Thursday, October 15, 2009

Storytelling Using Prepositions

Using as many words as you can from your preposition list, continue writing the following story:



Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before.



I have given you the first line to your story; you need to continue it. Be sure that you have all of the elements of plot (exposition, rising action, a climax, and falling action). Also, try one of the endings that we discussed in class (if we haven't gotten to that in your class, don't worry).

121 comments:

  1. Once upon a time i went to camp wit my family and ma dads family.it was kind of straight cuz all ma cuzins were their.okay so when we had like everything ready ma dad n ma uncles started to drink inside the water n when they were finsh wit their bottles they had thwoed all the bottles inside the water then the police came sayin tha the police had saw them throw the bottles inside the water.zo then all ma uncles were lik drunk n ma dad was reallly drunk n the polcie tld them to give them their id so he could check their record n they didnt so he wz goibto take they to jail so then they gave the id to the polcie theychecked them n then they let them go.then the next day we were getting ready to leave zo then like a half hour ago we left n then like 3 hour of ma dad driving we had got home and then we got home n slept so tha ma story

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  2. ONCE UPON A TIME I WOKE UP IN A PLACE IV NEVER BEEN BEFORE.I WAS IN A HOUSE.FIRST I CHECKED IF THERE WAS ANYONER INSIDE. BUT THERE WASNT.THEN I WENT OUT THRE THE FRONT DOOR.NEXT I WAS IN THE PORCH OUT IN THE FRONT I LOOKED OUTSIDE IT LOOKED FAMILIER. I COULNT REMBER ANYTHING.AFTER I LOOKED TO THE RIGHT AND I SAW HOUSE LOOKED TO THE SKY I WAS NOT DARK.SO THEN I LOOKED TO THE LEFT AND THERE WAS MY HOUSE. FINALY I WENT INTO MY HOUSE AND ATE SOME SOME PIZZA ROLLS.THEN IWENT TO MY COMPUTER AND CONTINUED MY NORMAL DAY.

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  3. Once upon a time, i woke up in place i never been before.I was scared because i didnt know were i was.Also I was surprised because their were so many new things i had never seen before.Everything was so dark i couldnt see where i was walking.
    All of a sudden i saw this bright like and i followed that light and it was a door. so i opened that door and i found out it was all a dream.

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  4. Once upon a time, i woke up in a place i've never been before. I was very scared.I went to the front of the house no one was there.Then i was looking for my home.But i wanted to see if i can fine my friends and family.
    But i seen that no one was around.After that i seen a house. It looked like someone was inside.So i went to see if they were inside.I was very scared to look.
    i went inside there were three rooms.I looked all over the house.There was no sign of anyone in the house.I looked outside in the tree house.No sign there either.
    I gave up so i went home and to sleep. i woke up in my house and seen i was home again, With the my family and friends.

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  5. Once upon a time,i woke up in a place i've never been before.It was like a dream to me i couldnt belive i was here,it was a huge,nica place.There wasent alot peoeple there were only the people who though of it.So as i walk i saw manny increrable things.the people were verry happy there it was like if you were in some magic land or something.when i got to see everything and now everything i strarted to talk to some people that were there and they told me that every time that they thimk of that place they appear there just like they wanted.

    That magic land was verry wonderful it got a bunch of stuffs such as toys,xandies and alot more things.tyhe people that allways dream of that like to go there all the time.all the stuffs that were there were given free to the people that wanted them.That magic land was so asome.

    After people and people go they realyse something they didnt wanted people to visit or go there no more because it was getting verry verry crouded because people that allready knew that place were going to tell the other people so then the other people were thinking of that magic land to and they get there.So they decided to cancel that magic land.all the people were verry verry sad but there was no fix.

    One kid though of an idea to save the magic land so they started working on it and when it was done they show it to the ownern and the owner went to see and he liked it so thgey talk about it and they decided that they werent going to close that magic land no more.So all the people were happy..=)

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  6. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. It was a game GTA my mom got kill by my frend .
    I got a call that my mom was killed. On the way home the cop puled us over on a taxi i had two hunderd an fity dollars and the cop toke it a way now I,m without money. I,m with they've tolled me all about it.
    As time has pased I knew how killed he I was big smoke my frend killed her when i knew I woke up and is was all a gream

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  7. Once upon a time i woke up in a place i never seen before. I was nervous. I didnt know what to. I never seen this place i thought and thought to see if i could remember where i was, but nothing came to my mind. It was so cold in this place no one to be found. Then i seen a door.
    I was so happy I was walking to it but it seemed so close but I just couldnt get to it. Finally I was there. I held the door knob, moved it so I could open the door but it was hard. I was doing everything to open it but I couldnt finally I gave up. I fell to the floor and all i remembered was falling asleep.
    When I woke up I tried to open the door again. And this time it opened. I walked outside and seen people. People i never seen before. I tried asking them where I was but nobody talked in english. I walked around, but there was a girl beside me. I got scared I didnt know her. I asked her for a name, but no answer all I got was a stare. I was getting this feeling like if I was here before but I just couldnt rememeber. It was like a town here, surrounded by mountains and water. There wasnt even boats to leave that island. I started going crazy. A man from a store asked me whats wrong I told him I dindt know where i was and he walked me to a boat and told me where I was in the boat and I came back home. But then I woke up. It was all a dream...

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  8. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before.IT was late at night I was in the streets i was just using my bike as usual, but something was ackward about my bike. As i got in it i saw dirt i could seen a little mount of dirt. I was seening curvers and a trail u can follow.

    As i saw the court i could seen my bike better now becasue of the lights. So i was seeing my bike it wasnt a mountain bike anymore it aws a dirt bike. Then everything made sense now i have a dirt bike i saw a starting line and i went for it.

    When i was right in the starting line i was tones of poeple saying my name ,I even nocited opponents. "It a race" i said. They started the count down. Then all the racers went even me. Were in the third lap the hardest curve someone stuck me my back wheel.

    As i feel i saw people getting up making a "AWWW" noice but the bad one. Then i was getting up then the unexpected happened another racer stuck me. I was unconstious i didnt know where i was. Lucky for me it didnt hit that hard and because of my helmet. After i got up and finshed the race. And i just walk with the sun.

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  9. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. It was dark, cold, and hard to see. I starded walking around with my hands infront of me guiding me.

    Then I saw a cabin, smoke was coming out of it so I knew there was someone there. I walked up to it and knocked on the door. It was open. I when inside and saw a man reading a newspaper.

    The man saw me and greeted me. He said how was I, I said ok. He said why was I here, I said I dont know. He said If I was cold, I said yes. He handed me a hat, it was a red checkered hat. He brought me hot chocolate and we started talking.

    We started laughting talking about stuff, he said he was a lumberjack, and that he build this house all by himself. But after a while
    he said if I wanted to go home. I said yes he came up to me and said, "Just open your eyes."

    The next thing I knew I was on my bed. With the sheets on me and my pillow behind my head. I wondered it was just a dream. I got up and went downstair for breakfest. When I past the kitchen mirror I saw something. It was a red checkered hat.

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  10. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. That place was my home. As I walked throught my new passage that has arrived I see a bright light. I had keeped on walking to the light but it felt as if I were going nowhere.

    This light it felt warm, and I just needed it. Once I had finally gotten to the light there I was, a new born baby. I had tears in my eyes for no reason at all. I look around, and see a a new person that had been added to my life. My mom.

    After a few weeks later I had gained the energy that I needed to walk. It felt incredible being able to walk. I felt like I was the strongest person alive. Once I saw other people run I felt as if I were dissapointed at myself. I was nowhere near as fast as them.

    Once I had fallen to the ground there I was in my bed. It was dark and I realize that I was grown up, and I was able to run. It was all a big dream, I couldn't beleive it. That had felt so real.

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  11. Once upon a time I woke up in a place I've never been before.I didnt know what to do when I woke up.It was a very strange place.I sopposed it was an apartment building.I went out the door to see what was out side and i saw that there was a WAL-MART,K-MART,SAMS CLUB,PIZZA HOT,GAME STOP,n BURGER KING. So i was really hungry so I went to BURGER KING.Thier were people that I never ever seen before.Then when I left outside these kids were just hitting thier own parents.I was going to stop it but I just left because I didnt want to get between there argument. So then from that point on I was really scared.So I really tried to find my way home.It took me two days to find my way back home.But nobody was outside so I thought I was alone and I found out I WAS ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  12. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place i've never seen before. It's was so weird ...I had never seen anything like this before! I wonder why i was there.Everything was so lonely!!
    I didn't really know what do do.. so i9 pinch my self. To check if i was still alsleep, but i wasn't because the pinch hurt.At first, i was kind of scarer. Why Because everything i touch was jelletin.
    This was pretty freaky at the time where i though noboby was there.Someone out of the blue came. It's was this weird lady.She was scary but when she ask me anything i stood quited.Iwas creep out,but i was near a door....I was thinking of taking off or run and hide under soething. Afterwards i actully found out she was a very nice women and after helping me she dissaper.
    I couldn't wait till this was over.Then i though about the door i had seen i mean i hadn't open it ,so what can possibly be in there?I went back and at first the door wouldn't open.Then pull it really hard and it open.between the door and the hall was a very weird puddle of water but i couldn't step on it.So i had to put a long piece of wood that would reach across the hall.So I could pass. I did!! I was very intersted to find out wahat was there.So i walked and walked till i saw the lady .The same one that scarer me but actully help me!She call me toward her.I wasn't scared anymore.. so I went.She told me i had pass the quest.
    I feel asleep and when i woke up..i was back at home.I never hear about that lady again..jet I remember the whole story like it happen yesterday!

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  13. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before.I was shocked, that this old lady was staring at me with her black cat she had on her right hand. It was as if i was in a dream it looked like the past.
    Near the three was two little girls playing with theyre dolls, and talking to eachother. I remember this day i was 3 and the other little girl has passed away. She was my best friend her name was cindy she was 4 years old,1 year older than me. We would always play near that tree that was were we hang around all the time, and now its dead.
    I wonder why i woke up on the past again, i know this happened, but i think i need to find out what i need to fix. I went inside this abandoned old house with spider webs flying everywhere.It was a nightmare. Then, i went to my friends room that passed away, and i saw this picture of a lady and a men they looked familiar as if i had seen them from somewhere, and in the back i saw that she had written theyre names on the back theyre names where sarah, and mike then i remember that picture they were my parents holding a baby on theyre arms. Theyre fist child, then i was shocked to find out that they are our parents, but she was living at a foster house.

    I as on top of the abandoned house and was looking at the picture, and wondering why did my parents put mi sister at a foster home, then while i was thinking i found another picture,and it was my parents again, they were really young, and i tough maybe thats why. I was looing underneath and fell of the roof. Then,i wake up to reality and found myself back in bed.

