Thursday, October 29, 2009

Storytelling in Reverse

You are going to be writing another short narrative today. Anytime that you have to write a timed narrative, I want you to structure the story a little differently. I want you to just focus on having a clear theme that you explain, a story that progresses through time (it has a balanced beginning, middle, and end), and your characters reacting to events that happen in the story (example: If there was a murder in your story, share your characters thoughts about the murder).

For this writing assignment, everyone has to end their stories with the following sentence:


From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.


Other than that, you are free to be as creative as you want. Happy writing!

112 comments:

  1. Once ther was this kid who was in his first week of a new school. In his first week nobody talked to him.He tought nobody in the world liked him.Then one day another boy saw him eatin lunch by himself.So he felt sorry for him n went to talk to him.Then they stated talkin n eventually they became friends.As the days passed they got closer n closer as friends.From ther they stardted hanging out and playin.So one day he was thinking about all the things they had done togheter since that day they had met.He was really glad they met.So he felt that from that point on, he felt happier than he ever imagined.

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  2. Joselyn C. Room 304Thu Oct 29, 08:31:00 AM

    Once upon a time, there was a little old man who lived in a small town. He was very greedy. All of the people in town thought he was very self fish and they didn't think he deserved anything. The little old man was so mean, nobody liked him and he didn't even have one friend. He was always lonely, and he wished he had someone to talk to. Although he kept that feeling to himself because he didn't tell anyone he felt lonely.
    One day the man woke up. It was a regular day for him. He got up and took a shower. After that he was ready to go to the market to buy food for himself, but something really weird was going on. The moment he walked out of his house, he saw that everything was different. The streets where so lonely and there wasn't one person walking by. Usually the streets were super busy with alot of traffic, but today, something was wrong. He just kept on walking to the store and on his way there, there wasn't anyone person. It was as if everyone had dissapeared into the earth, without leaving trace. When he got back home from the store, not even his servants were at his house, so he was cooking for himself. As he was cooking he was starting to get worried. Where on earth was everyone.
    He was trying to figure out what was happening so remembered something that had happened in his dreams. He was really mad because people were always judging him, so he talked to some really weird people. They asked what was wrong and he told him he wished everyone on earth was dead. They said that if that was really his wish and he had said yes. That was all he remembered. Was that really a dream he kept thinking to himself. He went out to the streets and saw a woman. She seemed so familiar. It looked like his mother which had passed away when he was just a young boy. She called him and he walked towards her. Why was she there with him? Then he thought to himself did he wish that everyone was dead or that he was dead? Well that poor old man never knew what he had asked for in his dreams. All he knew was that he was in a place with his mother, a different place, and now nobody could judge him. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  3. You always have to be careful to who you give your heart to. And if they like you back you better watchout and figure if the girl isint a monster hahahaha !!
    It was all perfect until that girl came to my life. he was so happy and a when he arrived to his class room the teacher announce that their was a new student in his class room. he looked and she was so beautiful all the guys were super amazed by her beauty. she had eyes of a goddes and a body of a angel you couldn't take your eyes away from her.

    Weeks passed and Jim really fell inlove with her wAit no all the guys fell inlove with her, it was like if she had something that always attract guys to her like an unique aroma of perfume. Jim finally decide to ask her out andn she replyed quickly and said yes he was realy surprise and was really happy. it was really awkward because they berly talked but they did do boyfriend and girlfriend things. He thought she wass weird but he was so attractive to her. out of the sudden their was news that kids from JIm's classromm were getting kill by a unknown beast. Jim noticed that his grilfriend as acting weird and talking in a weird laguange so one time he followed her home but she went a cave and she took her skin of and started eatinga boy that was tied and the boy was Jim's best friend. so he jumped on top of the forousius beast. the beast screamded and screamed and he killed her. JIm's best friend was relief and from that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  4. In a small village in California, lived a boy named Miguel who was lonely and dramatized who had never had a single friend ever. He was bullied everyday when he went to school. He planned revenge secretly because the people from school were only hurting him more.

    One Saturday night his highschool was going to have a dance. He decide he wasn't going to go but told his parents he was. When Miguel drove to his school he stayed in his car until he saw the guy that had hurted him so bad. He waited and waited for about an hour or three in his car. Finally when about everyone had left, Miguel saw Robert the guy he hated the most who had wounded him so badly. So when he saw Robert walking all alone he creeped out behind him and knocked out Robert. Robert woke up in a abonded gas station. There a few weeks later the police found him dead.

    Miguel felt a great satisfaction that no one would bother him before but also felt guilty at the same time. He blamed it all on Robert for making him feel bad and that he deserved it.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine. So no one decide to mess with Miguel ever again.

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  5. Once up a time there was a boy called Miguel. He had lost his parents so he was an orphan. He was living in a foster home. There were many kids. So there wasn't really alot of attention on him. Even in school nobody liked him . They would bully him for being an orphan. he really hated that because he would always try to fit in.
    So one day he decided to run away. He was told that there was this place were kids ran away. So he decided to go there. It was a long way, so he had to get ready for this journey.
    While on the journey he found a little girl crying. He couldn't make up the words she was saying. But he did hear that she needed someone. So he decided to go to her. He asked what was wrong but when she looked up he could tell she was the same age as him. And he could see all her story on her face.
    He took her to shelter. While there he asked her what had happened. And to his suprise she had gone through what he had. They started growing to gether to find out they had an intrest for each other. So they got married and had children. They then decided to build a foster home for kids on the street that needed help. The years went by and Miguel felt proud of what he'd done. He made sure everybody had a friend or someone to talk to. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  6. There was once this very old man named Saver. He had a mansion and a lot of servants that he though he could trust. His birthday was comming soon. He had invited almost the whole city. His butler was his most trusted. Little did he know his birthday would also be his death day.
    The butler had been planning to do this a couple of times before. He had failed in all his attemps, but he though this time there was no he could fail.The day finaly came it was going to be perfect. The butler turned all the lights out and slashed the old mans throat open before anyone noticed. He made it look like he the man fell in a knight's sword.
    The butler ihereted most of money and all of the mansion. He never got caught. From that point on ,he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  7. Leticia V. Room304Thu Oct 29, 08:33:00 AM

    There once was a girl named Analy she lived in Virginia, people always made fun of her for being the smartest girl in her class and, for having braces. Every morning her classmates would usually drop her books or dirty her sweater, the thing is there was no day a student would ot do something bad her. Every night the poor girl would go to bed thinking why would everyone do such horrible things to her and the reason why her parents had gotten her braces. One night the girl decided to tell her parents about her problem at school. When they found out they asked her if she would like to transfer from schol. The girl said no, but that she would like to be out of school for 3-4 days. Her parents said yes.
    When the girl had retured she had a lot from a girl she had meet at New York City. The girl and some of her friends told her not to worry that the people who made fun of her would sooner or later realize what they have done. All of the girls gave Analy good advice. She was glad to go back to school the next day showing to her class mates what she had learned.
    So the next day a boy called Analy "Brace Face" and all she had to say was that she did not care because her parents really cared about her for getting her some. Unlike his parents that left his teeth in bad conditions. When Analy said that, Brian shut up and left from that day on people would not make fun of her. She learned that if she or another persone look bad they should not be made fun of because their parents do care for them by doing the right thing like with Analy her parents got her braces so that later on she would not have crooked teeth. =)

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  8. There was once a quite and serious boy who rarely smiled named Jack. Jack once was walking down Walse Street on his way to school When all of a sudden he heard a scream behind him. He turned around and it was one boy running away from another boy who was laying on the ground withering in pain.Jack thought the boy in the floor had been stabbed by the one who was running away. Then Jack ran to the nearest house, and knocked on the door A lady opened the door with a confused look. Jack told her,"A boy has been hurt may I use your phone to call the police." The lady responded ," Yes you can use my phone". So Jack dashed to the phone then when he finished calling the police he heard another scream . Then he whent to the door so he could see what was wrong the lady the opened the door to him was next to the boy that was stabbed. She said , "this is my son". After she said that the police and paramedics arrived. The lady thanked Jack for helping her son instead of walking away. Then Jack smiled for the first time in a long time, and realized he saved a life and was much more happeir and proud of himself. From that point on,he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  9. There once was a 15year old girl named Abigail. She was a rally smart student but she never had friends. No one liked her and they would treat her like if she was nothing just because she was ugly. People would call her names like "ugly duckling" or "four eyes". She would go home crying everyday because all she ever wanted was to fit in and have a friend. There was more to her just wanting to have a friend she also wanted the guy she liked to like her back but she knew that was imposible.

    One day her mother told her they were going to move for a while because she found a better job at another state. Abigail felt a little excitement, but then she remembered when she first moved here to California and how everyone was rude and mean to her. She went back to that time....She walked through the school doors happy and excited that she moved and would make new friends. Everyone would stop and stare at her but no one said a word. Then a girl named Rosa passe by and said "eww what is that?" Everyone started laughing and scince then people would call her names and be rude to her.

    "Mom" she said. "Can't we just stay here and look for another job?" "no honey" she said "its better over there and we already have a home there too." Abigail got sad and said "ok" for that was all she could say.

    Two years passed by and she came back to California because her aunt got sick and Abigail's mom needed to help her. She went back to school and everyone asked "who's the new girl?" In that instant she knew people were going to make fun of her but she was wrong. Everyone asked her where she came from, what her name was , and the guys would ask her if she was single. She was confused but the minute she said she was Abigail everyone stayed quiet. The only person who talked was

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  10. There was once a murder that M.T. wanted to find out that no one knew who killed M.G.There was an investigation for weeks and still no one could find out who it was.So from that point on people thought they should stop lookin for the person that killed M.G. which alot of people wanted him dead because he had everything and made tons of people feel bad.So that is why it was so hard to find who killed M.G. because tons wanted him dead.

    Another day of search happened which was gonna be the last one.There was something diffrent this time they checked.They found a paper with initials of a name on it that said "M.T."From there M.T. said that it was not him and why would anybody ever think it was him if he was cool and in 8th grade was in Aljebra instead of normal math

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  11. There once was a murder and no one knew who did it. A detective named E. Love was the only one who could solve it, and he only had three days to solve the mystery. When does three days were up the family of that personwould call off the investigation. This investigation was called operation Cobra Fist. In order to find the killer he has to be patient, persistant, and brave.

    He found half a sandwich at the crime scene. He has to be patient in order to find his result of who was the one eating the sandwich. After about one hour, he got his results. The sandwich belonged to nonother than M.T. M.T was a mechanic that worked with Pimp My Ride. He waited and watched to see if M.T was the murder, but he did nothing out of the ordenary so he left.

    Next up he found out that there was many people at the crime scene when this happened. He had to be persistant if wanted to know who killed that person. He asked many people if they saw anything wierd when they were there. He asked eveyone and he didn't give up, but they all said " We didn't see anything." Then he saw someone run away when he asked the last person.

