Write the introduction to the following essay prompt:
________________ is the best season. Persuade others to agree with you.
Here is the organization your introduction needs to follow:
-An observation
-This makes me realize
-A thesis statement with three reasons
One day, as I was walking home from school, I noticed how the sidewalk was covered with leaves. With every step I took, there was a loud crunch that made it hard to talk to my friend as I walked home. At one point, my friend and I stopped and began to have a leaf fight. We picked up handfuls of leaves and started to chuck them at one another. This made me realize how much I enjoy fall as a season. Fall is an incredible season because it is still nice enough to go outside and be with friends and have fun doing silly activities like having leaf fights with friends. Summer can be too hot to be outside; winter can be too cold. Fall is just right. I believe that fall is the best season because the weather is just right, all of the change in color in trees is beautiful, and because of the most enjoyable holidays all happen during fall.
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One day I notice the fall leaves falling from the trees. They covered the ground with nice bright colors. There were red, yellow, and orange colors everywhere. My cousins helped me rake them and put all the leaves into a pile. My little cousin then jumped into the pile and cover the ground with leaves again which was kind of funny. This made me realize how fun fall could be. I like fall because of the nice colors, and how it’s not hot or cold sometimes, and how people can enjoy it.
ReplyDeleteSpring is the best season
ReplyDeleteOne day I noticed the tulips all rose up from the fresh cold water. The sun was so bright like a light bulb about to break. At that time I had brought my dog out for some air. As I watered the plants I noticed the trees full of dark green leafs and the bark of the tree was a very brown color. I saw kids next door having a water balloon fight I could tell they were having fun. This made me realize how I enjoy spring as a season. Springs is a beautiful season because you could be playing outside or enjoy a nice sweet ice cream under the hot sun, you could get wet like having a water balloon fight. I believe spring is the best season because the weather is beautiful, you could play in the water, and you can wear shorts.
Lesley Garcia 3rd period
One day as I was walking to school i noticed that many kids were outside having fun playing with water. They would grab a hose and start spraying water to everyone. At one point I saw that out of nowhere some kids stated to throw water balloons to everyone. They threw a balloon to the little sister and then everyone started laughing. This made me realize that the summer is a great season because people outside can play and have fun and it is also a time when kids have no school which makes it a fun season for the kids. I believe that summer is a great season because the kids are on vacation, the parents are not busy, and the weather is very enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteOne day, I notice that more people were coming out more in the summer than any other season so I started thinking that is the summer is the best season. The next day I told people what they liked more and 90% said thatsummer is the best season. This makes me realized that summer is the best season of the year to have fun.One reason why summer is a good season is that you have fun,go outside and play, and spent time with your friends.
ReplyDeleteSummer is the best season.One day i noticed that i girl came home from school and told her friend if they wanted to go swimming in the beach she said no because she has home work to do.This made me realice that some people dont like summer and some do.I belive that people do mot like the hot sun .
ReplyDeleteO ne day when I was coming back from school .it was a good day because it was the last day of school. I and my friend were going to the gage pools. We were so excited to go to the gage park pools. On the way we’re going to stop at my house to leave are stuff like a back bag and we were off to the gage park pools. This made realize that summer you can go to the pools. For and an examples winter is to cold and fall is not hot enough for the pools and so as spring. So that is why summer is better season .
ReplyDeleteOne day, me and my little brother wanted to be outside because we were so bored so we did and we you went outside it was great because you did not hated to where anything just your pants and your shirt not like winter when you have to put like 3 jackets on just to go outside and we went on the pool and it was great the fresh cool breeze from the water was so fantastic and we could run and play a lot of stuff we could go to the beach. This made me realize that in the summer you could do a whole lot of things that you can’t do in winter. In the summer you could swim in the beach, you could hang out with friends, and you could go outside whenever you want and not waste your time trying to put all your jackets on .
ReplyDeleteOne day I noticed that the heat was rising and I new that it was changing seasons. I new that my favorite season was about to arrive. My favorite season was Summer. It is summer because it was my birthday in July, it is really hot and there is no school.
ReplyDeleteOne day, I noticed that it was sweating hot my sister and I were having a water balloon fight with my brother and cousins. We all end up wet. But that was the fun part. In August we went to my cousins birthday party at first they say that we couldn’t go in the pool because it was getting clean but at the end, her mom (my aunt) say yes we can go inside it. No one at the party had close to get wet in so my cousin and me are the same size so I borrow a t-shirt and shorts while everyone else was getting their clothes from her older brother or my cousin. We had a blast of a time. But we end up getting out of there at 1 a.m. and my family was their early to get the party ready and fixed and make it look fun and awesome. At last we went home and I feel right to sleep. This made me realize that summer is the best season ever because you can have water balloon fights, go in the pool, have a nice time your family and a lot of people go to vacation while in the summer.
ReplyDeleteWinter is a great season.
ReplyDeleteOne time, I was playing in the snow but I got bored. So then my brother told me, "Hey Stef, you can make a snowman." Then he showed me how to make one.
I ended up making snowmen the whole day.
This makes me realize how much fun winter could be. You can make hot chocolate to make winter even /more/ better.
I believe that winter is just perfect because of Christmas and New Years.