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  14. once upon a time i waz camping with my freinds in indiana dunes an it was like 11:30pm an i was wit ma girlfreind walking in the woods with out a flash light an it was dark so we all of a sudden we were lost big time we dint no how to get back to are freinds so we had talki walkies but i fofgot were i had it so then i had it in my pocket lol so i kalld to the talki walki an they said to meet us up in the lake and we did met an when we got their we started laughing lol

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  15. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. It was a strange world. The sky was the ground and the ground was the sky. Also the sun was the moon and the moon was the sun.
    The first thing i did was punch my self to see if it was a dream it hurt but it wasn't a dream. All of a sudden little green dudes came out and started to transform into robots. But right after they transformed theyre owner wonka willie came and transformed too.
    The next thing that happened was chocolate fudge started raining from the ground it was so cool.So the little green dudes started to fight with wonka willie. They fought for hours and hoursand. wonka willie commited suicide after he beet the little green dudes.
    Right after that happened a strange bell rung and i woke up it was all just a dream.

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  16. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before.I was inside a house that I had never been in. I was shocked and realized that in front of me was a window. And I could see that I wasn't in Chicago anymore. I headed towards the door that stood in front of me. I opened the door carefuly.

    Nobody was there it was so lonely. So I just walked out the front door.And as soon as I did that I was back at home. My mom woke me up and told me that i was having a really bad dream.

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  17. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. It was really strange. He knew he had never been there before. But it seem familiar. He was in this town but it was like no one was there that he was the only one there. Everything around me was really old. But he decided to go and look for people or anything that could tell me he wasn't alone. He looked inside houses and through the outside of buildings. It was kind of abboned because there was nobody there. But then somebody comes out of nowhere. He told them that he was lost but the person didnt understand. So he decided to find a way to communicate with that person , they lived together for a while.

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  18. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. I was sitting on a cold hard floor. The place I was in was not so bright. It was a room but for some reason there was no door. Only one window. There seemed to be nothing else in the room. I slowly got up, watching my movments careful not to make a sound, and walked across the floor and made my way to the only way out.


    I stepped out into the blazing sun. It took awhile to get used to the hot weather.
    In the distance you could hear carts, people talking. A slowly walked towards the sounds.
    I came to a holt when i saw children being pulled away from there parents and thrown into large carts. I stepped near the building making no sound. As the cart continued on its way I saw the sobbing mother go back into her little cottage. I held in my breath and in front of the door and knocked.


    The door opened to show a young woman. Her eyes were puffy from the crying. Her voice quivered as she spoke. "Who are you?" the woman asked I said my name and explained I needed to know some things. She gave me a warm smile and opened the door so i may go in. Her house was warm and just beautiful. It was cozy. There was a few couches near the fire place with tea on the table and a few wooden toys laying on the floor. I asked where what this place was named. She said it is called the city that never was. She explained that the king wanted many slaves to work for him at the castle. The children or parets didnt have a choice. She told me that if there was a queen that she could over rule the king and she would be in charge. ofcourse there were some things you would have to do ,as in be in a battle, before you became the queen. She told me no one has tryed because they are too scared. I wanted to see this castle. She told me where it was so she told me the way and i was of.

    The castle was beautiful. Once a saw the man everything changed. The king was very rude. " Tou think you will be queen?"
    I breathed in and with all the courage I had I said "I am here to be queen and Im ready for the test." I said knowing I would be here for ever.

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  19. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never seen before. I was very confused because I didnt know where I was at. Then I realized that I was not in Chicago, but I didnt know where I was at. So, I went to look around but there was nothing familiar where I was at. Suddenly I saw a woman pop out of no where, she looked very confused and kind of scared. She got closer and asked where we were at I told her I didnt know, so im guessing that the same thing that was happening to me was happening to her. We started talking, and then more and more people started coming.[it was weird]

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  20. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before.I was scared and very confused because instead of being at home i was underneath a tree.I didnt expect to wake up in this tree.
    Until I could figure this out I started to look around to see if this place I was in if there was people there with me or if I was alone.Before I did that I went to get some water cause I was thristy.
    After that I seen something on top of a tree.I when up the tree to find nothing but a little animal there.I came down from that tree very quickly.So here I am im this strage place with no one but me and a few animals and nothing to eat.Yea i was kind of scared but mostly confused.
    I just stood there beneath the tree just wondering if some one is looking for me.I was about to fall asleep when I noticed something really scary that shock me so I screamed and thats when....
    I really actually woke up.So all this was a dream.None of this really happend it was a nihgtmare.Not really but a strange dream.

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  21. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. The place was dark I could bearly see anything and then I saw light ahead. I started to run towards it, when I got there I saw trees that surrounded me. I looked around but yet I couldn't see anything but trees. i started to walk wondering whjat i was doing here. Looked around and saw broken braches, rocks, and trees below me. I started to walk for about an hour or so and then i saw a boat. Ran towards it, i got into the boat.
    "Are you looking for something" a boy asked. He was about my age, 13.He had brown hair and also brown eyes that shown in the sun
    " Yeah, i don't were i'm at" I replied
    "i'll get you home" he said. I got on to the boat with him. it was a long journey back but at least i wil get home! THE END

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  22. Once upon a time, i woke up in a place i've never been before. I was scared. I was in a forest. Then, i started walking. When i saw a bear.
    I started running. I was screaming. Behind me the bear was chasing me. By then, i lost him. I saw a house.
    It was rainning by then.Then, a men and women opened the door. I went inside and sat down, all wet. They look behind me to see what was chasing me. On top of that they were asking alot of questions. It turns out that they're killers.=/

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  23. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. I was scared and confused because I didn't know were i was at. At first I started to look and walk around to see if there were other people around me or if i was alone, in a place i didn't know of.

    As i walked around i noticed there was only weird looking animals. They were scary and so i always ran away from them. I just wished it was all a dream. I didn't wanna be alone in a scary place with scary animals!

    After a while I got used to birds and other weird lookin animals. But there was this big snake coming towards me. I thought it was going to bite me and i could die. I walked away from it thinking that it would go another way.....bu then it started following me. The snake had me running around a muddy path between trees. Then the snake catched up to me and before it could bite mee....I woke up!

    I knew and found our it was all a dream so i was relieved(:

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  24. Once upon a time,I woke up in place that ive never been before. This place was so creepy and dark i was walking thru the halls and i felt so scared and lonely. i tought thought thati hadnt been there but i had i was just remebering my past.
    i saw this bright light that hit my face and that was what leaded me out of that place. When I got out of that creepy place I walked around and all I saw was nothing I had seen before. So I saw a women that was so creepy but yet she was real nice. I ask her which way I should go. She told me and we walked of together to a bus stop.When I got home it did not even look like my house It was a nasty builduing with broken wimdows. I ask the nighboors that what had happend to my house they said that it had gotten burn and that the family in there had died.I was crying and I could not handle it. I ran crying oput loud people looked at me like if i was crazy,but they had no idea about what I was going trought. So I saw gun and killed myself.

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  25. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before.It looked like I went back to the past. I could tell because I saw Hitler the main Nazi. It was cool exept he though I was Jewish. I was wearing a cap he probably thogh it was one of those Jewish hats that they wear.I tried to tell him I was'nt Jewish and that I was from 50 years in the future.

    Then I tried to run away I went across the room so fast that before you new it I was already out.I started to run then I saw a really bright light it turns out I fell asleep in my history class. The weird thing is that while I was asleep they were learning about Hitler!

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  26. Once upon a time i woke up in a place iv'e never been before. It was amazing it was a huge place and I asked a guy with his face painted like Gene Simmons where was I and he said "kiss land!!!". i thought at first it was really weird but than i saw a bunch of people with their face painted like the rockband kiss but than i thought it was awesome !!! Above me their was a huge tv and i guy near me said "wats wrong with you, you should be partying". I starting jumping and screaming, it was so awesome i was their for like 2 months i was so tired i didnt sleep for 3 weeks. i always thought this would be awesome but now that im leaving it, its pretty crazy and i wishe everything was back to normal and all of the sudden kiss appeared infront of me. I was so surprised and Gene Simmons told me "you see its hard to rock everyday". he continued " just because you see us rocking it doesent you haave to two". I understan wat he was saying and learn a lesson. And all of the sudden red sprkling glass slippers appeared on feet and Gene stuck tounge and i said "come on i cant wear those!". But i did and i said ni want to go home three times i felt some weird. I woke up and went to the bathroom and face was painted like Gene Simmons and i had glass slippers i came out of the room and came out of the closet and i was in kiss land !!! noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  27. Once upon a time, i woke up in a place I`ve never been befor. This place was amazing there were buildings above houses and there were all around and underneth a regular house and if you went inside whatever house it was you would find a weard woman coocking this gloowing food withch was realy weard so I asked
    "What are you making"
    she posed for a second then the woman was cleanig seting up the table and all befor I asked my next question. She sain "its gloowie"
    "whats that" i asked as i was taking on the phone and try not to look sick while i saw the food.
    "well try it" as she gave me a big spoon full and i spit is out because i vfelt it moving in my mouth.
    "what is that thing made of" as i was trying not to thruw-up as she fliped a pan-cake befor she told me what it was.
    "just your usual milk, sugar, eggs, and green slugs" she sudenly hade a change of sound to her voice she sounded like my mother and sudenliy, I opend my eyes and I wasin my bed room with my mothre screming to get up for school.

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  28. Dawn T. Room:304Thu Oct 15, 08:33:00 AM

    Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. It was a place I dreamed of before. I thought I was all alone in this strange world. Was it magical? It was the darkest place I've ever been at. Then this sparkling blob of white light appears and starts circling me. I wacked it into the dark mud that was around me. Was I the only person here? I see ten dark figures among the the trees. I run q uickly to catch up to them but they were farther than I thought. When they saw me they appeared behind me. It was two little girls one little boy and another boy about a year old than me. He reached out his hand in front of me and said his name was Jake. I shoke out my hand and said I was Dawn. I thought to myself and haven't I seen him before in this same dream. Except I wasn't dreaming, I could feel the cool breeze against my warm cheecks. He told me to follow him and I did. I didn't know what I was doing. Suddenly he disappeared and everything blacked out. That night I remeber was the night I decided to kill myself. But before I could something stopped me and I feel into a deep sleep or was I?

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  29. Once Upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. It was between two soccer fields in front of a masion. Though I was alone there hiding behind a black Mercedes. I was there for a long time. Then I saw something across the fields , on the second story of the mansion. It was a woman.so I headed toward her.I wanted her to tell me were I was .I caught up with her and asked her where I was. She looked confused at me and looked past me and said " you live here".

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  30. Once upon a time,I woke up in a place I,ve never been before.I woke up in the middle of the night under a tree.The park was near other houses. After that I looked around and saw that I was in the park.Everything seem normal,except that it was July and below me the floor was covered in snow.
    Then I decide to go look around.As I went towards the street I saw that there were no cars on the street.Since it was cold I put on a jacket and went to look for people,but there wasn't any.There was no people or anything. So i decide to go bak to the park.Then since there was no signs of live I decided to just go to the park and thing of wat was I going to do.So since there waz no people I decided to kill myself so like that there were no people on the earth.

