Sunday, November 14, 2010

Persuasive Practice

Write the introduction to the following persuasive prompt:

________________ is the best season. Persuade others to agree with you.

Here is the organization your introduction needs to follow:
-An observation
-This makes me realize
-A thesis statement with three reasons

One day, as I was walking home from school, I noticed how the sidewalk was covered with leaves. With every step I took, there was a loud crunch that made it hard to talk to my friend as I walked home. At one point, my friend and I stopped and began to have a leaf fight. We picked up handfuls of leaves and started to chuck them at one another. This made me realize how much I enjoy fall as a season. Fall is an incredible season because it is still nice enough to go outside and be with friends and have fun doing silly activities like having leaf fights with friends. Summer can be too hot to be outside; winter can be too cold. Fall is just right. I believe that fall is the best season because the weather is just right, all of the change in color in trees is beautiful, and because of the most enjoyable holidays all happen during fall.

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  1. Summer is the best season bc it rarely rains./The sun is out till late it doesnt get dark right away and its way better...Theres no leaves nor wet side walks you get tot feel the warmthness..No worrying that later is going to get colod. You get to do alot of fun stuff..And your not gonna get goosebumps while your getting wet.....you can sta out late,,,its nothing like summer and winter,..

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  2. Summer is the best season. Summer is the best season because it’s time for pool parties, cookouts with families, parties, water balloon fights, and washing cars. In one hand I have my lemonade laying on one of those comfy chairs and in the other one moving my sunglasses. Summer is the best season because:.1.pool parties,2.soccer games,3.tae kwon do tournaments.

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  3. Lesleycarranza 306Tue Nov 16, 08:17:00 AM

    Winter is the best season!

    Waking up in a saturday morning, It was cold as usual. walkinq to the window i see snow.
    "Snow!" I yelled but nobpd was home. I felt dumb. I love winter.
    winter is the best season, beacsue its when it snows. theres always something to do.
    These are some things you can do:
    1)Ice skateing
    2)Snow ball fight
    3)December 25, Christmas day!
    you can get gifts & spend time with your family.
    I velive that winter is the best sason beacuse of Christmas, snowball fights, & Ice skateing.

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  4. It was one day of june i was ready to go to my soccer game when i saw the it was staring to rain.The rain stoped so i called my couch he said "if it keeps raining we are not playing" so stopd he went to pick me up.When we were giving the id's to the coach it start to rain but not hard. so we atart the game at the 2nd half it stop raining.It was really excited to be playing soccer when it was raining thats why i like summer.

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  5. You know what my favorite season is? Well, mine is S-U-M-M-E-R! J
    I love summer because I always go to Mexico in the summer. I love going to spent time with my Cousin Zuleima that has been wanting to come to the United States, but cant because she doesn’t have papers. Also summer is my favorite because I always go Downtown with my sister Yolis &. Brenda :D I Love them.
    &. My last reason I love summer is because there’s a lot of parties in the summer, Parting is my thing! And this summer of ‘2011’ there’s going be a lot of parties , Yeyaaaaaaaaaa. This makes me realize summer is the best season for me. And I know other people agree with me.

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  6. One day, as I was walking in the beach, I noticed how hot the day was. With every step I took,my sweat was falling from my head. At one point, my friend and I stopped and went in the water. This made me realize how much I enjoy summer season. Summer is an incredible season because you coulg go to the beach, go to the park and always get wet.Fall can have a sweter to be outside; winter can be too cold. Summer is just right. I believe that fall is the best season because the weather is just right,and because of the most enjoyable summer vacation.

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  7. In my opinion fall is the best season. I like
    it because I like steping on the leaves and hear the the leaves crunch. I also like it when the leaves fall on my head and face. Thats why fall is my favorite season.

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  8. One day as I woke up in a Monday I looked out the window and I noticed snow on peoples roof covered with snow. I went out side and I cleaned the snow so my mom wouldn’t fall all the snow was crunching and squeaking so I fell in the snow face first and as soon as I got in the car I cleaned my face and my face was freaking red. This makes me realize that winter is my favorite season.

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  9. I think that winter is the best season because it is a fun time to be with family and it is cold outside but when you go inside your houseit is really warm. You can have snowball fights with your cousins and hit them in the face with a snowball. You drink all the hot choclate in your house

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  10. One day as i was coming out of my house ready to go to school, with my warm jacket, boots and a scarf i realized I didn't need them. It was getting warm out, no snow, i saw the flowers wanting to start blooming, the trees wanting their color and leaves back. I observed the scene that was before my eyes. And thats when i realized I loved spring. I believe spring is the best season because you finally feel warm after 5 months of cold weather, because it's not too hot and not too cold its just right, and because it means school will be over soon.

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  11. One cold December afternoon I noticed how icicles formed on a garage.As I walked home in silence all you heard was “crunch,crunch” the snow crunching under my boots.My friend surprised me when she throw a huge snowball at my face.It was at least a size of an orange.I responded and threw a snowball back.It began the snowball fight.I believe winter is the best season because there is snow everywhere, you can sled, and have a snowball fight.