Including my birthday. c:
That's what I think the best season is. :3
One day, I notice fall is the best season. I notice the leaves were on the sidewalk and also everywhere. I came out of school. With my friends when he push me. I thought I was going to land on rocks. When I land on the soft leaf. Then I push him back. When we started to have fun. And then I saw other kids laughing and pushing. And they were having fun. My sister were playing trowing leaf to each other. My friend was saying I am going to get you back. And I got him back before.This make me realize how of every other season Fall is the best. This make me realize how people play most in the fall because it fun, soft, and playfully.
ReplyDeletei would agree with her because fall is a very fun season to go outside and play with the leaves, you can help your parents to rack the leaves. what it means is that fall is a very fun season to play more outside
ReplyDeleteOne day I was walking home from school, I noticed how tall and big my shadow was as the sun reflected through the hot side walk. With every step I took my shadow came with me that made me think that there was another person walking right in back of me. At one point my brother and me stopped and where making funny shapes in the shadow like jumping and pretending that the shadow was a type of creature fallowing us home. We would stop and play a little with our shadows and then walked home again. This makes me realize how much me and my family enjoy summer as a season. Summer is such an amazing season because it’s warm outside and the air is filled with different kinds of smells and because it’s really fun going outside and hanging out with my best friend (Tiffany). Fall can be to humid at times and I mostly get sick during that season, and winter is too cold to do mostly anything. And summer is just perfect, the grass and trees are nice and green and in the nights we do lots of things like finding water bottles and catch bugs that glow and use them as lamps to shine while we play when it gets darker outside. And that’s why I enjoy summer as my favorite season.
ReplyDeleteOne day I was walking home from school on a summer day I notice that none of my friends were going home .But it was because it summer and they stay outside and play cause its worm my friends stay out and have fun In the summer because is nice to play in a sunny day. My friends stay and play outside then they go home and they come out againg so we play more and I like the summer because . there's no school so we could have a summer brake and when is really hot we go to the pools and that’s why I like summer more then any other season cause we don’t spend that much time with are friends .in winter there's not lout of people outside to play like the summer and the fall is good but its to dark so they don’t come out and that's why I think summer is better.
ReplyDeleteOne day as I was going to my friends house I noticed some kids throwing leaves at each other they would having a lot of fun as I went to my friends house I got a handful of leaves and I surprised him then we made a big pile of leaves and threw ourselves into it ,It was really fun. This made me realize how much fun fall is because the weather is medium not too cold and not too hot also it has holidays, and you could go outside and play with your friends.
ReplyDeleteWinter is the best season. One day, as I was walking home fome the library, I noticed that the sidewalk was covered with snow. With every step that my brother and I took there was a little sound that you could hear it when you are quiet. My brother stopped and graved a handfull of snow and he drew it at me I started to do the same thing we were throwing snow at each other. This made me realize how much I enjoyed winter season. Winter is an encredible season because it is nice to go outside and have fun with your siblings, cousins, and friends. I believe that winter is the best season because the weather is a little good even thought its cold I could handle the coldness, we get to play in the snow, and we get to be cold when we get inside.
ReplyDeleteI think that Winter is the best season because it snows alot and you can miss school if it snows alot plus you can eat hot coco and just play outside and play. One day me and my friends were playing in the snow and we were having lots of fun and that day was no school because it snowed to much so we played alot. this makes me realize that winter is my favorite season because in summer we always have to go to shool and in the fall we have to rake leaves and work and in spring its also right but you havde to do stuff alot. I think that winter is the best season because you drink hot coco and play snowball fights with your friends nd finnaly you can be inside and see t.v
ReplyDeleteIt was Friday it was also winter it was a school that they said in the news that it was going to rain like about 5:00p.m. Then I went to school and asked Mr. Galvan if it was true about the storm that was coming. “It is true, why?” Mr. Galvan said. “Well I just saw in the news and I just wanted to make shour.” Then it was like about 3:15 I was so happy came out of school that day. Then it became like 5:00 it was pouring snow I was so happy because the next day we were not having school tomorrow also it was very boring about it.
ReplyDeleteOne day, as I was walking home from school, I noticed how the sidewalk was covered with snow.When it was snowing it was so incredible season because it is still nice enough to go outside and be with friends and have fun throwing snow at each other and that's Why nit is my favorite season to play outside and get cold sometimes and you can get sick but people don't want to get sick like smoking but snow is so really beautifully outside ok.
ReplyDeleteOnce when I was with my cousin we went on my brother's bike. I was on my bike and then he turned fast and he crashed into a garage and an alarm started to ring. He was scared and we ran away. This made me reealize it was more fun to be outside during the summer. summer is the best season because you can hange outside with your friends, you can ride your bike and you can sit outside and have barbecues with your family.
ReplyDeleteOne day I noticed that spring is not to cold and it is not to hot so it's perfect. I noticed that on spring, I have the most fun. I ride my bike or I go and take a walk with my family.This makes me realize that spring is the best season because it has a good weather, It' not so hot or cold. There's not that many bee's to get stung by either so that's good. I think kid should like spring more because like i said at the beginning it has a good weather.
ReplyDeletewhen I gave my brother the present I felt a little enbarresed because I was a not sure he would like it. But it is the thought that counts and when he opened his present he liked it and it felt good to give.Christmas is the best time of year. This made me realize that winter is the best time of the year because Christmas happens in winter, you can be with your family more because they work less, and you can have fun outside in the snow in winter.