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  12. Claudia O. Room 304Thu Oct 29, 08:33:00 AM

    The theme of this story is to always do what is right even do your a teenager you can do what is correct.
    Everything was perfect until the day Nina was shot. Nina was a vey compassionate she loved everyone. She had no enemies how could someone had shot her. I clearly remember the day my mom had a phone call telling her Nina was shot in a parking lot. She was schocked as I was. She then went to Dan and Nina's house to show symphaty to Dan. The curious thing was Dan was jittery and was going crazy before the police came to ask him question.
    There was one reason Nina could of being shot she was rich. She came from a wealthy family, but her husband Dan wasnn't. Why would a robber kill for just a phone and a wallet. Then I remember Dan was jittery when he met my mom before the police came Dan maybe he had shot Nina and was left withe her money.
    Dan was left with life insurance from Nina. Afte a month he was acting normal like if Nina wasn't dead he had even started to date. I knew he was behind Nina's death and I had a reason he was acting suspicious before the police interrogated him. If my mom didn't say anything I was so I made an anominous call to the police about Nina's death and Dan's reactiohn.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  13. Eribertha G. 304Thu Oct 29, 08:34:00 AM

    Ryan was a guy who grew up without a father and counted on his friends for everything. After-school he would always be hanging out with his buddies playing soccer or just talking. He trusted his friends and knew they would never betray him. Marco, Tony, and John were involved in a gang and had been persuading Ryan to join. First though, Ryan had to murder someone.
    Tony was persuading Ryan to kill whatever guy got on his way and get it over with. John wanted Ryan to kill an opponent though. Marco had no opinion to give. That day Ryan went home with Tony to play video games. Marco phoned Ryan when Tony was there telling him he should really think about the situation he was going to get into. Marco had thought joining a gang would make him powerful but now that he wanted to leave he couldn't. Tony had overheard the call and was out to get him.
    The news where everywhere saying Marco had died. Also, Tony and John had been captured and taken to jail for killing Marco. Ryan didn't want this happening to him. The guys he thought were his friends were out of his life and he started to form a future.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  14. As he entered the room in tottal fear and as he saw his motheres blood on the floor he was thinking to him self as his fathere came close to him drenched in his mothres blood.
    "why did you do this" sceaming at his father crying in total discustness.
    "it`s not what it looks like, didnot kill her, she, she." the room was covered in silens.
    Then his fathere put his arm on him and he ran.
    Then the next day he went back to the sceen of the crime there was news vans everwhere the he saw a gurney and he got closer and he looked away because he knew who was in there.
    Then he saw a police van and inside was his fathere he was coverd in his moms dlood still and he was sceaming
    "I didn`t kill her she comited suaside"
    there was a trial the next month and the was evidence that she was hurt by his fathere but there was just few punches. But then the real susprize the mothere had actualy killed hirself and she did this by first stabing her self and eating rat pioson.
    He also found out that the mothere tryed to poisen him to but the fathere stopet his by throwing away the pioson then he just stood in shock. Then he thanked the fathere and from that point on,he felt happierthen he ever imagend

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  15. Brittany S. Room 304Thu Oct 29, 08:34:00 AM

    The day we moved I was devistated. I had to move to the part of town that there were always murders and shootings. I needed to try to get through my life in this place even though the trouble before I could follow my dreams.
    I am going to start at a new school. I know everyone will be making fun of me because I am not like them. I write poetry about the things that are meaningful in life and that everyone is affected by, death. I am always finding out new things about how everyone lives. Being here only one week I have seen so much death and violence. I can't believe that people could be that mean and kill another person just to feel the power.There are other ways to get power or freedom besides killing someone. As long as I finish my first year of high school I can get out of this place. I can finally follow my dreams of becoming a parapsychologist.
    "Hello ,Jason! It is nice to have you in my school. You will have a hard time fitting in at first but it will get better." said the principal te first day that I was in school.
    That day was so hard and I had to go through that 129 more days, but I will make it. The days after that was a lot better. I started making more friends and meeting new people that shared similar experiences. At that point I knew that I was going to make it throught the year.
    Finally it is my last day of school and I was so happy. I knew i could finally start on my career. That day when I got home there was a letter waiting for me from The Atlantic Paranormal Society in Warwick, Rhode Island. I read the letter silently and finally showed my father. In the letter it showed that they gave me a scholarship for one of the only four schools in the United States that offers a course in parapsychology. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  16. Thomas, he is a twenty-year old man that lives with his mommy. He doesn't have a good job and doesn't get a good pay. The job didn't pay enough. Even so, he couldn't leave his mom because she was old and ill. She was fifty-three but because of the disease she was in bad shape.
    Thomas came to an unexpecting day where he got a call at work saying that his mother had died. At work there was a girl he liked and she liked him. the only problem was that they were both shy, so nobody made a move. Her name was Jackie. She came over to Thomas to comfort him. With her help, Thomas was able to live through his life without so much misery.
    The two finally got together. Thomas will never forget his mother's death, but from that ppoint on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  17. Fatima S. room 304Thu Oct 29, 08:34:00 AM

    All was fine until that one day when the mystery man arrived.It's as if he had appeared out of no where.We all know that spying isn't right especially if you don't know the person but apparently my friend Omar didn't understand that.The only thing you gain from spying is a huge and unexpected surprise.Well it was as if the man had appeared out of no where.There he was at the door way just staring at us.All of a sudden a lady asked if we were okay or if we needed any help with anything.Omar suddenly spoke for all of us and told the lady that we were fine.
    As soon as my friend Roxanne bought her outfit, Omar asked if we wanted to go and find out who that man was.Just because our town is small and we had a new guest in town, doesn't mean we have to spying on them to find out what kind of person they are.This is exactly what i wanted him to understand but apparently he would not listen.Right after i finished lecturing him he darted out of the door.
    Roxanne and i just went home but strangely we hadn't heard from Omar.We waited for five hours at my house and then we decided to go look for him.When i opened the door he was right there.He wore a huge smile and his face.I asked him how the spying went and why he was so happy.He suddenly said that he wasn't going to spy on someone ever again because it turned out that the man was a police officer and he had caught him spying. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.This was because he had learn that he could have gone to jail for spying.

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  18. diana g rOOM 3o4Thu Oct 29, 08:34:00 AM

    This is Tamara's story. It tells you of how there can always be an happy ending in life. You would just have to try to make it happen. Well Tamara really knows how to draw and she loved it. She would always draw her own comics. Unfortunately for dudes, those comics were romantic comics. But she usually did comedy too.
    Anyway she did have this one guy she really loved. His name was David Turns out he's her best friend. But he doesn't know anything about her secret crush on him. They would always just chill. But then she did have alot of friends, he did too. He secretly liked her to but like morons they kept it away from eachother. Well he kept getting angry seeing her with all these different guys he didn't know, although they were her friends. He started to think she was easy. So he just let her be. She thought he just hated her since he kept changing his mood on her and would always get mad at her. She saw that he wopuld be in a great and happy mood with his friends. She felt disappointed so she thought they were just fading away as friends. Tamara knew he was never going to see her the way she saw him. The way she just wanted to look him in the eye and tell him all. David felt the same way but he started hating her more since he thought she liked this one guy. That guy's name was Alex. But she hated Alex's guts.
    But David not once did he belive her until Tamara finally had the heart to sneak out of her house and go to his house and cry in his face pouring all her feelings out and telling him. She was turning to go back to her house since she saw that he had this feeling he was going to tell her to leave him alone. Until he pulled her back. Hugging her and telling her he felt the same way. He cheered her up and they just both stared smiling at eachother. She was the happiest. She wasn't the only one happy though. She just felt her heart beating and thought that she could almost beating out of her chest. She was amazed how she really tried to make a happy ending for this part of her life. David finally knew how she really and truly felt. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  19. Stephany E. Room 304Thu Oct 29, 08:35:00 AM

    There one was a girl named Alejandra she thought she didnt fit in with the whole world. She thought she was never going to have any friends because no one cared about her. She never went out, was always at her house studying. In school her classmates called her a nerd or a geek. She was never happy not even if she got an A on her test. But she did know that her parents loved her and that they were proud of her but she wasnt proud about herself. She hated being her she asked so many times why cant i popular like all the other girls. Everyone thought that she dressed dorky. But the next day she found out that there was a new girl i school. Alerjandra that the new girl was going to be just like the popular girls but she wasnt she was just like her. Alejandra couldnt believe the new had sit next to her in every class and she started talking to her. She finally had a FRIEND and they got along just well. Even though they were different in one big thing.the new did like to go out and enjoy herself so one day the new girl invited Alejandra to the movies. She had so much fun so now she does go out and plus she does all her homework and classwork. She finally is happy and she has a friend to celebrate with.

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  20. Michelle D. Room 304Thu Oct 29, 08:35:00 AM

    Once there was a selfish princess who wanted everything. Her name was Katara. She wanted everything she saw. Once she went to a circus and saw a platypus bear. Awed she was by what she saw and wanted to stay awed. So she asked her father, King Ozai, if she could have it. Ozai would get his little girl anything she wanted anything at all, even if it was the most ridiculous ever. Ozai ended up buying this platypus bear for Katara and she was elated. But one day, Katara went for a walk and saw a family. Now this family was a rather poor family and didn't have much. But they did have one thing that no matter how much money Katara's father had, it still couldn't buy it. That family had happiness and love. Katara went home and told her father about this.
    "Dad?" she started."Could we go for a picnic in the park? I saw this other family did that and they seemed an awful lot happier than we do, and they were poor. So I was thinking it we did that we'd be happier."
    "That's a wonderful idea, Katara!" said Ozai "We'll go this saturday."
    That day was the best day ever for Katara.Ever since they go for a picnic everyday. From that point on, she felt happier than she could ever imagine.

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  21. stephanie m. 304Thu Oct 29, 08:36:00 AM

    It was a dark and stormy night and Henry and his brother alfonso were walking home in the rain. They enjoyed walking in the rain so they took their time.They were always togeher and did mostly everything together.
    Than while they were walking out of no where this man with an ax came out.Thats when both of them got really scared because that man had blood on his hands and they also had heard screams and cries.

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  22. Once there was this girl named Dawn she was an orphan and they treated her bad.They use to hit her this all started when her dad left her because he couldnt take care of her and her mom was dad.She was 10 when her dad left her she knew the real reasons why he left her.
    Her dad left her because he didnt want her he was always drinking and cheating on her mom.Thts all she remembered about her dad all the bad things about him not the good ones because she really thought their was no good memories about her dad.As the years went on the anger against her dad grew.She hated him for leaving her in a horrible place.
    One night she decided to escapeshe planned everything.When everybody went to sleep she grabbed the few stuff she had and left.Nobody caught her and she thanked God for that.
    Three years passed and dawn already had a family and she loved her children like her dad didnt.Even though she forgaved her dad she still remembers the awful thing that he did to her.Dawn was more happier then she ever imagine she would be because she had a wonderful family.

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  23. Tom was a simple boy who enjoyed life and his childhood.He was full of enjoyed and he thought nothing could ruin his life in such harmony.He was about 13 years old and loved living in the fields and learning from his teacher Mary.One day he was walking in the wood when he came across a strange looking old man.
    "Boy, are you happy with your life?"the old man asked Tom.
    "Yes,I am",Tom repiled.
    "Well boy,remember if you do something your really proud of.You will be fulled with joy."the old man said then suddenly vanished.Soon it started to rain and Tom was gettting wet.
    Tom got home and found a mysterious object in the front of his door. It was a bag of money;he stared at it wondering on what he would spend it on.He looked around his whole neidhborhood and saw the children playing with nothing but corn and rocks.He thought to but toys for the children and for the families in need.
    The next day he went into town and bought anything that the familes needed.He went home and spend joy to the whole any neiborhood.From that point on,He felt happier than he could ever imagine. Spreading joy to everyone and remember what the man had told him.The was right.

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  24. There once was a boy named Andrew who was in 7th grade(one of the hardest years of your life other than 8th grade)He was one of those typical guys that always did his work,didn't get in trouble at school,and he always got good grades.Even though his life seemed okay from the outside it was the complete opposite from the inside he was always sad and depressed becase he thought that no one cared about him.He felt that way because no one would talk to him at school,he didn't have any friends, he was always lonely.Lots of people would called him stupid or a retard.In school other guys would make fun of him just because he had glasses and because he would always tell the truth.
    One day a moving truck appeared in the house that was next to his.That house had been on sale for almost a year and it finaly got sold to this family that had a girl and boy sort os his age.Andrew just watched them as they took everything out of the truck into the house.he thought that maybe this time he would finaly make a friend or two.
    The next day at schol the new girl was put in his class.The teacher put him in charge of showing Alicia(the new girl) around the school.after scool she started to talk to she introduce him to her older brother named Gabriel. she asked him if he would like to go to dinner over her house .andrew said that he would be happy to. from that point on he felt happier than he could ever imagine .He finally made new friends.