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  31. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. There was a bunch of people there having fun and playing different sports. The place was full of crowds noise and children in a playground area. I had woken up because a kid had been poking mewith a stick. The kid looked to be about six years old and he was repeating those annoying words "Mr.? Mr.? Why are you here?" Then his parents snatched him away from. I got up but had this terrible headache, and for some reason there was an empty bottle next to me. I did'nt want to think about it though, my head hurted too much, so much that I fell down tired when I tried to stand up. I did'nt want to get up anymore and I did'nt care because now I know where I am. I tried walking but after so long I would fall down again. After some time, a man came to help me. He looked to be around his thirties. he had asked me "what happenned to you?" but then I thought, what did happen to me? How did I get here?

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  32. Leticia V. Room 304Thu Oct 15, 08:34:00 AM

    Once upon a time, i woke up in a place I've never been before. It looked like i was in the past. This place looked very colorful. The color cought my attention. It was over the mountains. I tried going back but i couldn't. Across from me were a bunch of people. I headed toward them, they seemed to be a mob. "Excuse me where am I" I asked them. "You are in Fairy Land" a little girl said cheerfully. I would of never though i would be here. Then the little girl pulled me into a secret place.
    "This placed looks familiar" I said in a quiet tone. "Yes you have seen this place before in your dreams. You have created every one of us. Now come you shall go along that line." She said curiously. "Why am I in this world? I don't like it here I want to go back to my house to Chicago,IL." I replied amazed. " You are so silly that place does not exist" she said giggeling. I started running asking for information except everyone would say the same thing I was in Fairy Land. I then heard a loud voice.
    I tried to run toward that voice but the sound was beyond anything. I kept running and running nothing worked. Until a bad thing happend.
    " No why am I here" I wonderd. A goblin entered and said " You are to be dead" "NO please no." I screamed.
    Instead I felt he world shook. I was then awake it was all a bad dream!

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  33. Cristal M. Room 304Thu Oct 15, 08:34:00 AM

    Once upon a time,I woke in a place I never been before.There was nothing above or underneath and there was people in white all around.I was wondering what happen and what was this all about.I was near a tree and I was stepping in really green grass.All about this place was amazing it looked so beatiful.
    I started walking to see what else does this beatiful place had.When I walked more and more their was another section of that place.I lost my breath this place was so different compared to the other one.
    This place was horrible it smelled nasty and there was fire everywhere.I wanted to go back to the place I woked up in but it was no use there was no way out.There was fire all around me.

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  34. I pinched myself to see if I wasn't dreaming; I couldn't believe it. What was this place? Why am I here? It was so strange;everything was blue and gray.The sky was gray while the the street was blue;I looked around and to my surprise no one was around.For some reason everything looked familar but I just couldn't think.
    I remember I was leaning against a tree in the park;I was with my friend Cindy and she was reading a book."Daniela,What don't you take your headphones off and do something productive.",Cindy said.Suddenly my headphones were pulled off;"Daniela, Do you hear what I said?".I took back my headphones,"Come on.I was just relaxing reading isn't so great any way.I repiled"Its just a bunch of letters that make words then put together."Cindy stared at me," You know what you're wrong.Just think of a world without word or letters. I'm going to the library.What about you?"Cindy asks. "Na,I going home" I repiled. We got up and head different ways.
    When I got home,no one was there so I decided to fool around. I went up stairs to my room and looked for my mp3 under my pillow but instead of my mp3, there was this book. I didn't know who it was so I took it downstairs.I placed on the table and looked for my mp3 in the living room.

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  35. Stephanie M. 304Thu Oct 15, 08:35:00 AM

    Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. Everything was so nice and pretty. It was like if i was having a wonderful dream, it was like a fairytale. But i had alittle problem,I was alone. Sionce i was alone i thought to my self, I can do what ever i want if I'm by myself.Than something wrong started to happen.

    The clouds started to change to the color gray and out of nowhere ir started to rain. So i had to go somewhere near that was dry so i won't get wet.Than i found a eally nice house, so I went in to look at it. It was really elegant inside. So I decided to stay there. Than I heard a noise coming from the kitchen, insead of ignoring it and leaving the house i decided to check who was in there.

    I notice it was an old lady that looked like 50 years-old. I was scared because she looked really creapy and weird.

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  36. Joselyn C. Room 304Thu Oct 15, 08:35:00 AM

    Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. It was diiferent. Something I never expected. It was really cold, empty, and it seemed as if i was in the middle of a snow storm. The only difference was that it wasn't cold at all. The first thing I did at that moment was start to panic. I thought it was all a dream, but it really wasn't. I was stuck in the middle of nowhere with no idea of how I got there.
    Once I was calmed down, I started to think to myself of how I could get out of there. The snow storm had stopped and I could get a better view of where I was. All of a sudden I felt that my head was kind of warm. I touched the back of my head and I saw blood.
    I was so confused. I looked up to see that an airplane was coming by so I waved to him and it landed. "We were looking for you" the driver said. He asked me if I was ok because I had fallen down a big mountain while I was skiing. I told him that I couldn't remember nothing, but I still left with them.
    When I got to the doctor it turned out that I had lost memory because I hit myself really bad on the head, but he said that I was going to be fine.

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  37. Stephany E. Rm304Thu Oct 15, 08:35:00 AM

    Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before.I knew that the last night that i was in my house i remember that my mom n my sister had gotten in an arguement my brother was crying and so was my sister i didnt know what to do to stop the fighting.before i went to sleep all i thought about was the arguement that my had with my sister.I only wanted to be in a peaceful place were i wouldnt hear any screaming.All i know is that i woke up in this beatiful place the sky was blue with beatiful clouds and theres was flowers all around me.I didnt know if i was dreanming or if I was actually awake.I just couldnt understand why i was in that place.I dint know what to do or what was happening.I knew that i was the only one in that place but why me.Then i remember that this is what i wanted last night I was wondering if i would get to see my family again.I heard my moms voice telling me to wake up i opened my eyes and infront of me my was standing.I guess i was dreaming after all but i will never forget what had happened to me that night.

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  38. Brittany S. rm 304Thu Oct 15, 08:35:00 AM

    Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. I think to myself, will i ever get back to where i am supposed to be, home? I start to look around and see a forest that goes on forever.
    " Where am I?" i say to myself.
    Before i realize what I am doing I start walking toward the forest. The first few steps into the forest I notice something move from the corner of my eye, but when i turned around i didn't see anything.I just keep walking along the trail going on forever and never stopping. It felt like something, or someone, was was watching me. So I just turned around and found a huge boulder next to a tree so i just sat there for a while. A few minutes later I felt something breathing down my neck. Then the boulder that was underneath me started to shake, but i didn't move.
    When I finally get to move i see this kid, or what I thought was a kid, standing behind me. I scared myself because I thought I saw blood covering his hands, then i thought, it must just be the light.
    " Hello, I am Nick. Who are you?" he said.
    " Hey I am Brittany. Where am I?" I asked.
    " before i got an answer he turned into some kind of animal. He crouched ready to spring. Just then a deep black hole openedup behind me. I don't think of what i am doing I just jumo into the hole the second before he spriings. I can't see anything in the hole as i fall it only seems like it goes on forever. I am away from the danger, but what will happen next, I don't know.

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  39. Eribertha G. Room 304Thu Oct 15, 08:35:00 AM

    Once upon a time, I woke up in a place i've never been before. I felt the cold air rush behind my neck and saw the heavy clouds above me. It seemed that i was in the middle of nowhere. I didn't see any hint of living things until out of the corner of my eye i saw someting or someone running in fast speed. I was scared but was willing to find out where and what was i doing here.
    Cautiously, i walked towards the place the figure ran to. I was careful not to stumble over the broken wood. As i turned though infront of me stood a cliff. Where did this figure go to? As i looked around i started getting a feeling that i was at home. As i walked i tripped over a clock. I inspedted it closely and saw the signature of my dad in back of it. This was the clock my dad never took off. I was starting to panick, what was this doing here?
    "Hello?" i turned and saw a girl standing nearby. I walked towards her and she told me everything. While i was sleeping, there had been a strange kind of wind that swept everything off, including people. She took me to where eveybody was and stared in amaze. I looked down the cliff and saw all the corpse. Not everyone was dead but it seemed half of us were only left. What was i to do next?

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  40. Claudia O. Room 304Thu Oct 15, 08:35:00 AM

    Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. The sky was green and the grass was blue everything was the opposite. I walked thru the woods if it was called a wood since the leaves of the tree were brown and the trunk was bright green.
    Then I met with some little people who were bright orange from head to toe. They talked, but meant something else since they use the opposite words. They told me I was in Opposite Land. I wondered what was I doing there.
    All of a sudden the land was moving and the little people ran underneath a tree. It was a giant who was a villian to the little people. He asked me what I was doing in his land I told him I didn't know. He grabbed me by the shirt and pulled me up to his face. I was scared and nervous. He started walking toward a house. We went in it and he made a deal with me if I was his friend for a day he would let me go back to my house.
    I agreed but I was frightened since I didn't know what was expected. I passed the day with the giant and figured out he was a nice guy.When the day was over he told me if I was ready to go I just needed to open a wide door that was acroos the dinning room.
    I stood standing still and decided to spend a couple of days with the giant wouldn't hurt.

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  41. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. I woke up in Mexico and the first thought that came to my mind was "Dude where is my bike."It all felt like it was a dream and none of it felt real but it was.
    After I found my bike i went to the store and went to buy a lot of candy. When I came back I saw that there was a door to door salesman and I just closed the door on his face.During dinner time I went downstairs in order to go eat and it was taco night and I got so full of tacos that I went to sleep so early.
    After we went home I barely found out that was a vacation.I thought I was going to live there and it was a good thing I did'nt because every day when I went to the beach there was always garbage.
    When I went home I got a new Playstation 2 And it was awesome. And after I went home I found out that my grandma died 10 days later and that was very ironic.We went through the border and there was a lot of security and we smuggled a dog and it was very fun.I will never forget about that. It was awesome.

