Assignment:
Read the following short piece from a memoir that starts with exposition (explaining what it feels like to be alone) and then transitions to narrative. I am providing you with the exposition part. You need to write a little narrative that relates. Tell me a story about a time that you have felt alone.
"Alone"
Some days I wear alone like a coat, like a hood draping from my head that first warm day of Spring, like socks bunching up inside my sneakers. Like that.
Alone is how I walk some days, with my hands shoved deep in my pockets, with my head down, walking against the day, into it then out again.
Alone is the taste in my mouth ome morning, like morning breath, like hunger. It's lumpy oatmeal for breakfast when Mama doesn't have time to cook and I still don't know how much oatmeal and water and milk will make it all right.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when...
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One period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I've tranfread to the other school had no frends but know I do have frends.
ReplyDeleteone time when i really feel alone is when i am somewhere i know nothing about and feel out of place. like if i transfer to a new school or leaving your old elementary school and going to high school you dont know what to expect so you feel alone.
ReplyDeleteThe time I felt alone was when my family went to the beach i didn't want to leave because my family is kind of boring.I told them if i could go outside but they said no.I was really bored because their was nothing to do.I played the video game for a little while but then i got bored,so i fell a sleep thats how bored i was.
ReplyDeleteA time i felt alone waas when i was small because at that age like 5 or so,and that is because i would for some reason i had to believe everybody,and sometimes they would lie, and that would hurt me so i would rather not to talk to them. So then i felt a bit alone,and confused since i have never been in this position before so that is a time i felt alone.
ReplyDeleteI felt alone was when I was at my grandma's house. I was the only young one there. There was only old people that was in the house. I was very alone I wanted someone to talk to. I wanted someone to play with. There was no toys and nothing to play with. I was very lonely.
ReplyDeleteHowever, one period of time that i really felt the most alone was when...
ReplyDeleteI didn't know how to change my attitude towared lame things. I would get angry for anything that anyone told me and my parents would see that too. But i never had the courage to go up to them and tell them what was going on with me. i never told my parents about anything of my life but I new that this was something i couldn't handle. So i started to see the counselor at school and she help me. I did end up telling my parents but they ended up getting mad at me. Probably next time i will tell what is going on in my mind. :)
Feeling alone is like you were a nobody just like if you were transperant. The days never seem to end, eternal nights. You wish day after day to trade your life for someone elses.
ReplyDeleteHowever, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when my parents went to New mexico but I didn't want to go. And i had to stay with my grandma. I had no one to have fun with.
Howevr,one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when....
ReplyDeleteNo body was talking to me.I didnt knew why tho but thats how it was.I really felt alone because no body was talking to me and it looked like if nobody wanted to be with me or talk to me. I felt like a dry flower because i was lonely and i needed my friends but they werent talking to me. i had to go up to them and tell them how i really felt but every time i did it they ignore me and walk away like if i was invisable to them.I never told my parents about that because i knew they were just going to say to wait maybe there bussy or something.I couldnt handle it so i decide to follow them and tell them every single minute but it still was the same because they kept ignoring me like if i was a invisible person.an it continue like that for a couple of days.
And thats was a time i felt alone...
However, one priod of time when I felt the most alone was when I was growing up. One of my family members passed away. It was hard and my parents didn't know how I felt they said that it was hard but I had to be strong. At night when I was alone in my room thinking about that person and I felt really alone like when I get out of school and walk home alone with no one just myself. Like that,but alot worst.
ReplyDeleteONE TIME WHEN I FELT ALONE WAS WHEN I WAS AT MY CUSINS HOUSE AND WE WERE PLAYING HIDE AND SEEK AND I WENT TO GO HIDE OUTSIDE IN THERE BACK YARD AND IT WAS DARK THATS WHY I WENT TO GO HIDE THERE THEY COULDN'T FIND ME BECAUSE THEY DIDN'T EVEN CHECK OUTSIDE SO I STAYED THERE FOR A WHILE BUT I FELT ALONE SO I WENT BACK IN AND THEY WERENT EVEN LOOKING FOR ME
ReplyDeletehowever, one period of time that I felt the most alone was when i got detention I felt really alone because there was no one to talk to and I was really bored. I couldnt wait to leave but I had to stay for a Friday Night detention so it was going to be a while since I could leave. That day I felt so alone and bored.
ReplyDeleteOne period of time that I really felt the most alone was when my family just letf me with my aunts bored when they went to bleaches and hotels. I felt so bored and especially alone because thier was no one or something to play or to do. I was like this for one whole week but lucky for me the last day i was gonna be thier my cousin came. I was really happy to see somebody like my age. Then when my parents came back i wasnt really happy with them. Still they made them up for me later. That one time i really felt alone.
ReplyDeleteOne period of time that i really felt alone was when I walk home alone in the night.one saturday i was at a party and I looked at my cell phone to see what time it was and it was like 1am so i had to go home already as I was walking to my house by myself.The streets were empty i felt alone because no body was outside no cars not even police and i wss just taking gang ways to my house.
ReplyDeleteHowever,one period of time thatI really felt the most alone was when my gradma died. She was the one that usually took care of me because my mom would work and was hardly home.When my gradma passed away it was the worst thing ever. My house felt so lonely and arfound the whole house the was memories of her.My gradma was with me since I was just a baby now a days I still miss her but she left so many good memories of her self that she will never be forgotten.She was like my best friend and it has been so hard to move on with my life .
ReplyDeleteI was left at my house when my parents went to the groceries. I wasnt sad or anything I was just alone. The radio on in the kitchen, my mom always leave for my dog. But my family comes Im not alone.
ReplyDeleteHowever, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when...
ReplyDeleteI had nobody to talk to,nobody to play with.I was the outsider compare to everybody else.I talk different,dress different,and even talk different.Everybody would just stare at me like if I was crazy when I would try to talk thier language.I guess i was the freak for them.That was the time I was alone and an outsider!!!
However, one period of time that i really felt the most alone was when last year in lunch we used to sit alone in lunch. We sat like that everyday that passed for the whole year. Everyday was like that but it was fun and funny for some reason.there was one day i had to sit alone cause my buddy didnt come to school.
ReplyDeleteA time when I felt alone was when my parents had to take my dog and give him away. It was a real sad moment. My house was so empty and it's hard to let go when you had something for such a long time. My house was so quiet and it wasn't fun no more. Usually my brother or somebody would be screaming his name but one day when me my sister and brother weren't home my parents took him because he was sick. I mean he could've gotten better but no they thought giving him away would be the best.
ReplyDeleteMy moods change like the weather, sunny, gloomy,rainy, foggy. It never stays the same for a period of time. Although my mopod changes my feelings dont, like lonelyness. However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I was little. It wasnt like the times when your parents went out and you stayed home. It was differnt or like when you
ReplyDeleteThe sky crying,dropping tears that nobody can control. The sky darker than the cave itself. Everybody dissapearing from the streets but I didn,t care, I was already alone. It seems like the only thing that stands beside me is my shadow. Now at least when tears were dropping I could just say that it was the rain as an esxuse.
