I wrote a personal narrative that I’d like to share with you. It’s about when my car broke down yesterday in the school parking lot.
Yesterday, when I was leaving the school parking lot my car could go forward, but not backward. Then, all of a sudden, it worked! I drove out of the parking lot and down the street. Then, it made an odd noise and it stopped, right in the middle of the road. I quickly called for a tow truck.
It’s a good personal narrative, isn’t it? Now. Look at this next one. It is the same story, but I added in my reactions and feelings. See if you can notice what is different about the writing of this small moment.
Yesterday, when I was leaving the school parking lot, I noticed my car was acting strangely. It could go forward, but not backward. I was worried. Then, all of a sudden, it worked! I drove out of the parking lot and down the street. What a relief! Then, it made an odd noise. Thump! It stopped, right in the middle of the road. I was so upset, I thought I might cry. “What am I going to do now?” I thought. I quickly called for a tow truck.
I want you to think about including these two things in your writing. Remember that in order to get the highest score possible for a narrative, you need to have these types of character reactions and feelings. Retell a small moment paying close attention to character reactions and feelings.
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Last week, I was riding in the car with my three cousins, and my brother. We came from picking up my two cousins, and my brother from school. She was riding awfully fast,and it was raining. I was scared, that we were gonna crash. Then I heard a SLUSH!. We had just slided from the wet rain that was in the ground. She knew we would crash to the car so she moved into the sidewalk. We didnt get hurt but we were awfully scared, and know we know to never ride with her again.
ReplyDeleteYesterday when i was at home sending messeges tru my phone and i notice that it didnt send them. i was so sad and mad because i couldnt send messeges thru my phone i felt like if i wanted to break my phone beacuse of that. i call the tmobile place to see if they could do any thing about it but they said that they couldnt, and i was like so mad because with out my phone sending messeges i couldnt survive the day i neded my txts meseges.Hours pass and i started to get messeges and i rote back to them to see if it worked and it did so i was happy allready.=]
ReplyDeleteIt was a shinny thursday morning during the summer. I was really excited because we were going to Six Flags! It took like 2 hours to get there but it was worth it. I saw so many beatiful things while we were driving. Yes we are finally here I thought. It was so amazing!You could hear the screams of people in the rides. I was shocked because I got in rides that were scary. Finally it was time to go. I couldn't explain what I was feeling that day. All I could see in my mind was my family having a smile on their faces.
ReplyDelete2 weeks ago I was sitting at home watching T.V when all of a sudden my dad came home when he should have been at work. My mom was going crazy she told him why are you home so early. my dad said that the factory he worked at was getting closed down. My mom was a nervous wreck she was saying what were we going to do. At first she was saying let's go to mexico, but my dad said no. He stayed at home for 2 weeks but last tuesday he got a job and they told him that they needed someone to work and just like that my dad had a new and better joob and my mom stopped freaking out.
ReplyDeletethis morning i was comin from house, when i saw this ugly dog walking towards me i said "oh no this dog might bite me" !!! but out of nowher the dog was gone .And i was relief i dint get bit . S o i keep walking and i saw the dog getting run over OHHH poor doggie it got runover and i think it die because i had to go to school so i dint see if he died so end of story the dog die!!
ReplyDeleteOn a cold day I was walking to school wondering what today was gonna be like. We were gonna have gym for the first time in 8th grade. I felt kind of excited. But then there was Social Studies. I dont know if this thing we had to copy was homework or not. I felt king of nervous. The school was right in front of me. "Lets see whats gonna happen today."
ReplyDeleteI was watching tv, and my mom had left my two dogs outside. All you can here was bark, bark. I ignored the noise because they always barked. I kept watching tv. Until there was no bark. I thought what happened? I went outside to look. There were no dogs there. I yelled Molly and Gizmo and nothing. I asked my mom where were they. She said outside. I said oh my god. No there not. I went outside calling them. Molly, Gizmo but nothing again. I walked to the corner to look and nothing. I went back to the other corner still yelling Molly, Gizmo. Ugh! I turn back and see my two dogs running to me. Ahh what a moment. :)
ReplyDeletewel one day i was at ma house on the computer then when i heard someone was knocking on the door.when i opened the dorr it waz my friend he looked all worry .then i had told him tha was up and then he asked me tha if ui new where was his brother because he was worry bout him .zo then i had told him tha i had did see him tuday at the afternoon.then i told him tha he said tha he was goin to the hospital because he wasnt feelin good .so then he looked really worry bout him cuz he did't kno wat hospital was he at n if he feelin godd or not.zo then we called his brother sayin tha wat hopital was he at so then we went to go see him cuz his brother was really worry bout him zo then we ask for him to see if he was in tha hospital n they said yea so thenwe saw him stayed for a while n then ma other frends were outside waitin so then ma other frend told me tha i could of leave zo then i went outside n we went home n he was happy tha he had found his brother n ....
ReplyDeleteOn summer break I was rideing my bide then, I notice thet a dog was in the corner. then i past by it he was barking and runing trying to fallow me I was worried that it had ads and bite me. But the dog did not gave up then I made my slef to Talmen and Washtenow.
ReplyDeleteOne day i was walking to my house when all of a CHIWUWA came out and started chasing me for 3 blocks and a half.I was VERY scared.I didnt know what to do at that moment.I was trying to text my brother so he can open me the door,but when I was going to push send my phone fell!!!!I was MAD that i wanted to kick the dog so he can leave me alone.When I was very tierd and I knew I could'nt go any further then that point on I had to jump a fence.I didnt care how big it was.I just want'ed to go home already.So later that day when I told my family what happen I went to get my phone,but the screen broke so I went to get a new one the next day,and i never past tru that block again.
ReplyDeleteThe time that I felt angry but at the same time I was sad was when I had figured out that I had a dead brother. I felt like crying but I didn't because that would mean that I'm weak so I didn't cry. Only a few tears that I could't hold back for long. It was difficult to hold back my tears because I kept on thinking that he only had 1 week to live, he didn't even had a chance to live, to experience life.
ReplyDeleteEven thought he was the first one to be born I thought of him as my little brother because he never had the chance to be older. His name was Gabriel,named after my father.
I never did spoke of him to anybody!
one hot summer day i felt like riding my bike. i looked in the garage, and to my surprise it wasn't there. I looked every where. I was so scared if anyone stole it. I looked in the basement, the attic, the porch, and i still didnt find it. I staid in the porch wondering what had happened to it. Later on i saw my brother coming and he had my bike, he went to the grocery store. I was happy, instead of being mad at my brother. I noticed that i didnt feel like riding it anymore.
ReplyDeleteIt was one of those afternoons saturday and i was using my bike. So i like using my bike with no hands when i go fast. Then as i was going my back wheel stopped and i feel. "What in the world" i said. Then i remembered that wheel had problems in the gears thing in the inside. Then i noticed that the chain feel, i put it back on and it worked. When i got home i fixed and the Monday the chian fell. "SWEET i didnt fell" i said. Then i just used it like i always use it(fast with no hands).
ReplyDeleteonce i was chillin outside with my friends and we were playing soccer and then i kicked the ball and it went to some old guys house that owns an bar then we went to go see if he was there because if he was there he wouldnt give us the ball back so we went to the front door of the bar to see if he was there and then we peeked in and we saw him so we new he wouldnt give us the ball but we still asked him anyways but then he started screaming like always and he said he wasnt goin to give us the ball so then we just left and we were sad. and then the next day we bought a new ball and we were playing happily
ReplyDeleteI was outside with my brother and my 2cousins we were playing in our back yard when all of sudden a small dog came by our front gate.I thought it was lost so i opened the gate. The dog looked mad. But i still wanted to see if he was lost, so i got close to him or her. It got even more mad and tried to bit me. I was terrified so i started to run. When we closed the gate i saw my cousin face it was bright red. The dog took his teeth out at us with anger and left. We never saw that dog again.
ReplyDeleteTwo months ago i was really mad. Me my sister was walking home. We got there. i was so mad "my shoes my colths". I said i was yelling.
ReplyDeleteMy mom walked in the house she called the cops. The cops told her to "calm down". They came to the house. The cops looked in all the rooms.