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  12. ONE MONDAY MORNING I WOKE UP READY TO GO TO SCHOOL I FELT MY HOUSE COLDER THAN WHAT IT USULLY WAS.WHEN I STEPED OUT OF MY HOUSE IS LIKE IF THE WORLD TURNED IN TO ONE SIMPLE COL0R IT WAS NOW COVERING EVERYTHING AROUND AS I WALKED ON IT IT LEFT MY FOOT STEPS ME AND MY FRIEND WERE WALKING TO SCHOOL I PICKED UP A PILE OF SNOW MADE IT IN TO A BALL AND THREW IT TO HER WE BEGGAN TO HAVE A SNOW BALL FIGHT WHEN WE WERE DONE MY HANDS WERE COLD I DIDNT FEEL WHILE IWAS AT SCHOOL I JUST COULDNT WAIT TO COME OUTSIDE.SINCE THIS DAY I REALIZED THAT I LOOOOVED WINTER.WHAT I LIKE ABOUT IT IS THE SNOW AND HOW IT FEELS BUT MOSTLY KNOWING THAT WHEN I GET HOME I WILL DRINK A HOT CHOCOLATE AND BECAUSE I KNOW THAT CRITMAS IS COMING,DOESNT WINTER SOUND LIKE FUN.THIS IS MY FAVORITE SEASON.

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  13. fausto portales 303Thu Nov 18, 09:16:00 AM

    One day as we were walking to my aunts house it looked weird because their were like 30 people walking all together like a gang.As we were walking i grabbed snow and looking at it. But then my cousin thru me a snowball so then i looked at him and we started a snowball fight.I believe this is the best season because we do snowball fights, play tackle football and lastly drink hot things.

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  14. Violeta.S. (303)Thu Nov 18, 09:19:00 AM

    One day I was walking to the store.Oh my god it`s like a hot wave.It is really hot i was sweating i don`t like sweating.When all of a sudden i pass through a open pump i small drop of water hit my face that felt good.All of a sudden i realized that summer was my favorite season.Summer can be a pain because all of the sweat and feeling all sticky.I hate that,but in the other hand it is awsome because you can go out and be with your friends.You can go to different waterparks and have a blast getting in all the different water rides.This is differnt from winter because you can not go out and you have to stay all day inside.i used to think that fall was great but you can not go swimming so i decided my favorite season is summer.

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  15. One day when my friends and I were in the park I noticed how beautiful everything looked. Flowers were blooming, birds churping and the smell of last night`s rain was still in the air. My friends and I just sat in the park enjoying the breeze and playing tennise. This made me realize that I loved Spring. All of the beautiful plants, and birds coming back. It`s relaxing to be able to just sit around with out being to hot and cold or the harsh winds of fall. I also love Spring because of all the rain showers we have and the smell after words. I believe that Spring is the best season because everything is in bloom, the weather is perfect and there is a lot of rain in Spring.

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  16. One day ass i walk down the beach with my causins.i realize that summer is my best season of the year especially cause you get to be outside on the beach with your family and your friends.we were running thru the water ass the waves came towards us,trowing to each other water and screaming ,laughting at each other cause we were all wet.makinq drawings with the sand.stayingg all nigh on the beach laying down in the sand looking at the stars in the sky,counting them,even do we were never going to finish.listening to the water how it moves,runing thru the sand all our family olding hands, just the quiteness of the beach on the night.That just made me feel so comfortable.It made me realize that summer is my best season of the year.

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  17. One day i notice everybody was outside the reason was because it was summer i had so much fun playing soccer and riding my bike around. This made me realize that summer is the best season because all my friend are out. I get to go to the beach every weekend and swim. the sun dont go in till like 8 or 9 so that mean i got all day to have fun and be out more. So this makes me realize that summer is the best the temparature is nice and cool to be out side with shorts and not having to where a jacket. I beleave that summer is the best cause it more fun and all my friend are out having fun with me and i get to play soccer and takes walks.

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  18. Cmartinez303(ds575)Thu Nov 18, 09:20:00 AM

    One day i noticed that it was a freezing day and i felt warm inside my jacket. Rolling up a snow ball in my palm and launching it as far as i could and landing on the face of my mom. My bad. Hot chocolate after having so much fun in the cold just tops all. This makes me realize that winter is so much better then summer because we don't all hot, sweaty, and sticky.Gross. I believe winter is a better season because in summer you get so hot and stressed because of the heat. You get all sweaty and sticky. There are more ways to have fun in the winter then in summer. The weather is better to stand then the weather in summer.

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  19. Amilcar Montoya304Thu Nov 18, 09:20:00 AM

    One day when I was walkinq from school it started to snow n i felt a happy feelinq of the snow fallinq from my cheek.I notice that I like the nice cold winter season.I like the winter season because i can have snowball fiqhts with my friends n dont qo to school that much.I like winter because i can drink hot coco with family.Winter is my favorite season because i can spend much of my time with my family.I like winter because i can watch the snow fall from the sky the biq white sky n see a the nice Christmas decorations.