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  25. It was a friday afternoon kevin was heading home till he heard screaming he was the type of kid that likes to investigate.He heard the screaming coming from the neighbors house.He went inside and saw Jose laying on the floor death.Jenny jose's wife was crying to see the horible seen.kevin called the police.the cops came in 2 minutes the cops found out that the gun used to kill Jose was in the backyard next to the dog house.
    kevin began to investigate the gun had dog druel.the gun as well had the paw print.so it was the dog.from that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagien.

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  26. People never learn that sometimes you have to learn you lesson the hard way. Little mike learn his lesson but it cost him something dear to him.Its something no one wants to loose ever in thier lifes.The story how mike lost his way of life.
    Mike was playing basketball outside his yard with his buddy Miguel. Miguel was big and chubby. They were playing until something caught their eye. It was a shiny car and in the car was a clown holding a brand new basketball. Mike could barely see the ball but he saw it was nice and clean. Mike loved basketball and he wanted the ball alot.
    He told Miguel to ask him for the basketball but Miguel was afraid of clowns. Mike forced Miguel to do it Mike would have done it himselve its just that he was more afraid of clowns than Miguel is. He told Miguel that he would give him 20 dollars. Miguel did it and asked the clown for the ball. The clown said no and that its not for sale.
    Mike had to give Miguel the 20 dollars but Mike decided to get it himselve he asked the clown for it but he still said no. Mike tried so hard for the ball nad told the clown he would give him anything for it. "anything you say?" said the clown with a littel chuckle. " fine i'll give you the ball but you have to sign a contract. Right away Mike signed that contracted but forgot to read it.
    The clown never showed his face in the neighborhood again. Mike loved playing with that ball but noticed something strange. He didn't see Miguel in two weeks. He asked Miguels parents where was Miguel nad they told him he went for a walk and never came back. The only thing they found was a rubber clown nose. Mike was shocked but decided that the ball was worth it. From that point on he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  27. onse opened a time theres weres a kid that was alon on the park he wasalon then he started crying because.he didnt had no friends. Then came some other kid and asked him if he wanted to play withhim. And the other kid said ok. And from that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine because he didn't have no friends.

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  28. There once was a boy named Jake. he was very bored. he had no friends and was not liked by many people. one day he was sitting one hios front steps and a kid named luis passed by and asked him if he wanted to play football. jake answerd ane said " i would love to." he had so much fun and he made some new friends.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  29. ...He is a great soccer player, but he was also poor. He could not aford a soccer ball, or to eb in a socer team. He went to the beach and practiced his soccer. He did not have a soccer ball to practice with so he used coconuts, they were hard and damaged his bare feet. He went home every day with hardly any food to eat, but he was still happy. Every day he would go go go and go to practice his soccer. He grew up and a team called milan saw him play they liked him and put him in the team. from that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  30. IT WAS THE FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL.ETHEN WAS GOING TO HIGHSCHOOL HE WAS NERVOUS AT FIRST ABOUT HIS FIRST DAY OF HIGHSCHOOL. WHEN HE GOT THERE HE WAS THINKING THAT IT WASN'T THAT BAD. THE NEXT DAY SOME KIDS WERE PICKING ON HIM AND BEATING HIM UP. THIS WENT ON FOR A LONG TIME. EVERY DAY HE CAME HOME WITH A BLACK EYE ETC.UNTIL ONE DAY HE GOT SICK OF IT, SO HE WENT TO CONFRONT THEM, BUT WHEN HE DID THAT THE GANG STARTED PUNCHING HIM. ALTHOUGHT THAT HAPPEND HE NEVER GAVE UP. UNTIL ONE DAY THE POLICE SAW THEM PUNCHING THE BOY THE POLICE DECIDED TO TAKE THEM TO JAIL BECAUSE THEY SAW ALL THE HARM THEY DID TO THE BOY. FROM THAT POINT ON, HE FELT HAPPIER THAN HE COULD EVER IMAGINE.

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  31. Once there was a man named Mack who worked in a Walgreens. The man lived with his mom and usually ate at McDonalds. He loved going to McDonalds because they had his favorite food, chicken wings and Big Mac. One evening while going back, for the 3rd time, he saw that McDonalds was closing. He grew angry and stormed in the resturant. He asked the pimple faced teenager why they were closing.
    "Why you close my food store?" he asked.
    "Don't ya know that BK bought it for 1 whooper?" the teenager replied.
    Dissatisfied for the awnser he started to throw the paper napkins and ketchup all over the counter. The Police came and arrested him for distubing the peace.When his mom paid his fine he got home and ran to his "Sesame Street" room and started crying to his Tickle Me Elmo. He soon finnaly slept after eating his chicken wings.
    After waking up he decided to make a protest at MCDonalds so they couldn't close it. He got his posters and flyers and headed to the door. He acciently bumped to the wall and said "I got a bo bo!" as he picked up his SpongeBob notebook.After arriving he sat in front of the entrance door and started chanting "McDonalds I Love You, ooh chicken wings..you fill me up". A couple of teens came and started laughing as they threw Fritos.Mack stuck to the floor, got his cellphone and called his mommy.The police then came and they 23 men had to grabb Mack and take him off the front door.He started crying and then realized..."Im going to miss Dora the Explorer" he yelled and then the police tazered him.
    8 months after the inciddent, Mack sad that McDonalds close decided to try Burger King.He told him mom,"Mommy I'm going to BK to get food" and she replied "Who you and why you in my place".He left and arrived at BK and was excited that they sold chicken fingers. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  32. once upon a time there was a little girl named rosey,she was going to the canival and but she could't go on the ride because she was only 9 year's old. she was angery and very upsat but she went to the person and begged please oh...please thet me go on the ride i only wish to ride it once.then her mother came and ask the man won't you thet her just take a ride on the silly old thing the man said okay....but you have to wear these boot's to make you look older sure she said so she did and from thet point on she was happier then she could ever imagin.

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  33. Once there was two friends who treated eachother like brothers. They met at a park festival. One of them were named Jaun and the other was Phil. They were both from different groups of people. So alot of their other friends were mad at both of them.
    They alot of parties, with somewhat celebrities, and im talkinabout pool parties, record label parties and many more, and most of them were in different states. They knew everybody rappers, basketball players, models, and movie actors.
    lot of other people from their neighborhoods madand jealous. They even started plotting a way to destroy their friendship, but after Jaun made his first movie, he got signed to DreamWorks. And after that they were gone nowhere to be seen Jaun and Phil were in paradise. From point on, they flet happier then they can ever imagine.

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  34. once there was a 8th grade student named Jim whose use to be a straight a student that also liked helped his teachers but one day he want to be cool so he stop doing his homework.Also he started to do drugs with his friends just be cool but one day his schoolwas having a red ribbon day and he learn that drugs messes with your mind and also damages your brain cells but he tried to stop doing drugs.But he was already addicted to it .So one day he stop trying to do that so he tried talking to the security at he's school and he' counseler but he couldn't because he was nervous because the might tell his parents.But he heard his teacher saying that " you could alway's could trust your elders here ".So one day he tried to tell his teacher so he did and he's teacher said trying being cool is hanging out with the people you're like and he said okaySo he told her and now from that point on,he felt happier than he could ever imagine.Also he wouldn't touch no more drugs.

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  35. At 4 p.m there was a murder of a young teenager that was shot in a drive by infront of her friend's house . When the Parents of the young teen Found Out about this accident they kouldnt belive it her mother from the young teen said that"how could her daugher be in her friend's house she was supposed to be in school and she never had gave her primisson to go either way"so her parents kouldnt understand what had happen. The Police had asked the teen friend that what had happen and who was the girl's with and she reply "there where with her guy friends and they where in gangs and smoking "and so guys from other another gang saw them and stared shooting and them the two guy they where with ran inside and close the door on the girl's and left them outside and the other girl was able to hide but the young teen she couldnt and they just shot her and the police told the girl "you see how good are ur friend's look what they cause and plus you's guys where suppose to be in school and were where ur parents at?" the girl reply they are working." the parents from the young teen where really upset and sad because of what happen to her daugher. The Young teen girl that had die her friend told her mother she learn her lesson that to not egt out of school because you may never know what will happen and plus with your friends so she learn her lesson. From that point on, she felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  36. once there girl in church that was talking about me and my cousin.Then we ask her why she was talking about us and we told here to stop but she did not wanted to stop talking about us and we told her to stop talking about us. The girl was 14 and her name is griselda. we started a fight with her and her mom gat mad and she told my mom and my cousins mom.that she was telling bad stuff about us and we got mad with her. she became are friend and we stared talking to each other.

    From that point on, she felt happier than he could ever imagine because she stop talking about us.

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  37. once upon a time is kind of lame for this story which you are about to read. Instead lets say there was a girl who is neither popular but neither creepy either. She was walking by the cementery to visit her parents who recently died of unkown causes
    when she fell upon a hole in the ground only to see her parents bodies there.
    "Why are they here"?, she thought.Then after realizing this she found more bodies of people she didn't know.All of a sudden she heard a noise that sounded like someone was dragging something very heavy.
    "I've got to get out of here",she thought really frightened.But just as she turned she was faced with a man dressed as Chucky, she screamed then ran but he caught up to her so that he could kill her because no one can tell what he'd been doing.She saw someting shiny and she grabed hold of it and swung it at the man whom fell down oozing with blood.She got out of there but to her horror found tombstones destroyed.Then she woke up.From that point on she felt happier than she could ever imagine.

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  38. One day there was a kid and his family who had to move to a new house.The kids name was bear.Bear did not want to move to the new house because he liked the first one where he lived all his life. The next day he moved to his new house.Just by looking at the house he didnt want to get inside.The house looked scary and old.When they got inside there was a strange feeling like if someone was watching them.That night they where going to go to sleep in there new homes.The kid had to sleep alone in his own room.When his mom turned the light of his nightmares began to build up. He said that he had seen a creepy figure and that he was really scared.His parents didnt believe him so they didnt really wory about what happened.the next night they were going to sleep with him so that he wouldnt be scared.In the middle of the night they were awackened by a strange loud noise they heard.Since that noise happened the parents beleived the son.The next day in the morning they all went to there local library and searched information on there new home that they had barely purchased.They got information and they whent home to look at it.They had found out that there was a spirit in the home that was doing all that stuuf.Iguy had been murdered a couple of monthe before they purchased the home.The called a priest to see if he could help them get rid of the spirit quick before it did something bad to them.the next day the priest came and did a riutual to the house.soposobely it scares the spirit away to the other world.finnaly the house was very welcoming without anything disturbing them.From that point on,he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  39. It was the first day of school and Bill was in highschool.He was a freshmen and he new nobody but his only self.Lots of people were talking to each other but Bill was too shy to talk to anyone.It was lunch time and he got his food and was about to sit down when he realized that he was on the floor.
    Everyone was laughing at him,making fun of him ,and even pointing at him.He had realized that the kid next to him had tripped him.Bill turned red and he wanted to cry because he was beeing humiliated,but instead he got up to his feet and just kept on walking leaving the food on the floor.Bill felt as if he wanted to just leave and transfer school.He felt lonely,scarred,and un-wanted.
    The next day Bill got up dressed up and ate breakfest hoping he would atleast meet a friend at school.He walked confident as if nothing ever happened at school the day before.He walked happy thinking it was a brand new start.He got to school and the girl sitting next to him statrted to talk to him all of a sudden.At first he was shocked because a person finally recognized him.Then he replied to her.He felt shy at first but then days flew by and the girl kept talking to him more and more everyday.
    The girl's name is Amy and she was not a shy person.She talked to every single student in the class.She was very popular and she greeted everyone she saw in the hallway.Students liked her and teachers loved her.She even introduced Bill to other people she new.
    Then came a day in which he and amy felt a huge connection between each other.Bill liked Amy more than a friend now, and Amy felt the same way about him.Soon came a day in which both were considered as boyfriend and girlfriend.He was very happy because Amy was his girlfriend and not just bacause of that,also because he new every single student in freshmen year.From that point and on,he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  40. There was once a guy called Arturo. Arturo was always failing all his subjects. He always failed his subjects because he never did his homework. All of his life his parents had told him to do his homewotk. But, he always ignored them and went to his room to use his computer. Arturo only passed because his friends always gave him the answers.
    His friends were Isais, Oscar, and another Oscar. THey gave him the answers for tests and schoolwork. They never got caught because the teachers trusted them completely.
    One day though, the teacher gave them a test and Arturo & his friends started cheating. As the teacher turned aeound ,for no reason, she caught them.
    Arturo said " We were just passing around my partie's invitation".
    Ms.Romero then took away the paper and loked at it. "These are yhe answers for the test you little liar" Ms.Romero responded.
    After letting out her dissapointment she called all of their parents.She talked to everybody's parents. She took a lot longer with Arturo's parents.His parents then told him that they would help him with his homewok.
    Then jis parents showed jim homewok was easy.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine. Because he felt proud.