The cops said that it was going to be ok. The next day they found who it was. we felt safe.
This one time i woke up and fell down the stairs.Ouch. Then i went to eat waffles.Yummm.Then i went to wach a funny movie.Hahaha. Then i went outside.(BIRDS CHIRP)Then i heard a duck.quack! Then a lambo coming at 200 m/p came and carashed into it and kept going.boom-(cat squeels. Then i went downtown and heard cops coming woooooo-oooooh duuuuuuu. They caught osama bin laden. the end
ReplyDeleteFriday my teacher had told me about an open house for a highschool. I had told my mom if she could take me but she was booked for the day, and dad was working.My mom had told belinda, my sister, to take me.
ReplyDeleteBelinda got a call from her work and it was an emergency. She was really worried becuase she couldnt take me with her and didnt know what to do. I tlod her to go and that i could take the bus back home alone. When it was over I going to head home but i didnt have money for the bus. I kept thinking to myself" How am I gonna get home????" I sat down and tried to call someone for a ride but my phone died. "What was I gonna do now? Walk it??I didnt know my way back... Then I hear somebodty call my name.What? I didnt know nobody here. My friend Cristal was there. I didnt recognize at first. I was releived.I told her what happened. She told her mom something. She said they would give a ride. And I finally got home.
Last Year, my aunt came to visit with her two sons."Hey." Then, we all decided to go to the park."lets go." I was taking my little cousin on the stroller. When all of a sudden me, my two sisters, my two counsins, brother and aunt saw this huge dog coming from the alley."Look."
ReplyDeleteWhen i saw the dog i left my counsin on the stroller in the middle of the alley."OMG" Then, all of us started running and laughing. "hahaha!!!" My aunt didn't ran with us. Instead she graved my little counsin from the middle of the alley.And we left. "Come on lets go."(:
A few years ago. When i was home alone because I was sick and my mom was at work. After she left to work around 10:00am. Some hours passed and I heard this noise BOOM! in the basement I got knocked out of guard. So I went to check when I was going to check I was nervous because I didnt knew what had made that noise. When I got to the basement there wasnt nothin or nobody,I was a littke scared cause I was home alone and I didnt knew what had just happen.
ReplyDeleteOne day me and my friends decided to go down town. We decide to take the train. It was an awkward moment because when we got to the train station a creepy guy was all up in our conversation. It was weird because we didint know what to say when he started asking weird questions. We let Selena do the talking because I didnt know what to say. The guy asked us if we smoked and he started to take something out of his pocket. Selena just looked at me and she told the guy no.
ReplyDeleteSELENA: 'Oh my god.! that guy is so weird and creepy.!'
ME: 'haha yea I know. why would he ask us that we dont even know him like that'
BETSY: 'hmm yea hes weird'
Selena: 'eyy look the train is coming.!'
ME: 'oh yea lets make sure the guy goes a different way kusz i dont want him fallowing us anymore'
Selena:' yea me either lets go'
After we got on the train the guy left and yea that was the end of that. It was creepy but we didint let that ruin our day :)
Ok so one day my 2 friends and me decided to go downtown for a day just to relax and chill. Ofcourse we all knew that our parents were too busy to take us so we decided to take the bus and train. We were all nervous because none of us 3 knew how to really use a bus or a train. But we still decided to try it, i mean there's always a first time for everything so yeah. After we got money and bought an all day pass we walked it to the corner in which a bus was supposed to pick us up and take us to the train station. When the bus came we were all confused and scared we just got on it and sat in some seats in the back. When the bus finally got to the train station and stopped we wanted to get out thrue the back doors but what we didnt know is that the bus lady that was driving the bus had to press somthing so the back door could open. We didn't know that i mean remeber! It was the first time on a bus on our own. So then ma friend Betsy was in the front trying to go out but the door didnt open. I was rite behind her and felt really embarrased cause everybody in the bus was staring at us. There was a lady sitting rite there that was seeing us and told us "NO MiJA, ASi N0 SE ASE" she told betsy that, i was just laughing in the back like hahah! And finally the bus lady told us what to do and Wen the door opened we all flew out. We were all very emberrased and were laughing. Ruby, the other girl that we was with told us we were very not smart and we just went onto the train station to start our adventure. And yes we did have more salty moments but this was just one of them!
ReplyDeleteOne day me and my friend were riding bikes and she was on the pegswe were going really fast and there was this one girl on the sidewalk and we couldnt stop we told her to move to the left and we go to right well i guess that girl didnt now what was left or right so we both went to the right and and we fell on top of the girl and my friend fell on the pegs and it left her a mark shaped as a half moon and a cicle that was two years ago and she still has that mark on her stomache it was funny tough because she fell like she wanted to cry but she didnt because there was alot of people watching so she couldnt even walk but the girl we fell on was ok because she fell on the grass and we fell on the sidewalk so we didnt cry we just started laughing and this dude has the video on his camera and he showed it to us two weeks ago and we started laughing
ReplyDeleteSunday I was home alone doing some of the homework I hadn't finished. "Grrr" My stomach growled. I noticed that I hadn't aten the whole day so I went to the kitchen and made a sandwhich. That's when I heard a strange noise and I started getting worried. "What could make such a noise when Im alone in the house?" I asked myself. So I went back to my room wondering what was the noise I had heard. About 5 minutes later I heard it again. So i decided to go see what was going on. The noise came from the basemant so that's where I went. I opened one of the rooms and noticed it was dog who was making the strange noise. "ohh" i said. She was hungry too because I had frogotten to feed her that day. So I decided to feed her.
ReplyDeleteFive years ago, I was helping my mom get ready for the Fourth of July. I was so excited that, that time was already here. We all knew that my uncle was really sick but we thought he was going to pull through because he was so strong and determined. I was happy that he might get better but I was also sad that he was sick and couldn't be here for the Fourth of July. I still kept my hopes up. Then as we were going to bed the hospital called and said that there was a drastic change and that he was doing better. I was so relieved. Then we all went to bed and we were just excited that he was doing better and that he might come around. Then just as we were going to bed and falling asleep we got another call from the hospital saying that he was doing really bad and that he might die tonight. After that we didn't sleep at all we just stayed up.I was so sad and was thinking of the worst. Then a couple hours later we got a call that he past. I was so sad that I started to cry, but yet I smiled because I knew that he wasn't suffering anymore. We knew that he was in a place far better than the place he was in.
ReplyDelete* this was a small thing because we all knew that he was dying*.
When my sisters, mom, and I went to this place I can't remeber but it was an hour away from my house. All along the road the car had been stopping and turning itself off. When we were on the road ready to come back home the car turned itself off all of a sudden it was a green light. My mom was getting worried and tried to turn the car on and after a few minutes of struggling with it, it turned on. My mom was relieved that it started working. When we were on the expressway the car started to act weird again and we pulled up. At that moment the car didn't want to turn on anymore. Finally my mom called a tow truck but, they told her it was going to cost about $100. My mom only had about $60 on her. my mom was really nervous, worried, and scared about what we were going to do about the car. Thankfully a tow truck came and then my aunt came to pick us up. Everything ended well.
ReplyDeleteLast night I had a strange dream. I was walking around the part wondering what to do. It was raining so I couldn't see very well. "How can I walk anywhere if I don't know where I'm going?" I thought. Even though I was blind it seemed like I was able to see everything. I was getting a little paranoid it seemed because every time I heard a noise I jumped. Then, I see some kids playing soccer on the field. I thought to myself, "Who plays soccer when it rains?” Then I stepped into a lake that was in the middle of the park. It was so strange. While I was under the water a guy said, "Make sure you take a breath before you go in." I thought that the advice given wouldn't help me now. As I was sinking, I suddenly wake up. "That was a bizarre dream." I thought to myself. It turns out that I got a text message and my phone was vibrating. I replied to the message wondering who sends text messages at two in the morning. Then I went back to sleep hoping that I wouldn't have a weird dream again.