ReplyDeleteOne day, when my friends and I where outside playing in summer, we where having a water ballon fight. When we finished we sat down and laughed. Then when no one was looking, i graved a sticky note that said "Wet me with the hose.". Then i quickly slaped it to my friends back and i said "Nice game.". When he walked people saw the sticky note and started watering him with the hose. He got mad and then he laughed. Later on we went to the pool and had fun. This made me realize that summer is the greatest season of all. Summer is the greatest season of all because you can have fun in vacations and in the water than freezing in winter or stuffed by leaves in your shirt in fall, summer is the time when lots of people come outside to have fun, and the days are longer so you can't worry about going inside that fast because it's getting night outside.
ReplyDeletei like spring because when everything blommes it looks so nice and when the flowers blomme the pink flowers fall down like someone is getting married.
ReplyDeleteone day i noticed that the side walk was coverd in snow it was 2 inches tall i was exosted. Of walking in the snow but i got home. My frend was there but hiding he drue me a snow ball i was made. i drue him asnow ball back whe started asnow ball fight.we were cold so we got in side for a hot chocolate.this made me realize how good is winter
ReplyDeletei htink spring is the best season because its not to cold or too hot. It is the best time to go out anywhere you want and to go in the pool and relax. It is also the best season because you can have block parties and just regular parties to hang out with your friends.
ReplyDeleteOne day, as I was walking in the snow I noticed that people were hitting each other with snow. I thought that they were having a serious fight but then I saw that they were both smiling so I guessed that they were having fun. Then a kid threw a snowball really hard to the other kid and the other kid started to get mad and started yelling at the other. This made me realize that having a snowball fight is fun but it can be dangerous at times. Winter is a fun season. I believe that winter is a fun season because you can start having a snowball fight and almost everybody plays that. Another reason is that in winter, is a season were you can put up the Christmas tree. The final reason is that in winter you can ice skate.
ReplyDeleteOne day I noticed as I was walking I saw white things on the floor and I noticed that it was snow. Also I saw a lot of kids and adults playing on it they looked like they were enjoying playing on the snow. They were enjoying playing on the snow. I went to my house to change and do my homework and when I came outside more people were outside playing. Some people were throwing snow balls, some people were making snow angels, and some people were making snowman’s. This makes me realize that a lot of people like to play in the snow. Winter is an in incredible season because you can enjoy playing with your friends. Summer can be to hot and fall can be a bit chilly and you can’t really play outside with your friends. I believe that winter is a good season because kids like to play in it and because it is a lot of fun. Also because Christmas happens in that season and a lot of people like to celebrate Christmas.
ReplyDeleteOne day, i noticed that my mom said it was so cold outside,and then i heard that my dad said that is why i like summer. My mom said " oh .. but, the summer is too hot and winter is too cold".i said that "that's why i like spring".this shows that summer is too hot and winter is too cold for a lot of people. 30% like summer maybe a little more, and 20% like winter maybe not a lot like winter because it gets to cold some days and some people do not like that at all. that is why i think that spring is the best season. Not to cold like the winter. Not to hot like the summer. and mostly everyone enjoys spring and holidays in the spring. like Easter, you can still go swimming in the spring,and even though it rains there's nothing like fresh air on a fantastic spring day.
ReplyDeleteOne day i noticed how many little designs so many little snowflakes have.I always felt bad whenever I stepped on brand new snow. In every step i probably squashed a thousand of those beautiful little snowflakes. When my father would pick me up from school and walked me home we would both be soaking wet from the snow fights we had that day. This made me realize how much fun you can have without having to go to some expensive far away place to have fun. Winter is an incredible season were most of our happy childhood memories are made. And you can get hot coco to warm you up after a snowball battle. That feeling of warmth that goes down your stomach like its hugging you to keep you warm.Winter is inexpensive and rejoicing. I believe that winter is the best season because it is a the time in the year were my family and many others come together, without fighting, the way the snowflakes fall all together by the trees so beautifully, and because all of my favorite holidays fall in this season.
ReplyDeleteOne day I noticed that I was ice skating in the middle of the winter because we we were in down town I was ice skating with my two little brotheirs and my mom and dad I was doing well in ice skating its fun I like to move it move it move it with your feet and my little brotheirswe re falling I was laughing I also liked that the ice is fast and slippery in the winter This makes me realize that winterthat winr=ter is the best season because its good to ice skate and summer,fall,spring and summer
ReplyDeleteOne day me and my freind were waking and we were sweting and sweting. so we discied to go to the water park.
ReplyDeletewe like to go ther because you can swim and you fell really refresments. #3 YOU can go out to the park and you donty have to wear all that clouths thst you do in wintere
One day I noticed that it was 90 degrees and i was watching t.v. I ran to the window opened the shades and i see alot of kids playing around getting wet and laughing out loud.
ReplyDeleteinstead of being inside the house this whole time I would've been outside enjoying the weather. the three reasons why i like summer is because you get to chill with your friends, go to the pools with your friends and go to the carnivals were you get to have fun and get on a spinning weel. in all those place I always see people in a good mood little kids happy playing around and girls giggleing at the boys because maybe he was cute. This makes me realize that some of the people really enjoy the summer to have fun and laugh. and have great times with the family.