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  20. one day i notice the playground was full of snow and the little kids were still playing whith the snow i was frizzing that day and the only thing i dont like about winter is that that cold air goes into your eyes and it makes you cry but the cool thing about winter is that one your outside having fun. i believe winter is the best season because you get to make snowmans out of snow,you get to have fun wiyh your freand and, you also get to have party and chill whith your freands.

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  21. yuritce r 2nd periodThu Nov 18, 09:21:00 AM

    One day as I was walking home with my cousin the sun was shining its heat on us. it was really hot outside and we had no water with us. we were going to buy water bottles but we had no money. everybody was outside playing and talking. at that point i realized that this is the season that mostly everyone comes out. there a little kids on their bycicles and the parks full of people.i believe that thebest season is summer because mainly everybody is outside, you can get wet unlike in the winter,play sports or hang around with friends.

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  22. One day I was watching Phineas and Ferb on t.v. I love watching it because they are little kids who can build huge creations. On one episode they where putting 2 seasons together. They put summer and winter togehther and made SWINTER !!!!!!! You could have a snowball fight and also go swimming. My brother said that he prefers winter and my cousin said that he preferd summer. I couldn’t decide. I then realized that summer and winter are both too good to choose. Swinter is the best season…… in my world!!!! Swinter is the best season because u don’t have to decide between summer and winter, you still have Christmas and summer vacation, and you can awim in ice without being cold because it technically is also summer !!!!! Swinter is the best season!!!!!!

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  23. One day as I was walking home from school I had realize how beutiful snow looked it was so white it looked as if it had crytals inside.my friend and I strated throwing snow at each other and this makes me realize that even though its cold winter can be a realy cool season ,we can have snow ball fights with friends ,and how we can spent some quality time with our family’s drinking hot chocolate

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  24. It was June my friends and i favorite month of the year because its a summer month and we love summer because its a month that we have less time at school and go to the park having water balloons fight going to the beach and of coarse celbrating my birthday. this made me realize that how much we enjoy summer even when its a really hot summer time.Summer is a one of the amazing season because its a time to relax and enjoy the nice fresh air and spending time with freinds and go wild in the nice cooling water.summer is just the perfect season to be together with friends or family,planning trips to go so we wont stay at the house or your hometown 24/7,staying up late because there is now SUMMER VACATION. its a season to exprience new things and learn new things example maybe you cant swim and now it will be the time to go learn and have FUN. Summer is a great season for me and others.

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  25. josue ramirez304Thu Nov 18, 09:22:00 AM

    one day that it was winter . we had a snowball fight. i hit daisy with a snowball between her eyes.Also i threw one to my brother henry he also got mad like daisy so they all started chasing me so i ran home so they were waiting for me outside so i never came outside.

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  26. one day i noticed when it was autumn, i was walking aroung with my friend joel, and eric, jessica, and last francisco. While we where walking aroud their was a little kid crying on the side walk his name was joshua. we felt bad so we just stoped by to see what was wrong. the little kid was crying because he got lost and couldnt find his way back home. I realized that it was the best day because i felt doog that i helped a little kid back home

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  27. It was a hot,hot summer day, and there was no school. I had just finished playing tag with my friends. We were all sweating like pigs. It was a good game of tag and we were all really hot.
    ''Its Hot As Hell!'' Josue said, wippinq sweat off his forehead.
    '' I know, riqht?'' I said aqreeinq.
    I had money, like about 50$, so we went to an ice cream shop that was in the corner. We all ate some very good ice cream. After we finished our ice cream, we went back to our block. It was about 7 of us, Henry, Erik, Alfonso, Josue, Jocey, Stephanie, and Me.
    We sat on our front steps and we all realized we had gotten hot aqain. Alfonso went to my backyard and pulled out my hose. He started wetting all of us! We all got wet, and we had so much fun., & after being so hot after our game, then eatinq a delicious frozen treat, and getting wet made me realize how much I loved summer. I belive summer is the best season of all because there is summer break, and we have no school!, We can be out and have fun being outside, playing sports and games! And finally, because you dont have to be freezing even inside of your house. You can just go outside, qet a water hose, and cool yourself and having fun doinq it.

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  28. anthony garcia 303Thu Nov 18, 10:11:00 AM

    the favorite season of this year or any other year is christmas because its nice.i like it because when it snows i like to see how it looks in the sky windy.it feels if you want to go out and do stuff ,like snowball fights and snow angels and other stuff for the winter.another thing is that when your in the house u feel warm and cudely right next to the heater .my favorite part of winter is in december 26 christmas.i like it when our family gets together and eat turkey.the familys actualy know what present they are giving to you and it feels cool to be surrounded by people you love.this is why i like winter!!!

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  29. Alvarez O 306 =^.^= ....Thu Nov 18, 10:13:00 AM

    Once on a nice warm summer day i was playing volleyball with my friend. Thats when i noticed that everyone was outside playing. Even parents were outside enjoying the weather.It was awesome.This situation made me realize that summer is the best season!
    I believe summer is the best season because you can show off what your wearing, have fun playing sports and have awesome outside parties!