ReplyDeleteOne day, I was getting out of school. It was a regular day, and the weather was normal, but just a little humid and cold. It looked like it was going to rain just that it hadn't rained in the whole day. When I got out of school, even the sun was out, but all of a sudden it got cloudy. I started to get a bit worried because I had to walk home that day. I started to walk because I knew it was going to rain any moment. Although I didn't have any idea it was going to rain very hard! All of a sudden it started pouring like crazy! "Oh my gosh I have to get home." I thought. Once I got home I was soaked! I had to quickly get in the shower so I wouldn't get sick. I thought being in the rain was kind of fun though!
ReplyDeleteLast year, I had an expirence that I could never forget. This is what happened I came out of school, to find out that nobody was there to pick me up. I felt worried because I didn't like the feeling. After five minutes I decided to go to my cousins house. They were there but couldn't explain why they didn't pick me up. So I tried calling them but they wouldn't answer. I felt more than worried it was already late and they hadn't came for me. Then after we had dinner we heard a knock on the door I felt relived to find out it was my parents they had been out to the hospital to visit their friend. I felt relieved they were home but a little worried for their friend in the hospital.
ReplyDeleteA few weeks ago I was writing my essay.It was going really good.I thought I was doing a good job.I felt really good about it.Then when I was finishing it up the microsoft word exited out.I was scarded beacuse I didnt remember if I saved it.I was nervous because it was a long essay and I didnt want to do it again.So the computer screen went blank too.Now I was more worried.Then I saw that the computer screen was disconnected.So I connected it hoping it didnt turned off.Then i turned on the screen,I clicked the microsoft word and opened the files and there was my essay.I was so relieved and happy.
ReplyDeleteOne day I was going to downtown with my cousins, so I was walking to the train when I remembered that I forgot my cta card. I ran quickly in my shorts to my house. My phone was ringing. It was my cousins. They wanted to find out where I was. I hung up and ran. I was nervous. When I got home I was frantic and was fast looking for it. But I found it, and I ran back.
ReplyDeleteDuring summer vacations I went to a concert. The problem is that I hadn't been to a concert at that place before so I didn't know what it was like. Either way I kept my hopes up that it would be a great concert. Was it going to be really full when we got inside or were we going to have to sit in the back far from the stage, is what I wondered in my mind. I wasn't sure what to expect. Finally they opened the doors to go in and I saw that you could chose your own seat as VIP and that the seats were very close to the stage. Wow, what a relief! I couldn't believe our luck. As VIP I chose my seat by the stage where the concert was talking place and enjoyed the rest of the day. I felt the stress going away and joy taking its place.
ReplyDeleteYesterday, when I was heading to my cousins work I noticed that her car was not in sight. I started getting worried not knowing what to do. So I asked the secrateries if they had seen her. I was feeling some what relifed. But the ladies said they had not seen her since last week. By then I started panicking. I thought to myself were can Gaby be at now. She promised to take me to the mall to day but I guess that's not happening. I called her and nobody answered. By then I had left home when I was home my mom yelled at me for being late. I was really dissapointed thinking that my cousin had not kept her promise so I went to my room. Soon Gaby called and told me that they told her I went to see her. I told her why I had gone to look for her. She said It is next monday. "What a relief!!" I yelled. Now I know I should be more careful listening.
ReplyDeleteA few weeks ago, I was walking to school and noticed something strange that I felt lighter than I usually do when I walk home and thats when it hit me. I didn't have my bookbag!
ReplyDeleteI thought "I really blew it this time, who would believe I forgot my bookbag". It was too late to go back home nad make it in time to school. I was thinking two things when this was happening, 1 I probally would get F's in my assignments due today,2 how can I save my self from this problem. Thats when it hit me call home and tell my dad to pick up my bookbag. I was going to call home but the day brcomes worse THE CELLPHONE DID'T HAVE BATTERIES! There was only one way this day would turn out to be "disaster". I realized that I have to face the music but when I got in the classroom I forgotten that I left my bookbag at school because we had no homework. At the end I just scared my self good.
The clock struck twelve and that meant we were starting the party for the last day of 7th grade. I wanted to cry this was the best year I had. All friends were in the same class and we had Mr. Rigas he was an awesome teacher. The party started and pizza arrived everyone was enjoying it, but deep down I was sad to know this was the last day as a class. Soon there was pictures taken and sirts signed. I was devastated to know all my five friends were separated. Then the bell rung it was 2:15 the school day was officially over. Seventh grade was the best and it was over the months had passed fast without us knowing it. I hoped 8th grade would be an exciting year.
ReplyDeleteI was cleaning out my room because I was worried that I might have lost my video game so I went to look for it under my bed I was discusted I found a peice of cake from two weeks ago. I felt my stomach was turning and I almost crysd from the stench the cake hade. I was furios because I knew who did this it was my cissin then I was disapinted because he never listens to me.
ReplyDeleteI went too look in my cabinets and I was happy and I started to dance "there you are" I did`nt find the vidio game dut I did find ny 30 dollars that I lost.
I gave up in dissapointment and after I clend my whlole room I did`nt find it so I went to the computer and I was going to burn a disk when I was enlightend i founthe disk "there you are" I said happily and thats, that
Once upon a time i was walking with my friends and i was so happy becuase we were heading to a Kiss concert. We were jumping and jumping and screaming until my throat hurted. When we were heading to the kiss concert i asked my friend for the tickets so I can hold them and my friend reached to his pocket and he didnt find the tickets !!! I freaked out and I wanted to kill him i thought for a moment that i was going to cry but i sucked it up. My friend looked inside his every pocket and couldnt find it. we went back to look in the sidewalk were we walked before and it wasent there !!!! I really didnt know wat to do my other friend was crying our day was ruined no our lives were ruined. But i had an idea why dont we beat the crap out of eachother and tell the two guys collecting the tickets that we got mugged and so we did beat the crap out of each other and we went and the guys belived us it was worth it. We got in and ran to the stadium. My friend that lost the tickets felt somegthing in his shoes and they were the tickets !!! I was super mad but happy cause we got front row center.
ReplyDeleteTwo days ago, I noticed that I had forgotten my keys at home. I had no idea what I was going to do for about two hours. I was scared to the point of going mad. Just kidding, but I was worried. Then I realized my grandma had a key to the house, so I went over there and asked her for the key. I got it and I went home. “ What a relief,” I said as I walked inside,” I thought I was going to stay outside forever. Then everyone got homeand I acted like nothing had happened.
ReplyDeleteIt was last winter at Mckinley Park. The people who were there were us(Nightingale's girls' basketball team) our three coaches(MR. ClAuDiO, MR. RAMiREz, and COAcH TORREs) and the other team we were playing against(CHAvEz). We were in the team leagues and boy was it exciting! Being in the leagues really meant alot for us. With our sweat that dripped down our chin, our eyes that had been real focused on the ball, and our hearts overflowing with hope for winning. So we played all that time until the final buzz that stated the game was over. We all turned to look at the score, and thats when our heads almost popped out of our bodys. Ouch. That really made our eyes as teary as a baby's eyes get before they get a shot for a vaccine. When we saw the evidence proving that CHAvEz school had won, we just couldn't believe it. Our faces red with disappointment, our hair messed up as if we just woke up, and us almost scared to lose a life since we were breathing hard to the point where we thought we were going to pass out. CHAvEz school were able to go up to the championship. They cheered and cheered, showing us that they were on top of the world. We just cried feeling worthless. But our coaches kept telling us that there's always next year. They kept trying to cheer us up. But we were burned..so burned we thought if we even touched eachother we would hurt. That was the most miserable day of our basketball life. The day we hope we never have to experience again.
ReplyDeleteAbout a week ago I was in my room playing a game in my sisters computer. When suddenly it turned off by itself. So I tried putting it back on but it just turned off once more and I got irritaded and scared. I knew that if it broke my sister would get really mad. Then I called one of my freinds that is in High School now and told him what was wrong with the computer. He told me to calm down because I was speaking to quick and that I sounded weird.Then I told him again more slowly and calm what was wrong. He told me that sometimes computers turn off by themselves when the battery was out or when it is over heated. After that I tried one last time to turn it on it did go on but it said something I didn't notice before no battery. Iwas so frusterated with my self for not noticeing that stopped using it for a couple of days.