One day I was out with my friends and it was a hot, hot sunny day. We were in the pool. We were playing with a ball.The water was sparkling and cool. This made me realize that summer is my favorite season. It is the best because we can play outside in the sun, play at the pool, and there is no school.
ReplyDeleteOne day I noticed that summer is the best season because you get to hang out with your friends and get to get some free time when your business is done or something and the sun shines as bright and that freedom o that freedom its so cool having breezes have to hit you and cool to for a moment
ReplyDeleteOne day, my friend and I were walking home from school with just a sweater. The weather was fresh, crisp air, I love the fall. It’s the best season. The air, temperature, and weather are always fair. The fall gives the gift of fun with leaves, although, you still have to rake them up. Through all the raking you will have fun somehow. In the middle of your work you will start cracking up. The reason for this is because I was born in the fall so I am used to the weather. I believe that the fall is the best season because of the weather, the leaves, and the raking.
ReplyDeleteOne day, I was walking by my neighbor’s house in the winter and I saw him throwing out the garbage and I asked him “Why don’t you go outside and play?” “I don’t go outside and play because its cold and you can’t do a lot of things with all the snow, and if I play with the snow it burns my face.” He said. This made me realize that that summer is the best season because it is warm, sunny, and there isn’t snow on the floor. Summer is the best season because you can go to the park and play you can eat an ice cream or you just hang out.
ReplyDeletelast day i went to vaccation with my family and mom said to me that we are going to your aunt's house. When we got there we went to the beach. we play in the sand all day.it was warm and the water was cold.this make me realize summmer is my season. i belive that summer is best season because we could play outside,go to vaccation,we don`t have school.
ReplyDeleteOne day some friends and I were walking by the park and we saw some kids bulling a smaller kid. The older kids were laughing as if it was all just a game for theme while the small kid was crying. This makes me realize that a lot of old kids bully younger kids for fun it is very important for the adults to know if someone is bulling you because if not it can get very difficult for the kid to struggle with this by themselves. I believe that bulling is an important topic because kids can get hurt, sometimes kids end up doing suicide and because both the bully and the target may have a problem that’s why bullies bully.
ReplyDeleteOne day, I was practicing kicks with my friends in tae-kwon-do, and we noticed that this new girl was struggling to learn the moves. I didn’t judge her but everyone else did. I didn’t judge her because I had the same problem when I first started, but mine was different because I didn’t have a problem with the steps, I had the problem of learning what they are saying in Korean. While everybody else was picking on her, I welcomed her, She was very nice and very kind and she was great to be with. When everybody left she and I would practice until she got the steps right, which was like after two weeks or so. When three months had passed, the promotion test was here and everybody was worried because all that time they were picking on her and she and I were practicing. When it was our turn we did great, when everybody else went they weren’t so great because they made more than 5 mistakes. Me and her ended up being blue belts. What I am trying to show in this paragraph is that you should never judge a book by its cover.
ReplyDeleteOne day it was summer and I was outside playing with my cousin i noticed that lots of kids were playing outside this made me realize that in the rest of the seasons many people dont go outside because its to cold so i thought that summer is the best season because its a beutiful season and its fun too.
ReplyDeleteOne day I was outside it was spring. I think spring is the best season of the year because it is not freezing cold or a roasting hot and it if you want to go outside and play its not to cold or hot and you only have to put on a small jacket not a big and puffy jacket, or be burning yourself outside in the summer and not being able to do anything about it. So that is way spring is the best season of the year.
ReplyDeleteOne day i noticed when i was walking home from school and when i got home we decided to have a water ballon fight and it was so fun.We were all laughing and throwing ballons at each other.This makes me relize how much i enjoy summer because we do fun things like water ballon fights,the water park,and the beach.Another reason is witer is to cold, sring is rainy, and fall all the leaves are blowing around so thats why i love summer. that is why i think summer is the best.
ReplyDeleteOne day I notice as I was barely waking up it was January it wasn't winter well it should have past it and I look out the window it was snowing it was my first time that I saw the snow flakes the other time I saw it like it was already there. That is why my favorite season is winter not only because of that also because you can build lots of stuff with the snow and you can build like snowman and you can create lots of angels.
ReplyDeleteOne day, as I was walking the along the beach of the Dreams Cancun Resort, I noticed just how beautiful it is to be in the season of summer. Just imagine being in a beautiful hot climate and being able to freely go to the beach. And all the beautiful places you could go to, like every summer, I go to a place where it’s surely warm or hot. Let’s say Cancun or Miami like the past few years. The whole magic of it is that you could pretty much go anywhere you want, and still have lots of in the sun. Like last summer, I went to Cancun, Mexico, and it was the best experience ever! Firstly because the tropical feeling and all the places you could go to where it still feels tropical, but still see amazing sights, like the Mayan Temples. And that’s why I think that the best season is summer, because its loads of fun!