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  42. DiANA G ROOm 3O4Thu Oct 15, 08:35:00 AM

    Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. I thought it was me dreaming. So I went to sleep again and I had just woke up again right now. I'm surprised to still see this place I'm at that I thought I saw in that particular dream. I looked around and it was like the ground I'm standing had nothing beneath it. It was real weird but real cool. It had a red sky with black clouds. I'm really starting to like this place! Anyways I saw these weird kids that I thought were pretty awesome because of the fact that they egg-bombing this one school that had tagging all over it. It was crazy tagging. The graffiti looked real colorful too. So i decided to go ahead in to see if i could find someone to help me figure out what this amazing place. I thought it was like neverland or something. Hahah.
    As i walked in the wacked up school, some girl walked up to me telling me her name was Twinkie. I was thinking she was crazy but I'm like whatever, I don't care. She said that this was a place where mainly teens got to take over and adults just gave up taking care care of "annoying" kids. Then she said that the cops even got tired of people busting out so they just gave up to. So I'm like, "I wanna stay here forever." With a smile so big I thought my mouth was was going to get numb. Hah.=]

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  43. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. My first thought was "dude, where's my car?".I looked around. there was a very tall mountian. First i thought" Am i dreaming?". I started to look around. above meo was a sun that was purple. the river was green. i went to the town to find out where i was. i looked at the town. around me was a bar, a taco stand, a store, and a gun shop. isaid to myself,"im definatly not in chicago.ther was a girl about my height. i went up to her and asked,"where was i?"she looked at me and said, "well, your in my hometown.". and i was like "ok, whats its called.".she puled me down."bow down now."why?"
    SHE said"he our evil master"
    i was like"ok whats his name."
    she told me that his name was Dr.stupid.
    I laughed.BUT I THINK HE HEARD ME CUASE HE PULLED ME UP BY MY SHIRT AND PUT ME ON TOP OF A TRUCK.
    "SO, IM GUESSING YOUR NOT FROM AROUND HERE"
    I WAS LIKE"NO DUH".

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  44. once up a time, i woke up in a place i've never been before.i went across the street to ask were i'm i at.i lend against the wall to think what to do.by the time i was able to come up with a plan i went into the store to borrow their phone.they told me i'm in new york.
    so i called home and then they pick me up two days later.mean while i staied at my cousin house.i could not stay more time at home so i went back and staied there and i woke up.

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  45. JESSICA V.Room 304Thu Oct 15, 08:35:00 AM

    Once apon a time, i woke up in a place i've never been before.When i opened my eyes it felt really hot and it was sunny too. I didn't see any people. I thought maybe my parents were at work and my brothers in their friends house.
    Later on it got really dark and my parents and brother were still not home. I tried calling my parents but they were not answering. I tried calling my aunt because she had once told me if I needed anything to call her. So i called and nobody answered.
    The next day nothing made sence so i decided to go visit a friend. While walking ther the streets seemed really dirty and lonely. When I got to her house the door was open. I went inside and their was still some food on the pan. It looked like it was molted and dry. So that made me think they had been missing or not home.
    Days went by and I still couldn't find an explanation. I went surching for people but I found nothing. As I was going I heard a noise. Like I wasn't alone. In the corner I could see a house with the lights on. I decided to see what it was. When I opened a door a young lady poped out with a terrified look on her face. She also looked comfused. We started talking thinking of explanations but we couldn't think of on. So there we talked become friends and thinking of all the years to come.

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  46. Yatzaret Hernandez. 304Thu Oct 15, 08:36:00 AM

    Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. When I woke up I was confused. I tried to remember how I got there but I just couldn't. After a while i started to get scared because I couldn't even hear a sound. After a while I decided to walk around to check if anyone else was in this mysterious place.
    I went all around the house each time seeing impressive decorations. The house was beatiful and no matter where I was there would always be cool things. I decide to go outside, so I coud see if this place looked familiar. I walked around the house until I found the exit door and I steped outside. "wow" I said to myself this place is amazing!
    The backyard looked like a garden from those farytale stories. There was alot of bushes, trees, roses, and a water fountain in the middle. The roses were all different colors and the grass looked soft and green. There was birds singin everywhere and the sun was bright and warm against my skin. I went over to the water fountain when all of a sudden I heard a voice. I was surprised but afraid. So I started to run. Thats when everything changed and it was dark and cloudy.
    It felt like it was a dream but I wasn't really sure. Everything looked creepy and scary. I saw alot of graves around me and i got scared. Then someone said my name. I got so scared that I decided to run, but I triped.
    When I woke up I saw my dead body laying in a coffin. People where crying and sayig things I couldn't really hear. Then I felt something pulling me away and then I was gone. I found my self being in a white room. Then some one asked "are you okay?"

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  47. Once a pon a time , I woke up in a place I've never seen before. I was freaking out. This place was red with many orange bended trees going in all directions. There are many strange places. There were many mountains along a tiny city.

    I went to this city to look for help. I arived at the city and I noticed no one was there. Hours passed as I knocked on every house and I got no answer when suddenly I was ambushed.

    I awoke after they had brought me to a wierd underground temple. I knew who they were. They were arbiters. Strange aliens that were here to take over the world. Then it hit me. I was in halo.

    " You'll never get away with this," I said. They said things back but I couldn't understand them. Just then I noticed that they left a weapon across were I was sitting. I got around there base as I blasted anyone who got in my way. I planted a couple of bombs around the base And I blew up there temple and the explosion was so big it could be heard around the world, and I didn't make it.

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  48. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. I was in a house all dark. The only light i could see was the fading light coming from from behind the exit door. The only thing I could remember was going to school walking with my friends. Suddenly the door opened, outside was a aluminating light the blocked my vision.
    I walked toward the light in hopes of finding an explanation. Without any warning the door shut behind and dissolved. The lighted dimmed and I saw that I was in the middle of nowere. I was sorrounded by trees that blocked the sunlight so it looked dark. I smelled a overwelming aroma that over powered me to follow it. As I followed the sent I saw there was a city in front of me. I notice something strange. There was emptyness in the city instead of a busy world.
    I was caught of guard when the earth started to shake and crack in half. Thats when I saw the door and head for it. Below me the earth started to break and crumblem. I when inside the door without any hesitation. I was back in the drak place confused and excited.
    Near me I see another door and I head for it hoping it wasn't like thelast one. As I went in I saw a flashlight glowing like if it was waiting for me. I turned it on and saw the same city but with no light. I walk foward but then I feel that i'm falling. I panic and see the floor coming closer with the flash light. I turn it off and close my eyes.
    I wake up in my bed wondering what dream I had. I mearly laughed at the idead of the dream. I got up and got dressed ready for school when i saw the flashlight in my dreams sitting on my kitche table.

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  49. Michelle D. room 304Thu Oct 15, 08:43:00 AM

    Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. At first I wondered where in the world was I. Until I found out I wasn't in the world. I was in a rocket ship going to the moon with people I did'nt even know!
    My first thought was, "What am I doing here?". Beind inside a rocket headed toward the moon seemed interesting. Then I noticed that I was floating around!
    "Don't look so shocked kid." said a strange person who was floating above me.
    "Who are you?" I asked.
    "My name's Miki. I'm the leader in this expedition. Those two guys over there," she pointed at two kids who were floating around too," are Frizz and Koizumi."
    Just as she finished, there was a crash.
    "Ow" I said after bumping my head.
    "We're here!" exclaimed Frizz.
    "Hurry up and put on the suit," Koizumi said as he gave a puzzled look at me.
    "I'm sorry what's your name?" he asked.
    "My name's Michelle." I responded.
    "Well Michelle just put on the suit so we can walk on the moon already."
    As we all put on the suit, which looked rather strange to me, Ren was starting to open the door.
    "Ready?" Miki asked me.
    "Uh....I guess." I answered.
    Frizz and Ren were already out flailing at Miki and I to hurry up. As I stepped out, I almost fell flat on my face.
    "Newbie's always end up falling the first time on the moon." Ren teased.
    But as I hit my head, I woke up.
    "What a weird dream." I said to myself.
    Then I got up and disconnected my cellphone and noticed I had a new message. It said "Great job on the mission newbie. Ren"

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  50. Once upon a time,i woke up in a place I've never been before. There were alot of people that i did not now. It was hot and i was tair and I fainted. From there i don't remenber nothing. I was that tair that i could not remenber that much. My mom was glad when she saw. I could not explend what place I was because i could not tell her alot. The only thing that i that after that i would never trus now one.

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  51. one upon a time, i woke up in a place i've never bee, before. when I woke up I they losest there shouse they need you school and they need then for school. the the kid when with out shouse and they were lafing at then because threy did not have shouses.then they went home and they fond there shouse they were under the the sofa they did not look there so they were mad at there self. Then theye with there friends and they were happy.then they went to play in the park.

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  52. once upon a time francisco woke up in a place i never been before. He woke up in this wierd indoor Neighborhood he got scared and started wondiring where was he at. he started asking people where was he and they all ignored him.So he started freeking out and didn't know what way to run and then he started running and he found a exit. And then he found out he was in a mall

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  53. There was darkness and then a man was next to me. Underneath me were leaves and rocks. I had realized that i was in war. I could hear the bullets flying outside.
    The man next to me was wearing a camo shirt and was covered in blood. So was i. I asked him were was i and he said "you are in World war three, you got shot remember" i was shocked. I looked outside and saw familiar faces from school. i looked at the mans badge and it said, bob 2014. I was in the year 2014.
    I took a nother look outside and saw flying war tanks, and blasters. i went outside and saw that the floor was red and it was deserted(except for the wariors). There was also robots fighting. I blasted the rebels even though i did not know what i was doing.

    The war was over and we had won. When i got home i remembered everything. And did not have anything because every one in my family an other people were killed.

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  54. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. This place was enormous. I had mest up clothes and it felt weird being here but this place smelled good though.My name is Joe and I'm 13 years old and I'm about to witness the best place I've ever going to be.
    As got up and cleaned my self the first thing i saw was a gigantic chocolate bar. I went towards it and took a chunk of it and tasted it. It was the world's most delicious gigantic chocolate bar I've ever experienced. As i experience more Junk Food i was wondering..I noticed i was in junk food land.
    I couldn't believe it but seeing is believing so i believed it. So i started munching out the whole land to myself. I got full after almost eating a Sears Tower(Willis Tower )size bag chips. I Wonder why i had mest up clothes in Junk Food Land and had a big bump in my head.So i stop eating and trying to remember what i did before i woke up here.
    As i jump out i realize i was in a zoo with my friends.I jump to high i fell in the chocolate river. As i panic i wasn't in the chocolate river i was with my friends in the zoo.My friend Paul said "Sorry i had to throw you some water so you can wake up from that big hit in your head from that rock ".
    I Replied" ohhh now i know the explanation for being there"
    Paul said " Huh .. what do you say if we go eat some junk food like you said before you got hit"
    I answered" yeah let's go"
    As we went i said "now i know why i was in Junk Food Land when i got hit because i was hungry" As i told myself.

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  55. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never seen before. The people standing in front were small people with pale skin. The people looked barely younger than 3 and were sucking on a lollipop. The other children were dancing to the Barney song and others were throwing lego blocks to a large woman. My name is Ekafe and I am, or was 17.
    Since I was able to see the children face to face, I realized that I was back to being 4 years old. The lady was off to closing the door as she yelled a bunch of 3 yr old girls who were fighting for a piece of chicken. The children than started to sleep in front of the large TV.The lady than went to sleep next to the big Elmo doll near the door. When she was fully asleep, the children started to go ontop of each others shoulders and formed a large baby. The baby than grabbed the woman and threw out of the 1st floor window. She than stood up and fleed to her car. The baby was above the tv re-anacting the scene of KingKong. The baby than saw me and than started forward. I than started to run but, the Elmo doll was covering the door.
    I than had to make a decision, I grabbed the nearest Barney cd and than threw it out of the window, which the baby ran to get it. I than pushed the Elmo doll out of the way and went to my house with a tricycle near by. When I arrived I found my mother there barely arriving. I than crawled to the door but she quickly closed the door. I sighed as a hack got grab of the diaper I had on.
    I woke up and than quickly realized that It was a dream. I than turned on the Tv to find out that a big baby was crawling the Sears tower...