ReplyDeleteOnce i was going to the park and there was alot of people outside of the park.I was like damm!When i got to the park there was nobody inside.i could hear my my voice when i talked.I was shocked that nobody was here because there is alaways alot of people when i came to the park before but now there was only me and the park.When i got out of the park to see if it was closed it said that it was open.I couldnt beleive it.But when i turned around there was nobody.I was confused because when i came to the park,outside there was tons of people outside but tnow theres not even one.When i ran to the other blocks there was not even one car.
ReplyDeleteThere was once this dude that was in a hurry to his son's soccer game.He said"Oh no I'm late I better hurry" So he got to his car and drove as fast as he could. (without passing the speed limit of course) The dude then had a little problem with traffic and startec to get really nervous because he had promised to be at the game. He said "I have to get there some other way" So he took this other guy's bike and pedaled as fast as he could. He turned the corner in a split seccond. When he got there he stated tob cheer with the crowd. What he did'nt know was that the team playing against his son had already won the game.
ReplyDeleteHis son said nothing to him because he saw his dad chering against his team. Tha dad was trying to appologise again and again. Then the dad told his son "I will raise your allowance just stop being so quiet" Then the kid screamed "Yeah"
Five years ago, I was about to enter a new school, so I desperately needed some black or white shoes. My family and I went to the mall and I went to the shoe category while my parents looked at some clothes. I was amazed at the sight of some black shoes that i saw ahead of me, so i went and forgot to tell my parents. After a while, i had to ask my parents to buy me the shoes so I started looking for them. I was so nervous because i couldn't find them and i felt like crying. "where should i look next?" I thought. Surprisingly, when I went back to the shoe category there they were. I was so relieved to have found and i also got my shoes.
ReplyDeleteMany years ago, when I was about eight, I was extremely bored and I remembered that I had found a part of a toy that I could use as a ramp. I had a bike but no safety equipment. I didn't care. I never wore any of that stuff in my life. I got ready and started my race down the sidewalk. I wasn't scared at all, I thought it would be fun. At the exact time of the impact I noticed that the ramp moved forward as I kept going. I was beginning to feel scared, but disappointed. I was shocked to see that the ramp actually worked as I continued to race. Amazingly I flipped forward and landed upside down. I was reliefed when I saw that I didn't hit my head because there was a hole on the ground. I got up and said "thank goodness. I'm never doing that again, but it was fun."
ReplyDeleteOnce I was going to school it was winter and the side walks were frozen with ice. I felt on my back and it wasn't painful it was actualy releaving because it was hurting that morning.Then I was filled with energy and I talked with a friend about what just happen and I found out I forgot to do my homework.At first I was worried but I was releaved because I had a homework pass.
ReplyDeleteSaturday I was outside with my friend. When my cousin came in his bike I told him if my friend and I can use his bike, he told me to go ahead. My friend wanted to use it first so I told her go ahead. She was riding the bike then when she was about to cross the street she stopped because there was a car coming. When she wanted to stop the chain broke and she fell down. All I could think to myself is that my cousin Miguel didn’t tell me that the chain breaks. I was going to help her but it was just so funny. I started laughing I couldn’t even talk. I told my friend she didn’t know how to ride a bike she just looked at me. I told her that I was just playing. When she fell it was so funny and I was laughing so hard that I was about to pee in my pants.
ReplyDeleteOne time my best friend told me that she need to tell me something really important. I was worried and nerves because I didn't know what she was going to tell me. Than when she finally told me I was shocked and sad at the same time. She said that she was going to move to another school and also from her house.I was so sad and also mad. I couln't believe that my best friend was going to leave. I felt like crying when she told me that. Ever since she told me that i was sad, she was sads too because she didn't want to move to a different school and house. Than as time pass we tryied to be happy so our last days would be good moments. Than the next day I notice that she was really happy than i asked her why are you so happy today. She told me that she needed to tell me something and than I kind of got happy because i notice that they might be good news. Fianally she let it out, she said that she was going to stay and that she wasn't going to move. i got sooooo happy that i started to jump up and down. And that day we were so happy.
ReplyDeleteYesterday, i was that i slept over at my friends house i was woken up by this loud noise. I was scared since it wasnt my house i didnt know what to do.i tried to go to sleep again but i would hear the same noise a minute later. So i decided to get up and check out what was happening but then it sounded like footsteps. The footsteps sounded closer and louder, it sopunded like if someone was stomping on the floor. I didnt know what to do i felt like running out of the house, but instead i ran back to the room and closed my eyes. Later on i woke up again and i was hearing the same sounds all over again. I was so freaked out so I tried to wake up my friend but she wouldnt move at all. So,w instead i tried calling my mom and see if she could come and pick me up, but she didnt answer. So now i had to stay there all night. I was so scared i felt like yelling out for help but i mean no one would believe me. So it would be better if i wouldnt tell anyone. the next day everybody woke and right after breakfast i called my mom she said she would pick me up in aqbn hour. I was so excited because i was going back to my house.
ReplyDeleteIt was a snowy day in December, Jane was leaving from work at the mall.She worked in a book store and had bought her niece,Nubia,a one of her favorite books for her 14th birthday.Jane looked at the necklace and wondered about the thrilled look on Nubia's face when she would open her present and see the beautiful necklace.She signed, Nubia was a good, intelligent girl and deserve such special gift. Jane was on her way to the bus stop but stopped to eat lunch at the food court.She was eating when suddenly she saw that their was a new store in the mall and decided to stop to see it. Jane enjoyeed the store. it had everything she wanted in a store.Hours went by, finally, Jane left the store because the mall was closing. She had tons of bags handing from her arms; except Nubia's gift.Jane reached the bus stop and looked over her bags and realized the book was missing. She paniced; she was supposed to give her the book today because Nubia' and her family were moving to Arizona the next morning. Jane was already late to Nubia's birthday and now she had forgotten her present. She got to Nubia's house feeling sad and debacle for losting the book. But Nubia was just happy to see her aunt. This made Jane feel relieved. Jane promised Nubia at, she and her uncle Stephen would get her the book she wanted. Jane thought to herself all that trouble for nothing.She was blissed to spend time with her niece Nubia and her husband Stephen.Jane thought, there really are small moments.
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time I went to the park and I found that no one was there. I looked everywhereand I did not find anyone. I was completely alone and I was thinking "Was every body else dead" and then I was completely alone because my parents just dropped me off and then the place got a mist.
ReplyDeleteI went to go investigate and I found that the place was under construction and I had to wait two hours and then my parents picked me up and that is exactly what happneded
Yesterday, I was at my house being all bored about it when all of a sudden someone was knocking really hard on my door.I was scared, I didnt know who it was, I wasn't expecting anyone over today.I got up and walked slowly towards the door.I opened the door to see that no one was there."nice it was a prank" I thought. I went back to the couch to watch TV.A while later someone was knocking hard on my door again.I was getting mad that someone was playing a prank on me, so I quickly ran to the door.Swoosh!I opened the door to find that no on e was there, again.I wasn't gonna go back inside untill I found out who was doing this to.I walked to the front lawn to see if i saw any kids running away or if someone was trying to hide behind thebushes. "Surprise!"
ReplyDeleteSomone came running towards me.I felt panic come over me. This figure came up to me and started saying"It's me, remember"At first U was confused I couldn't remember this person.then it came back to me, i started to jump up and down.This person was my best firend that had moved away two years ago."OH MY GOD!"we started yelling at the top of our lungs.We were so happy to see each other.
One time I was going to a Walmart to buy toys for a friend of my mom'd kid. We went to the toy asile and bought the cheapest thing there.
ReplyDeleteSince we had time to kill, we decided to browse the store. After 30 minutes, I was thinking, "Oh this is so boring". Since I was bored I went to the craft area and held a glass vase or something. I accidently dropped it. Crassh! I thought," Oh god, what should I do?".
I thought about my opnions and decided that since no one was in that aisle, I grabbed it and put it in the back of the shelf. What a relief! We continued shopping and I didn't break anything. To this day I'm glad I din't tell my mom since the vase costed $40.00.
One day i went to skateboard in a parkinglot. Cars kept on passing by. Vroom!. It was getting a bit dark. Then i started to do a run on my skatebord. I was going really fast, I just had to do an ollie and land on the sidewalk. And then i heard a strange noise. ZZZZZ. And my board felt weird. Then. Boom. I fell. I had noticed that a rock got stuck in my bearings. OOOWW. I had twisted my arm.