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  30. It was a Breezy Day. The Day was sunny and the trees were colorful and dancing with the wind. As I was walking I kicked the colorful dead leaves on the cement floor. I smiled to myself thinking autumn is the best Season ever. I believe that fall is the best season because it has the best Holidays. For example it has Halloween, Thanksgiving, and Columbus Day. There is also the weather that is the best because it’s not too cold and not to hot it’s just right. Another reason why autumn is the best season is that it’s the season of my birthday. The Trees are very colorful and everything is colorful spend time with your family special events going on and everything else. That’s why I love the season autumn!(:

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  31. Alondra M 3o2 =")Thu Nov 18, 10:15:00 AM

    I woke up this one morning it was freezing inside my house the heater was on the right temperature i was wearing my cozy pink pijamas i got ready for school a.s.a.p i put my sweater on and as i walked down the street towards the car i noticed that every peson i seen was with a jacket in their hands i was lost i was wondering why they were carryng it because it wasnt even that cold out then after i qot out of school it was snowing then i realized why everyone was holding theuir jackts this morning i hated that day then some of the people i habged around with started throwing snow balls at me and at eachother it was the funnest day evr we were all throwing eachother sown it was very very cold i had to admit but i had lots of funn i believe winter is the best season because youh spend alot of time outside making snowmans and goofing around most of the time also because you get the chance to be sick and stay home from school =)

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  32. One day I was in my in back yard admiring by tree. The tree had just bloomed with beautiful pink flowers. Then I suddenly a big gust of wind shot through the tree surrounding me in a tornado of petals majestically dancing. This made me realize how much I love spring. I believe that spring is the best season there is because things come back to life, everything is new, and the weather is not too hot or too cold.

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  33. One day ,I noticed that winter was here today that maked me realize that I was going to have a lot of fun and that it my birthday
    Was coming . when I was in school I stared at the window looking at the snow Droping from the sky. I was happy because I loved snow and having fun. TheNext day in school I said to my friends ‘’ let’s go afterschool to my house and We could go outside playing with the snow.when it was time to comeout of School I was waiting for my friend .when we both were walking through my school I Throw her snow then she throw me it back. We both were cold ant wet.I knew that Winter was the best. I believe that winter is the best because of the snow droping
    From the sky,also my birthday was in chritsmas,finally I liked winter of the way we had Winter break .

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  34. One day i woked up and it looked like it was 5am and i noticed that it was still dark i looked out my window and i noticed that the sky was dark blue. I headed to the living room and saw that my brother was not in his room so i went to his clock and saw that his it was marking 7:30.This made me confused.I thought that it was 5am but i was wrong.Because i woke up late, i was going to be late to school,wont have enough time to have breakfast,and miss at least one class.I believed that students need to set up at least 2 alarm clocks in case one doesn't work the other will.And they wont be late for school.And that winter and the change of time is not good because it gets confusing to know what time it is.Witch might cause you to be late to school.

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  35. One day, I was at my cousin’s house, & we were on our way outside. We were ready to leave, when we noticed it was snowing out! We were all instantly annoyed because it meant autumn was over, and we needed to wear our jackets. I believe autumn is the best season because the time is so colorful, you don’t have to put much outerwear on, & it lasts so little, we enjoy it more.

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  36. one day i notice that all the people were wearing chakets ,gloves,boats,and more so the cold could not go true them.. This makes me realize that this days snow would come down from the sky to the ground and the people will be playing around with alot of things to do like snow fights,or doing snow mans or other things..kids love snow an i belive that alot of people perfer summer but i perfer winter ..because you can get sick and not go to school,or you could have alot of fun ,and becausebeutiful arond snowing day.

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  37. One day I noticed the snow in the ground. I grabbed it and started throwing it at my neighbor. We started to throw it at each other. We build a snowman and knocked it down. We made piles of snow and started knocking each other down it didn't hurt us. This makes me realize i love winter because i could do so many things with the snow. I believe winter is the best season because I like the cold snow, I get to do crazy things and i wont hurt me, I get to get sick and i wont be able to go to school.

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  38. Gilbert G room 302Thu Nov 18, 10:18:00 AM

    One day I noticed it was very hot and it made me remind me of the beach. The cool wind everywhere the water hitting my face the sand flying everywhere. It was so fun beign on the beach that when you are gonna leave you dont want to and you wanna stay there forever.Usually I stay in the water for like 3 hours. the wind blowing remids me of skateoearding because when your riding you feel good that the wind is blowing. Also I can finnaly wear short and loose shirts so i wouldnt have to be all fat and covered up like on winter. In the winter you get to eat ice cream and when you eat it again for the first time it tastes so good you want more! But the best thing that summer is that there is NO SCHOOL! You are free and finally get to do everything you wanted to do. Thats why i believe sumer is the best season because there is no school.

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  39. fraNcisco chavez9Thu Nov 18, 10:18:00 AM

    one day i noticed i played soccer better in summer then in any other season.that made me like summer the best because reason 1,you can run around play soccer.2,you can go to the beach when its to hot and get "wet"with anyone.and my last reason.3.summer is the season to go outside and do activities like play soccer.thats why i like summer the best.