ReplyDeleteI was out of school and it was spring I was on vacation. I felt the cool gentle breeze going past my face and I heard the small sound it made when past whoosh. I then took off my shoes and went on the soft but slightly prickly grass. Then there the wind comes back. The soft breeze tickles my feet but at the same time it feels so soft. The sound the wind then comes and I smell the gentle sent of the roses of my mother’s. This was when I realized how much I love the season of spring. I then thought of the great things about it. I could go to the park, or play with my dog out in front; I could also have a water balloon fight with my brother and cousins. I then thought of the advantages of spring’s rival summer. Spring is the main time when flowers bloom and it’s a time when its not to cooled or hot. Also spring is the best time to go in the car and not get your behind burned by the sun unlike in the summer.
ReplyDeleteFlowers were blooming; children were running for the first time in months. It was sunny and warm; people were trying to pick out the dandelions. I noticed that the people were starting to look happier as they were trying to get a tan. The snow was off of the ground, people were jogging across the beach, and they were in the beach itself. It felt great to have warm sun on your body and to not have to wear a coat anymore. These are the wonders of spring. This makes me realize that spring is the best season. I think spring is the best season because its warm, flowers bloom, and you can play again.
ReplyDeleteI think that winter is the best seasons out of all. I like winter it fells different to me. I really like winter I love to throw snowballs to my brother. Then he throws me to the snow. I was born in winter it has had a fun experience I like winter most of all because then you can make anything in the snow.
ReplyDeleteTo me the best season is winter. I asked my cousin what his favorite season is and he said that its winter because he has had many good me with my family and his. This is important because many people in my family and his like winter as their favorite season. Just about 90% of my families like winter as their favorite season. This shows that many people in my family like winter and not just my family but also many other people and families.
ReplyDeleteOne day, I was playing in the park with my friends, then I notice kids and my friends killing bugs and insects . Every time they would kill the bugs in different kinds of way, like burning, squishing, and poking them with a stick. By then when he was going to kill another one, I stopped him and said with anger “ Don’t kill him let him go.” He let him go and he told me why. “ Because every living object deserve to live and not die in a bad way. What if that was you, you wouldn’t like it so why do it.” This made me realize how every living thing deserves to live and die, but in a good way. Just like how my friends killed the bug it didn’t deserve to die that way. They are little but that doesn’t mean no one cares. Also if they don’t harm you so you should leave them away just like they do to you too. I believe that you should not harm bugs because if they don’t harm you, why would you harm them?
ReplyDeleteOne day, I was outside wet my friend watering the flowers as the sun brighten the street in summer. And all of astound she spread water on me and we started running. We started to have a good time. We continue throwing water at each other as the sun gave us a big warm hug. Then everybody in our street were throwing water at each other. I enjoy summer a lot and I think everyone shod also like summer. Because summer an awesome season because its nice and warm, so you can go outside and play wet your friends and spend time wet them. And also go swimming and enjoy your vacation.
ReplyDeleteOne day, I was walking home from school, I noticed how hot it was I felt like I was melting and every step I took it was getting hotter and me and my friends were so hot so once we got home we started filling water balloons and jumped into my pool and it was so fun and refreshing. This makes me realize how I love summer. Summer is a really fun and a great season I love summer because all the time you get to have with your friends and how you can go and play outside all kinds of games and you can get wet and more and I don’t like any of the other seasons cause they just aren’t for me but summer is one season I can enjoy because of all the great things you can do during it although it is hot it is like the best season of all because you get some time off school and we get more time to do things we like which is mostly go outside and hang out with friends.
ReplyDeleteOne day, I was eager to get out of school. I went home and ate and did my homework and ran outside with my friends. We went to the park and saw many kids. They were enjoying themselves like we were to. Then the next day my friend and I went to swim in my pool. Then I noticed that all that we week I did a lot of activities outside and saw many kids too. I realized that summer was so much fun and that it was the best season of all of them because we could do so many activities outside, enjoying our self, and exercising while having fun it is the best season of them all. I believe that summer is the best season because it is hot but you don’t have to wear real big fat jackets every time you go outside or worry on getting a cold or flu or in spring have to carry a umbrella everywhere you go. I think summer is the best season of all.
ReplyDeleteOne day, I was walking to my house. I was coming from school when I realized that it was snowing. Whenever I took a step i would hear the snow and get really surprised because it was funny because whenever i stepped it will get packed up.This made me realize how much i liked winter. Winter is my favorite season because it is fun to play in the snow and i like was born in the winter.Also when it snows everything turns white and beautiful.I believe that winter is the best season because everything gets really cool outside. That is why I have winter as my favorite season of the year.
ReplyDeleteOne day, my friends and I were playing outside ALL day. We were doing this recently because we were in summer vacation. Those past days we have been having so much fun. We were doing all kinds of activities; we even made a BFFL club! This made me realize that summer is the best season. I believe that it’s the best season because the climate is hot enough to do all kinds of activities, you can take a trip to the beach, and we are in summer vacation.
ReplyDeleteOne day in the morning I saw through my window the outside of the window had a white blanket cover to the streets buildings and houses I went outside and it was chilly and that day I knew winter was coming I was so happy that I went to my moms room and told her screaming that it is winter . I hurried up to get my jacket my gloves and scarf. I open the door and could fell the breeze around my face I went up straight to snow and made a snowman and show ball to get prepare to throw them to my brother and sister. This makes me realize that I love the season winter because you could make snow mans and snow balls to have fun with your friends and each person can a joyful day and have lots of fun with your family, friends , and your old friends. I believe winter is the best season because you could have some fun with everyone playing with the snow. I believe that winter is the best season because that’s a time when your mom could do some coco because it’s cold outside.