ReplyDeleteOne time at home and i was really bored. I had done all my homwork and watched all of the same old shows on tv. I was really anxios for my brother to get home because he was goingto give me the password to use the computer. I really wanted to see some videos because i was bored and my friend told me to look up this really funny video.
ReplyDeleteWhen my brother got home he was really tired and I raelly depressed because I knew that he was going to sleep without giving me the password.Then i asked him if he would give me the password and then he told me that our internet didnt work. I was really angry and sad because I waited all day for my brother to give me the password to use the computer but all alnog the internet didnt work.
One day my ipod stopped working.I was really getting mad.i was getting stresswed because i wanted to listen some of my favorite songs.at one point i felt likw throwing my ipod at the wall.but instead i tried charging it and it didnt work i got even more mad.so instead of trying to fix it i went to my brothers and jacked his ipod and i felt all better
ReplyDeletemy goal was to do all my homework so i stared doing my homework i was almost done but my pen ran out of ink. i went to go get another pen when i got back all my hard work was gone.my brother droped soda all over my work. all the hard work i put in i got mad and did not do it no more.
ReplyDeleteLast week , my ipod didn't work!It was the ipod nano 3rd generation. I notice this when i was gonna go work out but then my heart started beating faster when i notice it didnt wanna turn on.I started to get worry because i bearly got that ipod.So i immediately trying new things to make it work.First i tried charging it but nothing happen!Then i tried resetting it but then BOOM!MY Ipod fell to the floor and i got this feeling in my stomach and i wanted to cry. But instead the apple logo appear and i started smiling because i knew , it turn on. So i picked it up and then i used it then took good care of it and bought a rubber cover. THE END
ReplyDeletei had left my friends house and i was upset because i had to ride me bike all the way home.i was riding my bike to my house and my tire came off. i was mad and had no clue on wat to do. i was thinking and decided to call a tow truck.then i walk home. i was really tired
ReplyDeleteOn monday , my Computer didnt work and i need to use my computer to type of my science papers that i need for the science fair and my computer didnt work at all i turn it on and it was just everything black and i was so mad because it was due the paper the next day and plus i didnt go to homework club because i though that my computer was working because in the morning when i turn it on everything was working good and so than i try fixing my computer and it still wasnt working and i was really mad and frustanded and so than my sister got home and i told her that what was the problem with the computer and that i need to do the paper's for science becuase it was do tommorow and so she told me lets see what's the problem so we went to my room and she turn on the computer and she said something is unpluged and she check in the back of the computer and saw what was the problem and fix it and so she called me over and told me what had happen so than i stared to type of my paper and i was really happy that it work and i thanked her so many times .
ReplyDeletewhat happened was that i was waking and a let down and people were laughing and i was sad and mad then i went home then weni can out they sad if i was ok. Then i told then that i was find but my knee hurted aloth but i was ok.
ReplyDeleteIt was one dark afternoon about 5'o clock. I was helping my friend decorate her house for an event. We were about done when the power went off and we got scared since it was just us alone. I didn't know what to do so and neither did she but I told her it was going to be okay.
ReplyDeleteBecause it was so dark that you couldn't see anything I was looking for the stairs that led to her kitchen without any luck and we grew desperate.Though she gave up trying to help me I didn't. Just when i thought it was hopeless I found the stairs!
Later I found out that her parents were trying to teach my friend a lesson. They did not know that i would be there so that made them feel guilty.Whatever I was glad that nothing happened to us.That was some night!.
lasted week i wanted to go out side so i asked my big sis if i can she said yes but i had to get home at 7 o'clock so i said ok. So i lefted but i got home like at 7:44 in the night.i didn't get home at 7 because i was having alot of fun with my girlfriend.Then when i got home my dad started to tell me why did i get home so late.Then my big sis told me that i was not going out for 1 week. Then i got mad because I couldn't go no where so I have to stay home all day broed in the house.But I'm not mad no more because i know that it was my problem that I couldn't go no where!!!
ReplyDeleteyesterday i was working on my computer and it would't type anything darn i was so upset how am i going to do my homework i wanted to cry but did't i went to the store and brought some typeing ink and put it in the computer started working YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO it stoped again what am i going to do i'll get an F help.......to be continued.
ReplyDeleteonce it was my little cousin's bautism and we were at this church in the north side of chicago it's like if it's was yesterday that happen this is how it all happen like i said we were at my cousin's bautism i was getting a hot chocolate because it was cold so i went to go get it and my parent's said the'll wait for me and when i go outside to get in the car i don't find don't find.Then i feel like crying because i tought to myself "if i don't find them i would be left behind with no one here but me" so i tried to get someone to let me borrow there phone but no one let's me borrow there phone so i start to cry then i see my parents come and i start giving thanks to god for not letting me alone and thats how i was left behind
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time i was at my house about to do my home work. I really had to do my home work. I turne on my computer to do some research for my science project. It turned on well but when i got to the internet it did't let me me. I was kinda upset that i was going to be behind doing my homework. The day be before that the computer was working well. I was shocked that i didn't let me get on the internet. I restarted the computer . This time i didn't wanted to even start . I was mad! I told my brother why i wasn't working and he told me " he didn't knew" . He was like why and told him " because it doesn't want to work". I was mad because i won't get to finish my work. I just went to sleep and forgot about the science home work.
ReplyDeleteOne time I was leaving to the cornerstore to get something to snack on. Then i was walking back home, and i saw my friends playing football and i wanted to play football with them. So after i was done eating my chips, i went to go play. It was real fun, but then it got late so i went home.
ReplyDeleteBefore i went home, I went to go visit another friend to figure out why he didnt come to school. And he told me so I said ok, and left. When i got home, guess what i found out? I was locked out of the house with no keys.
I was scared and worried. I didnt know what to do. until I figured i can just go to my neighbors house and call my parents. But i was also scared of what they might say. But it was better that they knew instead keeping the secret from them. so they came home to open the doors, and they talk to me about resposibility. But I was happy that i was home. And that is the end of my story.
I was at Six Flags and the Fright Fest was going on.I was having a blast!With all of those scary people walking around the whole amusement park scarrying people.My family and I had just finished getting out from a ride when it was dark and there was a full moon.Scary songs were on and I was starting to get scarred.I wanted to just hold my brothers hand but I didn't.One of the scarry people scarred this lady that was right infront of me."HAHA!"I started to laugh because the expression shown on the lady's face was halarious.Then all of a sudden I hear a loud scream coming from infront of me.I quickly turn around and I see a scary lady looking at me with a wide grin on her face.OH!She looked scary.I yell out "AHHH!" and the lady simply walks away.My family just starts to laugh out loud.The look on my face was made them laugh.I was completely terryfied and I was shocked.Then I started to laugh along with them because I found it funny too.We then all continued to walk around the amusement park beeing frightened by the terryfying people.
ReplyDeleteAs i was walking home from my friend's house I was walking it fast because it was ranning and it was getting dark,too. I got my ipod out to listen to it will i was walking, but when i grabed it, it felt down in a puddle of water. I was panickig because the ipod was in the water and it was going to get busted. So i got it and it didn't turn on soi ran it to my house and when i got their i blow dry it and it worked.:)
ReplyDeleteThere was once a time in which I thought I was never going to see my dog again. Once I came home and I couldn't find him. I keep on wondering where he might be and I started looking for him. I started getting worried and worried because I couldn't find him anywhere! "Where in the world can this dog be?" I thought. I didn't know what to do, I was getting frightened and I thought I was going to explode to tears anytime soon. It was right then, when I heard the door open and my dad came in holding the leash in which my dog was in. I was so glad and mad at the same time. "Why didn't you tell me he was with u?!" I asked dad. "Well how was I suppose to know that you weren't going to realize that since you do everytime?" I didn't say anything, He had a point, I guess...ugh, sheesh! Me these days! "Well atleast I founf my dog" I thought.