ReplyDeleteIt seems like everybody that I cared about had left me. Everyday in the park I saw little kids playing, but being alone for more than 12 years can carry a huge burden on my back. The only thing that came to thought was "why do I live, and exist"? Those are the questions that I'll always ask myself. I beleived that if I didn't have a reoson to live it would be the same as being dead, so wouldn't death be better than this?
a time when i was alone was whn i was home alone cuz my psretns and brothers went to indiana without me.
ReplyDeleteOne day as I walk from school.I felt a very nice brezee hit my face.Today unlike any other day I was walking alone.I usally walk home with jysel, but today she had a dentist appoinment.It was dark but the kind of dark where you were still able to see the sun.I was walking when i felt someone behind me, so i turn.When I turn i didn't see anyone, only a signthat said ONE WAY and shine with the sun in a rainbow way.I felt scared in a way because I keep feeling someone behind me i felt alone.As I walked home I though about that sign that i kept turning to.I dont know, but in a way that sign was in my head. I couldn't stop thinking about it.For me in a way i felt alone but that sign really got me thinking. wis it a sign.?I dont know, but for me in meant taht no matter how life turns or flips you.You should only try harder , go foward, no back, ONLY ONE WAY!
ReplyDeleteHowever, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when…
ReplyDeleteI had a lot of detentions last year and I was always alone & by myself. When I would get there, there was nobody there that I could talk to and it was just awkward and quiet and I hated that. I felt alone because there weren’t even any people I really knew or had to talk to and I just couldn’t wait to get out of there. The worst part was that this was an every-day thing.
However, one period of time that I the most alone was when I was completely alone iin my Grandparents house.
ReplyDeleteI had just arrived in Pennsylvania because my Grandpa and uncles had come to Chicago to pick me up. A day later we arrived in Pennsylvania driving for about 12hours. I put all my stuff in my room and went to go take a shower because we were going to go to dinner. When I got out of the shower the house was completely alone. I had no idea where everyone was. An hour passed and I was all ready to leave dinner and felt alone because no one was there. Finally they all came back and they got ready. After an other hour we finally left and we had dinner. That was a time when I felt alone.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I was away from home for some time. Of course, I wasn't actually alone the whole time, but being away from my home seemed like loneliness. I had gone on a trip to visit some relatives. It wasn't to far from my house, but it wasn't nothing like it. I guess I was home sick and all but there was a feeling inside me that felt empty. It was only me and my brother who went to Wisconsin. We stayed over my cousin's house because he lived over there. The whole time we were there we were almost never at his house because we would go around town to find something to do.
ReplyDeleteWe did alot of fun activities but I missed my house. I think that more than my house, I missed my family. I was small, and it was the first time I had been gone from home for 4 weeks srtaight. Now that I think back, I feel it was silly to be homesick, I should've just enjoyed the time I was there.
The time I felt alone was when I was in my cousin's house. I went to sleep over and he had to go to this party. "Fine I'll wait here then but hurry up you !@#&%" I told him. Don't worry it's not a curse just an insult. He left and I was alone in the whole house so then
ReplyDeleteI thought "play with his stuff". I went through his stuff not caring about privacy and I felt really bored. Every minute felt like forever since no one was here. I could feel myself getting madder and madder each second. I felt lonely for the first time and it stank alot. So then I just played his xbox until he came back. I had a great time but when he left I felt alone.
Alone"
ReplyDeleteSome days I wear alone like a coat, like a hood draping from my head that first warm day of Spring, like socks bunching up inside my sneakers. Like that.
Alone is how I walk some days, with my hands shoved deep in my pockets, with my head down, walking against the day, into it then out again.
Alone is the taste in my mouth ome morning, like morning breath, like hunger. It's lumpy oatmeal for breakfast when Mama doesn't have time to cook and I still don't know how much oatmeal and water and milk will make it all right.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when... I was in seventh grade I constantly felt alone.That lasted almost all year.I specialy felt alone when the class was assigned group work assinments.I was sometimes stuck in a group where I sometimes did not get along with the other people.Or sometimes it wasn't that I did not get along with them it was that we could never agree.When we never agreed nobody ever had my back it was always the other person's.In that case I would always feel angry and alone becuase of these perople's fault.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when was at home most of the time alone.I din't have anything to do because i just wanted to go to sleep.I was so lazy that day i did not even turn on the T.V.Every single hour i was sleeping because i was even so stressed.
ReplyDeleteThe next days after that that were the same i did not wanna go outside or do anything.There was always drama in my life.Life was getting better on 10/16/09 was when i met the perfect girl in my life.
However,one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I would just grab my notebook and start to write. No one would understand why I was like that.
ReplyDelete" I just don't understand why she does that, I never knew a person that would write just for fun." people would say when they thought I couldn't hear.
I felt like I wasn't normal, like I was the only one in the world that would do that. The feeling would never leave me, I couldn't stop thinking about it. I felt like I was the odd one, the only one that believed in writing,the only one that believed writing was just as fun as hanging out with friends, for example. People could never see why I was doing that, not seeing what I saw on the inside. At the time when I started to feel even more lonely, and alone, I found other people that thought the same way as me.
"Wow I am not alone, there are others that see a point to all of this, it just took a while to find them." I would always say to myself.
I guess I wasn't alone in this world, for my family started to let me write and not doubt me. Yet, I still felt alone in my writing.
The time I felt alone was when I had to stay home because my family was going to a party and I stayed home becuse I waas sick.I had nothing to do at home because I was with nobody but my cousin.He left to the store so I had nothing to do by myself.I felt like I was alone everywhere because noboby was at the house andit was all quiet. I was also hungry but nobody was there for me to ask for food and since I was sick I felt lazy and I didint feel like doing anything.So since there was nobody to at least talk to I just went to sleep and waited for next day to be with someone.
ReplyDelete"Lonely Days Along The Road"
ReplyDeleteHowever, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I went to Mexico. I had gone with my aunt and uncle but at the time I did not know any of my cousins. I would go outside and take a walk along the road. Nobody was there for me to talk to. It was just me and the long dirt road. I felt really bad at the time. Feeling as if nobody liked me . All I felt was that I was an outsider, nobody could really talk to me. Everyday it was the same routine lonley outside watching everybody go by without saying one word to me not even a hello or a wave. All I wanted to do at the time was to go back home with my friends and family.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when... I had a cast on my whole left foot last year. The cast was heavy, awful looking, and it smelled bad. It was summer time and kids were playing outside. But I, I was alone as an outside pool in winter time. I, I was alone in my bed doing nothing exept watching the same movie over and over.
ReplyDeleteIt was the second week of spring break and i had a soccer game. Something felt weird in my stomach. And than my ankle broke playing soccer.
Alone was I with my broken ankle. I couldnt call my friends to play with me Why? Because I had a boken ankle. Summer time came up kids playing outside teens were playing softball our favorite summer game. But I, I was alone as a mocking bird, a mocking bird that travels alone in winter time.
It felt awful to be alone with no friends just watching them have fun in the summer time.....
Autumn came i was heel i was running like a chita. I was happy i was running and I was most impotanly ot ALONE..............