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ReplyDeleteIsaac Martinez
6th grade writing
2\22\12
One day was walking home with my friend and there was snow all over the street. It was like a blanket of snow covering the whole street. My friend picked up a snowball while I wasn’t looking and threw it at me. We started to have a snowball fight. We grabbed huge chunks of snow and started to throw them at each other. This made me realize how much I enjoyed winter as a season. Winter is he most amazing season of all because you get to have snow ball fights, you get to make huge snowmen, and because you can drink a hot cup of Joe or hot chocolate once you go inside from playing.
Isaac Martinez
2nd period
one day, I noticed that today i report card i was scare but not my cousin she always get a,b honer roll. It 6 grade it was the first report card for this year. i look at my report card i got a,b and c when my cousin show her report card at my face she is being a show off she got a,b honer roll. i wish i had a,b honer roll i try my best but i got a,b and c all of this year throw 1st to 6th i got a,b and c i never got a,b honer roll. sometime she help with my homework but she leave very early. i wish i can be just like her she had good grade better than me i try my best. This make me realize how much i wont to have a,b honer roll. my cousin always had good grade i try my best. for this year i try my best to have a,b honer roll
ReplyDeleteOne day I was walking home from school and notice my mom in the car ready to go I found out we were going to the beach because that day it was really hot almost 100 degrees. This made me realize why summer is my best season. I think summer is the best season because you don’t need a coat or sweater and it’s not cold. Also because you could get wet outside or go to the pools or even go to the beach to swim because summer is the best season to go. I also think it’s the best season because its also the best time to play soccer.
ReplyDeleteone day,I notice that this kids were playing soccer at the park. they really like the sport because when they got tired they will play soccer until they get tired a lot. This makes me realize that soccer is the best sport to play in the summer.
ReplyDeleteOne day I noticed that when I was walking the floor it burned my feet. It was really hot and humid and I like it like that. My friends and I went to the public pool to cool off. After we were done swimming we would go play video games. After an hour we would go out and skate. This made me realize that I really like the summer time. Summer is the best season because you can do a lot of activities with your friends. Fall can be a little colder, winter can be too cold, and spring rains a lot. Summer is the best season ever. I believe that summer is the best season ever because you can go swimming, you can do a lot of activities, and because you don’t have to worry about the cold.
ReplyDeleteOne day, as I was walking home from school, I noticed how the sidewalk was covered with snow and i can play with snow and snow is relly cool With every step I took, there was a loud crunch that made it hard to talk to my friend as I walked home.At one point, my friend and I stopped and began to have a snow fight.snow is just right for me. Summer can be too hot to be outside; winter can be too cold.but snow is better because the trees is so beautiful during the winter and the most enjoyable holidays all happen during fall.
ReplyDeleteI think that is my cool holiday because that's the best season ever in my whole life and i realise that this winter is better then fall and i like summer like winter that much.
I belive thhat winter is mt bestest season ever in my whole life.
One day when I was coming home from the dentist I noticed a lot of little and big pieces of trash and garbage in the floor. I couldn’t even walk 10 feet without seeing little pieces of garbage. It may not be a lot but overtime there could be LOTS of trash in the streets and in the sidewalks. This made me realize that people need to stop throwing trash into the floor and need to start to clean up some of the trash. One time I saw a group of people cleaning some of trash in the park. More people should be like this so we can live in a clean environment. We should also try to recycle as such as we can and reuse plastic bottles and other plastics instead of throwing them away.
ReplyDeleteOne day I noticed as I was walking I saw white things on the floor and I noticed that it was snow. Also I saw a lot of kids and adults playing on it they looked like they were enjoying playing on the snow. They were enjoying playing on the snow. I went to my house to change and do my homework and when I came outside more people were outside playing. Some people were throwing snow balls, some people were making snow angels, and some people were making snowman’s. This makes me realize that a lot of people like to play in the snow. Winter is an in incredible season because you can enjoy playing with your friends. Summer can be to hot and fall can be a bit chilly and you can’t really play outside with your friends. I believe that winter is a good season because kids like to play in it and because it is a lot of fun. Also because Christmas happens in that season and a lot of people like to celebrate Christmas because they get presents.
ReplyDeleteOne day I noticed that winter is the best season to be in you can play snow fight, make snow mans, and best of all celebrate jesses birthday. Or sometimes get presents if you behave god you also can eat roscas. Thiezmake me realize that winter is the beast season because you enjoy snow ball fights, snow mans,angels, and eat roscas that is why winter is the best sesone ever
ReplyDeleteOne day my friends and I were playing soccer. When we were finished we realized how exhausted we were. But it was still light out so we decided to sit down and talk. It was summer that day and that’s how we found time to play soccer. I think summer is the best season because students get 2 months off school so they can spend time with their friends and talk to one another. And with the other seasons students go to school and don’t have all that time to spend with friends. They don’t have that time because students are way too busy doing homework or working on a project. With summer students don’t have to worry about homework. That is why I think summer is the best season.