ReplyDeleteI was at Six Flags when the scariest thing had ever happend to me..I was going to get in a ride I was so excited about it, but all of a sudden the ride had stopped! I was so nervous..that all i could actually think about was getting down..the ride had stopped for at least 20mins..After it started working again everyone got down from it..But afterwards i still got in some more rides even though was a little frightend that it was gonna stop working again..
ReplyDeleteEvery year in my birthday at 11:00pm I hear footsteps in my attic my mom and she seems not hear anything so she went back outside with my aunts and uncles as soon as she left I heard the footsteps again. So instead of calling my mom again I went upstairs to see what it was, I climed up the stair slowly, but when I got up their nothing was there.I got down slowly wondering what it was then when I was in my kitchen I started to scream my brother and my cousin had just jumped out of me. I told them what was going on. They didnt know what it was either so every year I wonder what it is.
ReplyDeleteOn the morning of my 13th birthday I was worried and happy at the same time. I was worried because my crush would be there and happy I was turinig 13.
ReplyDeleteI was awakened by the sound of a happy birthday song along with my family singing it. I got a delicious breakfast in bed. It was fabulous what could possibly go wrong.
Oh no, I thought, I already jynxed it!
I took a nice, warm shower and I got dressed up in very nice clothes I specially bought for this ocassion and best part yet I went to the salon and got my hair and nails done.
Then ..ring, ring, ring....the phone i thought; "I'll get it" I told my parents I answered "Hello?" I said "oh hi Danely!" It was my crush "Was Up!" I told him..." Um.. well.. sorry to say this but i can't make it to your birthday party today" :'( I was about to cry but my parent were there all i said was "it's ok well i got to go, very busy, bye" and I hung up. :*(
One day I was suppose to clean my room but I didn't want to claen it. I gaot so angry I slammed the door of my room. My mom came in the room she sid what in the world was I thinking I responed "why did you just say that I didn't do anything I just slammed the door I didn't do anything else"."Well she said don't slam the door your baby cousin is sleeping she said and you just woke him up with the baam of the door now you are going to have to sleep him and your are not going shopping to the mall with me" she said. I got so mad that went to my mom's room picked up the baby and took him to my room i put some music on and put the baby on the bed and gave him the bottle he started drinking it and all of the sudden I hear the baby crying i said "what happened" ichecked and it was his diapper it smelled real bad. I went to my mom's room and picked up the diappers and the baby wipes all of the sudden I hear a sound a boom I had forgotten of the baby iIrun to the room i I find the baby on side of the bed he was crying I picked up the baby clean his diapper and gave him his bottle cleaned the room. But I still didn't get to go to the mall.
ReplyDeleteOne day I went to the park and I saw a man hurting a women really bad.the womens face was really bad it looked like if she was going to die. Iwas really scared because she was getting hurt and she looked messed up.There were allot of people watching the man hurt the lady really bad.The people who where wathcing didnt do anything to stop the horrible abuse that the man was giving the women.I couldnt do anything to stop them eather beacause I didnt have a phone to call the police.so i decided to go help the lady.Ipicked up a baseball bat that was on the ground in the park.I whent up to the guy and hit him in the back with the bat.I felt proud that I stoped thye guy from hurting the lady but I also felt bad because I hit the guy really hard.I then thought about it and I think that the guy earned to get hit by the bat.After all he was a bad person who didnt have any dignity in his life.Ithen went up to some guy and asked him if he had a phone that I could borrow.Ithen called the police and a ambulance.
ReplyDeleteOne time last year I was in the computer lab. My computer was working great and I was happy because I would get my work done faster. I planned to have at least an extra 15 minutes to play some games. These games had just come out and I was excited to play them. They were said to have revoloutionary grapgics.
ReplyDeleteWhen I was almost done with my paper I saved iy and took a small break. I sighed since my fingers were tired. When I opened up my document the computer gave a couple of weird beeps. Then it shut down and I gave a deep sigh that all of my class heard. Then the teacher came and I told it what had happened.
After a while the computer-guy-fixer came and told the teacher what had happened. It told me to stay afterschool and finish the paper. I sighed inside and gave a cry of sadness inside. Finally I stayed afterschool and finished my paper.
once i was playing my game system then out of no were the game system didn't work no more. The game got scratched I was so sad because my game didn't work no more I toke it back to the store. When i got to the store I told them what was wrong with it. They sad it
ReplyDeleteA Month ago, it was progress report one day. I was worried I was going to get an F, but I didn`t. I got A`s and B`s. I was relief! But I saw a C in writing. My mom doesn`t like to see a C or below in my classes.Oh,no! I was worried my mom would punish me, or send me to hell. So in the after noon, I try to think of something. The only thing I could do is is change my grade into a C to a B, until report card day comes. I showed my progress report to my mom. She looked disappointed.I felt I was burning. I told her to give me a chance until report card day comes. Man, she wont give me a chance, I thought. She told me she will. I was so relief I wanted to act crazy but I didn`t.I`ll save it for later. So, I did all my homework, study everyday, and check everything was done. Now, I won`t be worry about report card day, but I have to continue what im doing, for a few weeks. I`ll get A`s and B`s in all my classes, including writting.
ReplyDeleteOne day I turned on my XBOX 360 and it turn on but nothing came out on the tv and I was mad as hell and then I was out side and they gave me some cables and I put them and it worked and then I was straight and I got to play it and I was all good.THE END
ReplyDeleteYesterday when I was in the closet looking for a book, the closet was very dark. it sort of looked creepy. all of a sudden I heard a BOOM!
ReplyDeleteI got so scared but I didnt run, I was standing there as if I were a statue I didnt move nor talk. I was so scared bu then i found out it was my little cousin that was banging a pot, I got scared because I thought I was alone.
Yesterday I stepped up my Apartments door. I gripped the doorknob and twisted it. I couldn’t get the door open.
ReplyDelete”Well I Should gets my house keys out.” I Thought.
I Reached into my back pack and shuffled through it quickly. I couldn’t find it, I Was astonished at the fact that I left my keys.
“I never forget my keys at home, never in my life can I recall leaving them.” I said out loud.
Then I sat outside the door, waiting for someone to come home. Within 10 minutes a familiar footstep hit the stairs and I knew my dad was coming.
“I’m going to get in trouble if he catches me without my keys.” I thought in a panicked manner.
I then hid inside the hall closet and when he was home I walked in and acted like I stayed after school.
One day I was with my cousin and we weren't talking, like we usually do. I began to feel worried, because I thought I did or said something wrong. I tried of thinking of something I said or did but I couldnt remember anything. So I asked her why wasn't she talking to me ,and was there something I did or said to make her upset ,and she said no. Then she told me the reason she wasn't talking was because she thought I was upset about something she did or said and she was trying to figure out what she did. I told her I thought the same thing. We both began to laugh, and I was relieved that everything was ok.
ReplyDeleteOne day I was going to my soccer game before a went to my game and then my coach called me telling me that a was going to be attacker a was so surprise that the coach was goanna put me in some good spot to play soccer a was so happy that the was my best day. My dad even went to see my game because he all ways wanted to me to play in a attack position because when he was little he was a attacker in his soccer team he was very happy that I got to that position. The next three weeks it past I was in practice and he told me to go to his office so I went and he told me that I was ready to be the captain of the team a was so happy even my family that we went out with my friends and go out and celebrate we had a good day.
ReplyDeleteI was in my room and I went to take the dog outside and I left hIm outside for 12 minets. Then I went outside to get the dog and I could not find him! then I saw that the door was open! I ran to the front of the hous and I was calling mi dog but he did'nt came so I got my jaket and looked for hem. then I saw hem in the aley and I call hem and he came. I was so relieved that I found him.
ReplyDeleteOne tiem I got in big trouble and my mom got really mad at me and she took my playstation 3 away and I was really mad. So then a few hours past by and iwated play video games so then I left the house and went to my cousins house to play video games. Then when I got there my mom was there so I was worried and so I went back to my house. I looked everywhere for my playstation and I couldn't find it so I was loosing it and I was mad. Then I told my mom where was my playstation and she said I don't know and then I got relly mad. Then at night I told if i could have my playstation 3 and she said okay so then i was really happy of what she had said.