The time I felt alone was when my cousin had a party and I was sick and no one staid to take care of me.Instead they all went to my cousins party, and leaft me behind.Abanded alone in my house laying in my unable to get of bed.Trying to fall asleep to get rid of the pain of being alone with no one caring for me or loving me.When I fell asleep I still was alone.
ReplyDeleteHowever, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I moved neighborhoods. My old neighborhood was far away so i couldn't hangout with my old friends and i didnt know anybody here. I moved during summer time so there were many people outside hanging out in crowds. I had younger sisters but they didn't like playing outside so I stayed inside most of the time.
ReplyDeleteThen, as time went by I started to hang out with a girl who lived next door. She knew other people who lived nearby so I also started hanging out with them. I didn't feel as lonely anymore but it wasnt the same. I knew more people over there and I missed them a lot.
It was an unusualy foggy day. I just steeped out of Holy Cross church, when I noticed I was the only one there (of my family). I was thinking " That's wierd". So I started to walk home. It took about 30min. for me to get home. I wasn't scared but I was all alone. Then I arrived home and that was it.
ReplyDeleteHowever, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when...my friends got in the fight. I was in the middle and I had to pick which side to go. I couldn’t decide because they both were fighting for little things that I though was kind of dumb. But that was what friends did. They got in a fight for many little things. I was in the middle as I said to this cause they weren’t talking to me. To make me feel lonely.
ReplyDeleteThat wasn’t the only thing that made me feel lonely. Also one time thay made me feel lonely. I was walking down the hall and my friends had made up. They were still mad at me for not taking at least one of their sides so they just ignored me as I walked down the hall. I felt like my friends had turned against me.
So that was a time when I felt lonely.
However, one period of the time that I really felt the most alone was when my brother and my sister moved out. Alone was not having someone to talk to. Not be able to tell your feelings to someone. Not being able to tell someone an experience or a joke. That's being alone.
ReplyDeleteMy brothers decided to move out of my parents house because they were all grown and were already starting their own family. I was excited to know I was going to have my room to myself. I had never had a room to myself I had always shared it with my sister. I remember jumping up and down in my bed in front of them. Which now I think was kind of mean since they must of thought that I didn't want them here.
The first two weeks were awesome because my mom and dad weren't around, but then I felt alone. When I came from school I had nobody to tell them how my day was or what was the grade for my test. I had nobody to laugh with or fight with. I even missed fighting with them. I became sad not to have someone around during the day at my house to talk to.
I now realize you grow up fighting with your brothers and sisters for dum stuff. When your brothers leave you learn to value them and now when you see them you see them with joy. We have to learn to value person when we have them close to us because when we have them far away its not the same.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when my mom was going to have a baby and she had to go to the hospital.And also my dad had to go so I had to stay in my aunt's house.I didn't really wanted to stay with my aunt because I didn't feel like I was at home.So i just stayed in the living room watching t.v.I felt alone because I didn't have no one to talk to cause my aunt didn't have children.I didn't feel happy and I wanted to go home.I had to stay there that night and I kind of felt sad and lonely.Than finnally my dad came and told me that my mom was okay.That's when I got really happy and I finally went home.
ReplyDeleteOne time that i felt alone was when my cousin invited me to a party. All her friends were there and i didnt know anybody. She wanted me to go because her would only let her go if i went so i had no other choice. Since i didnt know anybody i was just sitting down and i wanted to go home because it was boring.i was alone and my cousin was over there having fun.
ReplyDeleteWell anyways i didnt like the idea of going to a party in the first place because i knew it was going to be boring. I had told my cousin i wasnt going but my mom made because she said that i dont even do anything at home. I felt like if my cousin didnt even want me to go but the party did kind of seem boring. I told my cousin that i was going to callm my mom so that she can come and pick us up but she kept telling me that she wanted to stay more time. I told that i didnt feel comfortable and that i didnt even know no one. She told me that i could meet her friends and i told her that i didnt want to that i just wanted to go home because my friends were going to my house. and she said okay, well this is a time when i felt alone and next time i am not going to no other party wit my cousins.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I faught with my best friends for hanging out with a girl who was really bogus and mean to them. The day we faught I felt bad for not being there for them, because I knew that the girl would tell them things and would steal from them. I felt like no one could help me and I felt that I was betraying my friends ,who had always been there for me, with someone who I barly even knew.
ReplyDeleteI never really meant to hang out with that girl, nut my friends hadn't cometo visit me and were ignoring me for some reason. So I thought of inviting the girl ,they hated, over. I never thought that that girl was going to be such a liar and worst of all I believed most of her lies. She would tell me things that supposably my friends said, when in reality she was just making things up. Sometime I wonder who and what started this argument between us, but I guess I would never find out.
I now know who my real friends are, because if my supposably called friends were really my friends they would of tried to settle things down which they haven't. I'm still in a fight with them but I dont feel as lonly no more because I found friends who are true and friends who have been honest with me.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when my mom threw me a surprise birthday party.my mom had only invited her friends.She didn't even bother inviting one of my friends.like always every year her friends give me presents and then forget about me.I get stuck in my room taking care of their little kids.This always annoys me because they start grabbing everythings that's in my roomI tell them to stop but they wont.during that time i feel realy alone i feel that on one cares about me because they come to celebrate my birthday but they totally screw me off.It's like they just came for a get together for no special reason.Every year i dread my "surprise" birthday parties because always in the end I end up being alone
ReplyDeleteTo me being alone is precious because it gives you time to think and look at past memories ...However, one time that I really felt alone was when I was walking down the street I look around to see if any one is following me, But I noticed that there was no one on the street but me. I heard the cars pass by but I didn't bother to look. I felt so calm and relaxed because while physically I was on the street mentally I was in my own little world. Being alone I feel free to be myself.
ReplyDelete"Alone"
ReplyDeleteSome days I wear alone like a coat, like a hood draping from my head that first warm day of Spring, like socks bunching up inside my sneakers. Like that.
Alone is how I walk some days, with my hands shoved deep in my pockets, with my head down, walking against the day, into it then out again.
Alone is the taste in my mouth ome morning, like morning breath, like hunger. It's lumpy oatmeal for breakfast when Mama doesn't have time to cook and I still don't know how much oatmeal and water and milk will make it all right.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when. . . I had this one very very close friend that I really really really had cared and had feelings for but we ended up seperating. We were real happy bestfriends until these things called 'rumors' and this stuff called 'reefer' got in the way. My buddy's trust towards me had faded away quickly as people kept telling that person lies about me. Of course, that person believed those lies and we began to argue a lot. Then that person had been doing more and more of that 'stuff' since that person was so depressed supposedly. I had tried to stop that person but my exbuddy didn't listen. So from that time on, we haven't talked since a while. We just pass eachother as if we are strangers. Like if we never met.. even though we both know everything that happened.. and it's unforgettable. That was a time I felt very alone. That was my best friend and I had really thought it was a bff kind of thing.. haaaha guess not. =/
Being alone is like a part of you missing, and the other part is there, but trying to figure out where it belongs. It sometimes feels good being alone since you have the chance to think about things that you need and want to think about. But it sometimes makes you feel very lonely (obviously]. It's just that you need someone or something there so you just know who wouldn't leave you abandoned or to be feeling like you have no one to have there smiling at you or to help you out. I know you should depend on no one but yourself, but you still need someone to help you be yourself. Sorry if it's confusing.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when... my parents got in a fight because I felt abandnd like many people didn`t want me arond. As if I were some kind of rag that was tosed aside as if useless and worthless material that can`t be use d to cover up the sslightest of cracks that open up this voide.