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  41. ...And so the story goes that he was an orphan. Alan was the boy's name. So fragile he looked, so sad, so hungry. What else would you expect from a 10 year old boy that is living his life with no where to go, and not knowing what to do. His parents deserted him, was the only story he knew.
    Alan was depressed, sad, lonely, afraid, worried, without any hopes within him, what so ever. He had to steal food, he had to take all the tortures that the people in the streets would call out to him; the way no one helped him at all when he needed and asked for the help. Alan saw himself like nothing, but a blur. What did he do to deserve this, he would think. Everything though began to unfold when a man came.
    A tall skinny, man saw the boy crouched in a cement wall, with his hands around himself trying to warm himself up, and walked toward him. The boy hesitated when the man said hi to him. Alan could barely speak, he wasn't used to people going up to him and saying hello. The man began to talk to him, more and more, and slowly so did Alan. The boy went with the man, he stayed with him, and was happy with him. Before this happened, the boy was shocked, he cried, he misunderstood until the man began to explain more clearly. Now who was the man? Alexis Faulter......Alan's father. And that was when from that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  42. I can only remember alittle of what happen to Jose,and Daisy.It was a cold and windly night evenyone was inside sleeping in there beds.Jose,and Daisy were sleeping in different beds because they didnt know each other yet.Then a big fire started because someone left the stove on.

    First Daisy woke up to check on her family but they were all dead because of the fire.She was there crying for like 30 secs.Then she went to see if evenyone was still alive so she went to Jose's room and he was still sleeping, so she went to go wake him up.Next they both got out of the house. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine because daisy and Jose were still alive.

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  43. nine-years ago a young men name Ricardo was a happy guy that was about to finish college. He was blamed of selling drugs and they did find him guilty because all the people that were the ones that sold them blamed it on him. They sentenced him for 8 years. His life was misearble in ther. Ricardo had to sell drugs to survive in there if hi did not they could of kill him.

    The years pass and he came out of jail we were all happy. They were people that whant to get him because after he came out they told him to kill a person to live him alone. Hi did not whant to do that so they kill him.from that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  44. Once upon a time there was a little boy called Red. He was a big trouble maker. He got in trouble for every little thing! Once he got in trouble for blowing bubbles in the middle of an exam.

    Even though he was a trouble maker he was still intellegent believe it or not. He would surprise you with the miracles and wonders of his works that no other schooler could even do. "He'd be ahead of the class.." One teacher would say in a parent teacher meeting. " But he'd goof off and mess up everything!" The teacher exclaimed. He'd get good compliments and very good grades, straight A's mostly. Many new after that big chunk of goofness was intellegence.

    So one day he woke up to the smell of pistachio ice cream (His favorite). He got up an didn't even dress up for school he just went or should i say flied down the stairs to the kitchen and found this person he didn't even know was cooking the pistachio ice cream. He realized on a nearby calender that it was his birthday his 7th birthday. He tought to himself "It's my birthday and for present I'm getting PISTACHIO ICE CREAM!!!" He sat on the chair to get a better look to what the woman was doing.
    Then the door knocked...

    "I'll get it!" said Red.The woman said nothing. And Red opened the door....

    As soon as Red opened the door a man stood in black and realize it was Red...a little boy missing 7 years ago.

    The man grabbed Red by the hand and cover his mouth from preventing Red to scream and the woman inside coming out.

    There was silence the way back to his original house. The little boy heard a shriek from a woman and got very scared. He noticed after he was explained that the woman that had shrieked was his mom and that he was stolen by the woman that was cooking pistachio ice cream.

    From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  45. alejandro urbina 303Thu Oct 29, 09:16:00 AM

    About two months ago there was a gut named eddy in illinois.He bought his dream car and he couldnt be happier.He was always showing it off and braging about his car to his friends and other people.one night he eft his car outside and he woke up when he heard his car alarm going off he ran outside to find that his car was stolen.the police came and told him that that they probaly might not find his car.when he heard this he got even more upset.2 months later and he still dint have his car back so he decide to say screw the police and he started looking for it by himself.every night he would go and look for his car and had no luck.until one night he found a car that looked just like his car parked outside his friends house.he couldnt belive what he was seeing so he decided to checkif it was his car.as soon as he foind out it was his car he got really mad.so he was deciding what he would do to get his f riend back for stealing his car.all he could think about was killing his friend.but he didnt want to do that so he decided to jump his friend.so that night when he was in front of his friends house knocking at his front door yelling telling him to get out he started having secoind thoughts about it. so he decided not to do it so instead he called the cops and got his friend arrested.so he got his car back and he got the person who stole his car arrested.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  46. He had told his mother he was sleeping over his friend, Fransico,house but actully he was going to this gran opening of a theme park.Jonathan knew his mom wouldnt let him go if it was on a school night because it opened at 10 pm.
    When both Jonathon and Fransico got there they saw that to get in you needed to be 17 years or older.So they knew they couldnt just go in the front door.They had to sneek in.They saw that there was nobody to guard if anyone was to jump the fence so they jumped it and got in.Jonathan didnt feel to good that they had snuck in to a theme park they werent allowed in.Fransico told him that there was nothing to worry about.
    They had gone on several rides with no trouble.After a while Jonathan didnt feel worried.As Jonathon was about to go in a house of mirros a cold hand was placed upon his shuolders and he was scared to turn around to see who it was.
    When he turned around he saw it was a big guy with the word security on his shirt. The security told him that he was in big trouble .The security took him to an office and Jonathon saw that Frasico was there and so were his parents.Then onathan too called his parents and they came to pick hime up.He though that he should have never lied to his parents and listned to Fransico.Later he was grounded for 2 months.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  47. There once was a kid that always forgot his homework he would always say "my dog ate my homework" or "you didn't tell us we had homework". The teacher would always get agrevated and get mad because he never did is homework not even 5x each for only three words.
    One day the teacher went to the students house without the parents klnowing nor the student. he knoced on the door no one opened he rang the door bell 2x then the student opened the student got shocked the teacher said "good after noon Anthony,are your parents home" Anthony didn't know what to say he finally said "yes Mr.Barr" Mr.Barr said "may I go in" Anthony said "sure" so Mr.Barr went in and he meet Anthonys parents and Mr.Barr told them what was happing the parents knew what was happening.
    The parents responded "it's because we rarley see our child we don't ask him if he did his homework we never motivate him". Mr Barr got shocked he didn't know what to say. The parents contined "when he gives us his report card we don't actually see it we just sign it, before when he use to do his homework and got A's,B's and even C's we would never ever encorage him or tell him great job or give him a little gift for his great effort".
    Mr.Barr said "well I am am willing to come every day after school to help him in his homework of course if you would let me" the parents said " of course and we will also try and help him". Well said Mr.Barr "see you tomorrow".
    When Anthony got to school that day he had done all his homework Mr.Barr asked him who helped you "my mom said Anthony she has quitted work to help me in school". Well said Mr.Barr I think he will acheive in school and have more appotunities. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  48. It was the first day of school. Mary was going to 8th grade. She was happy to be in 8th grade, the last grade to be in this school. Her best friend and Mary are going in the same class. One day when Mary was at her friends house they were having a slumber party. All of a sudden, someone broke in the house. Her best friend and Mary were not robbed. Mary and her best friend were at social studies. They were learning about the civil war. Mary was not paying any attention. She was to busy looking out the window. All of a sudden she saw a group of guys outside the school. She only recenice the rubber in the slumber party. She remember he told her she was going to get her, but she thougt it was a prank. But it wasn`t. "TEACHER TEACHER! THERE IS A RUBBER OUTSIDE!"The teacher looked outside but nobody was not there. "Is this some kind of prank, Mar-" The teacher was inturropted by a shot gun. There were screaming out the hall. "Were is Mary."the rubber said in a hurry. Mary was so scared she hide behind the desk. Her best friend was calling the police with her cellphone. All the kids were opening the windows to get out of there. All of a sudden evrybody stop. They didnt heard anything. The teacher was looking for Mary but she was not in the room. Mary was out in the hallway. "Mary, get back here"
    "No. I want to know what he wants from me. I dont want anybody to get hurt." She started walking straight to the robber. The rubber looked like he wanted to cry. Mary didnt reconise him at all only the time he broke in the house. "Mary!" The rubber hugged her very reliefed. Mary was so confused. But mary remembered that hug. that hug was from his father. She always wanted a hug from her father. From that point on, she felt happier than he could have imagine.

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  49. He was getting ready to go home when his teacher call on him. As he walked towards her he said,"Is about my grades,right." The teacher look at him with such curiously and she nodded."I been noticing that your grades have being going down by alot this couple of weeks," his teacher said. The boy had already realize that and he knew they will keep on getting worse because he doesn't pay attention at school nor does his homework.
    The teacher had told him that she wanted to talk him about his grades and it will just take some minutes. The boy stay to listen what she had to say but never really pay attention what she was saying because he passed out and started daydreaming. Then re realize that his grades are important so he should listen to the teacher."You should think about what I just told you." And she was finish. He realize that he should had listen to her, but instead he started doing his homework and then he was studying.
    The next day he went to school and they had a quiz. He finish and in school they check their answer and he got a 90%.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  50. He told his dad and mom that he was going to stay at his friend's house to do his work that he said supposely said it was so importan ,but he was actually lying to his parents. His mom really care about him. His da trusted him staying at my house.

    My friend's name is Rojer. His parents really trust us two.When he got to my house he seen suspicious by the look on his face. When we got to my room we were eating some snacks using the computer.Then out of no where he told me that there was some teenagers party. He told me to lets sneak out and go to the party i didn't wanted to go but i didn't want to loose my friendship with him and not seem like im not cool. When we got to the party there were kids smoking and drinking they ask me if i want some. I said" no" rojer was smoking and drinking i was shocked by the things he was doing .I did't knew what i got myself into. I waas already past curfue time.Rojer had picking a fight with some kid. So we just leftWhen we got home we wen t to sleep .

    Next day my parents talk to me they knew we had sneak out. Rojer's parents called my house.My parent's told them that we weren't in our room. I couldn't talk to him any more his trust with him wasn't the same as it use too. You shouldn't be sneaking out with your friend's or yourself to parties or anywhere. It get you in trouble. Listen to what you think is right.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  51. one time a guy went of with some gang members threw a block on 59th and he shot and killed the target he was happy and felt better now and the mom and brothers of the target were crying and the murderer felt better when he knew they were sad.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  52. On thay ther was my famyli and my parent worther and ther and ther wor som pepol that thirint wanted to telme wer was my family wort ther and som ther was porsen that told me she went to the stor and I whid at me and the sad yes atlest I now wer thear tansk.