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  40. one day i noticed that the days were getting very hot.as i walked outside i began to see people outside and im thinking to my self this is strange because before there were hardly people outside. i walked to my friends house and a lot of my friends were out and there were barely out so i say what you doing and they said nothing but its hot outside today.i wasnt the only one who thought that, then i began to realize that winter had passed already and people were out. it was summer.

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  41. JAM Jesus M. rm 306Thu Nov 18, 10:19:00 AM

    One day, I would be walking in the neighborhood in a nice, sunny, cool day. I noticed that the leaves of the trees would be growing since the last year. This makes me realize that one of my favorite seasons was starting to begin with these events going on. I would be all day running, feeling the temperature of spring. It even felt good when it would be raining when it would be the perfect time of playing my favorite sport soccer. I believe that spring would be one of the best seasons all around because of its great weather, a perfect time to hang around, and nothing would bother anybody.

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  42. Carmen Mandujano 306Thu Nov 18, 10:20:00 AM

    One day I noticed that my grandma really didn’t like the summer and winter and that got me to realize that spring and fall are the best seasons because in both it is not to hot and not to cold and sometimes it is really hot outside in does seasons and then mayde you can go to the beach or to a pool or somewhere fun instead of just being with your friends.

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  43. One day when Ophelia and I were going to get pizza. She tripped. I asked How Did You Fall Slow Bot?? She said It was the ice. I noticed then it was winter. Winter is the Best season. Hmm.. A good reason why Winter is the best is The Cold Weather. Now most people dont like the Weather but after those long summer days it starts to feel refreshing. Anthor reason is the snow. It`s perfect for throwing. I dislike many people so Just throw it and Enjoy the Cries of those Losers. Anthor good reason is The food on Christmas. I get hungry and I bet everyones mom cooks something cool. This makes me realize Winter is Awesome

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  44. One day,as i went outside,i noticed how cold it was.As i remebered the hot summer days i noticed that i often didn't go out as much as i did in summer .That had been because it was cold and snowy.In summer my friends and i would have fun doing fun things.This made me realize how much i like summer.I belive that summer is my best season because i could go with my friends,go to the beach and have fun at the beach.

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  45. J Munoz 3rd periodThu Nov 18, 10:22:00 AM

    One December day I woke up and saw that the streets and sidewalks were covered in white fluffy snow. I went outside and stepped on the snow and I felt the crunch of the snow. I threw myself on the snow and it felt so good. I had to shovel the snow in a cold chilly weather but I had no problem because I enjoyed this weather. This made me realize how much I liked winter. I believe that Winter is the best season there is because there are great holidays that we celebrate like Christmas and New Years, also Winter is the season that is most likely to be the only season that has the precipitation of snow, and if you’re cold you can get warmed up unlike in summer there is no way if you are outside and it is hot there is no way to get fresh. I believe winter is the best season there is because of the weather and holidays.

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  46. One day as I walked into my friends party I noticed that the atmosphere was great.The party was outside on Fourth of July.There was music,food,drinks.It was the best time i ever had.This made me realize that summer is the best season.I believe that because you can't throw parties outside when its 10 below zero,the weather is a big part of having fun,nobody would show up if its raining or its snowing,in the summer you have alot of opportunities.There i no school and you could travel all over the world with no worries.

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  47. One day,I was outside with my cousins. Then i noticed how much my sister was sweating, So i told her to go inside and get ice cream for us. When she came back she said we needed to get ready to go to the beach. We all got so happy we were screaming of.That day i had a lot of fun with my family at the beach and i hope i go back. This made me realize summer is the best season because you could go to the beach and get wet, you could eat ice cream without having your parents tell you it's too cold for ice cream, and you could wear what ever you want too, you don't have to wear sweaters or jackets.

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  48. ramon hill room 304Thu Nov 18, 11:37:00 AM

    A fun summer day i had was on a saterday and we went to a party and that was the best day ever because we got to stay out late because it was the first day of summer and we did nt have school.this makes me realize that summer is the best season.I BELIVE SUMMERIS THE BEST season because i get to stay out late and go more placese that i want and plus i get to go outside on week days.

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  49. It was Saturday and my mom and my stepdad had told me that we were going to go to the park so I told my mom if I was allow to bring my friend Maria. Well I had call my friend Maria and asked her if her mom let her go. well she did but she had to bring her two sisters jenny and Briana. well I didn’t know that my aunt and uncle were going and that they were bringing the baby so when we got to the park it was hot and beautiful I had a lot of fun specially cause I had took one of my friends I wont forget this.well that day we played volleyball we walked around the park and the little lake and we were fishing there too. Then it got late so we went and drop them off. i got home and told my mom that I want this to happen again that I had a lot of fun. so this make me realize that summer is the best season because the other seasons we cant get to do all this fun stuffs. I believe that summer is the best season because we get to party, go to the beach and we get to walk around the hood.:)

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  50. One day,as I woke up I noticed it was very cold.I went to check outside.I became blind with the bright color coming from the beautiful,soft looking snow.I saw happy to see all the snow that had fallen. I wanted to go outside,and step on the snow and hear the crunching sound as i step on it.Hearing the Christmas carols on the radio.This made me realize how much I enjoyed winter.I believe the winter is an awesome season because there is many activities you could do with your family.Also because you could have a snowball fight,or build a snowman with your family.