ReplyDeleteAs black devowered my hart I felt lonnesome that nothing matterd that I fell in to this hole of depretion but, it was an enpty whole. I felt that eveybody was agains me that they wanted me dead but you just cant die twice (unfortiantly).
As every thing happend I felt more and more lonnesome as if I was thr only person alive as if I were a fox in the pack of blood thirsty wolves.Day and night I would try to block out the sceaming the pain the sorrow and the sadness!
Then with out motion or sound "SNAP" I cracked a human being can only toke so much before they snap I couldnt take it I was the finnal one. I walked in to a room and said " Thats it make a disitoin or I will, so ether make up or split up!" i wated but I couldnt take it one minute passed and I sain "so whats your dessition"
Then as there mouths opend up they said "were back together and that brought me back to the light.
However,one period of the time that I really felt the most alone was when I went to see my family play soccer. My cousins and brother love to play soccer so they would invited me to see them play.I like hang out with my cousins but when it came to soccer I wasn't the best.Everyone in my house played soccer:my dad,my uncles,my brother and cousins. So sometimes I would feel let out especially on sundays which was game day.
ReplyDeleteI like to hang out with my cousins because they make me laugh especially the 3 oldest ones.Since they all played I would go see them but they would start to hang out with their soccer friends.I couldn't hang out with them much because my mom would start hanging out with other mothers.So I was stuck babysitting my baby brother;I have no problem babysitting my brother but I would get tried.Emiliano wasn't exactly very easy to care around;especially when he didn't know how to walk. I should have tried to make friend but I wasn't sure if i could.
There wasn't much I could do and the games were like 35 mins. each so I was mostly alone.This took and takes place all year around so sometimes I decided not to go and other times I decide to bring something to entertain myself(and Emiliano)with. So i guess now it isn't so bad but I'm still not very good with soccer.
Being lonely isn't always when i am seperated from the group, but when I am ignored or don't feel as if anyone cares about me. When my friends and loved ones don't seem to realize you're even there.
ReplyDeleteI have felt lonely many times, especially this last monday. But one event I recall was when my friends came over to ask us if we wanted to play with them. I had been bored out of my mind, so my friends really brought my hopes up, but then my friends told my brothers the rules of the game and my brothers didn't let me play. so i just stood there staring at them have fun from afar.lonely.
One time i felt alone when I was in my house and my mom and that go to the strore and i was waching TV, and I was seen a scary movie that movie was named "the kids of the corn" that movie was a little scary but for real it was scary, that time I was feeling alone in my house because it was a stoming night berry dark and with the movie realy scary my.
ReplyDeleteThat day was one of the one that I fell alone in my hose.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when my dad,sisters went to Mexico. I had already gotten really close to my sisters and i spent most of my time with them,but when they told me that they were going to Mexico for a month i was ok about it.That is until they actually left.I my brothers would fight all the time my mom was always working and i was stuck with my stupid brothers.my house was always a diaster and if i would try to clean up not even a hour later it would be the same way.it was two weeks since they left that i gave up and locked myself in my room.even though i wasn't lonely i felt really alone.
ReplyDeletehowever one period of time that i really felt the most alone was when i was at my house i got home n nobody was there it was like 2;30 it was a saturday i look around the house to find tem but nobody was home so i whent to mi room n wach TV
ReplyDeletei time that i fealt alone was wen i was 7 years old i was with my mother and we went to kmart .
ReplyDeletein kmart i was walking with my mom and than i was walking to the games and naxt thing u now my mom wasent ther that i was walking all over the store.
that i started to cry because y cold fine my mom so that y person toll me that why was i was crying i was because i got lost they toll me what the name of ur mother or father .
then i saw my mom looking forme anthe other side of the fall then i went running and that how i feal alone ones .
yo me sentido solo cuando entre ala escula, mi primer dia de escuela en los estados unidos, ese dia yo me senti muy solo porque yo no conosia a nadie no tenia amigos yo no conosia alos nuevos maestro que hiba a tener.
ReplyDeleteese dia es cuando me e sentido mas solo poque no tenia a mis otros amigos pero depues paso el tiempo y yo pude haser nuevo amigos y ya no me siento solo.
ALONE MEANS HAVIN NO ONE BESIDE YOU AND JUST GOING THROUGH THE STREETS WITHOUT COMPANY.
ReplyDeleteHOWEVER, ONE TIME DAT I REALLY FELT THE MOST ALONE WAS WEN I FIRST WENT TO MEXICO AND I DIDN'T KNOW NO ONE RIGHT THERE AND I HAD NO FRIENDS AND MY CUSINS I FELT WEIRD AROUND THEM BECAUSE I DIN'T KNOW WAT THEY LIKED AND THEY DIDN'T KNOW WAT I LIKED. WHEN I WENT OUT WALKING IT WAS IN D MORNIN SO IT WAS COLD SO I WORE MY JACKET AND WHEN I WALKED MY HEAD WAS ALWAYS DOWN BECAUSE I FELT LONELY AND WITHOUT FRIENDSHIP.... SO WHEN I GOT HOME I TOLD MY UNCLE THAT I DIDN'T LIKE BEING ALONE AND THAT I WAS SAD BECAUSE I DIDN'T TALK TO NO ONE AND I WASN'T HAVING FUN AND IT WAS THE FIRST WEEK THERE OUT OF 4 WEEKS THAT I WAS GOING TO BE RIGHT THERE. SO MY UNCLE TOLD ME THAT I WAS GOING TO HAVE A DAY TO HANG OUT WITH ALL MY COUSINS AND THEY WHERE GOING TO TAKE ME TO MEET PEOPLE AND WE COULD MEET OURSELVES. SO I SAID YEA I WANNA GO SO WE WENT AND I MET THIS NICE GIRL WHO TURNED OUT TO BE MY BEST FRIEND FROM MEXICO AND HER TWIN BROTHER WHO TURNED OUT TO BE MY FRIEND TO. SO THIS WAS THE TIME I FELT ALONE BUT FINALLY I WASN'T ALONE AND IT WAS JUST AN IMAGINATION THAT I HAD BECAUSE I THOUGHT I WAS A LONE BUT I WASN'T I FOUND 2 BEST FRIENDS THAT NOW THAT I GO WE HANG OUT A LOT AND GO WALKING AROUND THE CERRITO AND THE PUEBLO AND WE GO TO JIQUILPAN AND SAGUAYO SO NOW I DON'T FEEL ALONE ANYWHERE I FEEL THERE'S FRIENDSHIP IN EVERY PLACE........