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  53. All of our family was in the house of my uncle it was his block party.We were in the 47 & honore so that block has many gang members.So my uncle was making Carne Asada outside.It was getting dark and the block was filled with gang members.So my aunt left.Then my uncle left. Second , it was us and my uncle and his family.We left around nine.We got home and my cousin called my dad that my uncle was stabbed in the chest.Then me and my dad left to see by teh time we got their the block party was over.Then me and my dad grabbed him and took him to the hospital.His shirt was filled with blood.We got to the hospital and told them it was an emerjency.So they brought a stretcher and put him in it. Third ,They took him in a room and they put like 8 stitches.So they left him that night and we called his wife to come stay with him.The next day they let him get out. They left the hospital and my uncle thanked god he was still alive.He felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  54. There once was a kid that lived in a town named jacksonville,florida.the boy was always sad because he was different.the boy was 13 and his whole life was filled with being different.when he was born he was born weak so he was cripal from the waste down.his family treated him different.His teachers treated him differt.

    until one day a girl next door moved in. the girl was just like him so he tryed to get to know her.he never felt this way before.someone treating him like a regular person.

    so one day they ran away together.together they were unstopable.so from that day on they ran everywhere together.He felt happier than he could ever imagine

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  55. It was a tuesday morning i was at school doing work i was in gym until one of my friends mention there was test today and the teast was part of our grade i dindnt study last night so
    i want to science class the teacher told everyone to take out a sheet of paper i took out some paper and another one that had my notes.

    My teacher told every one to start so i started
    the test i looked at my paper and at the notes i tried not to get caught but i got caught by my teacher she took the test away from me she was talking to the principal outside the hall then the teacher told me to go outside the hallway.

    I came out dissapoited and i looked up at the taecher the teacher said " why were you cheating?" I replied back "cause this was part of my grade i didnt study last night and i didnt want to fail." the principal made a deal with me he said if I study tonight he will let me take the test again, so I did exactlly what he told me.

    Here is the lesson i learned never cheat when you are taking a test or you will get caught.

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  56. One night in New Orleans,gang members were into it with eachother. Nothing happend but threats were shared.Lewis threatened to kill Alan because he wanted to leave the gang. Lewis tried beating up Alan but he got away.
    The next morning Alan was out walking around 8:00am. Kids were walking on their way to school.So just as Alan was crossing the street Lewis spotted him and quickly went after him. Alan ran towards the school where all of the kids were outside standing.The next thing you know Lewis pulls out a gun and began to shoot.
    Lewis shot three kids by mistake. There were loud screams coming from every directions. Lewis began to run, But the police caught him and on court day the judge gave Lewis 25 years to life. Although Lewis didnt mean to kill those kids,during the time in jail he realized that life is not all about gangs.
    Alan was glad to be no longer apart of a gang. He got a job, got married and had 2 kids. He felt happier than he could imagine.

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  57. Three weeks ago in year 2000 there was a guy named Garry he was a young worker he was very talented of what he does in his work he was almost like the boos he was very sure on what he did and he never was absent to work or never tardy like the boos his enemy in the work was his partner because he was jealous of the work he did and because he’s was very talented he never liked him because soppuosly he always showed up and he did not liked it that so one day when he was out of work he was just waiting to go and kill the guy who worked very much because he hated him and that day he came out early because the boos gave him a brake because he worked to much and the enemy was waiting outsides he came out and out of no were the enemy saw him end shot him he died the police cot him shooting him the guy gave all his furniture to his wife

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  58. It was a sunday morning and everything was all quiet then a few minutes pass there was a dive by it was another gang that entered to the other gangs turf. then the people who got shoot was a gang member so then the gang member that had died the friend wanted to have a battle against the gang that shoot his friend.
    so the most powerful guy in the the gang made his decision and he did want to make the battle against the other gang. The two gangs meet at a abanded house to talk about the battle so it was settled and the two gang where going to fight against each other so then the next day came and the battle was going to start in in a few minutes and the both gangs were getting ready to fight. Then the battl was starting and people who got in the way were shoot.
    then all the gang members where dead and the battle was over nobody won everybody died. From that point on everything was all calm now.

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  59. A young boy named Andrew never had any friends and he didn't have any parents or so that was what he thought.In reality his parents were alive but Andrew had been taken away from them when they were in an accident a few years ago,when that accident happened Andrew was only 3 years old and his parents had been 25.Andrew wasn't loved everyone thought little of him because he didn't have any parents or someone that loved him.As the years progressed Andrew had been placed from home to home never actually finding a permanent home to live in. Andrew was a quite person though he was always in an elated mood no matter what people said or treated him.Andrew was someone who found it easy to approach people but he was always shy when they mentioned their parents.
    One day 2 people arrived at the home Andrew was currently living in,they wanted to adopt him. Andrew was rather surprised at this because most people took the other boys and girls rather than him.The people who had adopted him were Steven and Jin,two people who at sight looked crazy.As the days past by Andrew was not taken back to the adoption place in fact he stayed in that home for a very long time until something happened. Steven and Jin rarely talked to Andrew as they rather didn't really care for him sure once in awhile they would show him some affection but Andrew as well as them both knew that they were faking it all.One day Andrew just lost it he burst out telling people what he really thought about what they told him and he even told a couple of things to both Steven and Jin who in reaction to this hit him.Andrew had never been hit in his life sure he was taunted but never had someone gone far enough to actually hit him.When he got hit Andrew ran away and left the home of Jin and Steven.Looking back at it Andrew realized that maybe he didn't actually belong in a home that his place was as that of a loner always swuitched for place to place.
    Two years passed by and no one had even known what happened to Andrew all they knew was that he had escaped his"home". Stumbling across place to place Andrew found himself in front of a house but the rare thing was that it seemed to be empty but it was not.He knocked on the door and asked if he could go in he was created by this lady who appeared to be distressed and next to her a man stood he too looking distressed.Andrew told them that how he ended up there and they accepted him into his home.Later on he told them his name and their eyes widened in shock for he Andrew was their son who they had lost.The woman getting over her schock told him that he was her son and Andrew could only stare back at her with her mouth wide opened.Although it may seem impossible their is always hope that one day you might be loved back Andrew never knew love but when he met his parents he did and he knew that he would try to keep hold on that love.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  60. It was a cold and rainy and stormy day. The wind was blowing hard. Jacob was all alone at home. It was a Saturday and his parents were still working. So he decided to watch t.v but because of the lighting of the storm, the t.v was not working at all and he couldnt watch anything on television.
    He was really bored so he decided to go get something to eat. He really wanted to munch on some candy but his candy jar was just left with old and nasty candy that he disliked.
    So he made some buttery, yellow popcorn. as he was eating his pocorn he eventually got full and stopped.
    He was looking out the window, when something caught his eye and his face expression instantly changed into a smile.
    he saw a puppy running across his front steps. so, he decided to bring it in with him. He was so happy now but the puppy was wet and muddy so Jacob took him to the bathroom tub and gave him a bath. When Jacob was done, he took the puppy to his room and started to play a little game of fetch. The puppy would run as fast as he could to catch it. He had so much fun with the puppy until his parents got home.
    "What is that dog doing in here" shouted Jacobs mother! "I saw him all alone and cold on our front steps, can i keep him please!" said Jacob. "If the owner doesnt appear in a week then you can!" Jacobs mother assured him.
    "Thank you mom" Jacob said.
    A whole week went by and it was the best week that Jacob had ever had. He had played so many different games with the dog enjoying every second of the day. No one had claimed the puppy so Jacob kept him. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  61. Once there was a guy named Salvador who had breast cancer. He was really sick but he was kind of poor so he couldnt afford medical attention or medications. He had a really good freind whose name was Arturo, he was a very wealthy man. Arturo always loved to help people. Salvador knew Arturo even before he was wealthy.

    Salvador's cancer was getting worst so he decided to ask his freind Arturo for a loan of money. As soon as Arturo heard about his freind having cancer he right away wanted to help. Although his wife didnt agree with him she thought salvador was a very evil man and just used people. Arturo still helped Salvador though because Arturo loved to help people.

    A year passed by and Salvador was way better thanks to Arturo. He was really healthy and the cancer had gone away. he had taken the right meds and had lots of medical attention so now he was very healthy. He was a strong healthy man. From that point on, he felt better than he coould ever imagine.

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  62. In a town like any other. In a place everyone has forgotten. No one knows what is going to happen today in this peaceful town. And things are about to get intense when lost travelers end up in the forgotten town.
    It started out like any other day, kids playing in the park. People going to work, nothing new just a normal day. Peaceful and quiet. Then all of a sudden everyone stops what they are doing and goes to the end of town. They all went to the end of town because a person in a car was in their town. And they had never had some one visit their town before so all the people started asking the person questions at the same time and he could not understand them.

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  63. Tyler H. Room 306Thu Oct 29, 09:53:00 AM

    It was a normal Sunday morning, the sound of the blue birds chirping rapidly, the fog settling across the sky. Then a new face appeared coming down the road. A Tall man, with a muscular body frame strolled down the street in a looking Armani suit. His hair was slicked back as he stopped at my neighbor Casey’s house. Casey is my Twenty One year old journalist, she dreamed of traveling to Austria and learning all about the government there. She never got to live that dream when she was blinded by a broken gas canister then burned her eye to nearly mush. She now wears dark sunglasses hiding her eyes from the world. I was wondering what this man was doing going to her house. So I decided to walk to her house.

    I Walked up her cobblestone drive way and stood at the doorstep. I knocked on the door and waited for her to answer. She talked through the door,
    “Who is it?” she said, as she was most likely puzzled. “Marty.” I replied to her, ”Oh, could you come back later Marty? I am sort of busy right now.” She said in a hurried tone. “Fine Casey.” I told her as I walked away from the house. I Stood on her lawn and just wondered who is this gentleman. Then all of a sudden he burst out the door with a brief case he didn’t have when he went in. Then she walked out with her cane. Just smiling then I then bumped into the man and he just said,
    “Ay, You look mighty troubled. Were you worried about Case?” I just said, “Yes”.

    Then we talked and he said he was Casey’s fiancé and they were going over some wedding plans. That was mostly what he had to say. 4 Weeks later Casey Alice Campbell was married to Travis Jack Anderson. I Have to say he was thrilled and so was Casey. From that day on, he felt happier then he could ever imagine.

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  64. One day, there was a boy going to school. As he was going there, he noticed something on the ground. When he picked it up, he saw that it was sparkling. It looked to him like a stone that was all smoothed out by someone. It had three colors to it though, they were white, gray, and finally black. He put it in his pocket and he took it to school. When he got there, none of his friends were there that day, so it made it harder for him to have a good day, like he wanted to.
    Later that day, the bully at his school tripped him when he was at lunch and made all his food get on him. He was so mad that he said, " I wish you were never even born!". Suddenly, he felt the rock he picked up starting to shake. He pulled it out of his pocket and he saw that suddenly, the bully was gone and he saw the rock change colors. The spot that was supposed to be white suddenly turned black.He thought it was just some white dirt that was on the rock and wiped off in his pants, so he let it go.
    When he got home, he was playing a video game in his X-box 360 but suddenly his X-box stopped working and he got sad and said, " Man, I wish I could get a new X-box." Then, his dad came into the room and said" Happy birthday, heres your present, I hope you like it." He said it wasnt his birthday but no one listened to him so he took his dads present and opened it and was shocked to see that it was a new X-box 360. Then, he thought he knew what was happening. He figured that the rock he picked up was granting his wish's. He decided that he would save, what he thought, the last wish. He took the rock out of his pocket and saw that it was completely black.
    When he was going to sleep, there was alot of noise downstairs. He went to see what was happening and saw that his sister had friends over and they were making all the noise. He said if they could quiet down and they said ok, but when he went back upstairs, they were louder than before. He went back downstairs and told them to bequiet again, but again they were louder when he got back upstairs. He was getting mad so he got the rock and went downstairs, but when he got downstairs, the girls got him and put make-up all over his face so fast, he didnt have time to react.He was now furious, so he went back upstairs and got his rock out and said, " I WISH I WAS THE ONLY PERSON ALIVE!!" as loud as he could and then he went to sleep when the noise suddenly stopped. When he woke up, he was expecting his parents and sister downstairs but they were not there. He saw that the rock was completely black and it was broken. He went outside and no one was at there home. He finally noticed he was alone. No one else was alive except him. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  65. There was one a boy named Angel he was a normal boy how lived in the suburbs that had a neighbor that is a girl named Daisy they were good friends and they always played around. Daisy had a crush on him but she did not know if he felt the same way so she did not want to tell him because she thought that if she told him that she likes him it would change there relationship of friends so she stood quiet for 3 year. After that they had about two fights because she was jealous that he stop talking to her because he was in high school and meet new friends and he rarely talked to her and she started to tell him stuff that now that he has new friends he would not talk to her that he did not need her anymore and they stop talking to each other about a month. Then when that month past she text him and they started talking and then she started asking him questions and he told her that he knew her that well that he even knew who she liked and she asked him who? And he said me and she told him how do you know and he said they told me and he asked is it true and she said yes he was shocked he did not think it was true and she asked him do you like me and he said yes. So they started going out and were happy with each other she thought to her self why didn’t do this before. They lived happily ever after.