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  51. One day as i was walking with my friends back home from school, i noticed how the weather was so beutiful. I hadn't realize how much i liked winter until that specific day. My friends and I were walking home from school as we were walking, my friend started to throw snowballs at us. I began to throw snowballs at her too. As we were playing, i grabbed a handfull of snow in my hand and at threw it right at her face, it went right in between her eyes. As the day was ending we went inside and had a cup of hot chocolate. This makes me realize my friends and I can hang out together and have fun for all winter season. I believe winter is one of my favorite seasons because you can do all different kinds of activities. Have a snowball fight,play in the snow, and have a cup of hot chocolate for the cold weather.

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  52. ChristinaR Rm303Thu Nov 18, 11:40:00 AM

    One day I noticed that kids didn't play outside in the winter but in the summer it was a whole different story.This made me realize how much I love summer.Winter is much to cold to play outside, Spring is in between of summer and winter but its still a bit cold. Summer is the best season because you can do lots more activities, you can hang out friends a little longer then being inside your house all bored, and you can also be able to do 4th of July with out being cold.

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  53. One day i notice that it was in the year 2009
    i was playing with my cousins and that suddenly i got reLLY COLD and that i went inside it was really warm and that my aunt and mom had made hot chocalate and bread it was cool because i got outside for a while is cold and white /preety . well all have fun specially in winter .thats why winter is the bst season in the year specially you csn have more time with your family and some frineds
    i really like winter specially in christmas it
    gets more fun and exitment and then neq years
    come it get better .winter is really cool specialyy the family reaunions inside with an latte.:) winter makes an year more cool ,i belive this is true because the best part you can make winter better .that i belive that winter is the best season because is more family time ,more fun and last but not least more holidays plus presente :) ....this are my
    resons why winter is the best season

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  54. One day, I decided to go outside. It was another normal weekend day. I noticed that the flowers were in bloom, the wind was gentle, and the sun was shining bright. It was the first day of spring. I went back inside and grabbed a book to read outside, all I wanted to do was be outside. This made me realize how much I like spring, it's the best season. Spring is the best season because it has the perfect weather, the flowers bloom making a beautiful sight, and we get to have spring break.

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  55. One day, as me and my friend were walking to the park, i noticed that the sidewalk and cars were covered in snow. As i walked to the park i left a foot print with every step i took. Me and my friend picked up some snow and had a little snow fight. That was alot of fun. This made me realize how much i love winter.I think that winter is th best season because it is the time to go outside and have a snow ball fight with your friends, it is also the time to watch football inside with a warm blanket,and it is the time to drink hot chocolate. You cant do this with any other season, can you?

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  56. One day as i was going to the park i noticed how the sun shine brigth. Then i realized that my favorite season is summer. Summer would be a fun season because i can hang out with friends and go to the beach.I can also hang out at the park and go to some fun places.Winter can be too cold, fall is kinda cold,spring rains a lot,and Summer is the best season for me were i can have some fun.

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  57. oscar R.room 306Thu Nov 18, 11:42:00 AM

    it was the last day of november and ther was one of the biggest snow storms. Me and my brother were exited becouse we new how fun it was going to be outside.another reason me and my brother like winter is becouse of chrismas
    my family always celebrate it but she invites my unkles and cosins. Ame and my brother like to go outside and make snow ball fights but we get in trouble with my mom.

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  58. one day i just got out of the hose becus i whanted to get out of ther becuse i wanted some fres air i notise it was warme out sied. i saied that it must be summer bucuse it was hot so it means that we can go to the water parkes which makes it the beast seson ever we can go out side go to the water parkes. we can also eat lots of icecream.it is my birthday so it makes even better.i also like how the flower are all perfect not like in spring when they are just starting to blum.thats y i like summer.

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  59. We had set up a date
    on valentines day because it was his first day being back from Gerogia. I was so excited because we hadnt seen eachother for a while.I felt so many emotions going through me as i walked through that doors that held me and him from one another at one point of time. And there he was standing there greeting me with the most smoochess hugs and kiss on the cheak.My favorite season is winter because you get to smuggle and hold your lover, you get to pass out gifts that you think will make them feel very special,and you get to sit by the fire place and enjoy eachothers company......This is why I love winter.

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  60. Walking home from school in the crisp air, i looked at the colored trees. The leaves were crunching under my feet and the sound scared the squirrels. My last day and now break for 2 months, this made me realize i loved fall. Fall is my favorite season because, it's the perfect temperature outside with natural color, the best clothes are in the fall, and Thanksgiving is in the fall which is the second best holiday.