Being alone is like a toy that you don't play with anymore,a computer that you bought for no reason what so ever.Alone is like you don't belong with anyone.
ReplyDeleteThe time I felt alone is when my brothers don't talk to me sometimes and ingore me like am not there.Then most of the time I try to watch TV and try to forget about my prolems and see if my brothers talk to me or just pass me like am a nobody.This is the time I felt alone.
One time when I felt alone was when I was in first grade and I had no friends. I felt I was
ReplyDeletethe only person in the world that had nobody.
I was happier at home with my family and my
cartoons. Everyday, I felt the food taste all the same. I couln't find a way to make friends.
Then, I found myself a rival. There was this
kid named Alexis. A week later, we became best
friends and rivals.
it feels boring to be alone. it feels boring because no one is with u and dont talk to no body. Thats why is no good being alone. i remeber when i was walking to school and my little cousin didnt came with me . so it was boring. theres no one to talk to and i felt alone. ha noce
ReplyDeleteThis supposely alone poem is telling me that this person feelS alone all the time. It is describing it with different objects like the coat he put on was lonely. When he adds stuff it makes it better. I remember a time when i felt alone. It was when i didnt have no one to comffort me. I was having a problem with someone and i couldn't tell my parents because they wouldn't understand so day after day i would cry and when i would cry in days i wouldnt even have tears to go down my face. Nothing of me felt right i guess it was the emotion that was killing me. I stopped playing with my friend and stopped being happy. Some days i would think of killing myself but instead i would cry to death. It was if someone was takinf parts of my body out so i wouldn't be able to do things that would make me happy.
ReplyDeletethe person describes alone like a coat, like a hood draping or he says oatmeal is lonely and milk and water will make it all right.
ReplyDeleteA time i felt alone is when ... one time when i was younger i went to the movies and nobody wasn't there so i was lonely :[
The person describes alone a coat like a hood draping or he says oatmeal is lonely and milk and water will make it all right.
ReplyDeleteA time i felt alone is when ..one time when i was younger i went to cuzins house but it was really far and i thaught i was going to have fun and i did but there was something missing from me..my parents,brother's, and my sister i kinda felt lonely without them even though my cusins were there. thats a time i felt lonely.
the person describes alone like a coat,like a hood draping or he says oatmeal is lonely and milk and water will make ita all right.
ReplyDeletea time a felt alone was when i first came t
o the us because i couldn't all the things i used to do on my country and because i did had the same friends i had there or the people i knew there.
when i was 9YRS old my mom had leaft to Mexico(my grandmom was dieing.) Yes I had my father with me everyday but it was not the same. I missed my mother so much I cried every night because I missed her. I missed her coming in at night and tuckind me in. I missed when she gave me my blessing every morning. her warm hugs taking me to school and picking me up. Everyday with out my mother was horrible lick abad dream I just wanted to wake up from. without my mother I was nothing now I apreciate everyday that I am with her.
ReplyDeleteBeing alone is like super boring yo. i dont like it when im alone.most of the times i aint so i dont really worry about.but like dose times i had spend my time alone are like oh my god super duper boring but then i find someone to be with like friends,cousins,brothers sisters,parent(Ehhh NOt REAlly tHAtSz if i DONt HAVE NO ONE tO SPEN My tiME WitH]=)hahaha but yup its boring
ReplyDeleteone period of time that I really felt the most alone was when i was alone at night i was 10 years old i was in my house i saw something like black i got scaret it got closer to me i feelt alone like no une will know i was ther i run to my room and turn on my lit it was no une it was in my head.
ReplyDeleteHowever,one period of time that i really felt the most alone was when i was sleeping it was a saturday like around 12.00pm when i woke up and relize that nonebody was at my house it was only me left i knew that they were not going to be at home because they were going to go to the hospital I don’t even know why did I had sleep late the Friday.....well yeah whatever I sat down at the computer and I felt like if something was missing I felt like if I didn’t have no family but so I try not to feel that way by star cleaning my hose listen to some music and of curse that helped a lot but then I got tired and I stared feeling the same again so I got on the computer and went on my space to talk with my friends yeah then I saw my sister was online so I knew that they were not at the hospital so I message her and ask her where were they at she told me that they had went to the store………but yeah I did felt alone at those few hours because usually I always have someone with me :]
ReplyDeleteAnd that day I was left alone for more that 4 hours .when they all came back they were screaming well my 2 sisters so at that time I wished they would be there …….lol…..
However,one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I was 14 I felt alone in my house in midnight its was so quiet I could hear the water dropping one ny one.I heared the wind blow throw my window slowly with the fresh air coming in .When 1 hour past the clock make the sound tick tock,tick tock.I felt alone in the midnight when I sholud be sleepy but no I didn't.I felt alone with out my sister left to mexico because missing my little niece crying in the midnight.For her bottle of milk.And my mom being in the concert coming late to the house.
ReplyDeleteThe I when to the living room to look outside to look at the moon.I turn then I saw something moving .I was in shocked because how could it move my its self.I start to walk faster to the switch to turn it on but the light buld stop functioning.So i just start to ignored it then walk faster walk to the kitchen get something to drink and turn on the lights.Then when to my room fell asleep.I want to tell someone but there where not home.I felt alone that day I just want to tell her what happend.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when i was here in mexico my dad didn't had money to pay the house so my dad was making signs for selling our house than when people came to see the house they like it but they didnt't buy it.The next day my dad got a phone call from other people that were gonna see the house my dad was talking to them and they said that they did like it and they wanted to buy it.They did buy it.So then we were getting our suff out becouse we were gonna go to chicago but my mom couldn't go because she didn't had her papers she had to go by her self so when she left i felt alone because she left one day and we waited and my dad my brother and sister.The next day we all went to chicago in a car and it was taking to long to get there.I felt alone when my mom left and i was with my dad my brother and my sister.
ReplyDeleteHowever, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when my sisters and my dad went to Mexico. I was really close to my sisters and my dad would support me in all my games. So when they told me that they were going to Mexico for a whole month I was ok with it at first, but when they actually left it was hell. My mom was working most of the day and when she was home she would try to please both of my brothers. My brothers would fight all the time. They would usually play fight then they toke it all serious that one of them would end up crying (my little brother). Besides them being annoying they were really messy. Every time I would clean up not even an hour later it would be the same way. Two weeks since my sisters and dad left I had already had given up. I locked myself I my room. I could hear my brother destroying the house, but there was nothing I could do. Even though I wasn’t lonely I really felt alone.