ReplyDeleteTHERE WAS ONE THIS TIME THAT MY FRIEND WAS RIDING MY BIKE DOWN MAPLEWOOD AND 50TH'S.THAN I WAS GOING TO TO TALMAN AND 50TH'S WENT THERE WHERE THESE PEOPLE THAT WANTED TO START THING WITH MY FIEND BY TALMAN SO I WENT UP TO MY FRIEND SO WE COUKD GO TO ARTESIAN AND 49 BUT THEM PEOPLE WANTED MY BIKE SO I JUST TOOK MY COUSIN TO TAKE THE BIKE TO MY HOUSE SO HE DID BUT LIKE IN FOUR OR FIVE BLOCKS ALWAY TO MY HOUSE THEM PEOPLE CAME AGAIN AND TOOK THE IKE AWAY FROM MY COUSIN AND THEY JUST START PEDOLIN AND THE CHAIN FULLS DOWN SO WE WENT TO TRY TO GET THE BIKE BACK SO WE DID CAUSE THEM PEOPLE JUST DROP IT BY ROCKWELL AND 50TH CAUSE THE CHAIN FELL AND THEY WHERE SCARE THAT THE POLICE OR SOMETHINK WHERE GOING TO GET THEM SO THEY JUST DROP IT AND I PUT THE CHAIN BACK ON AND TOOK I TO MY HOUSE AND I JUST LEFT IT THERE AND I LEFT TO DROP OUT MY FRIEND
ReplyDeleteWhen we went to Mexico this year I didn't really like visiting.Sure everything was the same as 3 years ago but this year it seemed to feel different.During our visit my grandma could help but analyze us from head to toe everything I spotted her doing that I felt rather weird I could help but think"Wow what a snob"I mean really why did she have to look at us as if we were aliens or someone else rather than her family members.During our trip my cousin Monica was trying to get my mom to agree to take us all to this place where there where pools or something along those lines,thoug most of the time my mom refused.Besides this our cousin also asked my parents to be the godparents of her twins and my mom gladly obliged.When we went to get the kids their clothes our cousin wanted the best things and when I saw this I couldn't help but think"wow just because you don't have to pay".Not long after we went to Acapulco and I got really and I mean really sunburned more towards my face that anything.The day we were going to leave and I saw my face I nearly wanted to cry since I was so sunburned,even when I came back to our grandmas house I wanted nothing but to stay in the room,but after 2 days the swelling went down a bit and I was rather glad.Before we left Mexico my dad got sick and instead of our grandma(his mom)taking care of him she did nothing and I mean absolutely nothing,by then I was just schocked and partially angry since after all he was her son.When we left she cried and although I wish I thought she meant it I could help but think that those tears were fake,and I believed she was glad we were leaving.
ReplyDeleteLast week, I was in living room on the computer. Then all of a sudden I heard a noise coming from the kitchen. I was a little scared. I thought it was nothing so I left it alone. A sharp noise! That time I got up to see what happened. It was two plates that have fallen and broke. I did not know how to explain to my parents what happened! I quickly got the broom and cleaned the mess up. As I was finishing my parents were walking in the door. I was scared! My dad said what happen. I told him I didn’t break the plates they fell. And I was only cleaning up the mess.
ReplyDeleteOn Halloween my friend text me to see if i was going trick or treating. I said no i was bored and i didn't have anything to do that day. So she asked me if I would like to go to her house and see 3 scary movies. "The Uninvited, A Haunting In Coneticut, And The Unborn". I told her I would ask my mom if it's okay.I was so excited that I nervous she might say no. A few minutes later my text me that it was okay. I jumped up and down becouse I was so happy. I told my friend my mom had said yes she was was also juping uping up and down.At 3:30 I was at her house We saw 1 movie and then we eat. While eating We talked and then Jysel accidently dropped her drink on the floor. A huge puddle was on the floor so Jysel quickly got up and with her ONE napkin tried to clean up the mess!I started to laugh and through gasps i told her, " Jysel thats not going to work!" She started to laugh and said," Thank you Maria!" And Walked to The kitchen to ge the map. That was a Halloween to remmember.
ReplyDeleteWell once when I was riding my bike on the street.The back wheel would move when I would ride it.So once I was on my bike and the back wheel was moving.So I used it a long time.My neighbor has a big yard and the yard had trees and you couldn`t see were you were going so since the wheel moved I crashed into the trees and I fell and my knee got scraped.I said"damn what am I going to tell my parents".Later that day they saw it and asked me " What Happened".I told them " That I
ReplyDeletecrashed into the trees and that I fell".They told me " Be Careful".Now I ride my bike carefully.
It was 4th of july me and my family were going to downtown and we met some friends of ours.
ReplyDeleteNightfall coming me and my family were waiting till the fierworks started, soft music started the fireworks started i was happy the fire works started i liked the colors the way it expoleded it felt as if it was an earthquake.
After the fireworks everyone left out of the park district our family and friends went to the train but people said that the train will no longer move cause is crowded there was was too much people in the train so me and my family and friends waited till everyone left the train was about to start but it stopped, i was upset.
then we decided to take the bus it was raining outside we went out of the train station and waited for the bus a bus came i was happy cause we were gonna get outof the rain but there were too much people inside so my happiness was gone and so waited for another bus until finaly a bus came there were more people waiting for a bus so my family and friends ran inside to get seats i was happy again and me, my family and freiends just waited till we got home dry.
When we went to Texas. When we got there, my uncle greeted us. As we were driving to his house, I was shocked to see that the car was passing by a cemetary and there were people digging up the graves. I asked my uncle and he said he had no idea what they were doing. We turned around and went to the graves and we were all suprized to see that the graves were completely dug up and the people we saw a few minutes ago were gone. Nothing was in the holes they dug up. My uncle went to see the gaurd to tell him what we saw and when he came back my parents thought he must have not told him because when he told us that they were digging up the grave because someone was going to be put in it in a few hours, my mom went to talk to the person and she said for me to come. I was embarresed when we told the guy and he said that what my uncle said was true and that he was digging the grave and my mom started an arguement because she still thought he was lieing to her and she ended up just leaving the gaurd mad and he told her to get out of here. That was one of my most embarresing moments in texas because there were other people there just watching us complain with the gaurd.
ReplyDeleteToday when I was coming to school I was at my house I heard a voice but anyone was at my house I heard like a baby crying.So I was looking around to see who was and I didnt see anyone.So then i just forgot about it so i was eating breakfast.And I heard it again so i was really scared.So I went outside and looked around i and saw some cats crying almost like baby's and then i was thank god.I was really scared.
ReplyDeleteOMG!!! One time that I felt like dying was when I couldn’t use my laptop! I couldn’t used my computer because I was punished. So I was really furious! And I felt really stressed. Without my computer there is no me. I told my dad that I really needed my computer back but he didn’t pay no attention to me! So I was really mad.
ReplyDeleteThat day was awful. And worse of all was that I found out that my dad was going to punish me for a week!!! I couldn’t take it anymore I felt really bored and stressed! I really wanted my computer back with me! I beg my parents and I told them that I was going to be good from now on. But they didn’t believed me! I was so satisfied that I was going to start to be good! But unfortunally they dint believed me! So I had to wait till Sunday morning to get my computer back!
Finally it was Saturday morning when I was the happiest girl in the whole wide world! I finally got my computer back! It was all I needed to be happy!So It was all good.
There was once a boy named George he had got in a fight with his parents and he felt like running away. He was always screaming at them “I hate you” he would say, and then run to his room and lock himself in their and would not come out unless he needed something or was hungry his parents would always be screaming to him saying “ why aren’t you doing your work”, “why aren’t you doing what I told you to do!” The next day they woke up and George was not home they started to looking for him they called the police but they did not do anything because he had not been missing for 48 hours they looked for him ad found him in the park in a bench laying down they screamed “George we found you !” they were so happy that his parents told him “I’m sorry” and went home.
ReplyDeleteYesterday my mother yelled me at. “You haven been doing you assignments!” she said “NO TV, PHONE, GAMES AND COMPUTRE INETLL YOU PICK UP YOUR GRADES!” I was like that was unfair!