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  66. Once upon a time there was a boy named Landon he was one of the most popular guy he was around 17 or 18 years old.He had everything he wanted he had looks and popularity.He was a troble maker and he didn't care what anyone told him he did what ever he wanted,he would dish school,get in fights and he would always be drinking.One night him and his friends went over to a shore at night it was very deep in that shore.There was a guy who wanted to be popular like all of them his name was Dean=).
    They had told him that if he would jump in the water from a tall building down to the water he would become one of them.Dean jumped in the water and he got hurt.The police came and Landon left the police chased he was driving and crashed into trash cans.They got him under porvation and his mom was tired of everything.


    He was enrolled in the school play and got the lead play.A girl named Jamie got the lead play she was a big nerd everybody teased her.He asked her if they could run lines together.So then they would alwas hang out after school and practice he didnt relize it but he was falling in love with her.One day she asked him that if he would see him at her house after school.He answered in a bad way so she got mad at him.He went over to say that he was sorry and the girl wasnt home hshe was at the hospital.

    The next day at school he tried to talk to her but she didn't want to talk to him.So at lunch time everybody was making fun of her she ran of but Landon was in the way so he and Jamie bumped with each other.He punched the guy that was saying things to her.She said thank you to him and forgave him.Then he asked her out on a date they fell in love and got maried.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.THE END

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  67. Once there were a rich girl who had everything she wanted, but always thought she will never fit in with nobody. She always was sad and never had any real friends. Her friends always used her for her money or her popularaty. She always stayed in her room and cried alot.she thought about going to a regular school and don't tell anybody that she is rich.

    She started school and was uncomftarble, but decided to give it a try. when she was goin to put her books in her locker she met a guy name Aron who owned that locker too. For months they beemn sharing that locker and became best friends. She met other friends too, but not like aron. Aron thought she was her best friend too. Antold each other everything. She couldn't hold it any longer and told him everything. he didn't care, he was closer to her tahn anything. aand who ever wanted her for her money, he will defend her. From that point on, she felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  68. One day a kid woke up when he was about to go to school he look at himself in the mirror and he was older.He coulnt belive it he was 10yrs older.He then started screaming mom dad his mom came right away.He said mom look at me Im older and your older too. His mom said hurry up you are to get
    late for highscool he said highscool. He then came for breakfast and he then saw his dad and saw him old to his dad had no hair.He saw trough the window and saw a mustang he told his dad nice car dad. His dad said my car thats your car then the person that was once a kid took the keys and drove the car to school when he he was going to school he crash an d he notice evrything was a dream he woke up screaming.

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  69. In my city of Chicago,Il. there is a lot of gang vilonce. We live having fear of getting shot or robbed. When you walk by them you make no eye contact but shiver in fear that he/she might do something if you gurd isn't up. The life of a 16yr-old boy good grades but in a gang. You would rather choose a life with out a gang and vilonce but what if you are whole family is in one.
    For all his life he saw drugs and guns that the age of 4 he was afraid but now barly flinches at the sight of it. He went to school and got good grades for his future but now and hten he would dich it to go and do gang work. He knew he could do better but how could he reach his dream if he was stuck in gang life. If he wanted to leave he might die and if he didn't he also might die. There was no getting out but he was determind just like his mother was to get his father out of it but died in driveby.
    One day while walking home with his older brother they began to here loud bangs. when in the that situation and you react slowly you get shot that day he lost another hero in his heart. His brother who also followed the dream of his mother died. The boy wanted more than his own life to be done with the gang he was born into.
    He finshed igh school 2yrs later and told his father he wanted out of the gang. his father said he would probley die but the boy didn't care. The fahter was afraid to loose his youngest son but allowed him to go.
    The boy lived through the bad beating and from that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine. He made the dream from both his mom and brother come true living the life that he all was dreamnt of.

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  70. Once upon a time there live a young man. He was know as the ''Brave man''because he wouldnt' be sacred of anything.He was married to a young lady name Veronica.They had 3 wonderfull children.They were really happy. Untill a tragic happend.
    It was early in the morning on may 15,1954. When one of their children got sick. There was no medical people that could help them in that little village were they lived at. So The poor young man went out of that village to get some help for his son. The poor child was really sick. He would of hardly breath.
    The young man was really worried about his son when he was on his way to get help.He didnt really know were was he headding to.But thanks to this old man.He got the help he nedded for his son. It was a miracle!! The old man had a horse.And he let him use it so he can get back to the village faster to were his son was.
    By the time he arrive to the little village his son was burning hot! The poor child was sweating!''I dont know what to do anymore''Veronica cried.The young man replied to her and told her that everithing was going to be allrit. He handed medicine to her so she can give it to thier son.
    The next day thier son felt much better.But he was still sick.By the end of the week he was much but much better.The young man was glad to see his son better. He felt more confident on himself.From that point on,he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  71. oce upon a time that there was this guy that fell in love with this girl that he met the guy wanted to know that girl more.but went when he went to look for her the guy couldnt find her on till he was walking back home and he girl told the guy that she doesnt want to do none with him to move on and to walk alway so the guy was up set and went inside his house and was thinking bout what the girl told him and the guy told him self that the girl was right and that he needs to move on so the guy was happy and thank ful bout the help and that one day he could find the right girl for him so the guy lived happy ever after

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  72. There was a guy who wanted to be the best soccer player in the world. so he went to go to Brazil. He did and study over there. Then he went to Mexico and apply to play soccer with them he made it. He was the best soccer player in the world. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  73. one day there was two kids that dindnt had nothing to play with and they invented a game called soccer the two friends invented it together so they both knew all the tricks and rules of the game but they were missing people one of them said so they couldnt find noone so they were playing by themselves for a few days but after a day some kids came and play with them but there was a lot of fighting so they said they were goingn to play alone and from that point on, they felt happier than they could ever imagine.

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  74. one day a person went to the store to buy a toy for his son because it was his birthday but when he get there the store was closed and he got mad and sad but another person tell him to go to the store that was next to the other and he go there and he buy the toy that he gonna give to his son, From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  75. ones upon a time there was john and a girl name ana they were together from school since they were on 4 grade they were going out for 3 years john rodriguez ana clemente .they whanted to get marry but they were to small to get marry so than his mom of ana said that they were 2 small to go out so the brock up an than a week pass an john call ana a telling her that he miss ana so they meat there selfs in the cofe than point they are going out from that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  76. There was a boy name Jack he was sad because no one like him.He always was bored he didnt know what to do.So every day he always go take a walk in the afternoon.He always wonder what he going to be when he grows up.Then one special afternoon he met. A buddy name Kiko they started playing soccer,football,and basketball.They always talk about what they going to be when they grow up.Kiko told Jack he could be a good soccer player.Jack was you are right i should be a soccer player.And you Kiko should be a great football player buddy.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.Being a good soccer player, and still talk with his buddy Kiko.

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  77. There was once this kid named Erik and his friend Carlos. They where on a trip going to Mexico. As they where going they found a dead guy on the road. They decided to stop because they knew they couldn't leave the body there. They had to report it with the police. But when Carlos was calling the police Erik went and touched the body and he got blood in his hands. He had left his DNA or his fingerprints and he made the mistake of touching the dead body. The police came and took pictures of the body and they asked Carlos and Erik if they had seen someone kill them. So they had to go to the police station to give there report but when they took out the dna of the body they found out that it was Erik supposly who killed him but it wasn't him because he made the mistake of touching the body for fun and he got put in jail until they could prove it wasn't him the one who killed the body. So one week passed and they found out it wasn't him and they let him go free so they left on the road again to Mexico and Erik said he will never touch a dead body again because he knew the consequences. He got to Mexico and went with his family and told them that he never wanted to leave from his parent’s side. From that point on, he felt happier than he could imagine. (NEVER DO A STUPID STUFF BECAUSE YOU COULD PAY FOR IT IN JAIL)

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  78. One day there was a banana who was happy living her life.She liked to listen to music and make people happy.There was a big headed kid who was angry because he couldn't stand people that were happy. He was mad all the time 24/7 and their family tried to make him happy but they only made it worse. He had a friend name flying pig and another name mummy who also agree with him at being mad because of people being happy.They said the one causing this hapiness was the banana.They made a plan to kill that sweet loving banana so the world could be angry all the time. The banana always goes to get a sunday on sunday. She eats her own famaly of bananas. So it was sunday and the banana was getting ready to eat sunday until the big headed kid and his friends were sneaking up on her and the banana turned around and smiled at them and it reflected to the sun on to them the killers were crying mad and they had emotions. They would be happy instead of mad. Now everybody was happy. From that point, he felt happier than she could imagine.

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  79. In the year 2010 was a girl named Vanessa. She was a very cool girl at her old school, until she moved to a different school. when she went to her new school she felt confident about her self. She dressed very diferent from everybody else. People made fun of her she ignored them and just went on not carring. She made a freind they had everything in commen. From that point on, she felt happier than she could ever imagine.

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  80. Once there was a girl who was in 8 grade she did all of her work and did all of her homework.She was a good student.And when she got her report card she was happy because she got a's and b's and she showed to her parents and her parents were glad about her.Then when she got out of school she was looking for a high school she wanted to go to,so when she went to a high school they acpted her and her parents were glad she got in the high school she wanted to go to.From that point on, she felt happier than she could ever imagine.

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  81. Back in ancient Egypt, there was a young boy
    named Tutakhamen, and he was next in line to
    be a King. Tutakhamen wanted peace to everyone.
    He had a pet dog,cat,iguana,monkey,crocodile,
    and snake. H liked every pet he had, especially the monkey. Tommorrow was his day
    to be crowned. At the day, he got his wish.From
    that point on,he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  82. It was a raining tuesday night and in talman there where 2 kids they were brother and sister.Theywhere alone that tuesday night because there were out for dinner so the next door neighbor was watching them but the kids didn't trust them since they were strange when they move into the neighborhood and they pretanded to not notice that.The lady from next door, her named was shelly and the children had lock the door but htey didn't know that shelly had a key to the house that their parents gave her.When she was there the kids were afraid cause they knew that she minht try to kill them since they heard a story about them.They try to what she was doing in the kitchen but she wasn''t there then check the living room and nothing.

    A few hours shelly started to the kids so they come shaking with fear.Shelly knew thatthe kids herad the story so she grad a kinife and started to get close to one of the kids but one of them hit her before she stab her brother.Shelly was counshes for a few hours so they called the police and when the parents come home and found the police holding shelly and after that they felt happier that they could image.

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  83. One time in mexico in the maya times a little boy named sancho masorca, he like a girl and her name was lupe and they wanted to be married. Both the parents said if you married which that girl you'r going to be sorry you her my but two yars later they married and the parents never no. But the girl think I nit my parents no I'm married which you if they no I'm married they going to kill me. So that same day they going to tel the parents, and the parents asept the married so From that point on, they felt happier that they could everimagine.

