other sorts of junk food or treats.
ReplyDeleteIt felt like yesterday only it was last month November when my nephew was born his name is Called-Angel-zhir no hes not Israelis or jew they put that name because my brother had not got married.So the child can't have that name a this time.Unless they get married.
ReplyDeleteLast year, i came home from school, it was freezing outside, the ground was starting to become covered with a sheet of snow. My dad was sitting on the couch, watching TV. I walked into my room, and there was a my new bird. My dad had told me no, seven times, everytime i asked if i could keep it, he told me no. I was really exicted that he finally let me keep it. It two orange and green Love Birds, one was a boy and was was a girl. I called my aunt and thanked her, for giving them to me. i was extremly exicted about getting them.
ReplyDeleteit was a beutyful mornig of 1999 and when i looke out the window i see the sun just smiling at me and it was a sunday i had a soccer game it was the final las chivitas vs tecos i was realy exited a bout the game and i thoat we shud be good so i tolde the coach to chage me positions frome defens to fowerd and he did i score 3 goals and one of my team mates 1 we won 3 to 4 with my wining goal i was realy exited because i was the vip of the game i a think why the coach give me the position and i think he did a good choise
ReplyDeleteA thing that got me really excited was when my parents made it through mexico.It made me excited because they made it withoutnobody getting hurt.So i was really excited too because now we could do many stuff together as a family.
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