ReplyDeleteOne day I was at my cousin’s house. We were all bored and we didn’t know what to do. It was also very hot outside and every one was sweating. My cousin said that they live by a pool. I said that it would be cool to go to a pool right now. He asked his mom and she had said yes. We got ready and went walking. The air was cool perfect weather for a day at the pool. We got there waited for about 5 minutes then we entered the pool. I just wanted to get in already. We got into the pool and it was so refreshing. I wished we could do this every day but summer was almost over and we would have to wait until next year to go into a pool again. We wouldn’t be able to go into a pool again because spring is a little too chilly, winter is to cold, and fall can be to cold sometimes. I realized that summer is the best season ever because you can play outside without being cold or have to wear a sweater. I believe that summer is the best season ever. You can be outside with a nice breeze of air get in pools and being outside. You can relax and have a lot of fun in the summer.
ReplyDeleteOne day I was walking down the street looking at the snow that seemed to hug the floor. As I was looking at it my friends they through a snowball. So I took cover and strarted to play with them. Winter is a season that every one could enjoy. This is good because kids or any body cold play snowball fights,slled, or ski.
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ReplyDeleteOne day, I notice it was snowing outside, it was so awesome! I went outside without a jacket just to see how cold it was and it was super cold! Around in the afternoon it was snowing again I was so happy that it was snowing me and a couple of friends we stared to have a Snow Ball Fight in the school park it was so fun. When we all left home I wanted o still be outside in the snow until one of my friends threw me snow and I didn't notice she was behind me and all what my friends say is "Let's Have A Snow Ball Fight!". This makes me realize that my friends like to have Snow Ball Fight when it's winter and I agree with them.
My opinion is Winter is the best season
One day I remember of seeing a lot of homeless dogs and cats everywhere. I always see them in the allies and around my block. One time I even saw a little puppy getting killed by another homeless dog. Cats and dogs are everywhere looking for food. Some cats and dogs might also have rabies and be very aggressive. This also reminds me of a homeless pit-bull in front of my house looking for food. My dad felt bad for him so e gave him food of my dog. Though like I said, dogs can be very aggressive like this one. Every time I see homeless dogs and cats I think to myself why do other animal shelters kill them if they don’t get adopted?! Can they just take them to a better shelter to live in? I also always see those commercials of this kind of animal shelter where they take good care of pets in there. Dogs and cats are like us, though we are human beings but it’s just like if we don’t have homes or food. Wouldn’t you like to be in a safe better place with food? This is important because there is a lot of dogs and cats out there homeless looking for food. Maybe one day you will stop seeing them everywhere and see them in a better safe place. People should think about this and at least call a good shelter where they can take good care of any pets they see.
ReplyDeleteOne day, as I was walking home from school, I noticed that people were playing with the water and were talking to their friends and getting ready to go to the beach. Me and my sister stop and went there and got dress up and got to the pool we were swimming in the pool and we were also playing with the water. This made me realize how much I enjoy summer as my favorite season. Summer is a great season because it nice enough to go outside and have fun with your friends or family and have fun with your friends playing in the beach. Fall can be a little too hot and winter can be too cold. Summer can be just right. I believe that summer is the best season because the weather is ok just a little bet hot but no problem is just fine it also changes types of color trees and is a great season for people to play, run and have fun with their family.
ReplyDeleteOne day, as I was walking home from school, I noticed that people were playing with the water and were talking to their friends and getting ready to go to the beach. Me and my
ReplyDeleteOne day I noticed that it was 90 degrees and i was watching t.v. I ran to the window opened the shades and i see alot of kids playing around getting wet and laughing out loud.
ReplyDeleteinstead of being inside the house this whole time I would've been outside enjoying the weather. the three reasons why i like summer is because you get to chill with your friends, go to the pools with your friends and go to the carnivals were you get to have fun and get on a spinning weel. in all those place I always see people in a good mood little kids happy playing around and girls giggleing at the boys because maybe he was cute. This makes me realize that some of the people really enjoy the summer to have fun and laugh. and have great times with the family.
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Summer is the best season ever.
ReplyDeleteOne day I was sitting on my couch then I hear a loud sound outside. I went to my window to see what it was and it was friends skateboarding. I went out to join them and we had a good time and we were skating for hours. We went to my friends house so we can skate with him. After we were done skating we went to Gage Park public pool. We were there for two hours and we had fun. Then we went to my friends house to play Xbox for the rest of the day. It was a fun day. Summer is the best season because people can do whatever they want like swimming, skateboarding, and ride bikes. More people should like the summer time.
One day I noticed that flowers were blooming, bees were buzzing, rain was drizziling all over the pavement. Every where I went I could smell the air filled with the smell of new flowers, trees and, grass. I picked out flowers smelling them. I went outside when little drops of rain poured, after the air would refreshing. Spring is the best season because its nice enough to go outside and play around. Also because its not too cold or neither too hot its right in the middle, just perfect. Spring is the best season because the temperature is right and everything is starting to grow.
ReplyDeleteOne day i noticed a lot of people playing soccer in the summer, it looked like if they were having fun. I started to think that most of the people go out in the summer than all other seasons. I asked my friends that what season they liked the most 90% said summer.This made me realize that summer is the best season i also think that because i dont like to go outside in the winter or any other season. One reason why summer is the best season is because you can play, go to the beach and do a lot of stuff.