ReplyDeleteOnce when I was riding my bike my dad told me my breakes were kind of loose. I got mad because he said I could not use it. My vains were groing and turning more dark purple. So I still used it. I was going so fast I heard the wind in my ears. Then I herd a big sound "crack!" My braeks broke! I lost controll I fell on the street concrete.I hit my head and bumped it rite on the floor. I shout so loud aaaaaaaaa! the hole street herd me! I had a big bump.My head had an injury. My dad took me too the hospital the doctor told me it was OK. Then I felt better.
ReplyDeleteWhen I was in my house my cat got out of my house and it was raining relly hard. So I call her to go inside and she went in.So my cat gat sick bacause she got a cold. I was so sad and worried all day.She was very sick and all the sudden she died.I was very sad all day and my brother was sad to.
ReplyDeleteOne day i was with my friend and we wor riding my bike and we wor ridinet at the ali and i was goig sofas tha i for got the it thirent jad bracs and i dirent know wat to do and ther was a car goig fast to and i was scared and i was thinking i should turn the bike arand and i corent and i looked up and i crashed and i was scared and the lady from the car got out and i thought shes going to tell me im going to call the police and it wasn't like that she told me are you okay and i told her im okay and she told me where are your parents and she told me could u to come to
ReplyDeleteLast Saturday my parents went to my aunts house for the whole day.Before they left,my mom told me to do all the laundry and to wash the dishes. I said to her "no problem".I sat down on the couch after they left and watched my favorite t.v show. I said to myselve " I should do it later, anyways their coming at night". I layed down watching t.v and eat some food. I went to the kitchen and left the plate on the sink and saw the whole thing full of dishes!
ReplyDelete"oh my gosh" i said it in a I don't care kind a way.I fell asleep and woke up really late.It wass 9:30 and thety were about to come. I was dumned. "Im so stupid" i said . When they arrived i just acted like nothing happened. They realized right away and i was grounded. I end up doing it all week. I was so mad at myself.
I was playing my game when I was scared of what would happen next because it was a horror
ReplyDeletegame. I was using a rifle when someone was in front of me and hit me. I started heading to my
partner when an arrow struck my back and I died. I decided to play again.
una ves yo estava jugando soccer cuando de repente un nino me llego y me patio el pie tan duro que todos mis companeros fueron a verme pero ese dia yo estava tan espantado que le pei a dios que me ayudara y que no me pasara nada entonses me dijeron que me parara entonses me pare y senti como un aire que me ahogava y cuando abri mis ojos mis pies estavan bien no tenia nada nadamas tenia un golpecito pero no me dolia mi pie entonses todos mis companeros me dijieron que como le hise para no tener nada y yo solo dije
ReplyDelete"dios te ama" so entonses todos mis compaeros se rieron y entonses solo les dije que no era juego y les explique.pues alomejor me creyeron pero nose esa ves yo solo crei mas en dios y me quede muy sorprendido esa fue mi reaccion.
una vez cuando estaba jugando con mi bicicleta como iba muy recio me empece a descptrolar y chque con un poste en la calle y me fui de boca y me pegue muy fuerte en la cabeza y me salio sangre de la boca y como me dolio mucho mejor me fui a mi casa yo reaccione muy asustado porque cuando choque me cai de la bicicleta y me pegue muy fuerte en la boca.
ReplyDeleteEl dia pasa do fuimos a una fiesta y yo no que ria ir porque pense que iba a estar muy aburrida pero al estar alla mesentia muy bien de aber benido y pense de lo que me ubiera perdido.
ReplyDeleteone time in mexico I have to do a project call Animales antiguos but my parnet chage the prejec for one call La naturalza animal but I don't like that project so I did it and I get B so that night I thinck Why not lisent to other people maibe I wrong so now I leasen.
ReplyDeleteOne day I riding my bike and I was enjoying it but without looking I crush into a door car Thump!I fell and I got a cut I toch the cut it hurt it ow!.Then I walk home I really didn't walk that much but it fell like it was far "my leg hurt so much" when I got home I put alchol into the cut I yell aww! cause it was painful.
ReplyDeleteTwo days ago i was standing in the corner i was takuing out mi money then it was taken away by the air i whent after it but i couldnt reach up to it i was feeling sad that money was gone and that i dirent have no money no more i felt like jacking somebody to get more money
ReplyDeletei remenber i was walking down the street to go buy some bananas because i was so hungry.while i was walking i saw a sign at that said ''it's close''. I was so angry because i really wanted to eat a banana but then i saw the employe turning the sign around, wich meant bananas for me.i was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ReplyDeletehappy!When i was about to grab a banana when this lady grabbed like she never grabbed it before. I told her ''back off i saw it first'' and it was the only banana.I slapt her and ran off with the banana. I really was a shame of doing that but at least i got that banana.I was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
hapyyyyyyyyyyyyy.
When I was in 7th grade i had a very bad birthday.I had woken up and my mom forgot that t was my birthday.I didn't pay attention so I got ready to go to school.I went to school and my freind sang me happpy birthday.I was happy and the bell rang.I was in class and I noticed that my teacher was angry.I didn't pay attention to him and I went to my next claas.I enterde math and I heard my teacher screaming to a class and it was my bffs class.I was sad because she was having a rough day.I started crying and the teacher pulled me out of the class.She asked me what was going on i told her and i had a better day.
ReplyDeleteone day i ask my parents if i could go to my friends house and they said yes so my mom told my friends mom that if its ok and she said yes.So i went to my friends house and we were playing and some other girl lived in front of her house but she didn't wanted to come out and play.But then it past one hour and i didn't call my parents to see that i was ok.But when i went to my house i saw a car that look just like my dad's and it was and they stop.and they got mad.
ReplyDeleteWhen i was in 7th grade last year i had this problem with my friend. She thought that we didn't want to hang out with her and she started to cry and that made me feel bad and then one day i went up to her and i told her " Why do you think that we don't want to be ur friend?" She answered
ReplyDelete"because yous hang around a lot and you keep me out of things you keep away secrets from me."
i told her "there is some things that i have to keep a secret with only me and him our friend and you are not always going to know everything they keep things away from me too and i don't cry or tell them something."
So after that she told me thank you for making her notice that she was wrong about thinking that and know we r still best friends and the 5 of us still hang out. know we don't have any problems because we're not together any more we're in different classes right now and everything is ok. :)
I went to the store with my little cousin. I usually grave her hand so she wont touch enything. I walked in the store and I let her go from the hand, I wentto get what I came for. I had forgoten about my cousin, I looked for her and I couldn't find her. I was scared and wanted to cry. I looked for her everywere and when I found her she was at the entrence were I told her to stay.
ReplyDeleteonce upon a time there was a time when noseeee. so i told my friend what i need to write about. he told me that. u need to write about a time nobody likes you. so iwas writting it. and they told me he was lying
ReplyDeleteone time when i had a soccer game that was worth 2nd place. my couch told me that we were playing against the team that i to play for in another league. i felt like i was betraying them. the messed up part that my friends mom was the goalie and i was the forward. every time they passed the ball to me, i felt all my blood was draining out. i missed 5 shots beccause of that then i felt i was letting my current team down. i had mix emotions. it was half time and both my couchs from both teams pulled me aside but in diffrent times. both of the m told me the same thing "a game is a game when your in the field forget that you play with them in another league, its not like they are going to kick kill you" i felt releaved it ended 5 to 4 we won.
ReplyDeleteIt was friday last night i had noticed i didn't have my phone.I got worry about my phone.I was think were did I left it at. I got so worry i was about to scream.Cause its my fault i dont take care off it that well.I always leave it every were around the house.Next thing you my little niece had it she was running around with it.Then she give it back to me then i put it in my bedroom my friend hide it from me i was going crazy looking for.Then good thing i call it and found it on his pocket.
ReplyDeletelast week,whem my writing teacher assing a homework i thight it was goin to be real easy because it was just about writing a poem of rihme so i went home and i relize that it was real hard becouse i couldt find words that rihme so i stared asking my family.they tell me is your homewok no my homework so then i call 3of my friend and they tellme thet they didt get it neither.so at that moment i feel like it was the most difficult hing on the whole world so istared feeling not doing it but then i remember that i needed to pass my writing class also because i♥ writing and ♥to do my homework becuse i always want to ne the best student so yeah i always try my best
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