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  84. Habia una familia. que tenian un gato muy bonito. pero ha bia un problema .el hermano menor le gustaban. hi para su cumpleanos el pidio un perro. pero sus hermanas dijer que no porque ya tenemos un gato dijo su hermana pero insistio. su papa dijo que hiba a enconttar una solusion y el dia de el cumpleanos su papa le trajo una masco era el perro que tanto queri pero dijo que solo lo podi tener en su cuarto y fue el mas felis

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  85. there was a day dark day is was Hallooween.so thre were 8-9 friends that were most of the day together they will go to the same scool for 2-3 days their names were mirna,jessenia,yomira anais estephany escojido,evelin,dannay,jessica,and some other girls i cant remember their names ohh and vanessa so one of them decided to have a Halloween party the only condition toget into the party was to wear a costume so every one was asking each otherwhat are you wearing?bla bla bbla every one ask so the friday Halooween party and yomira was the one incharge of the party she was not noneone that she didt knew just peaple that she knew so all the friend were inside so they were dancing all of these staffs so then mirna felt kind of bad so she went to the bathroom then the light got off and she came or running all scare then yesenia felt tursty and she went to get some soda when she was putting the soda she felt like some one was on back of her then thing so the party end and everyone was HAPPY4 LIFE

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  86. he wasn't that different then every body else. he was in the soccer team but he didn't hang out with them it was only soccer for him. his dream was to join FIFA. at least that was his plans. till his dad got sick and he had to take care of him and get a job to help his mom. Wich meant that he had to give up his dream.a year later his dad died but before he died he told him that don't let my death take you down do what makes you happy if you want to play in FIFA, then do. another year passed he went to a try out for america. he got in but as a rookie. he was moving up slowly but he was completeing his dream. from that point on, he felt happier than he couldever imagine

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  87. One time there was a happy kid in a happy world then his neighboor she was The aqriest mad scientist everyone hated she was a banana
    that tried to create other bananas so they could take all over the world the she tried her experiment while the happy kid was happily playing basketball until the ball went to the bananas backyard so the kid climbed the fence and got to courious so he went in the house....The house was so ugly and smelled so bad there was bugs every where and had noo "tv" so the kid thaught it was boring so he left until he saw this door with light coming out of the bottom of it the kid thaught it was a tv so he gotr happy=D and went inside then there was no tv it was a big lab he watched all the stuff in there then "BANANA" saw him!!!!!!!!!!! the kid got scared because the banana was ugly and scary so banana got him and put him in a big bucket and the banana made a evil laugh buahaha so she said she is ready to do bananas!! the her first 1 came out wrong it was a mummy then the 2nd too came out wrong it was a flying pig then the 3rd was wrong also and was a emo girl so then the scientest got very mad until the machine told her she needs a human then the banana laughed once again buahahahahha the the boy told the other creeps and put the banana became so happy then From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  88. Hi my name is Samantha but my friends call me Sam for short.My Mom died when I was just 3 years old;she had died of swine flu.My dad was very sad but at that time I didn't know what was going on so I thougth that my mom was sleeping in very pretty box.I told my dad that I wanted to sleep in pretty box too , but all he did was turn around and looked at my mom.I didn't find out that my mom was dead until I was 10 years old.Ever seens my mom died my dad isn't him self.He might seem happy around people and around me but sometimes I wake up at night hearing him cry.I night I was going to get a glass of water,when I heard something.I folowed the noise into the hallway.I was walking and I saw my dads door opened.He was crying.At that point I wanted to do something so that he would stop crying, but i couldn't do omething at that point.He has 11 years without forgeting my mom.I still can't forget her but all I know is that she is in a better place.the next morning I woke up I wanted to ignore my dad until I came back from school.I was going to school when one of my friends came lany."hi Lany"I said"nothing much,last night i heard my mom crying," Lanys dad left his mom when he was just born,so he doesn't really know his dad that much."I heard my dad too crying"I said"Hey you know what we should do?"he asked"no what?"I asked"we should make our parents get togethr""I don't think it's our busness"I said,but like usuall Lany doesn't listen.I came home from school and I saw something that I have never seen in 11 years ,my dad was smiling.I asked what was going on and he said that he asked Lanys mom out.I was shoked but he needed to get out of the house so I didn't say anything.3 weeks had past and my dad seems happy.I was home watching TV when all of a sudden my dad told me that he asked Lanys mom to marry him.From that point on,he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  89. THE STORY TOOK PLACE IN A ABANDONED HOUSE IT WAS TWO GIRLS AND TOO BOYZ.THEY WERE ON THE SECOND FLOOR AND IT WAS HALLOWEEN IT WAS LIKE 11 PM AND THEY WERE JUST HANGING OUT UNTIL THEY HEARD A NOISE THE DOOR OPENED BUT IT WAS THE WIND SO ONE OF THE BOYS WENT DOWN STAIRS AND SOME ONE GRAVED HIM an killed him with a knife so the other kids upstairs went down stairs an seen blood they got scare so they kalld the police and they found the body in the bathroom.since that they that house is hunted an the freinds felt bad because they mADE HIM GO IN THE HOUSE WHEN HE DIDNT WANT TO.AN THE PARENTZ ARE SAD SO FROM THAT OINT ON THE FREINDS FELT BETTER THAT HE KANT EVEN IMAGINE..

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  90. Once there was a dragon who was furious because he hasn't gone to bed. Every time there had to be a party that he was never invited to.
    One day he went up to the people that made the party and told them to be quiet so he could sleep. But they said NO. Then the dragon became more furious because he still couldn't sleep.
    So he went to his friends house to get some sleep but his friend had an even louder party. He became more frustruated because his own friend didn't invite him to a party.
    finally dragon had enough and he trough he is own party and he invited all his friends. when they all left he finally got to bed and went to sleep.From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine

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  91. It was Jorge's Birthbay and he felt happy. He woke up, but nobody was there. He did'nt care it was morning so he ate his breakfest and walked to school.

    Jorge reminded his friends yesterday that his birthday was coming up. He thought he was gonna be getting birthday punches and be talked to a lot, but everyone ignored him. His friends did'nt even talked to him that much.

    Jorge felt that nobody cared about him. He was walking home after school. He took out his key and open the door. When all of a asudden the lights durned on. Everybody screamed "SURPRISE". It was Jorges friends and family members. There was cake, gifts, and games. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  92. The room was quiet. The grandfather was sitting in his old brown chair, his grandson was sitting on the floor trying very hard to ignore his grandfather. His grandfather was always telling him about right and wrong. Telling him to never hang out with the wrong crowd but he never paid any attention. his grandfather is old, he does not know what its like to be a teenager is what he thought. Did he love his grandfather? I dont know, he never was happy since he lost his parents,If he did he never showed it. The grandson was so fed up with his grandfather going on and on that he got up and said
    "shut up already!" and walked away. The grandfather was left there thinking what he did wrong.
    The next day when the grandson came home from school he found a ambulence parked up front and they were taking his grandfather. He ran up to see what happened. His grandfather had a heartattack and was slowly recovering. When he went next to his grandfather his grandfather gave him a note and said i love you. After they took the grandfather away the boy went in his house and read the letter. It said:

    Dear grandson,

    I know I'm getting old, and i wont always be there with you. I tell you all these things because i love you and I'm not going to be here forever. You have always made me proud but I'm afraid you might change one day. I believe you will grow up to be a wonderful man like your father. Please make me proud.

    -Your grandfather


    that was all the letter said. The boy was sad because he didnt know if he was going to see his grandfather again, but his grandfather loved him and he loved his grandfather. The boy knew he would always be with him no matter what. From that point on, he left happier then he could ever imagine.

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  93. Once upon a time there were two best friends. They knew eeach other for a couple of years one of them named Isabella dint really like her dad.She just thought that he diDn't love her ince he didn't show love to her.The other ones name was Pamela Sh hough t5hat maybe Isabella 's dad was just not a very loveble person.I as Pamela decisde tto tell Isaella to talk to her dad abot how she feels.She did talk to her dad and he apoligeze it turn out he never meant for her to think that he didnt love her.S they boh ended out laughing abut the story.From that point on, they felt happier than they cud ever imaged! =]

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  94. At a lonely place where people would shoplift and a recent shoplifter that would always shoplift all over the country. His name was known as the "unknown" because they said they had never seen him get caught on tape shoplifting but people had seen him. He always shoplift to feel better about him self even tough he knows its bad to. Just by looking at his face you could tell that hes lonely, afraid,and dissapointed.

    At the local store where everybody goes. He has finnaly got caught shoplifting and they had put him to jail for shoplifting some drugs.
    He was put to jail for 10 years.Once years had passed he has seemed to realize what a bad thing he has done just to make himself happy,b ut he hasent know that he was making it worse.

    When the years had passed, and he finnaly got out of jail. He decided to go to counseling because he was going crazy, and turning into a psycho. The lady told him to name the bad things he has done, and the good things he had done, and read it outloud. So he could know that somebody actually does care about him and dosent want him to go crazy. After 4 years hap passed and he has still gone to counseling he had become more sure of himself. He had stopped shoplifting and had finnaly somebody to count on. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  95. yo once there was this dragon that was mad at this vampire. That was mad a bigfoot. That was mad at frankeatien. That was mad of the mummy. That was mad at the werewolve.

    So they met up in time square,new york. And then all of them started boxing it out. Crazy style they were throwing cars at eachother and there were fires everywere. But none of them gave up.

    It was still a tie and none of them were tired. Then the 5-o came. Then the swat teem came. Then the f.b.i came. Then the army came. Then the marines came. Then g-i joe came.

    So now all the monsters and stuff teamded up to fight with the cops.When the city was half destroyed you just see Godzilla coming outa no were.Godzilla totaly came and owned them all and killed new new york.

    He was done with china.Now u.s.a. Next stop chicago.moo-hahaha godzilla laughed. From that point on,he felt hapier than he could ever imagine.

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  96. So one day I walking down the street then seen my friends Sally and Norma. I asked them where they were going and they said to Chicago Ridge. They ask if I wanted to go and I said sure yeahh that would be fun I guess.
    We were already there and we were walking around then all of a sudden we didnt see anybody it was empty. We didnt know what was going on and we thought everybody is just at a store or something or just nobodys here. So we kept walking, then we see some guy walking towards us. He didnt look nice. He had something on his hand. So he was already infront of us and we were scared. He grabbed Sally by the hair and ran with her by her hair. Me and Norma catched them and I grabbed Sally and we ran to the bathrooms. He couldnt find us. Then Norma made a noise because she dropped her cell phone and he was right there. Me and Sally grabbed him and let Norma hit him. She throw the toilet paper at him. And he fell on the floor. We kept hitting them until we finally got tired. Then we walked out of the mall like normal people. From that point on, we felt happier than we could ever imagine.

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  97. One day my friend ,my brother,and me we were at hamlin n 56 for halloween.We had saw a hunted house but it wasnt the owner made it look like a hunted howz n it looked like they realy worked on it hard.Zo then we had planned for goin in but they didnt want to i convinced them so then i convinced them n we went.it looked like scary like their waz like peopel that really look like really scary person.Zo then we went inside to see if it waz scary then we went all around the house but inside n it waz really scary cuz it sound it lik someone waz killed cuz it souned like some girl screeming.Zo then when we came out we heard some girl yieling help becuse she got lost inside the house because the house was really big. Zo then one of ma boyz planed to go find her inside .So then he went to go look for her and then like not even 15 min. he found her n she came out happy n her parent was really happy becuase one of ma boyz went inside to go look for her then the next day from that point one,she felt happier then she could ever imagine!