ReplyDeleteThere was once a time when i felt alone when i was looking for my friends and not one of them responded to my phone calls or anything this had been going on for months now then that made me realize those arent friends so that made me think I dont need them I was thinking I only need me and my family oh yeah and my money cant forget about that so then as I was walking to the store one day those guys so called friends walk up to me and say whats up what are you doing then as i walk into the store they stare at each other in confused faces so they walk into the store they get close to me and say whats the matter then I am still ignoring these idiots so then one of them gets next to me and says ay can I have a dollar then one after the other they all started saying that and i started laughing at them that even the employe was telling me are you okay then im like yes I am thank you these idiots are cracking me up then as i leave they feel bad then I say im not your boy anymore dont even look at me i dont want to your faces then i walk away and I guess I made them feel stupid oh well I dont care anyway......hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah...lame haters get on my level which i honestly dought they will ever ever do.<<<}
ReplyDeleteThe time I felt alone was the time when I had a rough break up.I loved him so much I couldn't live without him.I couldn't go with anyone because they all told me the same thing.I was 5 when my parents took it away from me.I had a teddy named Osito.We have been together ever seens I was born.I remember the day we went to kindergarden together.We were happy that we survived the kids and the glue,the dirty hands and the mud.Then I remember the time when I lost Osito when I was 3.I was lokking for him.I was so sad until my uncle called.Aparently I left Osito In my uncles car In the back seat.I was so happy to see him again.Then the horrible part came.My parents told me that I was abig girl already and that I needed to let go of Osito.Of coures like all of the little kids I didn't want to let go of him.After we finished arguing I went to sleep.When I woke up I couldn't find him.I looked every were 'under the bed,in the laundry basket'but I couldn"t find him Every were.After a week has passed without finding Osito,I gave up and felt like I lost apart of me.
ReplyDeleteA time when i felt alone is when my mom left me in my house and she left to a party. i was very mad because she didnt took me to the party.i was all alone and didnt know what to do. so i whent to the store to buy some chips, candy, soda, and a movie. so i got to my house and started watching the movie the name of the movie was fast and furious.but then the movie finished. and i wasn't mad no more because i still had fun in my house.but one thing i didn't know why she didn't took me. so one hour past and my mom finaly got hear and i told her that why didn't she took me to the party and she said because i didn't clean the house and i was like ohh. THE END
ReplyDeleteHowever, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I was 11 years old and my parents had to go really far away from my house I had to stay alone becuase in the house becuase me parents couldn't take me with them. I was waiting for my brothers to get out of school but I didn't remember that they had soccer practice so they were coming at 8:30pm.I decided not feel any fear becuase I was alone so I kept on thinking that my brothers were slepping and my parents were working. I turn on the tv andstarrted watching it ently I saw a shadow in the hall way I got really scared and just ingnored it but I couln't becuase it was coming closer to me. I decided to get up and go see what was happening in the kitchen so I stood up and went walking towards the kitchen and when I got their I.... Saw a little kitty on the window and he was trying to get inside but he couln't. I went back to the living room and when I got their the tv was off. I was shocked becuase when I left the tv was on and know that I came back the tv was off.
ReplyDeleteThe next thing I notice was the the cat was know in my house sitting in the chair I started to freaked out so I went outside my house but it was getting dark already so I had to go inside already I went inside my room and saw that it was barely 5:30PM and moy parents nor brothers were home yet. I fewlt really alone like when you feel that nobody likes you and you don't have any friends.
one day enei felted alonne was wene my mom lft me in my hause and i felted so lonly i was mad & sad they left and left me becauce i came late to my hause.
ReplyDeleteA time I felt alone when I whent to the park and I did not have noone to play with because I went out side and i could talk to because I felt alone because I did not wanted to take noone because I a was mad with then so i went alone and I walke alone.
ReplyDeleteHowever, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when... I stayed at home when my family went and they didn't tell me.
ReplyDeleteSo what happened was that it was a Saturday night, and I was feeling sleepy. I told my sister I was going to take a nap and to wake me up when my mom or dad brings the food.So I went to my room and took a nap. It really took about 4 minutes for me to totally fall sleep. I woke up 2 hours later and was puzzled when I didnt find my mom, or sister. I didn't look for my brother since I dislike him and I didn't look my dad since he always leaves randomly. I was totally puzzled and felt alone.
I ,like always, called my mom to see where she was. I dialed her number, but it was my sister who picked up. I told where she was and she told me that they left to eat at Los Comales. I got angry so I hung up, but not without a couple of bad words. I sat there alone for 4 hours and felt anger.
In the end I felt alone, like who wouldnt feel alone when your family left you for 4 hours. I didn't talk to them for a week, since that day was my birthday, also my sisters but it was irrelevelant to the story. I have experienced lonliness for about 9 times, but they were never more than 30 minutes.
The Day i felt really lonely was when my mother was in the hospital giving birth to my little sister because my mother "is my Bestfriend". Eventhough my Sisters and my Father was With me at Home i Still Felt Alone And A Piece of Me was Missing i really need it Her I miss her So Much.
ReplyDeleteMy mother called me from the hospital every single minute and i went over to the hopital to see her i will always told her"mom i want you to come back home already" my mother told me in two more days i will be out the doctor said it already i just couldn't wait for her to get home.
Every Single minute when i was at home i will always call my mom becuase she told me when i start to miss her alot and i feel lonely to call her and so we can talk atleast.I Just Counted The Days So that She Come home back again.
The day got Soon and my mother was back at Home.Since That One day i havent ever felt lonely anymore.
however,one period of time that i really felt the alone was when my parents had some problems. i remeber felling so alone no one to talk to,felling so traped and i felt abounded like no one to help me with my fellings.no one to help me handale the situtation. going to sleep with anger knowing that if i tell some o0ne they would know and fell sorry for me
ReplyDeleteHowever, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when...was when I was little going home from school.Every time I would open up the door and see nobody. Before doing anything else I would just sit down watching tv alone. Waiting for somone just to come threw that door I came threw to be with me to talk,to play,anything would be better than alone.
ReplyDeleteI could do watever I want and nobody would care because I would be alone.I could eat in the living room,scream to at the top of my lungs,laugh,sing if i wanted to ,or cry because i was alone so often,watver really.
When I was hungry I would just eat watver there was to my reach.I coludnt reach the stove then so I wouldnt be able to eat warm food.All I could eat was the cold leftover food left from last night.Since I saw what was on my menu to eat I would just go watch tv and wait for my mom or dad to come home to give me somthing warm to eat.
Somedays I feel like a stranger to life. I feel alone. Like the day my mother was in the hospital because she just gave birth. I felt ALONE. A feeling I don't like. Even when my dad was their and my brother, I felt so alone. I felt like no one was their with me because my mom was not their. She makes me feel save and not like a stranger but with out her I feel like a total stranger. I feel ALONE. That day was like any other day because I always have my mom. My mom is the best friend I will never lose. My BBF forever. My dad is really nice to me but I just felt alone with him.
ReplyDeleteOne day rain,rain falling down.Nothing to do no one to talk to.Looking out the window blue drop nothing but that. I wait and wait but nothing. I was watching T.V at home everybody was with my mom somewhere the day before and they haven't came home. I was hungry at the time there was nothing to eat. I was hoping that my mom was almost home. Then my aunt came to my house. I got happy becuse i could talk to some one i wasn't alone no more. THen the next day my mom came home. C(:
ReplyDeleteMy family when out and i was alone at my house. I felt happy that i was be alone. As the day passed i kept watching tv. It was getting dark. I felt scare at the end because I was alone with no one to talk to.I soon started thinking of the ghost videos I had watched that other day with my friends. I felt like I started seeing ghost but I wasn't. I went to check my door if they were closed and they were clsed. When i came back I seen like a brush flash fast I though it was a ghost but wasn't. After that I just went to my room and went to sleep. I couldn't wait until my family to home. Later, When my family came home I felt better not alone. That was a time when i felt the most alone period of time.