ReplyDeleteI think that Summer is the best season because there is barely any school, and I think everyone can agree that. One day I went to the beach with my father, and also the rest of the Mendoza family. We had a picnic and then we went to go swimming. After that we would and always will get lost on our way back. I would hate going because I just don’t like people, but now I love going because all their parties are in spring and summer so I never see them in fall or winter unless something terrible happens. This makes me realize that many people may have this same problem but just in different seasons. Summer is an incredible season because many people get to go outside and play for as long as they want and go to the beach or let their families go outdoors while you stay in all day watching television with your dad and the doors locked so that his wife doesn’t come in, the good old days. Still summer is a very exciting season for many many people around the world.
ReplyDeleteOne day, as I was walking to my friend’s house, I noticed that it was snowing while I was waking. If I took a step therre will be a pile of snow right in the tip of shoe. Then when I got in my friend’s house I started to look outside the window because it started to snow a lot since I got in my friend’s house. About 5 minutes later I saw out the window and I had told my frien that it had stopped snowing and my friend asked her mom if we could play outside and she said ‘’yes’’ and when got outside my friend andi started to grab a whole handfull of snow and started trowing. This made me realize how much I enjoy winter season. Winter is an amzing season because people could do different activities like building a snowman, sleighing down a mountain full of snow,or have a snow fight with friends. Summer can be too hot for people, fall can be too noisey with the leaves outside in the floor. So winter is just right. I believe that winter is the best season because all the family could be warm, calm,and invite the rest of the familyfor dinner or a christmas movie.
ReplyDeleteI think that summer is the best season and the best time of year because in that time of year it’s hot, people can go out a lot more and have a lot of fun, and enjoy their time. In summer I noticed and realized that there are really barely any accidents like car accidents and accidents with the road and other stuff like that, and if you think about it in all the other seasons and times of year are either cold or too cold which is in winter and fall. In winter it’s really boring most of the time because there’s really nothing to do sometimes but wanting to lay down in your bed to stay warm, nobody wants to go out in the winter really because of how cold it can be sometimes, and most of the time. That’s why I think summer is better and the best out of all the seasons and times of years, my main reason for not liking winter is because I get way too cold too fast. Another reason why I think that summer is best is because I get to go and be out all day everyday and in the summer its best also because we get to put on all kinds of clothes and you don’t have to be all bundled up with a whole bunch of clothes. Also summer is fun, relaxing, and creates lots of memories like no other season does. My final reasons for why the summer is best are because we get to wear whatever we want, its fun, creates lots of memories, and I go out all day every day. That is why I think and say and those are my reasons why SUMMER IS THE BEST SEASON OF ALL!
ReplyDeleteOne day, I was going to my friends house, I noticed that outside was cover with a lot of leaves, will actually the floor was and the leaves were different kind of colors like orange yellowish red and green. Dog poop was cover with the leaves and I couldn’t see it. When I got to my friends house, we clean the leaves and put them in a big white bag and then we closed the bag and we started playing soccer with them. This made me realize how we both had fun as a fall season. I thought fall is a good weather because it’s not that cold and not that hot, so it’s perfect. I like winter but not that much because my ears get cold, my hands and even me. Summer its ok but it’s really hot and I just want to be inside my house with the air conditioner. So I think fall is better because the trees look awesome with all different colors. I believe that fall is the best season because the weather is really nice and you can go outside without a jacket, the entire colors make the tree looks pretty, and because we can have parties on fall and it won’t be cold and hot.
ReplyDeleteOne reason why fall is the best season is because it is scenic. One day, I noticed outside that all the trees had different kind of color leaves and it mach the color of my neighborhood houses and cars. There were trees that the leaves turn red, orange, yellow and brown and some were still green. It was nice looking at the leaves that the neighborhood looked like a piece of art work. This shows just one of examples of how scenic season is. All the trees leave’s change colors and it’s beautiful to look at the leaves. When talking with my mother and sisters, they said that their favorite season is fall because ‘’there are many fun activities to do like’’ put a munch leaves in a place and then jump on top of them and you could trick or treat on Halloween with your family. This shows just some of the fun activities that you could do during fall season which is one of the best seasons ever.
ReplyDeleteOne day I was walking home from school and notice my mom in the car ready to go some were with us. latter i found out we were going to the beach. Maybe becuase it was really hot almost 100 degrees. This made me realize why summer is my best season. I think summer is the best season because you don’t need a coat or sweater and it’s not cold. Also because you could get wet outside or go to the pools or even go to the beach to swim because summer is the best season to go. I also think summer is the best season becuase even if it is super hot you can still go outside to play and have fun!
ReplyDeleteOne day i noticed that it was really hot outside and and I saw kids outside playing and also getting wet in there pool. The three reasons I like summer is because I like going outside with my friends and play around and also get wet in the pool and go to my friend’s house to play around. Also because in the summer we are not bored in the house and in winter we do not go outside we just stay home because in winter is very cold and nobody would like to go outside.
ReplyDeleteOne day, I noticed that there was a lot of snow outside. Then after that I and my sister went outside we started playing. Then when we finish playing we build a little snowman. When we finish building it we went back inside and drank some coffee because it was very cold we were shivering. I think winter is the best season because u gets to play with the snow and build different things like a snowman. 90% like winter because they get to play with snow and have fun.
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