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  56. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place i've never been before "said, Georgina" As she was Walking Trew The woods and behind her was her Brother Alexendar. Alexendar said to Georgina " what are we doing here?how did we got here and where is our parents at?" and georgina reply to him i kannot remmber how and where are parents at we just woke up underneath a tree and i try to remmber how we got here but nothing gets into my head.But as They where walking alexendar said wait i think i remmber how we got here and we arent lost i remmber that we came camping with our family and our parents said they where going to go explore the woods and so while they went to check out the woods we stayed here and sleep for a while so lets just go back to the place where we where at first and stayed there until our parents come back ,and than Georgina reply"wait i remmber now how we got here okay lets go back than"so they went back to where they where and there parents where there waiting for them and with the police really worried thinking they had been lost until they saw them coming and asked them where they had gone and they just told them what had happen and the parents understood them and they just stayed another night camping and without getting away from each other and they had a great time the whole familyy.:)

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  57. once upon a time,i woke up in a place I've never been before.i was in the woods i don't remember how i got there.all remember that i was walking out my house and the rest is a blur.i was with my freind yessy and she picked me up from my house. and we went to the park and then we meet a group of people. we were playin by a lake and i wonder off from every one else and in got lost.

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  58. Once upon a time I woke up in a place I've never been before. The last thing I remember is that I was walking in the streets until all of a sudden something hit me in the head. Then I woke up in what seemed like a hospital bed.Everything looked normal execpt for the people.I got of the bed and went walking in the hospital.Then I was going to ask a nurse what I was doing here,but she didnt see me.Then I went to ask a doctor and he too didn't see me.I started wondering why can't they see.ThereI heard someone say "lets put her in room 3b". The only problem is that I was in that room.So then I rememberd that I was dead. I got out the hospital and went to my house.There I saw that there was a funaraland that was my funarel.

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  59. Once upon a time i woke up soring through in a place i never been .The air and when i look down and find to look the people looked liked ants i could see that most of the people looked and before i know it i was in mexico when i went down most of. The people just stared at me and when i tried to talk i couldn't .After words i wonder around looking for someone to help me out with something to eat or drink .But out of a sudden this guy ask's me if i needed help and I answer yes i do. So the next day i wake up in often play with food surronding me so when i start eating the food i remember it must be a dream cause i was reading a book about mexico .Finally i wake up and it was a dream all along .But i wasn't home i was at school.

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  60. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I`ve never been before. The last time i remeber is i was in my bedroom watching TV. I`m in a different room, that doesnt look like my room. I woke up in a hospital bed. Everything looked normal, but people that i dont know. My head hurted a lot. I didnt remember what happen to me. I saw my mom come in the room crying, but happy i was okay. I told her what happen. She told me i was hit on my head by a bed. I remeber i had a bunk bed, and i was watching TV in my bed. She told me the bed fell on top of me and hit me on the bed. She told me an earthquake happened close to my house. I went home the next day. Everithing looked different. Some houses were fallen apart, the road was all cracked up, trees were on the floor. I missed the whole thing. I was gotten been killed that day. Good thing my family, and I was ok. Even my dog. When everything was all fixed up, except the road and trees, we went to the store to buy a new bed for my room, but no bunk beds. Next i will wear a helmet when an earthquake or anykind of storm comes.
    ~THE END~

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  61. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. I was so scared people were just screaming at me.People were being cut in there throat.I started to run away into the forest and those weird people were following me into the forest,I was looking for a place to hide in but there was nothing. I saw them people getting closer and closer but then all of a sudden a mammoth sized bear came to save me the people got scared and started to run away from me.Then after a while I realized that the bear wasn't really a bear it was my mom.I was so happy then i started to hug her and i didn't want to let go.=)

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  62. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before...it smelled like the inside of a candy store. Sugary Sweetness all over.

    There was a river made out of creamy milk chocolate. There were river boats and they were made out of sugar waffles. The path was made out of gummy gumdrops. The sugar on the path made shined like glitter.

    As I walked along the gummy gumdrop pathaway I noticed a sign in the middle of green airheads on the floor that looked like grass, it said,"Candied Island".

    It was like a dream come true,candy all over and there a chocolate waterfall! I grabbed a piece of a boat near me and dipped it into the river...mmmm much better than the ones from the store.

    I kept walking along with my chocolate dipped sugar waffle and all of a sudden I hear a crunch. I had accidently stepped into a leaf or thats what it look like. Although when I stepped on it there was some sort of wire sticking out of it. That is when I noticed I wasn't alone. Out of sight I see something that moves from tree to tree. It had a weird shape to it but when I see him it was just a five eyeballed monster and it starts to grabb me and it nocks me out and all of a sudden everything is black.....

    "Stacy wake up ...Time for school ....you don't want to be late for your first day!" I start to look around and notice I wasn't in thid Island so called "Candied Island" and I was very relieved. So I got up and got ready for school.

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  63. Once upon a time i woke up in a place I've never been before.My name is Robert and I was in this room I ever seen before.I had these bandages on my head. In the room were the most unusual things I've ever seen.There were these weopons on the wall like the ones i wuld see at the musuem.I was so fatisized by all of the things that I had forgotten the fact that i dont know how i got here,or how i got the bandages.
    All i could rember was going to the museum because i wanted to get away from my father.He would always punish me or hit me when every he had a promblem.The muesum was the only place i could think of to calm down.I remember that he came mad that stormy night and he started hitting me because he was cheated in a bet.I went out the backk door and to the muesum.It was raining hard and all i had on was a shi

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  64. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. I woke up in a bed that I've never been before. I really don't remember how I got there, and i don't remember what I did through the night . All i remember is falling asleep with video game controller on top of my chest.
    I asked what happened, but nobody knew anything. My parents looked at me like i was crazy, and laughed. But I knew something happened. I was eager to find out, because I knew i didn't go to my bed. it was kind of funny to me too. Then i realized I should rethink what did i do the night before. So then i seen myself playing video games, and i was winning. It was half time, so i let the game pause. I went to go eat something, and watch a little t.v. and during that I started to get sleepy.
    I went back to the game and grabbed the controller and after that my mind went blank. My sister came back from school. and she started laughing at me, I was wonderin why does she keep laughing at me. Then i figured ill tll my parents they'll make her tell the truth abd she did. Guess what happed? She told me that i was sleep walking at night.

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  65. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place that I've never been before. It was a strange place. Although, I must say that for a strange place it was offly...nice. The way no worries seemed to be there, the way you would feel relaxed with what was there. It was all a creamy peach color with light fog as well. It looked like a desert in a way, but different. Where was I?
    After minutes(maybe hours?)of walking, I saw a figure far out in the fog. I stopped to take a closer look, but I still couldn't see the person very well. He(she?)seemed like they were sitting down next to a tree. I walked towards the person and saw that it was a girl. She was crying, hiding her face leaning next to the tree. I wanted to ask what was wrong, but I couldn't get a word out of me no matter how much I tried. So I just stayed there, staring, worried, scared, wondering who the person was.
    The girl suddenly looked up. I looked at her and saw who she was. Confusion and fright spread all over me within seconds like a live wire. Her eyes weren't red, even though she was crying, for I don't know how long, but they were only watery. She seemed abandoned, alone, she had stratches all over-I figured maybe it was from the tree that was so rough. The girl was me. I knew what she was thinking, soon I saw images of what she was thinking and got me scared. But how? why? I quickly ran, ran far far away from the girl that I saw was me. I turned back and saw that she was just staring, waiting. And then......blackness.

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  66. Once upon a time I woke up in a place I never been before.My name is Robert.I had a accident in a town I have never been to. I woke up in the woods.I saw green trees big and large.I had a bad accident that I lost some of my memory.I was very lost all I did was run around.My car was all ruined I tryed to turn it on but I just couldnt beacause of the accident that made me loose my memory.I walked for a long time until finnally I met a guy.He was very nice to me but in real life he ain't.I saw him treat people really bad.He tortured them and did bad stuff to them. I went to talk to one of them and they told me that the same way I got here thats how they got there.The guy said that when you pass by that place that something makes you loose control.I didnt know to believe him or not but I was woried. THe evil man soposobley comes out every day in the morning to check on his victims in the woods. HE also treats them all nice so that the people could go with him.I was spying on the man and he was killing people.I had to do something about that.So I tried to escape and it was traped by barbed wire. If I wanted to escape I had to jump that fence quickly so that I wont feel the pain.I finally escaped I ran as fast as I could. I finnaly found my family and I told them not to go near that place ever again.I then told everyone in the world by using the internet and newspaper,and magazines.

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  67. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before.I was in Rome. I had a headache.I think I must have been hit on the head. I also had giant bruise under my jaw.There standin right in front of me was a plane. Inside of the plane was a guy with a parachute. He asked me if I was ready to skydive to the top of "The Leaning Tower of Pizza". Next I decided to get in and go along. Beside me were 15 other kids.
    About 30 minutes later we jumped out. As we were going down I saw the underneath of the plain. I was nearing the tower and I decided to pull out the parachute. Everybody else had pulled their out 3 seconds ago. Then I realized that I had no Idea how to take it out. Suddenly I pulled a string and the parachute came out.
    After landing I decided to go to a hospital. Ther I saw my parents and we hugged. The they told me whwt had happened. I had been run over.

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  68. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before i woke up on a hospital bed. all i could remember before i woke up on this hospital bed was that i was walking down the street. I rememver i was walking home from a party and i was alone and it was like 2:00 in the morning and i had the munchies and all i wanted to do was get home so i could eat some food.Then i remember talking to sombody but i couldnt see their face they were wearing a hoodie. I remember him getting mad because i said something to him but i dont know what. then we started fighting about 5 minutes later all i saw was a blurr. then thats when i woke up on the hospital bed but i still wanted to know why that guy had jumped me all i could remember that he was wearing a blue hoodie and some black pants. Then later i got out of the hospital

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  69. Once upon a time i woke up in a place i've never been before.I was on top this weird wshite bed.The room was all white and I figured that I was in the hospital.Infront of me was nothing.Everything white and all lonely whith just myself and the bed that I was on top of.I jumped of the bed feeling better than ever.Very carefyully I opened the door.
    Outside the door was so silent and quiet that i could even hear myself breathing.Until i yelled out for help.I walked foward around the hospital but nobody seemed to see me because the hospital was complete lonely with no people but just me.Behind me i hear a loud scream. The scream did not sound like it came from a human but it sounded like it came from some sort of animal.Therefore i ran until i found myself outside the hospital.
    Outside i found nobody,nothing but cars.I started to panick and yelled out for help again.I heard nothing but my echoe.Around the corner of my eye I see somebody standing there watching me.I called out to that person and that person just started to run towards me as if I were something to eat.It scarred me because the person had blood all over his shirt so I started to run.As I ran I saw another person wiht blood on his mouth.The person graved my arm and pulled me to the floor.The man screamed and it wanted to bite me so i new what it was...a zombie.The zombie was on top of me and I was holding it by the head so that it wont bite me.There I was struggeling with a zombie on top of me.
    When i was holding te zombie from his head i heard a lound thump.The zombie had already died.A human had shot the zombie on the head. I was realifed that I was still alive.The human was a girl and she had saved my life.There we were alone just the two of us with zombies chaising us two.