ReplyDeleteOne period of time that I really felt the most alone was when...when my mom,dad,brother,& sisiter they were all mad at me.I felt sad when I thought nobody like me I felt like I was a little b**** I felt like crying so then I just went to my room and lay on the bed and then I was playing video games and then I went outside and I came back at 10 and they talked to me like if nothing happen.And evry body live happily ever after for some years.
ReplyDeleteHowever, one period of time that i felt alone was when i had to walk home by my self.
ReplyDeleteI had just finished working at 8:30pm and my mom was suppose to pick me up,I waited 8 minutes till i decided to walk home. I was afraid because the block was full of gangs. So i packed my things and left. the only time i felt safe was when i passed the school and all of the lights were on. There were kids on bikes on the next block and in the allies there were people tagging on garages. Now that i passed the school it was dark and gloomy. Then a car passed by me i noticed that it was my car. I suddenly ran toward the car, my mom didnt see me, so i ran to the side of the car and nocked on the window until she heard and saw me. Then she slowed down and let me in. I placed all of my supplies inside the truck and we drove to our house.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I was with my cousins and we were having a great time. There friend called them to tell them to go to the theathers so there friends were waiting for them outside the house and they said "see you later ok". "ok" I replied. Then I was back there alone after a couple hours all my cousins came and again I was having fun.
ReplyDeleteA time that I really felt the most alone was when one morning I woke up having a terrible nightmare. I felt very desperate because no one was at my house nobody not even my sisters.
ReplyDeleteThere had been a note left that they had taken my little sister to the doctor and didnt want to wake me up. I remember I couldnt wake up the nightmare was just traumatizing me and no one was there to wake me up. This was hard for me i woke up crying because I neede someone by my side.
At first i thought they had left me alone bacause the day before evryone had been mad at me for lying. I felt lonely like it was all my fault and thats why they had left me alone. Then it was like people were mad at me and now Nightmares were traumatizing me.
Then when my mom and sisters arrived home I ran to my mom and apologize because i felt very sad that all these sorts of things were happening to me. She hugged me real hard and told me that she hadn't left me on purpose and that she was not mad at me no more. I told her I was very scared because of the nightmare, and again seh hugged me and told me that everything will be ok when im with her.
Now i know that when im with my mom my loneliness goes away.
However, one period of time that I really felt really alone was when I was at home on a rainy day just laying there like a sloth. I didnt have anything to do. When I walked around the house my head was dragging down. I had no freedom at all. The cloudy rainy day made me very depressed. I had no hunger no fun i didnt have anything fun to do exept stare and stare out the window. I never felt so deppressed in my life. the days seemed shorter and the hours were longer. I was just hoping for the sun to fome out so that i could get my happines back.I ahd a very long week in my life without any fun and exitement.finnaly out of nowere the sun comes out. my lonliest days were over and my fun was back.
ReplyDeleteAs i'm turning the knob i always notice no noise at the house then remember there's no one at the house. I directly go to my room and throw my book bag to my bed. Now i have t wait till my mom comes which will be at 4;00 pm.
ReplyDeleteI go to the kitchen and try to find something to eat. I just feel like saying " Mom , what's to eat" but can't since nobody aint here.Now I'm just chilling nothing to do.
I felt like i was dead with no one around me but I go to to the t.v and watch television which makes me not alone. other than that I was sorrow.i Felt so alone i just watched my fishes swim around like is if they were to talk to me.My family came and i felt way diffrent , the opposite of alone
However, one period of time that I really felt alone was when
ReplyDeleteI was getting older because nobody is usually there for me.
Is like your facing the world by yourself and taking every step
To make it right. Being in a different mood every day and
Thinking if your ok or not. Its like being a different you.
The one day i felt alone was when i was left at a flea market alone.the way i felt alone was like if i was no one i wasnt worth nothing.also the mest of thing was that i didn't eat nothing in the morning.
ReplyDeleteso then i start asking people if i could borrow there phone and the meaniest thing of all was that the all said no to me.Until one guy was so nice and let me borrow his phone.so then i call my dad and tell him where were they at so then my dad tells me that there at the food so i go and meet them there but the thing was that i remember that there was 5 food stands so then i call them and tell them what food stand where they at and they tell me number 4 so i go i get to see my family again.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I went to this party. It was my cousin's party, a far away cousin though, that I've never met before. I was excited to meet a new family member. When we arrived there, I met him. He was tall, but slim, he smiled and said "Hi". He seemed like a good guy.
ReplyDeleteI shook his hand and said "Hello".
Before I knew it, I was too busy talking to my cousin that I didn't notice two hours had passed. My cousin was funny, that I knew. Fun I was having, that I was certain. Soon though, other people came toward us that I didn't know.
I didn't expect what happened afterwards. My cousin didn't even say "Well I got to go now, it was nice meeting you" or "I have to go now". He just simply left, he didn't even look at me or said "bye"! It brought a sting of pain for a minute, then I just let it go. It was when I realized my cousin with his friends in one corner staring at me and laughing when I felt alone.
They turned around when I looked their way, but kept on laughing. Dirty looks quickly took place, and I felt more alone than ever. I had been replaced by my cousin's friends. That time I will not forget. I won't forget the time I felt the most alone. But most, importantly, I won't forget the fact that up to this day, my cousin doesn't even look my way anymore.
However,one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when it was a beautifull sunny day outside.I was headed downtown with my cousin,sister, and some of there friends.I was excited thinking I was going to have a blast.We started to walk towards the train station stopping by at a store while our way to the tran.We were all laughing making jokes and having fun.
ReplyDeleteAs soon as I we all got in the train we were all quiet.We all sat far away from each other,which was weaird since it was the fist time we all did that."Where are we going?",I asked my sister.
"To the movie theaters" ,she replied back to me.Then i nodded my head and looked away.We got up and walked towards the movie theater.They all walked ahead of me and I felt lonely.Luckily i had my sister's Ipod, so i quickly took it out and started to listn to music.
When we arrived at the movie theater we all agreed to see Ironman.I bought some popcorn, sat down,and got comfortable to watch the movie.The movie was finished and my sister and I had to get back home.The night was beautifull with all of the lights glowing in the building.My sister,my cousin,and there friends were all laughing as we all headed back to the train station.I was alone again.By myself and scarred.They were all walking infront of me and I was walking by myself on back of them.
I felt as if they didnt care about me.They ignored me throughout the whole day as if I were invisible.I was wrong.Thinking I was going to have a blast with my siblings.Now a days I dont go out with them to places.Atleast not with someone who I know will talk to me and hang out with me
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I woke up grompy. I was mad at the alarm for inerupping my dream. I was getting ready for school. It was 8:15. The car didnt had gasoline, and my mom was feeling sick. My brother and sister went walking to school. I went alone. When i got there I was waiting for my friend Jessica, but she was coming late. At the end of the day, I started to feel lonely. The whole day was bad. While my friends were talking I was feeling lonely. In the afternoon, my mom had to take someone to a meeting. My brother was playing with his friend. My sister and the girl i was babysitting went outside to play in the yard. I was doing nothing on the sofa with my dog. All day i was alone at home talking to my dog. That was the day i felt lonely all day.