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  61. I was walking to school one day and i relised how cold it was and now I know
    i have to start wearing my coat it was really cold. I belive that the best season is summer because i dont have to worry about wearing coat.Another reason for this is that you really cant do anything in winter outside and in summer you whould sit outside almost all day. Third reason is that it makes you feel relaxed with the summer breze.On the other hand many people like winter because they have snowball fights but is too cold!I used to think winter was the best but i realized that it was way to cold.But now i belive summer is the best season of the year.

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  62. One day I was that the beach with my friends play and hanging out and I had so much fun with them. We were having races on who can swim the fast and how long you can hold their breath under water. After we were done play around my friends and I was look at the sun going down our feet in the warm sun and having the sun warm and looking at the sun beautiful colors .This makes me realize that summer was the best season. I believe that summer was the best season because you can get to have more time with your friend and family, you can go to the beach and swim, and you can have water balloons fights.

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  63. One day I noticed my friends talking about their favorite seasons “What was my favorite season?” I hadn’t really thought about it much. I thought about all the seasons’ Winter, Fall, Summer, Spring. I ended up picking Fall as my favorite season. I picked fall because the weather outside is perfect it isn’t hot out and you don’t have to wear a jacket. You can just wear a sweater. The second reason I picked fall was because it’s likely that there will be snow and it won’t be so cold that you can’t be outside.

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  64. Walking downtown with my friends is fun. We laugh and talk about how nice the air runs though are hair. I push my friend down which she hits a big bunch of leaves. She laughs and throws them everywhere. We dance while throwing the leaves. This makes me realize how much fall is the best season. I believe this because I see out the window and I see the beautiful trees with different color of leaves outside,also its nice its not to warm or not to cold just right , there is a lot of holidays in fall that me and my family do together. (:

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  65. Miguel Arroyo 303Thu Nov 18, 11:47:00 AM

    I still remember the day when me and my dad were playing outside in the snow.We were playing at a snowball fight.Then I ran straight at him and I pushed him down to the big pile of snow.We both laughed and went inside for a hot nice tea.This makes me realize that winter is my favorite season.I belive this because if you want you could stay inside in the wamth watching tv or playing videogames online.Or if you want to have more fun you could go outside an play in the snow.I also like watching people fall down in the floor it's just hilarious.

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  66. Sidewalks and yards full of leaves. I am outside with my cousin. We are just hanging out in the front yard kicking the leaves around. It is nice and cool outside. This made me realize that fall is my favorite season. I believe fall is my favorite season because is nice and cool not a hundred degrees outside, you can be outside for half an hour and not feel like you are about to melt. Another reason I like fall is because fall is between summer and winter the perfect time of the year. The third reason I like fall is because you can wear sweaters, long sleeves and dark colors without question.

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  67. Jackeline Paniagua302Thu Nov 18, 12:10:00 PM

    JACKIE PANAGUA 302
    It was a school day, well to be more exact the bell of the end of the day had rung. Everybody was anxious to run out the school doors and get home to spend a fun amount of time with friends.
    As soon as the school doors opened in order to get out I felt the nice summer air run under my skin like a relaxment. Thats when i realized the summer season was it. There for I consider summer to be my favorite season of the year. I strongly believe summer would have to be it because there are more activities that could get done. For example taking a walk in a park, tanning for my pale skin color, outdoor summer sports, and also you don’t have to worry about wearing a sweater over your cute top, you don’t have to stay in the boring indoors because your parents want to prevent you from getting sick. You might not be able to oopen chistmas presents or trick-or-treat but on the bright side you get presents for your birthday or in some peoples cases awards for good behavior some kind people and teachers(Mrs.Novik give out candy):D
    These are my reasons why i strongly believe that summer is the BEST! :).

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  68. Manases L. Room 303Thu Nov 18, 12:23:00 PM

    One day I noticed that it started to snow outside and when I went outside it was cold, but everything looked nice and sparkly. I picked up the snow and as some snowflakes fell I noticed it made my hand numb. For some reason I felt like throwing snow at someone. This makes me realize that in the winter everything outside looks cool. I believe that winter is the best season because it looks beautiful outside. Winter is the best season because it has holidays like Christmas which lets the family gather together to celebrate it. Winter is the best holiday because the weather outside can make outside look better (more beautiful) than the other 3 seasons.

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  69. One day I noticed that the leaves were falling down. The colors of the leaves were beautiful! I felt jumped and energetic. It was the perfect weather too not to cold but not to windy. When I got outside it was cold but just looking at all the leaves in the ground looked so awsome. All the colors orange,yellow,red, it looked like a bunche of paint was falling down of the sky and spashing the leaves with it. I love it when the leaves fall because my friends and me put all the leaves together and just jump in them. Having to grave them with ure arms and throw them around it felt like snow but not cold. This made me realize that every year I always fell pumped when the leaves fall and I can see all the wonderfull colors all over the place. I might like winter a lot too but not as much ass fall, spring is to hot and it’s to sweaty and tireing. I belive fall is the best season because you can see how all the leaves change into different colors. How it isnt to hot or cold for just a sweather and gloves, perfect weather. The way how you can have so much fun with just leaves.