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  98. Thier once was a kid,living la vida loca as a 17 year old . He had everything he waned but he like playing this video game that had bad influence(like drugs,jacking cars, and killing poeple). So he wanted to try it out.
    One friday after he lost it. He tried to jack this moving car but he failed he tried hot wiring this car but the car owner catched him. He knew where to get a gun. But he thought and decieded not to now. The next day he went to his friends house and they got high and smoked. After that day cops went to his house because of the jacking the cars. Then the officer told him he had a charge for battery. He went to jail for some time
    Seven years later he got out hoping that everyone would support him in any way. He tried to reconstruct his life again. He found a girl of his dreams. He got a job as a trucker machanic he got a lot of money from working thier. He recently just started his own family now........from that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  99. One day in halloween my cousins and me were walking down this street. The lights from the street were out. So you couldnt see anybody. So we passed this haunted house. Then I told my cousins if they wanted to go inside and look around. We were about to go in the house but then one of my cousins was scared and didnt wanted to go in the house but then we here this noise when we were about to enter the house. My other cousin and I were like what was that then we heard this girl scream so we left. When we got home my cousin,from that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  100. One day my famly came to live in this city. It was called the Blue City. They called it Blue City, Because everyone was upsit or sad, and mad.
    There was a man that killed anyone that lift the house at 8:30, Right on the dot. The boys name was John. He did'nt like this boy at his school. The other boy would bit him. The other boy name was Peter.
    One day came Peter did something really mean to John. John got very mad of what Peter was doing to him. So John waited for peter to come out of school. John murder Peter. From that point on,he felt happier then he could imagine.

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  101. There was a man that was a murderer. He killed his wife and two sons. his wifes name Jenny and his two sons freddy and tom. In Kelly High school Agust 1, 2000. Armando kills his family and he had been planning to kill them five days before the murderer.

    The he was thinking that he haden killed his famyly From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.
    family, know he could be at Las Vegas and be with as many woman as he could be.

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  102. Once there was a very poor boy that lived two blocks away from a selfish rich kid.The poor kid always has two pass thru the rich kids house 2 go 2 school.He always said that he really wants a similer life like that. Then 1 day while the poor kid was walking thru the rich kids house he found 10 dollers on the street.He took the 10 dollers 2 his mom and told her "What should I do with the 10 dollers?"She told him that she is going 2 buy 2 lottery tickets.1 is her #.The other 1 is the poor kids #.The lottery #'s came and the poor kids moms was close but she was out.So then the poor kids look at the # and they were all similler and they just started screaming!!!Later that day he found out that he won 37 million dollers!!!!So they bought everyhting they needed like cloth,house,car,food,and other things.Later he said that "dreams do come true onley if you belive in youre slef".From that point on,he felt happier then he could ever imagine.

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  103. As I was walking home i didn't know what was coming. As i walked into my house i saw my family sobbing, exept my brother who wasnt there.
    "whats wrong" i asked
    "your brother, hes held hostage!" my mother replied
    "what!!!" i screamed
    "hes been held hostage and they want $50,000 dollars for him" my dad said crying
    I went up to his room, I didnt see him
    i started crying in his bed and blamed god

    As the 2 years passed I went on running in the park still thinking of my brother, and that he would most likely be next to me running with me. As i ran I saw a car was following me i di cided to runfaster but another car stopped me and two guys got me by my arm punched me in the eye and dragged me in to the car.

    as i waited, i was terrified about thinking what they will do to me. when they took me out of the car they took me to a house and sat mew in a chair and left. i noticed my brother was next to me, i called him if he was still alive. he woke up and looked at me in shock.
    "brother!!!" he said
    "hey how are you!!!" i said

    we talked and talked about what had happened to him. then i finhally noticed the robbers forgot to tie my hands so i freed my brother. we got out the window, ran to our house. we called the cops and finally the poice caught them, and our family was soo happy we celebrated. From that point on, our family felt happier tan they could imagine

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  104. "Hello little children im gonna get you"said the creepy lady dressed as a witch.Her name happens to be Selena.Selena always waited for haloween to come.Little kids gave her the nickname "psyco selena".She was so evil she never let kids go!....
    Then haloween came kids dressed up and went trick or treating.They all knew that spooky house of Selena.She'll always try to blend in by dressing up gher self.She was just a lonely crazy lady.She needed company.But no one liked her at all.
    Finally a doorbell was ringing.She was like it couldnt be no one comes to my little house.A kid was at the door asking for some candy and since that was the first kid that asked for some candy she was happy.Selena when in her house and came back with a bowl of candy.From that point on, she felt happier than she could ever imagine.

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  105. There was once a guy named daniel he live in a big house. Daniel live verry happy with his new house but all the time when he went to sleep he will hear noices. Not just when he go to sleep also when it was dark allready the noices begun to start. He like it to live there tho but thoes scary freaky noices didnt let him be that happy. One thing that daniel didnt know was that one of his sister's that live there,died there. So it was a hunted house but he didnt knew that.

    It was dark allready and daniel was taking a shower while he heard some weird noices coming out of the sink. Daniel when and look inside the sink to see what was it and all he hear ws noices but he didnt know what was it tho. it wa stime tghat daniel went to sleep so he did he went to sleep but as he was going to sleep he remeber that everytime he go to sleep he hears noises but not this time.

    It was an early morning when daniel found a map and a bunch of papers from the house as he ws reading them he found out that this was his sister house and that it was hunted. He desided to move from house so he started packing but he though that who ever moved there would be hunted to so he desided that he was gonna break the house.

    Two days past and as he said that he was going to break the house so that nobody would go and live there, well he break the house and he move. From that point on,he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  106. There once was a boy named billy and he met this girl but she didnt tell billy her name they were neighbors to each other. Billy came outside and startded playing soccer. He was playing with his little brother and by accident her brother kicked the ball and broke a window at the girls house. Then the girl came out and starded screaming at billy. then after that athey didnt talk to each other the next week billy went to the girls house and appoligized and said it was his little brothers fault and he was so sorry. The girl said it was ok. tey were best friends again and walked to school together.After school they did their homework and then went to the park to walk and paly soccer or other sports but the point is they were happy again. when billy went to appologize.From that point on, they felt happier than they could ever imagine.

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  107. There was once this witch called Monica. She was really mean to little kids that passed thrue her house everyday, and little kids called her "crazy monica". She really hated children and even had one off her own but she killed him. She always waited for halloween because it was the only day that she could really be herselff and dress up wit her favorite outfit. Which happened to be a witch costume.

    Finally halloween came and she was very excited about it. She couldn't wait for the day to go dark so she could go outside and do what she's best at which is scaring little kids. she would scream at them when they passed by or even pushed them sometimes! She was not just crazy but she was a bully!

    As the day went on she scared little kids and had fun. But then there came a point in where no body was even passin thrue her house no more and she got bored of being outside by herself so she just went inside and watched tv for the rest of the night.

    Next year came and again she was waiting for halloween to come. She was anxious and excited and hoped itt wouldn't turn out like last year. Then she got a call from her mom that lived in another state. Her mom told her about how her dad had been really sick and had the flu. Crazy monica had to take a plane immediatly and go to Wyoming to see her dad.

    Crazy monica left and never came back. She decided to live with her mom that was crazy just like her so she wouldn't be on her own.
    From that point on,the children were happier than they could ever imagine, &they had a wonderful halloween!

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  108. There once was a boy named Jerry. He has a little sister and a little brother named Elizabeth and Paul. He hated them because they would get all the attention. Until one day Jerry and his friends were going to a hallowen party with out his little brother or sisters. Jerry was so delighted to be only with his friends. He stayed there for a while until his parents called him to come home early to take care of his brother and sister. Jerry walked home with frustration, anger. Once he got home Elizabeth and Paul were in the living room playing with their toys. He wasn't planing on taking care of Elizabeth or Paul, so he went up to his room and lock himself in there. He started to hear music but then he heard a big thud down stair. He ran all the way downstairs and saw that the door was opened. When Jerry called out for Elizabeth and Paul he could hear nothing. He was shaking all of a sudden fromm fear that they had taken his sister and his brother. He went outside all wandered all over his block but couldn't see them. He went back home and layed on his couch. But he hadn't even bothered to look inside the house. Jerry was laying there when all of sudden elizabeth and Paul come running down thier stairs. Jerry was so releived to have found his brother and sister. After Jerry had found them he called his parents and his parent called the police. Everything turned out okay the cops got the guys and he was no longer going to deny his little brother and sister.Jerry couldn't imagine not having them, he would be so miserable and so alone. He was also happy that they were okay and nothing had happened to them. Jerry couldn't imagine not ever liking Elizabeth or Paul. From that point on, he felt happier than he could ever imagine.

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  109. In a small village called Roses was a murder. It happened on the after noon when the 14 year-old girl was murder. Nobody knew why this had happened to a sweet girl and her name was Cindy. But everybody in the neighborhood called her Sunshine. Before in that village it semmed so peaceful and friendly. But when the people found out that someone was murder they were in shocked.

    Didn't understand how this could had happened to Cindy. Who could have done this to her everybody in the neighborhood were suspects at that time. Once the police found some clues 5 people were the suspects they were Erick,Danny,John,Maria,and Jessica. They were suspects because they were all with her in the day of the murder.

    Well when the police was ready to ask question to Erick. He confesed that he killed Cindy because he thought that she was cheating on him. When the town found out that it was Erick they cried because finally the police caught the murderer. And had tears of joy so Cindy could rest in peace. From that point on, the vilage was more careful of the people that lived there.

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  110. Finally the baby has been born. The parents had thought that something would go wrong with the baby. "What a releife" the parents had both screamed with happines but at the same time hoping that the child would grow up to be succesfull, and happy.

    After a couple of weeks later they had noticed that the baby wasn't right. The baby would't even cry, the baby enjoyed seeing scary movies because people get killed and the baby found that real amusing. The parents were both worried about him. He would mostly only want to watch blood, and heads that were cut off.

    5 years had passed. His parents had both died in a car accident but that's what everybody had thought. He didn't care if that they were gone for life. It's time for him to go to school for the first time.

    He had made 2 new friends, and had envited them to a hallowing party at his house. The house was so realistic the cut off heads looked real, and it smelled real weird. his friends were frighten and wanted to get out of there but they couldn's because the door was locked.

    After they were locked they both decided to explore the house. After 2 hours they had realized that the heads were real. Then one friend was gone, he was so terrified. Then he was gone.They both screamed but nobody was there.

    After a couple of hours the kid let them go. "Now that was scary wasn't it" the kid said with a little giggle in his voice.

    1 year later everybody went to his house for a hallowing party , but he charged $2 for them to go inside.

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  111. There once was a girl that was afraid of almost everything, She was only eight but all the other kids her age thought she was a scardey cat beause they thought that all the things she was scared of were silly. Everything changed for that little girl, one day when she got to school she decided to talk back to all the kids that made fun of her, she evrn stuck a girl in the face [haha.!]. All the kids started talking behind her back saying that she was evil and a bully that all they were doing was messing around with her. But the girl thought that it was mean even if they were just messing around with her so at the end she apolagized to everyone and all the other kids apolagized too for beeing jerks to the her =). From that point on, she felt happier than she could ever imagine.

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  112. In a camp called Water Lake.Water There was a man who lived there. Every time people went to camp there he came out.Before it was peaceful. Then, he started to kill.
    Then, one day 4 girls went out to camp. Their names were: Cynthia, Rebecca, Cindy and Gloria. That day Rebecca went to check out the camp. The man saw her so, he graved a knife and stabbed her. He drag her body inside a little cabin.
    Cynthia, Cindy and Gloria were so worried about Rebecca . Gloria and Cindy went to find her. Cynthia stayed back to take care of the place where they camped.The man saw the Cynthiaand he saw him so she started to run. She started screaming so hard. Gloria and Cindy heard her.So they ran back.
    When they ran back she was gone!They were scared.So, they went to look for her. While they were walking they could hear noises or steps. Then, They look back and he killed them both. And that's the story abou camp Water Lake...

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