ReplyDeleteOne period of time that i really felt the most alone was when..my sister and i were qettinq in a biq argument.. she wouldnt talk to me in like 2 or 3 weeks,i wouldnt eat mch in those weeks because when beinq in the dininq room nobody would talk to me.. and i would jzt go away fron the table and go to my room, my mom and sister were qivinq their bak on me, and i felt so alone with nobody next to me, i felt like nobody cared about me..
ReplyDeleteHowever one time that i really felt the most alone was when i got into such a deep depression back when i was 11.I cant say why i was so depressed because im still recovering from all of that.
ReplyDeleteSomedays i would be so out of it that it was such an effort to even get out of bed.I would fantasize of how i was gonna die and i was pretty crazy too in those days.Don't get me wrong, im much better than when i was before. Im not some kind of pshyco chick but back then i was closer to that than human.
My parents were worried and i wouldnt blame them.While i was bubbly and vivacious i was quiet and well dead. Mentally not physically.
Like i wouldnt watch tv anymore neither listen to music and i would avoid my friends.Every night i would cry myself to sleep and i would wake up bloodshot eyes.
I stayed that way for a year and a half until i finally broke down and spilling everything to my mother.
That was the time i was most alone,where i didnt have anyone to talk to.
I was in my room and remembering how i got to that time in my life where i just kin d of shut down. That was the worst time in life where i felt most alone.
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when my mother and my brother and my aunt and I all went to Mexico and we all left but only I and my brother had papers and then it was time for all of us to come back home to America I was only 8yrs old and my brother was yrs old.
ReplyDeleteI remember when my mom had to leave two weeks earlier because she had to leave as a wetbag and I remembeer when I didn't know what in the worrld was happining until my mom said very strongly pulling the tears back shee said "By mi hija cuando llege al otro lado mando a tu tio a que te recoja y te iiebe con migo" said my mother thats when I realized that my mom was living me I had thought she was living me forever and she also told me "tu hermano se esta dormindo asi q dale un abrazo y un beso de mi parte y no se te olvide q te quiero mucho pase lo q pase o.k. mi hijita" said my mom.
Right that moment I started crying and I holded to my mothers leg and started begging her not to leave me alone I saw that tears were coming out from her eyes to rolling down to her checks. And I remember that she just hugged me gaved me a kiss and said "te quiero mucho pase lo q pase". She went out the door I started running after her and my aunt and my grandma ran to get me I started screaming and yelling out my mom's name. Later I heard that my mom had left crying and that they hoped nothing happened to her.
I ran to my brothers room and hugged him and I started crying. I passed 1wk. and 2dys without talking to my mother without hearing her voice and I lasted practically awhole week crying at night and I didn't eat like for about 7dys and 1/2 because i missed my mom I would just eat chips or drink because I didn't feel like eating food.
After 1wk and 1/2 I recived a phone call from my mother she told me that she had arrived home and that she had already sended my uncle to pick us up. She told me she loved me and she clicked on me I was excited but at the same time not.
After that 1dy passed and my uncle picked us up and we got to the airport of the U.S. I ran to my mothers hands and I hugged her and she promised me she would never leave me again.
one moring when i woke up i though thet i would go to school hang out with dannay and kirena in the hall along with betty and as soon as i got in the room i only saw kirena.
ReplyDelete"ummmmm nobodys here yet" i giggle as usual.
hi loner she said as i played around "were's danny and el mongolo i said" ther not here yet onl y me and you as they came in i said hi dannay "hi " she said wat up mongolo i said to him "nothing mongola" cool i said as the bell rung i said " thet's go guy's come on " i giggle ' lets go dannay said kirena as i waited i for them the came fast and prushed againt's my shoulder they walk together as if they were best friends umm hold up guy's i said as i chased atfer them they walk faster and faster i felt alone and sad i was hoping it was a dream .
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was a morning I had woken up in the most outstanding mood. I was the happiest that day that I dared myself to jynx it and tell myself that nothing could go wrong on that day. Well I was wrong.
ReplyDeleteThat morning the sun was out and the first thing I did was say hello to Paco.He is my bird. I have had him since I was 5 and from that point on he and I have been getting closer. It came to the point that I bought him a little bed. I would tell him, "In Paco and go to sleep." The next thing I would hear is snoring. I would stroke his velvety soft green feathers on his head and when ever I'd stroke him like that he would wake and say, "GOOD MORNING!" Then I'd say "No Paco it's time to go to sleep" and I would slip under my covers and fall asleep to the sound of Paco's snoring.
Once I fed Paco I decided to take him and put him on my shoulder and take him for a walk.
"Ahh some fresh air" Paco said. Then I heard a very big shriek and I turned around to find a gun 10ft away pionted directly at me. I saw my surroundings and found myself at my bf, Ace, house. He came out at the sound of the shriek also.
Paco was trembling and whispering something under his breath. Ace said,
"Man calm down dude you don't want to do this!" and went ahead to try to calm him down and pull the gun out of his hand.
The young man said "She could've been mine but then you came a long and took her away."
I squinted my eyes a little to get a better look of the person. It turns out that he used to be in love with me.He was Stanley.
"Is this why you want to kill me?" I said stumbling and turning pale white at the word "kill". Paco was very still and decided not to talk-smart of him-I thought.
Suddenly I hear the gun snap and Paco spreads his wings and attacked Stanley. All Stanley did was shoot the bird and ran away. He knew how much Paco ment to me and to rip my heart he took Paco's life.
I screamed and I ran toward Paco like I was being chased after. I sobbed and then weeped and all Ace did was knelt behind me hugging me trying to console me. That black out was the worst time I had ever had in my life when I had ever felt alone..
However, one period of time that I really felt the most alone was when I first began the year in seventh grade. The year ahead of me was going to be a long year from that day on. Knowing only three people in the class wasn’t all that bad. The problem was that we never hung out together as much and over break we had changed a lot. Besides those three people, I knew no one else and basically I was on my own.
ReplyDeleteFor the first two days, I tried to hang out with the people I knew. It wasn’t anything like I had pictured my seventh grade year to be. I was an outsider in the class and even more of an outsider when I began to hang out with my friend’s clique. In lunch I would sit with them but had no idea what their conversation was about since they talked about the year before. The problem was that I wasn’t in the same class as them last year so there was no way I could get involved in the conversation. As I look back on those days, I realize that I was a lot quieter at lunch. Not because I wanted to but because I was alone and had no one to share my thoughts with.
During class, we had to pick partners and I was always left to work on my own or with someone who I didn’t know. This was due to the fact that, in the group I hung out with, there were an odd number of people. Everyone had a best friend that they always did everything with, except me. I should have talked to my friends about that so that somehow I could feel more involved or part of the group. Feeling alone wasn’t so great.