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  70. One day I noticed how beautiful the trees looked with all the different colored leaves. It was the month of october . I enjoy fall because it is not that cold or that hot its just a perfect weather for me. Another reason is because I can feel the fresh air in my face and the smell is just wonderful. Fall is a good season because there is mostly no rain or snow and you can go out easily with out an umbrella or hat. I belive that fall is the best season of all four. In winter its to cold and there is snow in summer at times its to hot and in spring it rains to much I don’t like that that’s why I prefer fall. The trees look beautiful! Fall is perfect for me.

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  71. Audriannah H. 304Fri Nov 19, 08:09:00 AM

    One day, in june, my friends aubrey, eva and I were coming home from an arcade. We could see people swimming in the lake, people were walking their dogs, and little kids, were running around. You could hear, waves splashing, and flip-flops were hitting the ground. This summer is the best season, because, it’s a time, to be with friends and family. In the summer, theres no school, for most CPS, schools, so we all have the chance to see friends who don’t go to the same school as you. During the summer, you can ride your bike, everyday, skateboard everyday and go to the beach. In winter, its too cold to skateboard, or bike ride, in spring and fall, its either cold or raining. Summer, is the best season, because, for two months, you can go to the movies, or go to the park, with friends and family. That is why Summer, is the best season.

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  72. One day i noticed the trees were turning yellow and the leaves were falling down.The day was perfect.It made me realize that i nedded to have some fun all day long like taking a trip to the park.Therefore i believe fall is the best season because the weather is perfect,the leaves fall down, and you could play whatever without getting sick.

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  73. One day in december I whent outside to take out the garbage and noticed that it was snowing. It looked so beutiful there was snow everywhere it glitered alot.I started to play in the snow my sisters came out and we started to play we even made our own snowman. I think that winter is the best season because the cold makes me forget about all my problems. It's also a good season because the snow is soft that when it hits you it doesn't hurt at all. it is also a good season because it makes kids get really goofy. I mean it.

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  74. stephanie rangel 302Fri Dec 03, 08:38:00 AM

    it was a friday. i woke up i went to look at the window and i saw snow .

    i said ''snow'',i yelled out loud and evry body woke up.

    winter is the best season becauseb you can go out side and play snow ball fights. you can make cookies and make a hot chocalate ''mmmm'', good. also winter is the best season because it is christmas eve and you can spent time with your family and friends.you can open your presents and have a good time eating the food ''mmmmm'', good .
    that is why winter is my favorite season.

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  75. One day in december I whent outside to take out the garbage and noticed that it was snowing. It looked so beutiful there was snow everywhere it glitered alot.I started to play in the snow my sisters came out and we started to play we even made our own snowman. I think that winter is the best season because the cold makes me forget about all my problems. It's also a good season because the snow is soft that when it hits you it doesn't hurt at all. it is also a good season because it makes kids get really goofy. I mean it.

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  76. One day i went outside and i noticed that winter is the best season.I was like any little boy i love the snow.I graved snow and made it into a snow ball, istarted playing with mi little cousin.I think that winter is the best seasson because it is fun, you can play with your friends, and you can make a snowman.

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  77. it was the one day in decmebr and ther was one of the biggest snow storms. Me and my brother were exited becouse we new how fun it was going to be outside.another reason why is because we also knew we can have snowball fights. we also knew that if we got sick our mom would get mad and yell at us. so we made this good plan saying we were going to the store when accually we weren't. so when we got home our mom was sitting on the cauch. and we were in big troble. the end

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  78. One day i woke up in the afternoon like everyday when im in vacation. I walk to the kitchen and see that everybody is in their homes and nobody is outside. I went outside to get the and i noticed it was freezing outside. I realized that it was the first day of winter. I like winter because i dont like going outside to play so now i had an excuse for staying inside, its quieter than when its summer because people are inside their house and not outside, the reason people like winter most is because cristmas happens on winter and everybody loves presents.

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  79. it was a good mornig on a sunday of july 3 1999 and it was like the sun was smiling at me from my bed room window and when i looke out i see a men trou hes garbeg from hes car to the floore and i toll him not to but he ingnor me and thats why i belive they shud punish people that polute, make them pick up gar bege and give them a tiket

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  80. ITZEL NOLASCO 302Tue Jan 18, 06:30:00 PM

    one day i woke up and saw that nobody was inside and heard laughter comming from outside so i decited to go outside and there were my brother,cousins,and parents .it was like 12:00 pm .we were outside all day because it was really hot and the sun was out so e all got wet in the pool. we were having alot of fun .then i noticed that it was 8:00 pm and it was still bright and realized that in winter by that time it was allready dark outside .so in the summer since it gets dark a little later we have more time to do more fun things.it is also better because thats when there are flowers,the grass is green,and every one is outside playing.that's why i think that summer is better than any other season.

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  81. It was a hot day, sunny day. I was walking through the park. As I heard I said" I love the summer". I believe summer is the best season ever because in the summer you can go and play with friends. You can also last longer playing since the sun stay up longer, this means more time for fun. Last summer isn't cold like in winter or fall and it dose not rain much like in spring . This is a perfect weather season. This is why I believe summer is the best.

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