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  70. Once upon a time, Paola woke up in a place she never been before.
    She woke up in this weird house she never seen before. She wondered around the house to see if anyone was at the house, but she didn't saw no one. She began to wonder where could she be and where are the people. She thought they may be hidding because they thought she came to steal, so she scream,"Is anyone here,I'm not here to steal anything I'm just lost and i need your help."No one answer, so she guess no one is at the house.
    So she went outside to see if she can reconize the neighborhood , but she didn't. She went to knock on the neightbor's house, but no one open the door. So she went to the other house and relize that the door was open so she went inside and look around the house and no one was their. She thought that this was wierd, waking in another house and no in it nor in the other houses. Everything deserted. She went outside and walk to the other neighborhood. And it look desert,too.
    She finally relize that she had her cell phone with her so she try to call home, but it said it was out of service. She started to panic and worry where could she be at. She started running to see if any one was their, but she never saw no one.
    Finally she came to a store and went to it.

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  71. once upon a time,i woke up in a place I've never been before.In that place I was floating and beneath me lay my body. How weird and a strange white light was coming toward me, nothing at all like a light bulb.
    Below me my body was motionless and disoriented, though i remember nothing of being in an accident or dying.Near me was a bunch of orbs surronding me.
    "I didn't want to die or be dead for that matter," I kept thinking over and over.But as I said that voices emerged behind me and I turned to see but there was nothing to see there was only darkness.Suddenly I was scared and I wanted to go home to my room and just wake up and realize I was dreaming.
    I kept on wandering around the strange place trying to find a way out but I could not.Then out of the blue I opened my eyes and found out I was in a hospital covered in gause and plaster.Weird.

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  72. once unpn a time, i woke up in a place i never been before.it was small and it appeared to be a closet behind a room.i felt all tide up in a strange way beneth a boddal of clothes.beside me was door but lock i ahd no way of getting out of here i was stuck darn... help. help! i scream is somebody out there i started moveing side to another that,s when a jacket fell amd out came a pocket knife. yes! i grabed the knife and cut the rope over and under i was free at that's i lend over and i herd somebody coming they here they blind folded me HELP!!!! i'm dead within an hour i'm dead.

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  73. DDominguez--->[303]Thu Oct 15, 09:16:00 AM

    0nce upon a time I woke up in a place I've never been before..i was surrounded by people i didnt even know before!!I was in a different place..i dont remember how i got there...was i dreamin about it..I really dont know..but all i could actually remember was that it was the most beutiful place ive ever been..i was standin there all by myself..in a small little island wit a big blue ocean there nxt to me..I was alone and i didnt know what to do,so i walked towards the ocean with my sore feet touchin the nice and cold water,the fresh breeze touchin my face,the wind blowin my hair away..All of sudden i wake up in the middle of the night..i after a minute later i realize it was all a dream...

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  74. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before.I couldn't feel any problems. i went and explored the place just acros the end of my eye I saw this dog barking at me at the same time I was scared and at the same time I felt happy because I knew I wasn't alone I went and I sat down with the dog. He stoped barking at me. I told him were I was he said you are in a wonderful place were you have no problems.
    I stod thier so amazed because the dog actually talked to me. The next thing I know the dog was standing in front of me he told me he was going to take me to the mansion I owned I asked him I own a mansion he said oh yes you own all this place because you are the Queen of this place your husband has just died and he has given you everything that he owned and now you own this place and now you can rule my Queen. Are you sure of what you are talking dog, oh please don't call me dog call me uncle farrett. What I even have a uncle in this weired world. No,this place is called Swerdo what a real uguly name for a place um Queen you choose this name oh I knew that. Okay now take me to the mansion that my husband gac=ve me this way please thank you uncle Farrett your welcome. here we are what a spectacular place are you sure this is my home yep I was ordered from the people that live here. here's the keys and have a fantastic good night but wait when I turned around Farrett w2asn't their the next day I had a wonderful party of recivement and my hole life was changed for the rest of my life. And I just hope this isn't a dream uhhhhhhh!

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  75. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place that I've never been before. I was on top of a mountain. Near by there was a river and if i looked down it looked very deep. It was only me who was up there like if my parents had abandoned me. I couldn't tell what time it was or how much time I had been there.

    As i started walking I realize that there wasn't really a way to get out or come down from that mountain. I was left without any clothes or food except for the river near by. I felt scared because i was like out of my mind,I didnt kknow how i ended up in a mountain. During that day I only drank some water from the river and ate some of the few plants i found. After that I tried to look for someone. Inside of me me i kept thinkin I wasn't alone but i couldn't help it. I closed my eyes for a couple of hours.

    Within like 2 hours I woke up again because i thought i had herd someone. I looked arond and starting walking againg but no one was there and i was still alone and abandoned. I felt that since then i wasn't going to get safe or find someone to help me. I couldnt take it no more and i cried.So i felt asleep again.

    Then i notice i wasn't there no more.My mom was moving me and telling me i was going to be late for school. I figure out everything had been all a dream. A very long dream that through all that time i was suffering when it was only a dream.Since that time i kept thinking that if something ever happen to me like that i would be so scared.

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  76. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. It was really strang. i could barely remember anything. all i remember is that the day befor i was walking down 51st and Camble and alot of guys were running up to me screaming and saying alot of curse words. Now im here in what looks like a hospital room and i have no clue on to what happened. i really was worried. i didnt know waht to think. the nurse came in and told me that i got jumped. i was shocked. i didnt know how it happened but all i kno is that i wont be walking donw that street again.

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  77. Once upon time,I woked up in a place I've been before.I was in a hospital. I started seeing blurry at first as i started to wake up.When i started seeing good i seen my leg broken,arm broken ,and i had alot of sratches in my body. I felt sored and tired. I just remember that day before i was in the hospital hurt.I remember i was with my friends hanging around and joking.Were at my friend's house playing the ps3 and muching out on pizza and chips. I was having really fun.My friends didn't really care for some one and i did't either.When i seen the time it was 9 and that was the time i had to leave . I was in front of my friend's stairs. I started to walk down and i seen a car going kinda fast. Faster than the street mph limit. I seen a kid going for his ball crossing the street. I didn't knew what i was doing. I just reracted fast.I just seen the car's light.When my mom came to visit me at the hospital she told that i had saved a little kid's life. I was shocked.

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  78. When I woke up in place I woke up in basement in a party their were a lot of people I was on 55 & WASHTENAW and I went outside in front and they were more people outside and time past fast it was 10 something then we all left back to are house like at 1.

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  79. Once upon a time,I woke up in a place I've never been before it was all dark.Their was no lights everything was dark.I saw someone walking around.So I went near him.He was telling me everything from the past. We were near a cemetery so Jake said " wait here".He went into the cemetery and I went toward the cemetery.Jake was againist a tomb.Then he was going underneath of the tomb.I ran out of the cemetery and a women was around.I went beside her and asked her about the Jake and she said "that in front of the cementery they killed him".Ever since he haunts the street of the cemetery.So the guy that saw the guy he married the women and he forget about the cemetery and his life got better ever since.

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  80. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before, I was in the middle of nowhere where everything was white there were no windows to see through, there were no bushes to look over, and there were no doors to be past by. I was in front of nothing and inside me i had this really bad feeling and I felt really nervous. I kept on looking around but there was nothing to be seen there was no inside and there was no outside i felt really confused. then I saw a li9ght i started walking toward it and as I got near it I noticed the light waswas disapearing until i came uopon a hole which I fell into and all of a sudden poof I woke up from my dream. the end

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  81. once upon a time, i woke up in a place I've never been before it was an abanded house and and there was people everywhere and then I started to get up and I saw people fighting. so then I was looking for away out but I couldn't find one so then I saw away to leave the house an then this person came at me so then I started to run and I trid to talk to some one that was there but they couldn't.
    Then I keeped on running to hide from that person. So then I found this door that was could take me outside so I went to that door and I got out of the house. And I wanted to get really far away from that house. Then I woke up and it was all a dream.

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  82. ONCE UPON A TIME I WOKE UP IN A PLACE I NEVER BEEN BEFORE...I LOOK AT THE BLUE SKY TO THINK WHERE WAS I BUT NOTHING CAME I MY HEAD SO I STOP AND ASK THING LADY FOR HELP AND SHE TOLD ME BUT I COULDNT UNDER STAND WHAT WAS SHE SAYING SO I JUST WENT TO WALK AROUND TO SEE IF ANY THINK COMES TO MY HEAD.......
    SO I STOP AT THIS PLACE A TOOK A SNAP AND THINKING WERE WAS I SO 8 HOURS LATER AND IT WAS IN THIS DARK PLACE WENT I TURN ON THE NIGHTS I SEEN THAT I WAS IN MY ROOM STAND BY MY DOOR SO I WAS HAPPY I WAS BACK BACK TO MY REALL WORLD!!!!1

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  83. Once upon a time,I woke up in a place i've never been before, the people were walking any were they could go through the walls. The wierd thing is that when I tryed to go through a wall i could not.Then i went to walk I round and some one that I knew told me that if
    I knew how to go trough walls and I siad no. Then he told me that if I wanted to learn how to go through walls so I thought about it and when with him.
    So I ended going in to a house full of people that all wanted to learn how to go trough walls.After I got in line I saw a man that came through a wall and he looked really sad. I went over there and talk to him about going trough walls and he did not want to anwser me. I thought he was mad or some thing but wha=en I looked at his face he was sad. Itold him can I ask you some thing i told the man and he siad yes so I told him how can you go through walls? He told me there is no way that you can go through walls if your still alive. I was shocked because if he siad that you cant go through walls you must be died.The man told me sorry you have this but its the truth. So I thought to my self this is a place were they kill you and you think you can now go through wallls but its all a lie.I could not thimk what was going to happen to me. In tell I siad I cant live like I'm right now be cause I don't know this place so I just killed my self!

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  84. Once upon a time, i woke up in a place i had never been before. In this place it was very dark,and cold. For there were no windows, just walls. I was very frightened, i almost went into shock, I didn't know what to do. I felt my pockets to look for my cell phone. I called everyone in my contact list but, the weired part about that is that everyone i called,phone was not in service.
    Tears began streaming down my face. I started to scream for help, but no one heard me. "What am i going to do?" I asked myself. I walked near the wall on my right,put my back against it, then slid down. I curled into a ball, like a little baby,crying, my arms clutching my knees.
    As the time passed, I kept trying to think of where i was and how did i get to this strange place, but i had no idea.
    Suddenly when i closed my eyes, I then woke up in my room, under the covers. I hopped up to go check the house to see if everyone was there, and sure enough i tell you, everyone was there in their rooms sleeping. To myself i said,"What?" Then i walked back to my room, cut off the light, and got back into bed, I laughed to myself. Turns out, that nightmare was a dream.

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  85. Once upon a time I wake up in a place that I never been in before,I was in a movie set!lol
    I didnt know what to do I went to try and get help but nobody listened to me.Everyone seemed to be kind of busy doing something I was getting so frustraded.So I just decided to just see were I was really at I didn't really panic so I just went along to see what I was doing there try to find out how I got there last night I remember going to sleep in my bed like every other night i have no idea how i got there.

    As I kept walking I seemed to be in like an open room which was the bed were I was laying on then I got up and walked over to were there was a curtain i opened that curtain and saw alot of camaras everywhere you seemed to turn.There was a very cute guy talking to some girl and all the camaras were focused on them.I reconized those two persons from some were butv I just couldn't remember who.So all of a sudent I relized that I was in a movie set of my favoriote movie.After that someone said cut and everything stopped people could see me but they would't say anything they just ignored me.Then I leaned over to talk to the guy on the set and then I asked him did he know me why was I here and he said nothing he stayed quiet.So then i felt a pinch and it was all a dream a very wierd dream.=]]

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  86. Jose G. Room 306Thu Oct 15, 09:51:00 AM

    Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. It was dark and there was only one window. With little light coming through it. There was a lot of stuff around me and I did not know what it was. Or what I was before i got here.
    I a big headache. I kept trying to remember what I was doing. But I could not think of anything. I heard a noice coming from somewhere. I got scared and did not know what to do. I started to find a place to hide. But I counld not find any where to hide.

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  87. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before.I was in the middle of nowhere.I new something happen that night i just couldnt remember.the place i was at had corn and wheat fields everywhere.i started to walk down the road.i walked for an hour

    Until i got a small town.it was abandoned.walkedthrought the town slow and noiseless.as i was leaveing the town something caught my as i turned around standing in front of me was a clown.i was about to scream but the clown knock me out and put me onto the floor. when i woke up standing a bove me was the clown except he wasnt hurting me.he just was stareing at me.

    He left and went outside . I got up and ran.when i got down the road i heared a car. it was the clown i ran but he caught me. he pulled out a knife. as he went to stabb me....
    I woke up in my room.It all was a dream.

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  88. Once upon a time, i woke up in a place i've never been before. It was full of colors and treats. This magical place was called Candy Land! I walked towards everything while watching the yummy treats ! It was a fantasy land. Then, I saw the huge Gummy bears! They were even bigger than me! i couldnt believe it. There was a Vanilla milkshaker stream. I tasted the wonderful shake. I walked around and saw houses made out of cookies and marshmallows.

    I knocked at the front step of the pink Gingerbread house on marshmallow street. A sourpatch kid came out ad said "Hello". "Oh Hi", I answered."My name is Sugar", she said . I started thinking about whether I should stay in this land or not! I had made up my mind, I would stay! " Where can i go to buy a house and what can i pay it with?", i asked because it was a problem ! AAHH! Where was I going to live? "Dont worry she said you can live with us! I was so happy and glad that all of this was actually happening! I was going to live in Candy Land! Eventually,I moved in the beautiful gingerbread house and lived happily ever after with the lady sourpatch and her 2 sourpatch kids.
    !!!!!!! THE END!!!!!!!!!

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  89. Once upon a time I woke up in a place I've never been before and I looked around. It looked like a school but I wasn't sure and the halls were empty but I walked around and there was nobody.

    I ran to the cafeteria and there was nobody. I look to myself and I look normal and I see a showdow at the end of the hall and ran as fast as I could but the shodaw was geting closer but when the shadow almost got me I woke up and it was all dream. OR WAS IT! =)

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  90. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place i've never been before.There was these strange people or creatures that looked weird.They had weird faces also hey talked weird.They looked like wierd people like with 5 eyes and like 1 leg and bunch of different creatures.And I was scare becouse I was the only person that was a human.
    The creatures were like talking to me but i was not that far from them.They were talking to me but i didnt understand.i didnt understand becouse they were talking wierd.All of a sudden it turn dark.And this voice started saying "Miguel Migue" but in a loud voice.Then I open my eyes and i was all a dream...

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  91. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before it was a dark place i was beneath a warehouse i was with people they had masks and costumes on i looked around me and there were a few people only like about 20 or 30 people were here,I did not know what was goin on or what was happening i asked a few of them what was goin on no one wanted to answer me until asked a man he was tall he had a shield like the american flag he was dressed up like one to.

    I asked him he said "there is a war about to begin between us heroes". i told him " what war angaisnt who and why". he said " we are going angaisnt a man named iron-man he wanted us to register so that we can reavel our identeties if we do that the world will know our secret including our enemies and we do not want that to happen".

    They told me if i wanted to join them i said " i dont know i have to think about,i need to go outside. i went outside and saw iron-man he had a group of heroes to. the man in the blue white and red coustume came outside with his group of heroes to, they told me which side will i choose i needed to decide i didn't know which side to choose all i knew was there was a war about to begin and i was part of it and im standing in the middle thinking which side to choose.

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  92. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. In front of me there was this bizarre old lady just starting at as though I was some sort of animal.Near that old lady stood this dog or so it appeared to be a dog with an iguana on top of it.All around me was just this plain bare place,there were no other houses or people there only was once house which most likely belongs to that bizarre lady.After some time I moved across the room to where she was.When I was near her the old lady started walking down the opposite way,going to her house instead of greeting me.I ran after her only because she was the only person who could actually tell me where I was,if there had been any other person around I would have most likely gone with them instead of folling this weird lady.
    The old lady didn't actually notice me followin her until I started to knock on the front door.Knocking on the door the old lady stared at me through the window and I felt really uncomfortable.She did eventually open the door and I,not caring that she hadn't said to come in,walked right inside even stoping to stare at the pictures hanging on her wall.Upon my arrival the dog and the iguana appeared beside the lady but they weren't there when I came or could be found so I found this very bizzare and kinda creepy.Behind me the lady started to speak catching me off guard."So... what brings you by Kate?"as she said this she made this winking face at me.I was really startled because I had never even told her my name.Speechless as I was the lady said"Don't worry I'm not going to hurt you".
    Its been days since I got here and I haven't learned the old lady's name,but that didn't matter to me.I was lonely I wanted to go back to where I belonged.The old lady was really crazy ate anything and I mean anything she could find even bugs.She constantly tried to talk to me always sleering her words and talking about matters I have never even heard of.I was sleeping until suddenly there was the old lady standing right over my bed,er I mean her bed.I wanted to tell her what she was doing here but I couldn't get the words to form in my mouth.The next thing I knew I was being suffocated.The old lady always seemed to like me,so I had no idea why she would try this.I still remain by her side wondering if I would ever leave this loony bin,in reality though I was in a loony bin never being able to get out but on my mind I was living with this lady that doesn't really exist.

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  93. Once upon a time I woked up in a place ive never seen before I woked up in the jungle. Their was different kind of animals I've never seen before really close to me . Their was lions, birds, monkeys,and different wild animals. I was then trying to wake myself up I thought It was a dream but It was real I was shock.I then stared to explore the gungle I was scared if I kept on walking more a lion or a different wild animal could kill me . Just when I was about to go into the ocean something hit me and next thing I notice woke up in my house all of this was relly a dream a dream Ill never forget.

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  94. erik gutierrez room#306Thu Oct 15, 09:53:00 AM

    Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before.I was in a cold dark soccer field under the ground. i was with the devil and the game we play was about if we win we live if we loose we die around all the player there were all the persons that have died for loosin a gamme annd if one person got the final and wiin we can change the rule i tryed ma best do trick go beetwen the legs and go over him it was hard untill a trueed de best trick a know 360 spin around the player i finally past de players and i only needed the goaly a did a lil chip a scored a won the game the nextgame was vs the devil it was the final a hadd to win this game so a could not die andd kill the devil during the game the devil twisted ma leg it hurted but a was ok i got all the trix ma couch told me a finaly got the ball i got all the player now the goally a trowh it by the side a socored a got beat the goally and he died a changed the rules and they lived happy.

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  95. My name is Eltza and onces upon a time, I woke up in a place I`ve never been before. It was at a school. The school was old and lonley, no students were in the school. I had a weard eeling that soma one was in back of me.

    So I look back and a mammoth was in back of me. The mammoth was trying to kill me. So I started to run. I got in a classroom and the mammoth was gone.

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  96. Once upon a time, i woke up in a place i've never been before. There many flowers around me diferent colors that I didn't think ever exsited. My name was Elena and i was only 15yrs-old, I remembered that I went to sleep in my room not outside in the grass surrounded by trees. I sat up and looked for anyone I would know. There was no one but trees and colorful flowrs and roses. I looked at the sky and the sun was bright as ever. I got up to look for people and ask them where i was.
    I found a path not far from where I had been sleeping i followed the path but it seemed to be endless even thinking about walking made me regret ever wanting to wakr up. Suddenly in the distance I a boy at least a year older on a horse walking toward me. I felt releaf all over my body the tension and confusion gone. When the boy reach me I asked "Hello I am Elena and I am lost and don't know where iI am can you tell me?" The boy looked at me and tilted his head to the side and smiled "You are in Spain Madrid. You should come whith me and I will take you to my village and you can send a letter to your family so they know where you are." I got on the horse and we rode on his horse to his village.
    We reached the village and

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  97. Once upon a time,I woke up in a place i've never been before.!It was really dark and scary.I remember that i was against a table.It was really old and dirty.I was really scared at first becouse there were tons of spider webs and i thougth i had been alone.Untill an old lady came out of the no where to help me out.
    I had felt a spider against me. And as soon as i felt it craw over me i got up and i had scream.! I heard a voice saying ''whos their?''. I didnt answer her back. So she starded walking towards me.I quickly ran to find a door.But there was none.I was really scared now.The old lady starded to say'' come here''.She was behind a spider web.And she began to talk to me.She had asked me what was i doing their.And i told her i just had woke up here.She was about 78 years old.She was verry old.

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  98. Once upon a time, I woke up in a town were I had never been before I started walking and i found a abanden home I went in and their were pictures about an old lady she looked familiar but I never remembered i started walking and I found a box it had letters pictures jewlery pettels of roses I walked and the door shut I ran and got out when I got out i found people and they were comeing tord me i ran and ran i found my house i got in and no one was their I call my mom's phone she answered and said she was at the store I went to the store and found her i was happy and she said that every thing was a joke i was laughing.

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  99. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I have been befor it was my grandmother house. When I woke up I was standing and scared so I ran to were it was safe my dads old room and so I jumped in to the bed. But I couldn’t go to sleep so I gust lay there under the sheets scared. So I got off the bed went down stare and see what was there was nuthing so I was scared of nuthing.

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  100. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. I was lying on a bed; bed thats not mine. The bed was soft, warm, and also comfortable. I got up on my warm feet and started walking down stairs. I never saw this place before, but I knew it was rich. I heard a noise behind me and screamed. I turned around and saw nothing, but someone taped me on the shoulder. I turned around and saw someone, someone I don't know at all, but looks the same age as me.

    I ran to the room that I was just in and went to the closet. I was terrified, when suddenly I heard people talking. Someone opened the door and then the closet. They told me that there is no harm, that they knew me and that they’re my family. I was thinking that they were crazy because my family died in an accident. Time past and they explained to me that I was their slave who ran away from their home. They told me that I hit my head on a rock. I didn't get it would never run away from work. Where they telling the truth? I don't know, but im going to find out.

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  101. Once upon a time,about 1000's of years ago it was a midget was runnindg throw the woods and he fell down into a tree so he star crying. during the time that he was in the tree he got bor and a squirrel star taking to him he that the he was crazzzzzy. then one of hes frens chubaka tuk him out of the tree and they run into they dae.

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  102. Once upon a time,i woke up in a place i never
    been before. This place was in a giant head with no brain. IT was realy big and hairy from the outside of the head. It was spiky but you say "how do I know this".Well there was big flat screen TV that could show his lice and pinples. Once I told the giant head what was going on,he told me that i was in a head where nobody could get out. Then I told him i was going to eat my way out of his big headed face. He laughed at me so i showed him what i got so i ATE out of it with a little hint of pepper. oNce i eight out of it i puked into his face. I was glad it was over cause i was in a dream but i'm sure this guy that i dreamed of is out there somewhere waitng for mr to puke all over him. HEHEHEHEHHEHEEHEHHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  103. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've
    never been before. Below me was volcano ash.
    Above me was a red sky. I took a walk, and
    everywhere I saw was burned. I heard a deafying
    roar among me. I went inside a cave. I didn't
    want to find out what it was. I went deep inside the red cave. A hand covered my mouth
    and I fell unconcious. I woke with a torn blanket on top of me. I heard a conversation
    outside, but I couldn't make it out.

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  104. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before on top of a hill near a town that I haven't seen before and across of me there were people walking there were all chubaka and had different kind of world.Those people had 2 stomachs so they ate alot of food and I was just looking around the town and I say to myself "where am I in this weird looking town with no humans or any thing that I like outside of town."then I woke up out of it.

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  105. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before

    I was all alone. like in the movie i m legend. Iwas realy happy. But the lame thing there was no fine girl. with me. I was alone. And the city was in chicago

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  106. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before in the house and i did not know my name then same une said to me if i nide a job and i said yes and the job was all about bridges.

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  107. eduardo martinez 302Fri Oct 16, 11:56:00 AM

    Once upon a time,I woke up in a place I've never been before.A place far away were there was the grass was orange grass,the sky was purple.Among far away Isaw this creture that I've never seen before it was coming as fast as it could with his teeth sharp as a knife and his eyes like the eyes of a tiger.Until I saw it was going towards me I ran as fast as I could not looking back until I heared noting but silence I stop and looked back he wasent there I was glad that he wasent there but I asked mi self were did he go.

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  108. Once upon a time, i woke up in a place i've never been in before, i was about to cry because i was without my family and for the first time i felt like i was lonely since i had never been alone without my family i felt like i was no one because i had never been without my family before. in the past i had gone through one of those experiences but i found out my family did a trick on me, but this time i was alone and i didn't even know dat place. i felt real down because none of my friends were there. i had to go through a lot to go somewhere but i never knew i was going to be in a place but never thought that i was going to be in a place i would be scare of. i felt like an outsider because i had never gone outside without my parents or someone from my family. well then this weird thing happened i found this person that i knew i've seen before in some place and i asked him were we where and he told me that we were far away and that he could help me past this horrible time by helping me get home and i was excited except that i didn't remember who that person was and instead of screaming i had confidence in him so it past over 3 hours and out of no where i was back home with my family and i was just happy and i started to tell my parents about that i was somewhere i never knew before and they couldn't go a long with it and they told me i was just dreaming. it was all a dream and before i knew i say that i was in my bed and i saw that it was a dream after all.i was just happy that i was with my family

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  109. Once upon a time,i woke up in a place i've never been before,I got really scared because I was all olone in my house it was a windy day it look like it was gonna rain.I was calling my mom and dad on the phone but no one answer.Than i went to my room and ilook out the window and it was raining and it was getting dark i just went to watch tv but it didn't work.Then i woke up and realized it was all a dream.

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  110. Once upon a tIme, I woke up In a place I've never been before.It was 100,000 bc I went to a place were no one new me, so I when were there were alot of people It was lIke a conventIon,so than I was saIng that Im new to thIs town and thew dIdnt speak my language ,so the thIngs I was sayIng they dIdn`t capture tha words .

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  111. Once a time,i woke up in a place I've never been before,I got really scared becuase there were alot of windows broken and a whole bunch of mirrors i was by myself so that was even more scarier, it was a windy day and the clouds were so black as a cat those who people say they give bad luck. A few moments later it started to rain like if it was going to be a big tornado.I went in a house that i guess it was abandoned when i went in there it was soooo cold that i thougth I was going to freeze myself, but a few moments later i saw agirl with a white dress a long black hair i stared at her for like 30 seconds I was froze. I went running out of that house but the girl follow me it was raining reaaly hard, their was alot of mud on the floor, and huge rocks. when suddently when i was running i fell and hit myself with a big rock in the head I was UNCONCIOUS... When I woke up i found myself at the same house i was before were i saw that girl with a white dress and black hair when i turned around I...... TO BE CONTINUED

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  112. once upon a time I woke up in a place I have never been before i was wondering why was that happend i stared looking around and i didt knew anithing there it was all new too me it was real weard it was like a new world to me it was real hard to reconice were I was so what I did i stared remember all the places were I been before i still didt remember at all then I stared at the wall and thas when I remember that that was a night not the real life it was hard to came out of my dreams but them thiz noice came from out side the room and i woke up and reconice that that was just a dream ,that was not the true life that was the fake like life !!:)wow

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  113. Once upon a time, I woke up in a place I've never been before. It was like I woke up in the past. There was people towards me looking at me weird. When I looked around their where no near stores, above me their was this hot sun burning me. Toward the end there were people going in a building I ran past by them. in front of there were men and they wouldn't let me in. They told me to go so I did.Since I was throun out people saw me and during that time I was wondering a lady gpt near me and ask me if I was lost. I said yes and she helped me.

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  114. Once upon a time,I woke up and in a place I never been before there were bananas instead of people.... they were walking and it was a big city of bananas I went up to a banana and i told it were am I,..it told me this is banana kingdom I told the banana who is in charge of "Banana Kingdom" they said it was king banana aka gorilla aka kingkong i went to meet this "king Banana" ....i stood in front of a banana that waz huge!!! it had gorilla arms,legs,and fur but body and head of a banana her face had pimples and I told her wats going on? "your in banana kingdom were you could never get out"she anwsered i got mad an screamed no!!!!!!!!
    but she said she she is going to eat me ..then i woke up and realize i was dreaming im like wow i hope that never happens again.

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  115. once upon a time,I woke up in a place i've never been before it was like if I was in another world it was a world with super powers dffrent kinds I was thiking were am I and I was in the middle of a battle I was wacthing things blow up I knew I was gonna die and out of no where something happend it was wierd plasma came out of of my fingers i was going crazy and then i appeard some where else and then as soon it was getting good and poof and it was like if i blacked out and i woke up and i was in a real war......

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  116. once upon a time, i woke up in a place i never been before. i was still in my bed but not in my room. like as if i was transported to another demention. it was pitch dark. i got off my bed and walked around. i was bear foot so the floor was cold. i was tip toeing frightened that i would alarm any thing that would be hiding in the darkness.i walked for a long while and i saw nothing.that is until i screamed when tripped over some solid figure. very quickly i got up to my feet. i covered my mouth to stop me from breathing so hard. i moved my feet around where i fell to see what was it. although i wish i hadn't because that solid figure was a box. a strange one,too. when i opened a flash of light.....

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  117. Once upon a time,I woke up in a place I've never been before.I was in a place called dogvally were every one was a dog and talked.They were mayor dogs,presidents as dogs.Guess what the dogs were taking over the world.The dogs were working on people's jobs.I was walking around breathing the air thinking of the world that i'm going to live in and was wondering what had happend to all the human in the world? I stoped and asked a dog that was walking on two legs were are all the humans and the dog pointed at another dog walking by and a person was on their knees walking like a dog.I was scared and ran away but I guess guard dogs cought me and gave me sleeping gas.I woke up and found out it was just a dream.

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  118. Once upon a time,I woke up in a place I've been before.Its call ''la la la world'' it a wonderful place were u come be with your friends and no could annoying u up.I was with my best friends going up in the riders.We were so hungry so across of us we saw cotton candy we were eating alot of cotton candy.We saw some people on top of the table dancing we stared to laugh of then because it was so funny.During we were laughing we sice this girl eating ice cream and a gigant chocolate chip cookie.We all ran tell har were uyou gett that she was at the foodcourt that at around the corner. We all ran to the foodcourt.We started to eat and started to play with are ice cream throwing then to each other.It was fun being at la la la world no one tell you anything there.Then across we saw a gameroom.We started to play xbox it was so fun we were killing zombies it was fun.We were there 4 hours playing zombies.Then we went to the hauted house it was scary but fun you go in there and start to walk then some freaking monster pull your feet so you can get scared.After that we chilling at the park.But then I woke up.......

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  119. Once upon a time,I woke up in place i've never been before.I stood up and I started exploring and i turned around and i saw dragons and dinousaures i started screaming and running around but they dindt do nothing to me.Then i turn around and saw someone that look kind of like human I talked to him but he dindt get me so i started to see if there were a place i can hide or somewere that i can scaped.but after a while i started liking it because there were nice trees so i lived inside the biggest tree there was.

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  120. once upon a time i woke up in a place ive never been before.I gotup and i saw a sign that said welcome to freackville.And there were a bunch of people walking around there were people with three eyes and they kept staring at me with there three big eyes and there were also people with six arms and people with ten feet i started to get scared but then i saw some girl that looked normal but when i talked to her she didnt under stand me.so then i saw a abandoned house and i just stayed in there..........

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  121. once upon a time i woke up in a place ive never been before.There was a sign that said Rock Band City and on the side of the city was Guitar Hero City.Now for sure i was gonna go to Guitar Hero City because everybody likes Guitar Hero Than Rock Band because Guitar Hero is the best.So when i got to Guitar Hero everything was red like flames.When i asked somebody where do i live he said "ph whats up marck u live on 49 and Campbell dude"So once i got there i got in with a finger print which was cool.So when i got in all i saw was Guitar Hero Stuff such as dj hero,band hero,aerosmith,metallica and tons of cool Guitar Heros

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